new fanfic- Angad-from rags to riches!

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Hi.

My concept of kyph is totally different from what the other people at IF have been writing on. And its nothing similar to ekta..( mayb at sum places but the whole stuff is different.)…hope u guys like it…😛

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Angad and Kripa were the sweetest pair in the city😉…all though they were children of poor parents, Naina and Dilip and Suryaban and kripa's mum, both of them were inseperable. ( rite now they are about 10 yrs old)…kripa and angad would do things together like homework, go to school, listening to music, playing with the kids in the neighborhood and watching movies.😃 Such was their relationship that if any one of them dint turn up, it would be very difficult for the day to pass.. both lived on the opposite sides of the gully in the poor village. So it was possible for them to be upto any kind of mischief. Gradually this keep on going till they were in their late teens, when both started having feelings for each other.. Both, angad's parents and Kripa's parents favoured their relationship. 😳So both fell in love😳…and that's how their prem katha started. Angad would bring small cute stuff for kripa ( as he couldn't afford to take kripa to five-star's) and kripa would make his favorite food for him..that is lovely non-veg briyani. ( they are non-veg..hehhee sorry!) finally the couple's parents decided to talk about marriage. So in kripa's house the next day –😊

Kripa's mom – hi naina…I m soo happy that today, my daughter's life is going to be settled and she is going to have a family just like us – all loving and caring..😳

Naina – ohh yess….i m very happy too😃…kripa is such a lovely girl…and I really wanted her to come in to my house the very day I had seen her become frendz wid angad.

Kripa's dad – hahahaha….thanx naina…so wen do we fix the wedding date??😕

Dilip – yea…how about after 2 months..as we would need sufficient time for preparing and stuff….you knw how hard it is to plan out the wedding and how much of kharcha😭…we cant even keep the wedding soo grand nah…but yes, it will be the most memorable wedding of the neighborhood.

So then kripa comes in with the chai and snacks..and gosh👏…she luks soo pretty…even though she hasn't worn any make-up, but the sound of her bangles and her payals keep ringing in angad's ears and he looks at her as if he never looked at her for about 10 whole years😳.. ( now they are about 24 [ angad] and 23 [ kripa].) so then , the whole family gets up as they start hugging each other proudly as the parents of the sweetest couple –angad and kripa.

The wedding 😆

Angad is dressing up with the help of his dad and his relatives and kripa is dressing with the help of her mum and other women. Both luk extremely "wow"!.. the most ravishing pair that ever existed on earth.👍🏼( even though they don't have such grand dresses and expensive jwellery)….now angad is already ready as usual sitting on the mandap. After sumtime kripa comes downstairs and when he sees her luking so pretty he gets up from the mandap. Everyone is surprised…people think he's gonna break the wedding..but tadaaaaaaa!!!!...he goes upto kripa who is coming downstairs…and carries her in his arms and brings her down to the mandap to people's astonishment.😉 Every1 are surprised with this deewanapan….kripa meanwhile asks him why he had to do this in front of everyone….angad replies that he wants to make this wedding the most memorable day of his life and he will only get to do it today…so he would have only TODAY, to try out all weird stuff..!!! hehehehe…!!! The photographer ( one of their relatives only ) doesn't take much time to realize that this is the most perfect picture and quickly clicks a snap. !!😛

Shaadi ki raat 😳

Like duh, kripa is sitting on the bed full of rose-petals and then angad comes in. kripa shyes away…then angad takes her head and holds it wid his hands ( like most premis do)..and he tells her…😳

Angad – kripa, I will never ever leave you…u r my life, my soul and my own very self. Never ever let me take my self away from you..never leave me alone…all these years I have spent with you have been the best memories ever….even though we aren't very rich, these memories are the tresures of my life…and U ARE THE DIAMOND IN IT.😉😳

Kripa- no angad….u mean the same to me…never leave me alone..i will die..

Then both hug each other and den, have the most memorable nite together…(I will leave it upto you guys to imagine the nite )

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So the next day kripa gets up early and quickly makes breakfast for everybody in the house. Angad is still lying on the bed and he is dreaming…he is dreaming dat he's huggin kripa and he's like...

Angad – kripa, ur so soft…I love ur skin….ooohhhhhh kripaa….without u where would I go???....hahahah like duh to another sweeet woman….kripa, wats happening??? Why aren't u answering??

