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Viren Vadera - Son of a wealthy lawyer (Vipul and Vanshika) ' He is good looking and charming

Manvi Chaudary ' Daughter of a wealthy merchant ( Madan) and very naughty as she was brought up by one parent '. Her mom died when she only a year old

Madan and Vipul are very good friends as a result Viren and Manvi become best friends'

Virat Deshmukh ' Son of a teacher ( Swamini) who is very strict ' Virat is from middle class family He is fun loving and outgoing person ' His dream is to become a very rich person for that he can do anything and he is very naughty

Jeevika Deshmukh ' She is an orphan ' Her parents died in an accident when she was only 4 years old...Since then she is living with her mother's best friend (Swamini) and she adopted her last name from Swamini '. She is very obedient and extremely beautiful

Part One

It was a peaceful morning , birds singing their songs happily and Sun shining the Vadera house with its rays '

There the prince of the house still sleeping without caring about the collage which is starting from today '

Prince is smiling while sleeping ... That's a bit awkward but there is a big reason behind that cute smile

The door of the Prince room opened slowly and someone entered with a bucket full of water

Then the water was thrown on prince face '

Wait wait ' you wanted to know who is the prince right? He is our charming "VIREN"

Viren woke up with anger '

Without opening his eyes he started shouting '

When he opened his eyes , he was shocked'

Viren : You !! Manvi

Manvi(smiling) : Ya .. it is me .. Who else do u expect?

Viren(teasing) : My dream girl of course

Manvi(excited) : You saw her today too ' so what did u saw today ' what did she say ?

Viren (smiling) : That is a secret

Then he went towards his bathroom

Manvi(shouting): Viren you cant hide anything from your friend ok

Viren(raising his eyebrow) : Oh really ?

Then he shut his door and Manvi left his room

In the living room

Vanshika : Beta Is he woken up?

Manvi : Yes chachi ( Manvi called Vanshika chachi and Vipul chacha) .. what is today's breakfast ?

Vanshika : Your favorite pasta

Manvi : Wow .. Delicious

At the Deshmukh house

Virat : Mom where is my purse

Swamini : Jeevika go and look

Jeevika : Virat .. why aren't u responsible?

Virat : Coz you are there for me

Then Jeevika noticed that Virat was luking extremely handsome

Jeevika : kya mere bhai ' aaj kisi ko fasa na hai kya?

Virat: Kisi ko kyun ' U know that I like to be around rich girls

Jeevika slightly beat the back of Virat's head

Virat (angry) : Don't you dare touch my head '. I had put so much effort to make my hair

Jeevika (smiling) : Then I can make better than this

She started to make his hair look messier then run away

Virat (smiling):Hey Jeevi .. I won't spare you

Jeevika turned towards his

Jeevika (teasing) : So I wont introduce you with my rich friends

Then she run away again

Virat : No you cant do that

...

Viren and Manvi were on their way to the Collage on Manvi's car while Jeevika and Virat were on the same way on the bike

Manvi was driving the car

Manvi : Viren tell me nar '

Viren : Hummm nope

Manvi : Ok then I wont talk to you

Viren : Today '

Manvi (excited) : Today?

Viren(smiling) : I saw her again😃

Manvi (annoyed) : that I know too

On the other side

Virat : Jeevika ' how many girls do u think will fall for me ?

Jeevika : wait ' let me think

Jeevika started counting

Virat : What is taking u too long ' tell quick

Jeevika : Wait yar '.

Virat was very excited

Jeevika (teasing): 0

Virat : What !!?? 0 '

Jeevika : Ya .. who will fall for gada ? Only gadi

And started laughing out loud😆

Jeevika : But I don't think there is any gadi in our collage

Virat had heard enough😡

He was very angry and he abruptly applied the brake and stopped the bike in the middle of the road without caring about the others vehicle

Jeevika : Virat what are u doing?

Manvi's car was at the back of the bike

Because Manvi and Viren were having fun, they didn't notice the bike and Jeevika in front of them

But the last moment Viren saw it and Virat also saw that the car was coming

Viren : Manvi watch out

Virat pulled Jeevika from the way and they rolled down to the other side of the road

Then manvi abruptly applied the brake but it was too late

Some part of the back of the bike was crushed and damaged

After that Manvi quickly start the engine and started driving

Viren : Manvi ' we should at least told them sorry

Manvi : Who ?? Did u saw anyone there

Viren : I think I saw two of them but not clearly

Manvi : Viren ' It wasn't our fault ' nobody stop the bike in the middle of the road

Virat was very angry as he love his bike a lot

Then he jotted down the number of the car but he didn't saw the driver

Virat touching his bike : I will never spare that blind driver

Jeevika (angry) : It was your fault '

Virat : what ?

Jeevika : Yes '. Who told you to halt the bike in the middle of the road

Virat(angry and pointing his finger towards the car) : But people have eyes right ' and I guess blind people won't get the license

Jeevika : Virat !! Enough lets go otherwise we will be late

Virat (softly) : At least they could say sorry

Jeevika also agree with him and nodded

Then they continued

Please do comment .. 😊


Index

Part 2 -page 2

Part 3- Page 5

Part 4 - Page 9

Part 5 - page 12

Part6- page 16

Part 7 - page 19

Part 8 - page 23

Part 9 - page 26

Part 10 - page 30

Part 11- page 34

Part 12 - page 38

Part 13 - page 43

Part 14 - page 48

part 15 - page 53

Part 16 - page 58

Part 17 - page 64

Part 18 - page 69

Part 19 - page 75

Part 20 - page 80

Part 21 - page 86

Part 22 - page 91

Part 23 - page 95

Part 24 - page 100

Part 25 (last one) - 106

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I really liked it, plz update new chapter soon!😊
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Nice story! Love both your story's. Please do continue them soon 😃

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