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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 11

"Bravo" I said to brij and Anaya.

Anaya "So you think our plan is working Annie?"

Brij "of course it is working?"

"and she deserves the best that ba****d dev was never a right person for her." I said to them in utter disgust for that filthy man.

I just hope that our plan works in bringing Maan bro and Geet together. I know that they will be happy together.

Anaya "So what next?"

"Now we wait till morning." I said to her hoping that Maan bro would have apologized till then.

Brij "What if our plan didn't work?"

Annie "It will work and if in case it didn't work I have another plan."

Brij "And what is that?"

"not now I will tell you later.right now I am really tired."

Brij "Hey wait! What if he"

"No he won't do anything." I knew what he must be thinking and I could understand his worry but at the same time I had trust on Maan bro as well.

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I couldn't move away from him because his hold around my waist was too tight. I turned to his side and he was sleeping peacefully. He had become really handsome in all these years. I gazed at his strong jaw line and his well built muscles. I touched his eyes,his nose ,his cheeks and his lips .I pecked him on his lips carefully not to woke him up "I missed you so much.", I really wanted to hug him again,I wanted him to engulf me in his strong arms but then shuddered those thoughts. How I wish we would have met on different circumstances. I said while looking at his face and was slowly drifting into sleep.



I woke up when the sunlight hit my face. I looked beside me and found Geet sleeping peacefully. She looked so beautiful and last night was probably the peaceful night ever. After a long time I had such peaceful sleep. I kissed her eyes and then her cheeks and could feel the slight movement in her .I wanted to go beyond that I but I didn't have any right on her, not after what I did to her. I just wanted to ask for her forgiveness and I just hoped that she would forgive me.



I woke up when I felt his kisses on my eyes and then on my cheeks. I wanted him to do more than that because I wanted all of dev touches to be vanished from my body. I opened my eyes and saw him looking at me. I smiled slightly at him and said "Good morning." I could see his eyes dropping at my lips and then at my eyes. I was expecting an answerer from him but he simply got up from the bed and said "I am really sorry!"


His back was towards me. "Maan" I said confused with his sudden change in the behavior.


He turned towards me and said "Don't say anything Geet let me talk today."


He sighed and said "I am really sorry for whatever I did to you. I am really sorry Geet. I had become really selfish then.I am ready for any punishment you will give me Geet but just forgive me." He had tears in his eyes.


But now what was I say to him that I forgive him.not so easily "But you left me Maan,if you wouldn't have left me then I wouldn't have to marry Dev. It's because of you I had to marry him Maan.You were never there to save me Maan"

He came towards me and hugged me and I hugged him back and cried in his arms. The tears which I was holding from long were no flowing from my eyes.

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I was sitting in the couch when Mohinder came to me in anger. I looked at him and stood up.

"What happened?" I asked him .

"how could you do this with your own daughter" he said with guilt and anger.

"I did what I thought was right. I did what every mother would do to save her daughters house." I said.

Mohinder "and is it saved?"

Rano "I was expecting Geet would go back to her home but Brij came'" before I could finish mohinder cut me off in the middle.

Mohinder "you forgot that she was your daughter just because the blind trust you have for your sister and what about your daughter."

Rano "I was afraid that what people will think of us when they will find out about Geet."

Mohinder "I don't want to hear what you were afraid of. I only know one thing that you ruined our daughter's life by marrying her to Dev. She wants divorce from him and its better that way."

" You think I don't care about her.It was Pammi who said she will take care of her when Maan left her just because he wanted to make money." I said to in anger.

I loved my daughter to that's why I thought about dev's proposal.

"get ready we are leaving for Delhi tonight."I heard him say that to me.

She was my daughter and I could very well understand her pain. What I did was wrong but I was just trying to save her house.

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"Any news of payal?" I asked from Dev.

Dev "No and don't worry about her.They must have gone on their honey moon."

"It's been over month and there is no call from her anyways any news about Geet?"

Dev "no not yet."he answered frustratingly.

I don't know why but I had a bad feeling about Payal.it seems as if she is in trouble. That night I couldn't sleep. There restlessness and agitation in me maybe I was feeling guilty of what I did to Geet.

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Edited by Moon002 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update.
hope things will get better soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
really interesting
i can't wait for the next part !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!!! Really looking forward to the next update now!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it ! Awesome ! Poor geet her mother even dint trust her
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
ohh poor geet so sad her mom didn't trust her
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

maan aur geet...ek duje k liye hi bane hai...koi teesra nehi asakta hai unke veech...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update.loved it
keep writing
and thnxxx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update waitig for next



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Posted: 13 years ago
oh so maaneet did go beyond
happy about that...
its a little confusing to know apart maaneet whose monologue it is. please clear next time, ok
plus beautifully written...
awesome
waiting for "little confessions"
tc and thx for pm

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