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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 14 -Part A

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I wiped my tears and went downstairs.. each and every little convos of us dazzled infront of my eyes.. the bet talk kept piercing my heart. I felt my heart would rip of the moment he wins his bet!! Damn!!! Why me always ??? I will teach that devil a lesson! MY promise to myself!!!! Huh
I saw him standing , leaning to his car, I opened the gates nd went in his direction. He smiled at me.. I plastered a fake smile.. but then again my heart melted for his million dollar smile. The way his lips curve.. aaahhh they wer soo tasty!! SHIT SHIT SHIT!!! Stop thinking about dat bloody devil! STOP IT KRIA!!!! I screamed inside my mind..
He was staring ummm well he was drooling at me… I could see that clearely ! damn him!!
I stood right infront of him and smiled sarcastically, no response.
I snapped my fingers infront of his face, no response.
I shook his shoulders, no reponse.
Well if that bet thing wouldn't have come in my mind I wouldn't have punched him seriously!!! Punching someone isn't a way to bring them back to earth right ? I did it.. wen all my efforts went in vain of bringing him back from his dreamland.. I suddenly recalled all wat happened.. neither his dreamy face was helping.. his dream face had a smirk plastered..! HOW AM I TO RESIST ? dint I tell before ? wenver I see his smirk I feel like smacking away all his teeth ??
Don't worry I dint punch his face, I punched his stomach.. he curled himself crying
'WHAT THE..' was the only words came out of his mouth as I punched him.. like I care..! huh
I stood crossing arms over my chest.. to be frank I dint hit tat hard alright.. at first I flinched thinking he was hurt.. but how do I forget REYAANSH SINGHANIA is the only example for man who can be so DRAMATIC!! Drama king ??
'rey!! stop acting!!' I said annoyingly..
'what the hell!!!! Im not acting! Shit u killed my pancreas!!!! Aaahhh' he cried faking tears
'WHAT ?? pancreas ??? aahhh!!! REY UR SUCH A…'
'KRIAAA!!!' he screeched!!
'uggghhh what the hell rey..' he caught my hand for support..
I punched him on the stomach , okay well a little above but certainly not on his feet that he wanted a support..
I brushed his hand away.. he again acted catching his stomach!!
But then he looked so cute.. he startd crawling around like a baby! GOSH THIS GUY IS INSANE!!
Am I less ??? aint an alien or sumthn ??? im suppose to be killing the devil of my life instead im here standing near his car laughing hard that my stomach is aching just for his silly tactics of making me laugh!! Gosh!! Why does he do it first place ??
Ab meri pet dard ho rhi hai!!! shit!!!! Im laughing so badly! Control control!!!
I kneed down to his length laughing.. he looked up and our eyes met..
Once again I drowned in that hazel black orbs.. losing my senses I dint care about anythn.. my breathing rate gradually increased due to his presense.. so close..
He slowly pinned my hairs behind my ears.. I stared at his hands and then at him..
Again I could read love care concern in his eyes!! how can I belive all this was fake ? and just for some BLOODY BET ????
I came back to my senses.. and I got up.. he too got up embarrassed..
He opend the passanger seat for me..
I was confused 'I thout we are going for a walk ?' I raised my eye brows..
'sit!!' he commanded with no other explanation.. seriously I dint have any strength of aruguing with him after such a emotional roller coaster day !!!
The music in the radio was tunned in RJ was blabbering something.. wat else those wierdos do ?? oh wondering y I hate RJs !!? because of their stupid talks about love!! Really ?? love exists ? no its all bullshit!!! Just desire of bodies nothing else!!! Don't belive me ? take my example !! im here the gal head over heals for this monster and I can also read in his eyes he do have feelings for me but ? then again its all fake bullshit! Just for goddamn bet ??? so wer is love?? And what the f**k is love ?? bullshit!!! As if my words wer answerd the RJ started his ranting..-
'fate!!! Wow! This four letter word always fights with sacred four letter word LOVE !! isn't it guys ??? sabki love story mei kuch kuch gadbad ho hi jaati hai!! after all imperfects make life perfect!! Khane mei sirf meeta hot oh khana accha nhi lagta right everyone ?? there should be some spice in life!! And tat spice in love is bestowed by fate!! So agar aap is fate se ladkar apne love ko jeet liya!! Then u guys r truly made for each other.. with that note hear a romantic song!! –Kuch Kuch Hota Hai'
I went to off the radio while rey held my hands.. he looked up to me.. and blinked his eyes indicating he wants to listen to it.. I snapped my head in my mind..
How Cheezy!! Ewww
'its not cheessyy.. tats a beautiful song ever!!' he said wid a proud smile..
I bit my lower lip 'did I say tat out loud ?' he looked at me.. I looked out..
I lowerd the windows the cool breeze hit me.. gosh it felt soo good!!
'I cant believe u don't like romantic songs..' he commented..
I turned to face him
'umm aise nhi hai.. but u seemed to be loving romantic songs don't u ?' I shot back.
'well!! they are..' he started to explain
'aur hogi kyu nhi ? after all ur a casinova!! Ur wel experienced in how to impress gals don't u ??'
'what ?? tum..' again I interrupted
'infact tum sab boys ki yahi galti hai!!! u always think u guys smart while tum log worlds bigget idiots ho!! Don't feel anythn playing with emotions of gals ?'
I knw I knw im bringing my own probs in bw I cant help though..
'but mei..' as always I interrupted
'tum log kabhi ek ladki ke saat faithfully rhi nhi skte ho!! Infact u guys cant love at al!! tum sab ko bas ek hi cheez chahiye gals!!'
I looked at him he raised his eye brows
'inculding u!!' I completed
[hope u know what is tat 'ek cheez' im not gonna say hahahahahhaa]
He halted the car wid a jerk.. tats wen I realised we wer near marine drive.. there wer few couples too..
He got down the car and opened my door.. he pulled me out.. pinning me against the car and pressing himself against me
'do u really think im like tat ??? don't u trust me ??'
I looked at one brief time.. do I trust him ? after all wat I heard ? NO WAYS!!
'yes!!! I think u r like tat!! And I don't trust u..!!' I said it right on his face.. I could see the clear view of pain in his eyes.. my heart flinched.. it did kick me for hurting him.. but wat about the hurt I went thru ??
He jerked back and turned around.. I wondered wats up with him.. he again turn to face me.. I backed a bit..
He started laughing!!! Aaahh!! Tat smirk was back again.. 'u think right!! Exactly right!! But..'
'but ??'
'tum ladkiyan kya kam ho ? u gals make us wait for u.. make us die for u! Wo karo yeh karo wo na karo!! Uuuggh!! U gals always wanna be dominating don't u ? tum logon ko lovers nhi dogs chahiye wich obeys to u !!!'
I was left mouth hanging..
[okay now im using d3 gang.. well I dint really use dem.. but consider them to be some random people in the marine drive .. they will b BG Dancers for this sequence..]
[next instalment after a while until then read dis !!]

