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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ...
Just read ur ff ...
And its amazing ...
The story is awesome ..
Loved it ...
Great work ...
Waiting to read more ...
Plzz update soon ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt deetha...sholly fr commentin late
plzz updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
di aap pls ise aur arsha waale ko update kardo na pls...

p.s. - arsha waala FF not SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
deetha when are you planning to update this???
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Posted: 13 years ago
deetha di mujhe update chahiye chahiye chahiye

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Posted: 13 years ago
so my dears im back...so here goes ur update with out any bak bak...


he nuzzled closer and breathed in her fragnance...but wait ...its not her fragnance...he pulled her closer...no its not the soft skin of hers...he frowned and opened his eyes...just to find...(haha kya sochne lage??) find him hugging the pillow...she was not there...he sprang up...

"kriya!!!!!!!! "he called ...obviously tensed...every sec of her being far makes him shiver...

"haa kya hua rey??? aap uth gaye???" she asked from side...


he looked sidewards...there she stood drying her wet hair ...

"*phew* yaha ho????bina bataye aise koi chala jata hai kya???"he asked really getting mad at her...

"arey aap gussa kyun kar rahe ho rey...aap so rahe the aur mai nahane gayi...isme kya badi baat hai???"she asked getting annoyed...

"arey batake jaana chahiye na mai tumhe dhoondh raha tha neendh mei aur tu nahi hai toh pata hai mai kitna dar gaya??????"he said in high temper...

"rey hadd hai...aap so rahe the toh mai aap uthake ye bataun ki mai uthgayi aur nahane jaa rahi hun????? ri8????? rey aap paagal hogaye ho...maine socha ache se aapko uthaungi...par aap toh subah subah mujhpe chilla rahe ho..."she made a hurt face...abt to cry...she turned away and sat on the nearby couch angry with him...and sad...

he then realised what he did...he and his stupid tension...he thought...

hmm ab isse manana padega...no probs...meri baatcutter ko manana is my fav kaam...here i come sweetheart...

he went and sat beside her...made a puppy face and held his ears...

"sorryyy!!!!!!!! "he said cutely...

she smiled and looked at him...their eyes met...

he looked into them...he found anger????no!!!!!! pain?????? hell yes!!!!!

he wondered why...

"baatcutter" she cut him...

"aap har pal meri wajah se tensed rehte hona????"she asked as her eyes became wet...

he bit his lower lip...

damn !!!!!! yeh maine kya kiya????? now she is blaming herself...rey ur a big...argghh!!!!!!!

he looked at her and thought to lighten up the mood...he hugged her side wards ...

"mujhe tumhare liye tensed hona bohut pasand hai" he said and kissed her on her throat...

she was still sad and stood and was gng but he pulled her back such that she sat on his lap and he pulled her legs upon the sofa...she looked at him confused...

"tumne hi toh kaha ...ki tum mujhe ache se uthana chahti hai...toh kaise uthaogi???"he asked with a naughty smile on his lips...

"kaise uthaungi?????"she asked confused...

"wahi kaise utaogi???"" he asked again...

"rey utho ..."she said shaking him..."aise hi"she said innocently which made him fall head over heels for her again...

"itna peeka sa???"he asked ...

"toh kaise utaun???"she asked confused...

kabhi kabhi na bilkul bachi banjaati hai...meri pyaari baatcutter...

"rey!!!!!!! rey!!!!!!"she waved in front of him...he came to senses/...

"mai toh aise nahi utatha...itna peeka sa toh bilkul nahi"he said looking away...

"toh kaise uthaoge??? "she asked really annoyed

he pinned her hair back to the ears...she looked at him...she wondered how his gaze turned to a seductive and intense one in fraction of seconds...but as usual got lost in them as her cheeks strtd their work...they became more red as tym passed...he held her face with left and ri8 around her waist and he bend her down that she was lying on the sofa...(hope u got)

she looked down...to her surprise he kissed her chin...she looked at him...he gave his oh so sexy smile...he lifted her chin up by his finger and kissed her thraot...she strtd breathing hard...he kissed her neck and went down the throat kissing till he reached her navel and bit it slightly...she clutched his hair...

"rey..."she managed to call him...

"yeah sweet heart."he replied looking at her and their faces close to each other...

"woh... aap... fresh"she was abt to tell but soon blocked by his lips...

he kissed her very softly...not even a flower can be that soft she thought...he kissed her for a long tym...finally pulled back as they were in lack of oxygen...

"aise uthata..."he said smilingly heartily at her...she blushed and hugged him tight...

he too responded...they sat lyk dat 4r a long tym...he spoke...

"kriya aaj hum baahar jayenge...kk ...bohut enjoy karenge"he said really very excited...she in excitment pulled back and spoke...

"haan bohut maze karenge hum sab milke"she said lyk small child..

"hum sab???"he asked confused...

"haa...mai aap sweetu and swayam...sab milke"she said with a grin...

his face fell down..."hum alag alag nahi jaa sakte hai kya????"he asked in a low vioce...kriya became upset...he saw her...gave a kiss on her cheek and said

"koi baat nahi hum sab milke enjoy karenge..."he said..she smiled...she got down and he stood up and was gng to washroom when she stopped him by his wrist...he turned with a smile...obviously...she was the one whose presence makes him smile...she came to him placed her hands on his chest...he looked at her confused but still smiling...

