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Posted: 13 years ago
gud 😊 wud lik to read more abt khanna family bonding.
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nice yaar jaisi maa wasi beti... she is same as pia and abhay ko apne jesa hi son in law milega ha ha ha nice part so both are mind readers
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thanks for pm ...so both are mind readers nice
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EPISODE 20

NARRATIVE IS ABHYA

i was lying on the bed and the doctor was operating my right hand cut...it did'nt pained at all before but now it was aching too bad...the pain was excruciating...i was just thinking of the way ranbir just touched the tree and it moved away...how could that be possible...i wish he keeps his promise ...

in between the doctor asked few questions...

"so abhya...what's your blood group?" i never got i t tested...bachpan mai mom ne karaya hoga but i never asked...actually zaroorat hi nahi padi

"mmm...i ...i don't know" i was surprised by his question

"well do get it checked...kyuki aaj tumhari kismat achhi thi ki tumhe zaada chot nahi aayi nahi to agar tumhe zaada lagti toh extra blood ki zaroorat padti and for that humme tumhara blood group pata hona chahiye tha...so get it checked...okay"

"ya...will do that definitely" what did he just said i was lucky...then i should thank ranbir for that...a smile came on my face...my cut was covered with bandage...and the doctor told me to leave..i left from there...but i was scared to go out there would be people asking different questions...and of course i will not tell anybody how i got saved...i opened the door and the first face i saw was ranbir's , he was standing holding his arms...a bit tensed from his facial expressions...what now he also cared for me...i was about to talk to him then ishika came from the right side

"hey behena ...kya hua?? ...you got hurt??...mausi ko kya jawab doongi mai ab.."

"ek minute ish...i am fine now...and what's your fault in this...so tu kyu chinta kar rahi hai...chill...trust me i am fine...dard bhi zaada nahii hai.."with saying this i had a small eye contact with ranbir ...he looked a bit relaxed now but not completely...ab usse kya tension ho rakhi thi...

"thank god tumhe zada nahi lagi...nahi toh dad ko toh shak hota ki maine hi tumhe giraya hoga" we both laughed

now varun came from the crowd "abhya...oh god...tum theek ho??...oh shit your hand"

"i am fine varun...tension mat le...mai bilkul theek hun..."

"but abhya...tumhe kuch aur ho jata to"

"oho...varun.nahi hua ...dekho mai hath hila bhi paa rhi hoon...see" i moved my right hand...it was paining a bit...but i managed that pain.

From the other side our principal came "children get back to your classes...abhya is fine...attend your your last periods...go everybody" everybody started moving... except me and ranbir ..i moved towards the principal "sir..can i leave my class??"

"of course abhya...the announcement was not for you...you relax and be careful"

"thanks sir...and can ranbir stay with me as well ?" i wanted to ask few things to him...i wanted badly that he says a yes

"yeah okay if ranbir wishes to "

"oh yes... sir i better take care of her"ranbir smiled to the principal and sir left from there. and behind him ranbir started to move also without seeing me... "ranbir ...i wanted to talk to you"
he turned back "what is it now?" he was angry again

"did'nt you promised me"

"fine i break the promise now" he started to move again ...this time i followed him, i had to run slowly

"ranbir ...please...tell me...how...how ...did you shifted the tree"i was gasping for air...we reached outside again

he now began to laugh "i never shifted it...may be the wind did"

"stop that ranbir ...i saw you very clearly you pushed it away with a touch of your palm...please tell me how"

"tumhe chot hath par lagi hai ya dimaag mai...ajeeb batein kar rahi ho...lets go ...ek baar doctor ko aur check kara dete hai"

"ranbir ...don't do this...trust me mai kisi ko nahi bataongi...aur maine to kisi ko yeh tak nahi bataya ki tumne meri jaan bachayi hai"

"haan to jao sab ko bata do... you'll become the most famous ...jiski jaan ranbir khanna ne bachye ...wow what a great news ...tum poore college mai cha jaogi...you'll become the gossip queen..." why would i do all this

"ranbir...mai yeh famous banne ke liye nahi kar rahi hoon...mai yeh apne liye jaana chahti hoon...mujhe fame se koi matlab nahihai...mai bas jaana chahti hoon ki tum itne powerful kaise ho"

"aur tum kisi ko bhi yeh bologi ki maine tree hilaya , to koi tumhara vishwas nahi karegi...mazaak ban ke reh jaogi" he was even more angry ...

"yaani tumne sach mai usse hilaya ..."

