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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part - 4


brij got angry seeng msk, coz he considered dev fr hs sister's cnditon.

Brij:1bhai ne to meri behan ki zindagi barbd kr di ab dusra yaha kya lene aya hai?

Maan:awaz nichi rakh k bat karo coz agar maine awaz unchi ki to tm kisi ko muh dikhane k layak nai rahoge.


Brij got angry nd caught hs collar. Maan jerked hs hand in anger.

Maan:insano ki tarah bat ki to theek warna janwaro ko kabu karna mujhe achi tarah aata hai.


B4 brij attck hm again dharam came betwn dem nd stops both.

Dharam:brij stop it,nd u mr. Msk may i know d reason of urs cming here?

Maan:luk,i m nt intrsted in jalebi talk. I m a straight forwrd person. Point is i knew ur daugter is pregnant nd i know this is dev's child. So my intrest is dat i want dis baby. I mean ye baby khurana family ka blood hai to use wo sab milna chahiye jo kisi b khurana child ko milta hai.

Brij:bacha to tb hoga jb bachega.

Maan:i m not talkig to u.undrstud so u bettr b kept away.

Dharam:lekin ye kaise possible hai?

Maan:main geet se shadi karne k liye taiyar hu.

Dharam:what abot ur family,dey nevr accept hr.

Maan:dis is none of ur business. Ab wo mrs msk ban k jayegi.use sab apnayenge my gurantee.

Dharam:lekin abi to dev ki death ko 10 din b pure nai hue aise me marriage not possible.or kuchh time bad bachha dikhne lagega.

Maan:dont take stress of al dis just say yes and we get married tommorrow. We do court marrige,if u said yes to papers to aaj hi ready ho jayenge.


B4 ny1 gave ans to hs que.geet intrupts.


Geet:mujhe ye faisla manjur nai hai. Main dev k alaw or kisi ko apni life ka hissa nai banaungi.

Avantika:geet tu bahar kyu aa gai,just go inside.jo b decision lena hai wo hm lenge.

Maan(thot):huh..natak to dekho iska.lekin ms geet singania main dev nai hu jise tm asani se apne jal me fasa lo.mujhpe in sab dramas ka koi asr nai hota hai.

Geet:mumma pls tell hm to left frm dere.we dont need hs mercy

Maan:u need dat geet.(he trun to dharam) mr. Singhania if u allowed i want to talk to hr in alone.

Brij shook hs head in no coz he dont want to leave geet wid hm,bt avantika likn hr eyes nd gave hr permission.

Dharam:ok but only for 5mins.

Brij moved wid hs parents to another rum. Now both are alone in a room.


Maan:listen geet vry carefully mujhe b tumse shadi krne me koi intrest nai hai. And most impor dis marriage proposal is required by u den me. Coz tumhare parents aaj nai to kal is bache ko abord krwa hi denge.so i u wnt to save ur baby marry me. Let me one thing clear u,we r married only for society.i m not going to give u any rite of dis relatonshp. For me u r only a mother if dis child. Now decision is ur wat u want?is bache ko 1 achhi life dena chahti ho ya apne parents ko shamindagi ki maut.soch lo i gave u 24 hours but only 24 hours.jo b faisla ho apni family or mujhe bata dena.take my card nd inform me.

Msk put his visiting card on table nd left d house. All 3 came again to her.

Avantika:geet maan kaha hai?

Geet:wo chale gaye.

Avantika(snuggled her):to beta kya kaha usne? Ru ready for this marriage?

Geet is very frustrated. How can she take this decision so easily?

Geet:mumma pls leave me alone. She ran to her room and locked it frm inside.

Brij:papa mumma pls think once again.mujhe to ye maan kuch teda banda lagta hai. Kahi aisa na ho wo dev ki maut ka sara gussa humari geet pe nikale. Akad dekhi ap logo ne usme kitni hai.

Dharam:lekin brij abortion me sau tarah k risk or complications hote hai usse to achha hai ki geet maan se shadi kr le.

Brij:dont know but mujhe maan kuchh theek nai laga. Aap dono bade hai humare parents hai humara achha bura humse behtar samjhte hai...isliye jo apko theek lage.mujhe jo laga wo maine bata diya hai apko.

Brij left for hs office work. Geet sobbing in hr room. She hugged dev's pic.

Geet:dev main tumhare siva kisi or ki nahi ho sakti.main ye shadi nahi kar skti.tymi batao main kya karu?

She thinks alot about this whole day. In evening she came out of her room and her parents asked again about her decision. They put two choice in front of her.

Dharam:geet puttar ab tu hi bata ki tu kya chahti hai ya to maan se shadi kar le or apne bachhe ko ek secured future or baap ka naam dono dede ya firr humari baat maan or abortion karwa de.

Geet:papa aap mere baby ko marne ko keh rahe ho?

Dharam:dekh beta abortion k haq me to main b nahi hu lekin ye samaj is bache ko jeene nai dega.usse achha hai hum ise duniya me ane se pehle hi khatam kar de... Ya firr shadi k liye ha kr de.

Geet:papa mumma main kal subah tak aap dono ko apna final decision bata dungi...

And she ran to her room again...


