New Prem-Mukti Fanfic!!!(Part 6 posted)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi!!!My name is Mrinalini, but everyone calls me Sonu.THis is my first thread and my 1st fanfic, so I hope you guys like it.
The story continues from today's episode where Prem is shattered because no one believes him and Mukti is thinking of helping him.

Part One
Mukti's House~

Mukti(thinking about Prem):I know Prem has commited many mistakes in his life, but I have a feeling that what happened today wasn't Prem's fault. I think he is innocent. I should go talk to him.
Mukti them leaves to find Prem. She goes to his friend's house, but finds no luck. She then goes the dance club that Prem always goes to, but doesn't find him there.
Outside the Dance Club~
Mukti(thinking): Prem isn't at his friend's house or the dance club. Where could he be?(Suddenly, she says)I know where he is.
Then she leaves.
1st Prem's Samadhi~
Prem is sitting infront of Prem's(1st) samadhi and is crying.
Prem:Why does no one believe him? When I haven't done anything wrong, why do I punished or thrown out of the house.Mother India, Dad Basu, and Mukti have always misunderstood me. They have always accused me of something I haven't done. Today when I was asking everyone to believe me that I can't do something so low, but they didn't believe me. Daddy Cool,MR. BAJAJ,even slapped me.Why don't they believe me. Why don't they ever believe me. Prem breaks down yet again.He mumbling to his brother the same question over and over again. Why didn't they believe me?WHile he is crying his heart out to his brother, someone puts a hand on his shoulder. When he turns around he is shocked to find Mukti there.
Prem:DON'T TOUCH ME.
And the part ends on Prem and Mukti's shocked face.

Well this part ends here. If you guys like it, then I will continue.



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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice yaar
please cont
Again great job
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon really good start hope to read the next part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and welcome! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz plz plz do cont.!! that was a very good start!! keep up the good work!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part Two
Recap: Prem is at (1st) Prem's Samadhi and mukti comes there.
While Prem is crying his heart out, someone puts a hand on his shoulder. When he turns around he is shocked to find Mukti there. Mukti's first glance at Prem's sorrowful face caused her to realize what a big mistake she had done by not trusting Prem and accusing him of such a low act.
Prem:DON'T TOUCH ME!
These words spoken by Prem startled Mukti.
Prem: Don't you ever touch me. WHy are you here? TO blame me of something else. Mukti how could you think that I would do such a thing? I really didn't expect this from you. YOu have accused me of stealing money, which I had taken to build this samadhi for Mother INdia. You have also accused me of raping you and now this. HOw could you ever think that I would do this to DOris. WHy did you ever suspect me? It's because of you that the suspicion against me arousedin the family. WHy did you tell Tushar that I could have sent that person to ruin Doris's reputation.
Mukti: But Prem.....
Prem:Enough! Why didn't you believe me? I was telling you all along that I didn't do this, but you didn't believe me. YOu didn't even want to listen to me. If you hadn't suspected me and told Dad Basu, then I wouldn't be in this situation.
Mukti:Prem....
Prem: Mukti, please I don't want to talk to you. Please just leave.Prem then turns around.
Mukti:PRem I didn't come here to accuse you, but I came here to tell you that I believe you. Prem I believe you.
Right after Mukti finishes her sentence PRem turns around in disbelief. He is surprised by Mukti's words.
PRem: Do you really believe me? Do you really think I am innocent ? But how, why after all that I have done with you.
Mukti: My heart told me so.(After hearing this Prem's tearful eyes had started weeping yet again.)I felt that you were really innocent and you couldn't have done this. I am really sorry PRem that I didn't trust you. Please forgive me Prem. I will help you in proving yourself innocent and finding the real culprit who did this to Doris.
THis part ends on Prem's and mukti's sad faces.
Hope you like it and don't forget to reply.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice...i love it...if can write longer thanks 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please continu, its so good [=D> 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good work plz conitnue!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice 👏 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful, wonderful!!! Continue, yaar!! At least Mukti reached Prem, in the show Mukti prob won't even get to Prem in time....

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