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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

awesome update di

first time she blushed by the thought of him
now she realize that she loved him alot

n i loved this scene a lot

bt di sbse best part to wo wheather wala tha.bechare chand or veer storm me phas gye

or veer ko chot v lag gyi oh god

shayad chand ko dekhkar thik ho jaye

when he cut her phone i loved that part hehehe he didn't bothered aba her now pay for it she is angry with u

abhi or maza ayega
di romantic sa ud dena

n han aapne intne dino se koi os or ss v ni likha pls likho na
if u hv time

update soon
luv u

thanks darling...loved your comments...will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Thanks for d UD dear..

It's so misterious..Why Veer behave like that wid Chandni on phone..
very bad Veer..
bechari Chandni..
Where she reached..?? bt saved thank God..
Bt Chandni u hav really done a big mistake..that u talked like that wid Veer..
now let's see what will Veer do now..
& how they both will react..wen they will know what ever happened
wid both of them last night..
Story is bcuming interesting day by day..
bt plz nxt UD k liye jyada intzar mat karana..
plz giv d nxt Ud 2morrow
plz plz plz..

thanks dear...your comments are much appreciated...i will try my best to update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909


wow dhanvi it was really a very good and thrilling update.do continue soon

thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

hi di..

sorry for the late comment..

havent commented since part 15...

finally i got time and read all the parts in 1 go...

gosh im soo hooked with this ff..

the way things are happening...

chand...veer relation sweet n sour at the same time..

simply awesome..

waiting for VC meeting now..

thnx for the pm...

Hi sweetie...thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 34


Maneka never wanted to stand in the queue... "why don't you get coffee...??" she asked Chandni while playing with her phone...



Chandni was already mugged up with her thoughts...she didn't wanted to argue over a little thing.. "fine"... reluctantly she stood in the queue...



it had hardly been a minute when Chandni saw him walking past the cafeteria with a girl... she widely opened her eyes in shock...it was unbelievable for her...unable to grasp what her eyes had seen …..she walked out of the queue and followed Veer…... to her surprise he occupied the table next to where Maneka was sitting...



annoyingly she turned her face away... "monster..." but unable to control herself from looking at the brute... her eyes searched around for him...she had seen him a minute ago talking nicely to a girl who was now sitting alone next to her table...



tempted to see him she tried to figure out his existence when she felt a touch on her right shoulder...she quickly turned around...



"looking for me" he smiled



alarmed at his reaction...but annoyed at his behavior she angrily replied "my foot" then turned towards the counter...



she felt him so close, that her back could feel his chest... she closed her eyes for a second...she wanted to ask him the reason of the bandage on his right forehead...but she was angry at him...





he bend down to cover the distance between her neck and shoulder and whispered in her ear "what do you want??"



for a moment she felt herself loosing in front of his warm breath that touched her ear and neck... but another instant she flung around...with hands on her waist ... "why don't you ask your girlfriend?" staring at him...



"that's what I am doing" he answered casually...



without responding to him anymore she reached the counter... "one mochachino, one hot chocolate" and walked back to her table...



Maneka looked at Chandni's angry face and eyes that were not fixed at one place...she observed Chandni looking at the counter then opening her book...checking her phone... she seemed puzzled... "Chandni...what happened to you???"



that was enough for Chandni to react ….. "what??? nothing...why should it happen to me..." surprising Maneka with her sudden words that made no sense to her...



"Chandni!!!" Maneka made a weird face at her...



Veer came back and sat with Misha but his eyes scanned the beauty who was sitting in front of him... he wanted to hold her...he gazed her fair neck from one side...her beautiful hair kissing her shoulder and back... her fair legs and thighs... "beautiful" he said …..



Misha was surprised as he wasn't looking at her... "Veer!!1"



Chandni heard him and felt more angry as she assumed he must be flattering the girl sitting next to him...



Chandni couldn't stand him anymore and picked up her bag... "Chandni...where are you going???" Maneka walked after her quickly at her sudden reaction...



"to hell" she retorted angrily...



Maneka turned back towards her seat when her eyes fell on him... "hi Veer..."



"hi" he smiled at her making her feel happy... Maneka now understood why Chandni was so angry... "Veer...i think you have to work hard on this one..." she smiled indirectly talking about Chandni...