PART 3 PART 5

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome prologue
waiting for first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update..
still cant believe Maan thinks Geet is guilty
and its good Brij understood from the beginning about what Maan is going to do..
waiting to see what happens next..
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Part - 5

Aftr dinner,again geet loked hrslf in hr rum,thinking abot hr baby nd hr parnts. Maan's comm.also swimmed in hr mind whch mde hr mor weak.

geet(thot):geet itni selfsh mat ban.apne bache ki zindagi k liye tujhe ha krni hi hogi wrna sb use mar denge.or agr iski jan bchane k liye tu kai dur chali b jaye to log tere mumma papa ko jeene nai denge... Hey babaji main kya karu. Dev k alawa main kaise kiisi ko apni lyf me jagah de du?


Bt she remembrs wat maan said 2 hr. Dat she will b hs wife only in frnt of othrs. Geet think again & again. She ws in a big dilemma. Nxt day maan went to hs office. Adi cmes to meet hm. Adi asked abot hs plans nd he told hm evrythng happnd last day at singhania house.

adi:r u mad?d way u talk to dem,is making d sit.more worst.dey will nvr accept ur proposal of d marriage.

maan:nd i proved u wrong soon. Coz dey all r money seekers.nd wen so much juicy proposal is cming frm front who made d mistake of deniying it.u will wait nd watch. Still 25 mints r left in compltng 24 hours.dey will cal definately.

adi:maan i enquired abot dem.dey r nt just lyk dat d way u think about dem. Mr. Dharam is a vry simple honest nd hard wrkng kind of a self made man.

maan:just fr show off.dey dont show deor true colours coz dey nevr get a proposal lyk this b4.

in mrng geet tells hr decesion to hr parents.

geet:papa ap mr. Khurana ko bta deejiye dat i m ready fr dis marriage.

avantika:shukar hai babaji ka.geet puttar u hav taken a rite decision.ye hi sai hai tere or is hone wale baby k lie.suniye aap maan se bat kr lijiye.

dharam called maaan,bt brij feels wired,dont know y, he dislyk hs arrogant aatitude.bt at dis moment sit.is wrost nd hs parents too wants dat she gt married wid hm,so he decided to keep hs mouth shut. Deep inside brij is realy worried fr hr little sis.

in office:-


adi: c only 2mins r left nd no call is coming frm dere side.

maan:2mins r still left nd dey will call definately just wait nd watch.

meantime maan's phone is ringing. He showed hs phone's screen to adi to show hs victory nd den ans d call.

maan:yes mr. Singhania,tell wat u all decided?

dharam:maan geet says yes fr dis marriage.she is ready now.

maan(smirked nd thot):i knew it dat she is vry smart. She will never denied as much fruitful proposal. Bt geet singhania jise tum apni lyf ki sabse badi achievment samjh rai ho wo tumari lyf ki sabse badi punishment prove hogi.


maan lost in hs own thots nd frgt to gave ans to hm.

dharam:hello maan r u dere?

maan bring bak to hs senses:ya ya i m here.its a gud news.she take a rite decision.listen sir i m sending my frnd to ur home,he will drop u all to my lawyer's office nd we do all d formalities dere.so b ready he will b dere at any moment.

dharam:ok as u said.

dharam cuts d call nd he luks at adi wid a winning grin.

maan:so u said smthng abot dem. Adi msk is alwys rite.

adi(thot):maan jise tu unka lalch samjh raha hai actually wo unki majburi hai...and i realy wish dat u too realize it soon.

maan:now listen,take den all nd drop dem to angad's office.i hav sm impo.wrk.

adi reached to singhania house nd introduced hmself:hello sir i m adi,maan's frnd.he told u abot me on phone.

dharam:yes2.so came to pick up us?

adi:yes sir if u all r ready we can leave now coz we have to go long way.

dharam:dont worry we al r ready.

Unintrestedly geet sat in a car wid hr parents on bak seat. Adi drrove dem all to angad's office. It tuk 1 hr. Geet is vry restless coz today hr lyf is going to change compltly. She is going to married a man who is totally stranger fr hr. No clue where lyf moves hr. Hw all khuranas react wen dey know she is married to their son. Will dey accept hr nd hr baby. Thses kinds of many head aching ques hammered hr head. Hr heart beat raised due to fear regading hr baby's future. She lost in thode ques. She sits lyk a statue havng no glimpse of happiness in hr dead eyes. All r waiting fr maan's arrival. Meanwhile he came dere. Maan greeted hr parents.


maan:i hav done all d arrangements regading our court marriage. Now we have to sign d papers only. Other related formalities had done by mr. Angad.


angad is hs frnd too,nt as adi bt he is also hs frnd. He do wat he wants. He paas many papers to sign. Geet sign all d papers widout seeing ny details nd maan seems vry happy at hs first win.


In last angad took sign of dharam nd adi as a eye witness of dis marriage.


angad:congras to u both now u r legally married couple. Adi congrats hm too. Bt dere is no reaction frm geet's side. Hr parents too gt a big relief.

maan:angad sara kaam legally ho jana chahiye.

angad grinned:dont worry maan apka kaam sign krna tha baki ka sara headache ab mera hai. Ek hafte me ye sare papers formalities complete karke main office bhijwa dunga.

maan smirked at his first win.. His plan is working as he wants...


PART 4 PART 6

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd it jaan u r too gud...
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great update..
maan smiling at his win not knowing he might be defeated..
waiting to see what happens next.. thanksss
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Posted: 13 years ago
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prologue
nice...
interesting...

CS
awesome...

PS - can u plz update ur title with the update and page numbers like Lust for Revenge part 1 @ 2?

sent the buddy invite and plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
OMG poor Geet and Dev...
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part 2
poor Geet...
so shes carrying Dev's kid...
Dev's parents are so cruel...
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part 3
doesnt anyone know that Dev and Geet got married?

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