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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part Five
Recap: Prem, Mukti, and Debo go to the hotel to find the guy and find out that his name was Rahul Mehra. Then Debo dissappears.
Prem: Where is Debonnita?
Mukti: She'll be back. Let's just wait here for her.
Prem: Ok.
After couple of minutes, Debo comes back.
PRem: Where did you go? Sorry, I had to make a call.
Prem: Who did you call right now?
Debo seems kinda scared and confused.
Debo: Umm, I called Mohini dadi. Yeah I called Mohini dadi because I didn't tell her about where I was going. So I just called her and told her that I was at this hotel.
Prem: Ok. I think we should go and check these addresses for this Rahul Mehra.
They leave from hotel. They check the first three addresses, but don't find Rahul Mehra there. Then they go to the 4th house.
4th house~
Prem tells Mukti and Debo that he will ring the bell alone. SO, the gut doesn't get suspicious and doesn't think that we came here to ask him about that night since you were with Dad Basu at the hotel.
Debo: PRem, but I will come with you.
PRem: No, I am going alone.
Debo: Prem, but I need to come, I have to come.
Prem: What are you saying? I am going alone. Is that clear?
Debo: Ok
Mukti and Debo hide behind a tree and Prem rings the door bell. the same guy, Rahul Mehra, opens the door.
Rahul: Yes, who are you?
Prem: So, you are Rahul Mehra, right. Remember me. Hey, I need to talk to you. Can you come outside.
Mukti and Debo are watching and listening everything that is going on.
PRem: SOrry, yaar. I thought you were doing this purposely. YOu know with Doris, but I didn't know that you were forced to do this. But who did force you.
Rahul: Prem Sharma
Really, are you sure that you are not lying because I am Prem Sharma.
After hearing this, Rahul gets really scared. He tries to run, but Prem catches him. THen Mukti and Debo come out.
PRem: LEts go.
PRem then drags Rahul in his car.
Bajaj HOuse~
Prem: Birju Kaka Birju Kaka
Birju Kaka: Yes Prem
PRem: Where is every one?
Birju Kaka: Prerna is at Prem's Samadhi. I didn't know about Sahab.
Prem: Ok.
Prem's Samadhi~
PRerna is sitting infront of PRem's Samadhi and crying. She is thinking about all the moments she spend with PRem. Just then Anurag comes there.
Anurag: Prerna YOu here( tum yahaan)
Mr. Bajaj: Mr. Basu what are you doing?
Anurag: SOmeone called me and told me to come here.
Mr. Bajaj: I got the same call.
Just then PRem, Mukti, Debo come there with Rahul. prerna, Anurag, and Bajaj are shocked.
HOpe you like it and don't forget to reply.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
it's awesome 👏


please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
awesome yaar 2 epi's on da same day!!!!!!!! cool. luv ya, n ur fanfic. muah* keep ritin, n stay cool
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Very nice!!! plzz continue!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
that was awsome plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
AWESOME!
plz cont soon!
cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Part Six
Recap: PRem, Mukti and Debo find Rahul and bring him to Prem's Samadhi and Prerna, MR.Bajaj, and Anurag are shocked to see them there.
Mukti: We called you guys here.
Anurag: But why Mukti?
Mukti:To prove to you that Prem is innocent.
Prem pushes Rahul towards Anurag.
Prem: Tell them the truth.
Rahul: I lied to you. PRem didn't do anything. I was told to do all this by this guy. He told me to come to this secluded place and told me to do this. So, Prem can be accused.
All three of them are shocked.
Anurag: What was his name, the guy who told you to do this?
Rahul: I don't know, but he was got a call from a lady and She was telling him what to tell me.
Everyone is shocked to hear this.PRerna has tears in her eyes and is feeling guilty because she also didn't trust Prem.
Mukti: Choti ma, we made a mistake again. We never trusted Prem. He was telling us all along that he didn't do this, but we didn't listen to a thing he said. Actually, it's pretty much my fault. I shouldn't have followed him in the first place. I am the one who started this misunderstanding.
Prerna: It's not your fault , Mukti. All of us here are in fault. I didn't trust him. His own mother didn't trust him. Atleast to supported him in the end. You were with him all this time and I am very thankful to that. Debonnita thank you too. You also helped Prem.wait a minute where is PRem.
Then Prerna sees him infront of PRem's Samadhi crying.She starts walking towards him while thinking of all the good and bad moments spent with him.

Prerna: Prem, I'm Sorry. Beta I am very sorry. I know that I have no right to ask for your forgiveness since I never trusted you.Since, I didn't even trust you after you were pleading me to believe you. She puts a hand on Prem's shoulder.
Prem: Why didn't you trust me? Why didn't you trust me?At this point Prem startes crying too.
Prerna: I am really sorry.I should have believed you. I know that have threatened about me throwing you out of the house before and hit you but, I want you to know that I love to and I don't want to lose. Please beta forgive me. I love you alot. I really do.
While Prerna is saying this, Prem looks at her with teary eyes and then hugs her and calls her ma for the first time.


Prem: I forgive you, but please don't misunderstand your son again. I care for you very much and I wouldn't do anything to hurt you or my family.When Prem says my family, Prerna realizes that her Prem is back. SHe got her Prem back atlast.
Prerna: Prem, I am very sorry. I am very sorry.
Anurag: Prem, please forgive me too. I believed a stranger than my own son.I am very sorry.PRem then gets up from there and goes up to Anurag and Mr. Bajaj and hugs them.
PRerna(happily): Anurag, today we got our Prem back.
Prem then goes to Mukti.
Prem: Mukti, thank you very much. I could have never done this without you.Prem then looks at Debo waiting for him to say something to her.O yeah, Debonnita thank you too.
Prerna: Let's go home now. Now I have got my beta ,Prem. Let's go home now. Then all of them except for Debo happily go back home.After all of them leave, Debo calls the lady again.
Debo: Hello, everything is ok. Rahul made up a story and told it to those people and they believed it. Well, I have to go now. I have to go tell Mohini dadi how I supported Prem.Bye.Then she leaves for Basu house.
Well hope you like it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
taht was great plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
r u gonna continue?its really gud!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
thats realy gud kep up the gud wokr 😊 😃

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