next installment part B will be up soon !!! and even the chapter 15 will b up today only until then enjoy this

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
nams kaha ho??????

i wanna give u a kissi...

ghabrao mat ladki hun lesbian nahi ...😆

gaalpe hi doongi...😛

if u wonder ye kissi kiskeliye toh batadun..

ek ye 3 teen updates jo milne wale hai uskeliye...

doosra iss update keliye...

gosh!!!!!! no intense moment phir bhi i had goosebumps ..


lyk some places of their LLHH ...his drooling...

pinning her to car...

aaahhh!!!!!! u hit me hard on my heart...

rey ko aisa kyun bola???? wahi kriya ne???

i dnt lyk it...


par waiting aage kya hoga...

sorry last update pe cmnt nahi kar paayi..

some probs...plzz do understand...

i love u for this...

u made my day😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

CHAPTER 14- PART B


[Im using Simmi-Nilesh, Rinni-Amar, Barath-Vishaka imagine them to some random lovers in the marine drive along with few other guys and gals-lovers]

i was left mouth hanging for his statement.. now temme do I think wrong about him ??? he should be strangled to death from MY PRECOUS HANDS!!! Huh

and then we heard loud THUD sound of someone.. ummm 'slap!'

[ below description in authors pov ]

Kria turned to see who it was.. simmi hurted slapped nil hard.. nil was pouting holding his cheeks.. and begging simmi while she was dominating him.. on the other hand.. barath was trying to convince vishaka.. he was trying to explain sumthn while vishaka kept interrupting him not allowing him to answer anythn.. and den amar was kneeled down infront of rinni.. who was blowing air to her nails.. she was least bothered.. and something similar was going all over.. rey smirked at kria 'I told u kria!!!' he said .. kria crossed her arms over her chest.. and glared at him..

'u guys sick!!!' she said turning to go..

Ladki Kyu na Jaane kyu ladko si nahin hoti..