"i love working on hard subjects..." he winked at Maneka who smiled back...



Misha was confused...but she didn't had enough time to think...her flight was in another one hour... "Misha...i think I must leave now..."



"thanks for coming Veer..." she smiled and hugged him...



Maneka watched this and laughed...while Veer walked towards the main road …. "oh he's so sweet" ….. Maneka said to herself...



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Meenakshi was going through the files when she came across an old diary... "what's this...??" she dusted off and opened... she realized it belonged to her Father... with moist eyes she flipped the page...



"Time and again I see her...the ill-famed, she is unknown...tomorrow is nothing but a dream for me...

you are alive today but for tomorrow, pray for tomorrow...peace is costly here, death is cheap..."



Meenakshi heard her phone... "yes Mrs Verma...i am coming now"

she quickly kept the diary in her drawer...and left the room...



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"so why don't you tell this to Chandni..." Shama asked Kamini...



Kamini never wanted to disclose it in front of Chandni... "i promised my husband...how can I..." she started crying...



Shama felt bad... "please don't cry...i was only concerned...until when will you carry this truth on your shoulders...you must tell Meenakshi"



Kamini knew Meenakshi would never believe on such things... "leave it...that is the reason I want Chandni to stay away from the world..."



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Chandni angrily walked on a narrow path surrounded by trees ….. it was a pleasant afternoon after so many rainy days...she normally walked faster...but this time she was angry at him and walked slowly thinking how he can play with her life... it was so easy for him to sit with any other girl and and enjoy coffee...



few seconds later she heard him coming from behind like a strong wind...



another second he was in front of her... she looked at herself, he had pinned her against the tree with his hands around her waist...



she got more angry at him while he was smiling... "get away..." she tried to push him with her soft hands... it didn't work much, she hit him with closed fist on his chest...

but instead he gripped her tightly caressing her back... and removing the distance between them... "leave me Veer"



she could clearly see the bandage …..she touched it "how did this..??"



"i fell off the stairs..." he said innocently...



her eyes were moist...her anger was melting away in her tears... helplessly she let him embrace her tightly in his arms...



slowly she curled her arms around his neck...he could feel her bosom touching his chest, wanting him grasp her more tightly... slowly his hands slid under her t-shirt...and touched her fair waist...



"i think I must fall more often...then you will embrace me in your arms" ingeniously smiled at what he said...



"Veer...nothing can happen to you..." she said softly



she closed her eyes...and felt his strong hands touching her back and waist... she never wanted to break the embrace...she was standing on her toes making sure she was locked around him...



After a very long time...



he broke the tight embrace …... and cupped her face with his hands... she looked into his eyes that were attracting her to give herself completely to him...



His fingers entangled in the silk locks that were shinning in the afternoon sun... he stroked her lips with his thumb... and whispered "don't you ever say, that you won't talk to me..."



her hands touched his strong shoulders...his gaze made her scared for a second... he looked into her eyes as if he will eat her... "don't …...please," she whispered back...



his hand travelled towards her neck...caressing the fair skin... "Veer...please..." she felt her hands cold and her body nervously telling her to run away...



"why??" he whispered in her ear...making her weak in front of his might...



she looked into his eyes …... "you...you scare me..." she whispered...



there was silence... all they could hear was the noise of the dry leaves under their feet fallen from the trees and scattered around the path...



slowly his hands reached her nape... she couldn't collect when he placed his lips on hers... it was in another second that he tried to enter her mouth...



slowly he tugged her more closer, his strong arms tightly encircled her waist... soon she found herself trapped in his arms...her mouth and lips all wet... her body felt different, every breath she was taking created a havoc inside her ….slowly she wrapped her arms around him...



Unaware of the surroundings...of the world around her...it seemed he dragged her away... soon the kiss turned into passion...she wanted to pull away...but his strong force didn't let her move...



fiercely he sucked her lips...as if he wanted her through out his life...as if he was waiting for her, it showed more passion, hunger and love for her...



Scared at first she wanted to pull away but soon she let him kiss her as he wanted... she forgot everything and was completely lost in his touch and taste...



After a very long time...



He stopped and opened his eyes...while gazing at her closed eyes... he slowly broke the kiss...he saw her breathing quickly... as if she had run miles away... his eyes fell on her red lips …..that were now swollen, but still tried to seduce him... he bend down and kissed them again...