"haan aisa hi samajh lo...now go announcement kar do"

"why would i ranbir...yeh maine apni curiosity ki vajah se poocha...mai yeh kisi ko nahi bataongi...trust me"

"mai nahi jaanta kitna sach aur kitna jhooth bol rahi ho tum"

"to fir toh mai kahoongi ki kash tum mera mind read kar sakte ranbir...tum khud hi jaan lete"

"agar aisa hota toh inn sab ki naubat hi nahi aati..."

he started all this stuff again , i wanted to change the topic...we were at silence for about 2 minutes

"mmm... ranbir...tum kal fresher's party mai aaoge?"

"i don't know...mai pehle se kuch decide nahi karta and you?"

"haan aana hi padega ish...i mean ishika is forcing me to...i wish tum bhi aao"

"kyu??" he was surprised...

actual reason toh yeh tha ...taki mai party mai aur logo ke sath bore na ho jao...ktuki mai ab ranbir ki company enjoy kar rahi thi...ussne meri jaan bhi bachiyi hai afterall

"bas aisi man ki ichha hai...mujhe acha lagega agar tum aaonge toh"

"chalo tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon..."

"but ...no i'll drive"

"look at your hand tum drive nahi kar paogi...don't give stress to your hand"

"but fir tum college vapis kaise aaoge...if you leave me in my car..."

"i'll manage...karan will pick me"

"but" he cut me "let's go" and he started moving
i went beside him to the parking lot...it was still digged...and i stared it that i will fall again...car ke paas kaise joa...befor i could think of nay solution...ranbir spoke

"keys!!" he forwarded his hand

"oh ya"i gave him the keys from my pocket , he got the car beside me . i was opening the door from my right hand i completely forgot i was hurt and the result was my cut pained badly...i was only allowed to move it..
"aaaooo"i shaked my right hand...he suddenly looked concerned and came beside my left side

"what happened ...are you fine" he turned me to see my wound

"ya...voh mai bhool gayo thi...ki koi pressure nahi lena hath pe "

"be careful abhya please" he opened the door for me

"thanks" and i sat and he came at the driver's seat

"toh abhya ...tumhare nanu ka ghar kahan hai?" oh he remeberd i told him ki hum nanu ke ghar pe rehte hai.

"oh...you know villa resort...ussi ke back side mai hai"

"okay..."he was calmer now..

"nice car"

"oh thanks...but tumhari bmw ke aage toh kam hi hai ranbir"

he laughed "but i liked this one as well..audi's are good to"

"haan i love audi's...specially this one because dad gifted me this one"

"you drive fast" he was very fast as compared to me

"is it?...i am at my normal speed"

"'normal' don't joke"

"no i am not...joking...i like to drive fast"

"may be"
and then we both did'ne spoke and within 20 minutes my home came because of his fast driving.

"thanks ranbir..."

"i had to ...well" he stopped for a moment "i think i will be coming tomorrow..."

"okay...then...mmm...see you tomorrow" i was so happy that he decided to come...reason chahe jo bhi ho...i became happy , he parked my car and we both got out and i began to move...because calling him inside would make mom go crazy...hehhheh

"hey abhya" he called from back, i started to move back

"yeah"

"keys nahi chahiye kya?"

"oh " i forwarded my hand

"nice bungalow"

"oh yes!!i know i also love this house"

"well take care of yourself..."
i could just smile back...and he left..

he was just so generous ...now suddenly remebered mom would ask thousand questions over my hand...phewww!! a bti work of tension now...

my afternoon went with all consoling mom, nanu , nani that i am fine...so don't worry...they all were then also so worried...they even said ki party nahi jaana kal...but i had to ...ranbir was coming even...this way family ko manane mai...poori evening bhi nikal gyi...till night mai bahut zada thak gyi thi...jaldi se kaajar bed par so gayi...shayad iss jaldi mai ki ranbir will come in my dreams...what was this happening to me..aaj se pehle kabhi i never thought like this...like these dreams...strange it was...but whatever it was i was enjoying it as well!!!
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NARRATIVE IS RANBIR

i ran to home from abhya's home...amd went to my room after greeting adah...noow i could control myself infront of abhya...it was getting better ...i did'nt harm her today infact maine usse bachaya bhi...i am glad...aaj aapne secrets mai se thoda bahut usse bata to diya but iw ish ki voh yeh kisi ke aage na bole...uski shakal se toh laga vo aisa kuch nahi karegi...but fir bhi mujhe nazaar rakhni padegi...and i would'nt mind to stay with her even for tomorrow's evening...infact i began to like her company...she was different from others that's what make me able to not to stay away from her...since generations..nevr a girl had caught my attention like this...or rather nobody has evr got that smell...but i would definitely not lik to harm her , even in my dreams if could have them..i smiled to myself...mini and karan came the car's engine was very much easily audible...mini reached my room in a minute...