Kria turned around.. rey was standing at a distance smirking at the boys who wer there and then winking at kria.. all boys looked at him and grinned.. they moved to his side leaving bewildered gals.. all boys did one dance move.. rey moved forward towards kria..

Sochthi hai zyada – rey stood front of kria indicating her head..

Kam wo samaj thi hai – turned around kria and made a face

Dil kuch kehtha hai – touched her heart from behind whispering on her ears.. kria froze

Kuch aur hi karti hai- gave her a jatka from behind.. she fell fowrd balancing herself from not falling into the ground.. and then glared it him..

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladkon si nhi hoti

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladkon si nhi hoti – all boys joined and together dancing while gals wer glaring at them..

Sochthi hai hai zyada – barath said to vishaka

Kam wo samaj thi hai – nil to simmi

Dil kuch kehtha hai – amar to rinni

Kuch aur hi karti hai - rey dashed kria making her jump from her place and he moved front.. all boys joined

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladko si nhi hoti

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladko si nhi hoti – all boys dance

Music – rey danced infront of kria.. kria pushed him and almost giving another punch..

Pyaar usse bi hai magar shuruaat tumhi si chahe – rey caught her hand.. nd stared at her..

Kudh mei ulji ulji hai par baalon ko suljaayein – nil complained at simmi

I mean ur all the same yaar- rey said hitting his forehead

Hum acche dost hai par uss nazar se Tumko dekha nhi –barath to vishaka

Wo sab toh teek hai par uss baarein mei socha nhi –amar to rinni

Sabse alag ho tum yeh keh ke paas tumhare aaye – rey to kria.. pulling her for a salsa step..

Aur kuch din mei tum mei alag sa kuch b na usko paaiye – pushing her aisde as if she was burden!

Uss yeh kaisi shirt pehente ho – barath to vishaka

Yeh kaise baal katathe ho – amar to rinni

Ghaadi tehz chalate ho – rey to kria

Itni jaldi jaldi mei kyu kaate ho

Gimme a break!!! – nil to simmi holding his cheek wer she slapped

Tumhe badalne ko paas wo aati ha- rey lectures to amar

Tumhe mitaane ko chaal bichaati hai –rey to nil

Baaton baaton mei tumhe pasati hai – rey to barath

Pehle hasati hai.. phir bada rulaati hai.. – rey to all boys smirking at gals

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladko si nhi hoti..

Ladki kyu na jaane kyu ladko si nhi hoti..- all boys dance infront of gals..

Kria's patience broke hahhahahaa

All gals gather together.. and stand infront of the boys shooting daggers at them with full on attitude.. and then they hiss and turn around to go.. all gals very angry.. rey follows kria irritating her..


Eh Itna Hi Khudh Se Khush Ho To Peeche Kyon Aate Ho-
sudden she turnd around.. making him move back words..

Phool Kabhi To Hazar Thofein Akhir Kyon Laaten Ho – kria took flowers from nil's hand and threw on boys.. all gals stood smirking at boys



Apna Naam Nahin Bataya Aapne –
rinni to amar

Coffee Peene Chalenge – vishaka to barath

Main Aapko Ghar Chod Doon

Phir Kab Milenge- kria to rey



Bikhra Bikhra Be Matlab Sa Toota Phoota Jeena-
kria to rey pushing him..

Aur Kehte Ho Alag Se Hai Hum Taan Ke Apna Seena – stamped rey's foot.. he winced with pain.. while kria stood in attention smirking at him..


Bheega Tolya Kahin Farsh Pe –
kria

Toothpaste Ka Dakhan Kahin - rinni

Kal Ke Mauze Ulat Ke Pehne -vishaka

Waqt Ka Khuch Bhi Hosh Nahin- simmi


Jeena Ka Tumko Dang Sikhlati Hai

Tumhe Jaanwar Se Insaan Banaati Hai –kria placed her hands on rey shoulders.. and stared into his eyes..

Uske Bina Ek Pal Rehna Sakhoge Tum

Usko Pata Hai Yeh Keh Na Sakhoge Tum – she turned around wiping a tear and then moved front of him leaving him confused..

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti –all gals joined and danced


Jaane Kaun Kaun Se Din Woh TumkoYaad Dilaayein-
rey placed his elbow on nil's shoulders.. nil started counting..