"mai chahti hun ki aap apni din khushi khushi strt kare..."she said looking at him...

he placed his arms on her shoulder and went close to her...

"maine toh apni din waise hi strt kiya..."he smiled...

"mai chahti hun ki aap aur bhi khush ho..."she said...

he looked confused.."woh kaise???"

she smiled and gently took his lips into hers ...firstly he was shocked at her move but soon he kissed her back passionately yet gently...

finally they broke...he kissed on her head...

"i love u !!!!!!!"he whispered...

she cleared the hair on his forehead with her palm...and cupped his face in her ri8 palm and kissed his on his ri8 cheek ...

"love u too"she said when gng back...

he smiled and went to freshen up...


finally at 9:00 both were out of their room...

lemme explain...it was a big room and it consists another two rooms just lyk a living room and two bedrooms opposite to each other...

they all met in the living room greeted gudmrngs and lead out down ...they sat down on a four tabled chair...rey and swayam went to book cab and bring ice-cream...

reyam:

sw: rey...

r: haan...

sw: wo...

r: kya hai yaar bata bhi de...

sw: bhai sharon chahti hai ki hum sab saath mei ghumne chale...

r: kriya bhi yahi chahti hai...

sw: toh kya hum...

r: unhe khush nahi dekhna??????

sw: ofcourse dekhna hai/...

r: toh koi problem saath jaane mei?????yaar dekho...agar alag bhi jayenge toh agar wo upset hai toh kaisa lagega????

sw: ur ri8 bro...chal chalte hai...

r: hmmm😊

krisha:

sh: shona ...

k: haan sweetu...

sh: maine swayam se kaha ki hum sab milke jayenge ghoomne keliye aur wo maan bhi gaya,...

k: haan sweetu maine bhi rey se poocha...woh bhi maangaye...

sh: par mujhe lagta hai ki wo hamare saath akele tym spend karna chahte hai...

k: haan mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ...sweetu hume alag alag jaana chahiye...

sh: haan shona mai bhi yahi soch rahi hun...wo log hamareliye sab kuch sacrifise kardete hai...

k: haan ...and we are lucky ki hamari life mei ye do hai...sweetu hum alag alag jayenge theek hai...waise ghar mei picnic bhi saath mei jayenge ri8??? so yahan unko exclusive tym de dete hai...

sh: exactly shona mai bhi yahi kehne wali thi...

rey: kya baate ho rahi hai bhai...

reyam came back and gave their lady loves icecream and sat down enjoying theirs...

sh: rey ham soch rahe hai ki ...

sw: ki???????

k: yahi ki hum alag alag jayenge...aap dono aur hum dono...

r: arey kriya...kyun hum saath mei jayenge na..

sh: nahi rey...hame pata hai aap log hamreliye...

sw: no sharon...hume koi problem nahi ek saath jaane mei...after all tum donon hamereliye equally important ho ri8?? toh aisa koi problem nahi...

r: infact hum khoosh hai ki aap donon ke saath enjoy karenge...

k: nahi rey alag alag jayenge bas...*pout*

sh: haan*pout*

reyam smiled at each other and

rey: theek hai aaj alag alag jayenge aur kal sab ek saath ghoomenge ...wat say?????

sw: perfect!!!!!!!!!

boys looked at the girls...slowly their lips curved and both nodded lyk small kids...

"too adorabe"reyam said slowly and looked at each other and smiled.../

k: kya???

rey: kuch nahi...we said then its decided...

they had their breakfast and left in two different directions...






sorry guys aur lamba hona chahiye tha..par aadha delete hogaya ...phir se type karne ka strenght nahi...next update will be cute...simple...yet romantic and u will feel the purity and cuteness of love...


promo:


k: rey ...aap mujhe itna pyaar kyun karte ho????/

r: kya karoon...jitna bhi try karoon ki tumse pyaar na karun par ho nahi pata infact jab bhi try karta hun toh aur bhi pyaar karne lag jaata hun...

k: u really gave me another life rey...i love u a lot...

r: i know that u love me a lot...and i love u more...

they hugged




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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
resdπŸ˜ƒ unres
aww such a cute update 😳
Edited by pkriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...
unres

Superb update di!!!!
Luved Kriyaansh's bedroom romance... awww ..
waiting for d nxt update...

Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update

hawt update

update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
Unres!
Yaaayyy!!!!!!!!!!! u updated!!!!!!
Kitna acha update tha!
kriyaansh romance haye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍
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rey pura paagal ho chuka hai!
kria ko senseless basis par daat raha h!
Awww kitna acha tareeka haikisi ko uthane ka!
kisi ki bhi need gayab ho jae iske baad!
KriSha ne pehli baar ReYam ke baare mai itna socha!
Unke brains par koi side-effect toh nae hoga na??????😲😲😲😲
Next update jaldi karna!
Edited by aditi061 - 13 years ago

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