"what is it mini??...u look tensed" karan came from behind

"i don't know ranbir...but the feelings you are having are"
she became silent ...i read her mind 'are love'

"what ???" i shouted hard on mini "have you crazy...what hell are you talking...love...no!!!...no!!!..NO!!!! "i shouted again

"it's true mini...i began to feel like this for karan as well"

"come on mini...karan was just like us...a vampire...HOW IN THE WORLD I CAN LOVE A HUMAN GIRL...tumhara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai mini"

"kash yeh sach hota ranbir...but mai galat nahi hoon...tum khud hi socho...infact tum abhi kuch aisa hi soch rahe humare aane se pehle...but you could'nt name those feelings and now i am naming them.it's just that...ia m also sad about this but oon the other hand i am happy for you bhai...tumhe tumhara pyaar mil gaya hai"

"stop it mini...this is not possible..." i sat on the sofa ...i would have been a human i would have started crying because i realised mini was right ...i...i ...simply ...loved that girl...i loved abhya

mini sat beside me " i know it could be painfull bhai...but yeh hi sach hai..."

"mai ab kya karoo mini "
she became silent "say her ...keh do bhai usse"

"nahi mini...vo to janti bhi nahi hai mai kon hoon...yeh galat hai...voh ek vampire ke sath pyaar kyu karegi"

"hum usske liye late hai ranbir"karan said "i think she loves you equally...but i a m sure usko realise karane vala koi nahin hoga"

"nahi bhai ...i can't make her life hell...mujhse pyaar nahi kar sakti voh...apni jaan khatre mai nahi daal sakti voh..mai sab chodd kar chala jaonga bhai ...abhya ko kuch nahi hone doonga...dur rehegi voh mujhe"

"we can already feel the power in your love ranbir"mini spoke "aur in sab ke liye ek hi word hai ranbir 'destiny' ...destiny wants ki tum dono sath raho hamesha"

what hamesha means...abhya a vampire too "NO!!!!!" i shouted very hard..."voh iss darindgari ki zindagi mai nahi aa sakti... i won't let her"

"yeh to waqt ko decide karne do ranbir...humaare hath mai kuch nahi hai" they both left the room and then came adah...

"ranbir...i happy for you...my family would be complete soon" she sat beside me

"she is a human mom...kaise ...how can i love her"

"pyaar soch ke nahi hota hai...you love her ...that's the mai fact...iss ke aage tumhe kuch aur nahi dikhna chahiye"

"but mom...uska insaani jeevan khatam nahi hone de sakta mai"

"to mat karo.." what ...hhow that would be possible...agar voh insaan rahi toh mai usse kabhi bhi maar sakta hoon

"nahi ranbir..tum aisa nahi karoge i know...i and raj trust you...apne pyaar ko nahi maar paoge tum chahe kuc bhi ho jaye...bas yeh jaan lo abhya ke liye humari family ke darvaze hamesha khule hai...i am ready to accept your love"
and she left the room ...

how will i do that...sab itna jaldi ho raha hai... kuch hi dinomai abhya se pyaar karne laga aur mujhe iss baat ka aehsaas bhi nahi hai...mini is right i was just not able to name my feelings...they are...they had to be love...I LOVE HER..I LOVE ABHYA!! jaanta nahi khush hona chaihye ya nahi...but mujhe apni existence ka pyaar mil gaya...jeena ka sahara mil gaya...mai nahi janta abhya ki tumhe kya dard doonga mai...par mai tumhe apne jaise nahi banaoonga bhale hi mujhe tumse kabhi yeh na kehna pade ki mai tumse pyaar karta hoon...aur usske liye mai tumse dur ho jaonga abhya...then i realised i wanted badly to see her face once...and now i know her house as well...but i decided mai usske ghar jaonga ..aur ek baar uska chehra dekh kar vapis aa jaonga...but then i stopped myself.kahin mai usse kuch kar na do...uski smell pe thoda aur control karna chahiye mujhe...



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Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates dear.
I read both the update together.
Both were superb, the plot is going gr8.
So ranvir is in love and realised too, hope abhya realise too.
Thanks for the pms.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update. I enjoy Ranbir's POV more than Abhya's. He is more interesting character. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just loved it...very much like twilight and yes pike mom like beti I eagerly wait for ur updates ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear nice update dis ranbir is jst like his would be father in kaw mr. abhay raichand
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice up date and awe-some written ...thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you everybody!!!!

next will be the fresher's party episode...do read when updated!!

regards.
temptations
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