Wen angad gets up…he gets the shock of his life!....he sees that all this time he was huggin and kissing a PILLOW?????? WAT????????

Den he gets up, makes his small bed and goes for a shower….

YYUUMMMM YUMMMM YUMMMY….dats what you can hear at the dining table where angad's parents are havin breakfast…angad comes..Goodmorning ma..good morning papa… HE IGNORES KRIPA.. kripa is soo angry…. BOILING WID ANGER THAT HE DINT WISH HER!!...den he jus sits on the table wid out even lookin at her…!! N he keeps eating and doesn't even bother complimatin her!!...she jus leaves the dining table and goes to the room…giving his parents an excuse. Angad follows her..he finds her lukin out of the window…he comes from bhind and hugs her and tells her…

Angad- YES!! I HAVE DONE IT!!....FINALLY I GOT U TO THIS BEDROOM…hahahahaaa!!...

Kripa – ( shez wondering wat angad is upto…)

Angad – how cud I do all this in front of my parents??....what wud they think of me???...dats why I dint wish u nor I said nythin of the wonderful breakfast u made!....i just wanted to kiss u…and now I did it…!! Hahaah…and he runs out of the bedroom

Kripa – u badmaash!...she runs bhind him only till the door and den stops, only to think how foolish she was!

Sum weeks passed…and den kripa's worst nightmare came true…this is how it happened.

Angad – kripa, I feel very sad to tell u all this..but I have to go..

Kripa – [ shocked]….what???? where??

Angad – I have to make money kripa…we cant move on like this..i have to feed my family and u and live a comfortable life…so for that I wud have to go to sheher.. to make more money.

Kripa – oh no angad…we r happy like this only…y??......

Angad – I knw kripa ..but I have to go…atleast for my family's sake..so plsss don't stop me…I will always contact u…either by phone calls or letters…ok? Be careful always…specially near the gas wen cooking and stuff..i dun want to see my jaan getting harmed..ok?

Kripa – yes angad..please take care..call..and wen u find a job..tell me!

Angad leaves after telling his parents…and takin aashirwaad and stuff…

next we see prithvi...a rich guy..owning a rich firm...same like his role in kyph. he is bc attending the new employees for an office clerk...angad comes dere and sits for a while.. prithvi calls him in....

prithvi - may i see ur qualifications..??

angad - sir, i dun have ny qualifications..but yes, i m a gud worker and work wid all my heart..there is no sign of betreyal in me..plss...i m in gr8888 need of this job..

prithvi- [ slightly taken aback]...ok...from now on.. ur the clerk...my secretery will show ur work.. pls do it..ur salary will be RS. 1500 evry month..

Angad - [thinking - wat???? rs 1500???...gosh...i m lucky..i have got a nice boss]..but sir...dun u think 1500 is too much for a mamooli clerk?

Prithvi - no...evry1 in my office is unique..no one is mamooli...so evry1 deserves sumtin special..even u...ur salary will increase on ur efficiency.

Angad- thanx sir..i will start my work from today..

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as soon as he gets out of the office, he calls kripa...he tells her the gud news and also that after a few months he will bring kripa to this lovely sheher..mumbai..and its people are not bad after all....kripa on the other end is very happy....

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like this, she would recieve fone calls every now and den...but then..suddenly after 4 months...there was no pata of angad...nothing..no phonecalls, no letters..nothing....kripa ka tho jiii ghabra raha tha...

kripa - ooh god..plss..angad ko kuch hone na do...usse hone se pehle, woh sab mujhe do. dont let any thing harm him..

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like this, time passed, days passed, months passed...no khabar of angad...EVERY ONe was wondering....

WHERE THE HELL IS ANGAD???

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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh wow very different story please do continuing it
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow its diff plzz continue i think u had posted it before na...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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to disha...

yup i had 😉..was wonderin whether people read it or not...😕..

i will post the next part 2morrow...as soon as i m done wid it!!!

thanx for reading..!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Nice story😉You have to continue!

Cheers!
JinK

P.S. RS 1500? 😕 Isn't that like ... US $40?

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...thats a nice story...its has such an original concept!! i luved it...plz continue!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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such a nyce storie continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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it was unique k good job

luv nisha😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Nice story, liked it cos it is different from the other fan-fics!!

Can't wait to read what happened to Angad!!

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