Pyaar Ko Chahe Bhool Bhi Jaayein

Taareeqein Na Bhoolayein –to barath and barath agreed eyeing vishaka

First March Ko Nazar Milaayee – rey to nil

Chaar April Ko Main Milne Aayee – rey to barath

Ikees May Ko Tumne Chuwa Tha – rey to amar

Che June Mujhe Kuch Hua Tha- rey mocked at kria.. while she came to hit him


Ladko Ka Kya Hai Kissi Bhi Mor Pe Woh Mur Jaayein –
kria looked at rey from head to toe

Abhi Kissi Ke Hai Abhi Kissi Aur Se Woh Jud Jaayein - on hot gal passed around.. nil was gawking kria kicked him..

Tumhaare Mummy Daddy Ghar Par Nahin Hai – simmi to kria

Great… Main Aaa Jaon? – vishaka to kria

Tumhaari Friend Akeli Ghar Jaa Rahi Hai –rinni to kria

Bechari… Main Chod Aaon – simmi, vishaka, rinni to kria..

Uff – kria made a disgusting face at boys.. who wer acting looking here n there



Ek Haan Kehne Ko Kitna Dehlati Hai –
rey to amar..

Thak Jaate Hai Hum Woh Jee Behlati Hai – rey consoling barath n nil


Woh Sharmati Hai Kabhi Chupati Hai –
kria making a cute face at simmi

Ladki Jo Haan Kehde Usse Nibhati Hai – kria held rinni and vishaka's hand.. all gals blush other boys smile.. [excluding kriyaansh..] rey confused

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti - gals danced.. boys smile except rey


Na Na Na…
- rey tried to retort

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti (Ladki Kyon… Oh God)

Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti (Na Na Na Na, Oh God Shut Up…)

Alright Alright Iss Mein Jagadne Ki Kya Baat Hai Yaar

Pehle Pehle Bawarein Jaise Aas Paas Mand Rai (Arre… But I)

Phir Busy Hoon Kehkar Tumko Woh Tarkai (Come On KRIA)…

Samjha Karo Darling Aaj Bohat Kaam (Arre… Meri Bhi To Suno)

Door Hua To Kya Dil Mein Tumhaara Naam Hai (Oh… wow)

Jiss Chehre Par Marte Hai Woh Boring Ho Jaaye (I'm Not Listening To You)

Kuch Hi Din Mein Nazrein Inki Idhar Udhar Mand Rai (I'm Not Listening To You)

Sirf Pyaar Se Zindagi Nahin Chalti (OK I'm Not With Her)

Tum Interior Decoration Ka Course Kyon Nahin Karti

Oka that's it!

All boys and gals wer dancing .. while kria and rey fighting..

And finally rey stepped in bw held her .. and pecked her lips..

She was left in a shock.. while nimmi,rimar nd barkha wer clapping..


***


so how was it ? i always wanted kriyaansh performance on this song!! i love dis film like anythn.. i may use one more song from this for kriyaansh !! [ not romantic wala dusra hehehee u will knw it soon !! wait n read ]


please type down the reviews!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
woww,,,,,,,,,,pls add me in the pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
resss.
unresss

Wonderful update nams.
Both the parts were fab.
Loved them the most.
The gals yup.
Hope things get sorted out soon.
IOts beautiful to see Rey making her feel and my fav song wow on fav couple.Hugs to u nams for this.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
*uaann* uaan*😭

mai marti tujhe...

maine story expect kiya ...

par tune poora update ek song se bhar liya...

mummaa!!!!!!!! katti tujhse...

chal theek hai no katti...

next update mei song sequence mat likhiyo...

bohut pitegi...

mujhe story padna hai...

waise update ke baare mei kya kahun??

nice dance...i can imagine...

yaar wo last mei kya tha???

teaser deke kyun chod deti hai???

*phew* bechari gayi saari mehnat bhaad mei...

last mei rey ne wahi kiya jo wo karna chahta tha...

bechari kya kar sakti hai ,...warning bhi nahi hai...

hope next update would be soon...

waiting 4r it...


plzz 15th wala abhi update karde...

mai isse lamba cmnt doongi...

plljjj...*babyface*

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
awsome updates...
D song u decribd was amazing
bichari kriya ki mehnat pe rey ki kiss ne pani pher diya
update chapter 15 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
so finally u updated awww dat was a chummehswari and an outstanding update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
U knoe dis is my fav. Song of my fav. Movie !
Mujhe yeh so.g poora ratta hua tha !
N i was so enjoyin dis update !
I was singin dis song n readin d update !
Dis update made my day !
I jst luvd it !
N m sooo much w8in fr part 15 !
Luy u fr dis update !
Edited by kriyanshluver1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
both the updates were awesme

the song sequence was amazing

hope they unite soon

update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago

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