"you are beautiful..." he said softly...

while her eyes still closed...but her ears listened to his words...

"you are beautiful..."... she thought again " beautiful"



That was what he said to the girl who was with him in the cafeteria...immediately she opened her eyes and pushed him away "Veer, who was that girl??" she stared at him angrily...



Surprised at her sudden reaction... he grabbed her in his arms again... "which girl are you talking about??"



"the one who was sitting with you in the cafeteria" she looked angrily...



"i don't remember..." he said mischievously...



she pushed him again... "you don't remember??? …..how many girls sit with you in the cafeteria???" aggravated at his response...



he smiled... "so you are jealous Chandni??"



she tried to act normal... "of course not..." she picked up her bag... "you...you just go to hell..." she started walking when he hold her hand and pulled her closer... this time she again tried to push him away...



Once again he tugged her against the tree holding her arms tightly... he gazed at her angry features and bend down at the fair skin of her neck...he nibbled and sucked her neck...



"leave me Veer...just...just stop it..." she said angrily...but he didn't stop...soon she closed her eyes... "no...don't" she whispered...his warm breath created a sensation in her body and she didn't fidget anymore...



he kept sucking her neck below her right ear with his teeth and lips, he tasted her fair skin...her fingers ran in his tousled hair that were rubbing her chin and cheek...



with one hand behind her nape and other curled around her waist he leaned on her...while she looked up the clear sky then closed her eyes again and felt herself landing in a different world that made her forget everything around her...he bite and sucked again and again...



After a long time...



Both heard something... it was Chandni's phone...she quickly opened her eyes and realized the pain he was giving her, how could she let him fall on her...next moment she pushed him...



She felt a sharp tingling under her ear, the biting had stung her neck "what have you done??" she shouted while touching the sore area... he looked at her fair skin ...the area where he had sucked turned red causing a visible mark... "Chandni..."



"don't say anything..." she said angrily and picked up her phone...



"yes Grandma ….i am on my way" she stared at Veer and started walking...



"Chandni...you should listen when I say something" he muttered...



Chandni left without looking at him...while Veer stood there smiling at her...



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Shama opened the door... "Chandni beta...Kamini was trying to call you from last two hours...where were you??"



Chandni replied tiredly "library granny...i have work to do..."



as she entered the kitchen to drink water...Shama looked at a sharp red mark on her neck... "Chandni...how did this happen...???"



Chandni immediately coughed...she realized the mark on her neck... "oh...this..."



"yes...its so red...what is it???" Shama asked again worriedly...



Chandni couldn't think of a suitable answer...what should she tell to the old lady, that she was bitten by a hellion ... her granny would get a heart attack... she finished drinking water slowly...thinking about the suitable reason...



"actually...i...i was coming from the narrow path down the valley...so" Chandni thought of a genuine answer that wouldn't make them think she's lying...



"so???" Shama asked ….



"So...one insect bite me..." she answered with relief...



Shama looked concerned "oh you poor thing...it must be painful...let me get some ointment for you"



Chandni miserably nodded her head and walked towards her room... it was so difficult to lie...and on top of that creating amazing stories...she smiled at her answer... "insect" she giggled again... but her laughter stopped when she looked in the mirror... "oh no" it was a red mark...so visible... why didn't she realized before...



angrily she dialed his number...



Veer smiled when he saw her number flashing on his screen "my sweetheart...never thought you would miss me so much..."



"miss you!!! my foot... what have you done Veer??? how could you leave this mark on my neck???" she questioned furiously...



"mark???!...oh that one..." he said very casually...



"how could you talk so casually about it???" she was raging …...



"if you keep that voice, then I might have to repeat that again" smirkingly smiled and disconnected the phone...



Chandni was horrified at his answer...her mouth was wide open in shock...she was stuck with a devil who would pounce on her anytime and she won't be able to do anything...



helplessly she kept her hand on her head...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
vry vry vry sweet ud it ws, chandini helplessly n silently is surrendering herself to him..
but , u proved it once again..
jealously wrks...

really awesome reaction of chandini as expected..
menaka and veer interaction ws interesting too..
so misha is going

''i love to work on hard subject!''.. cool, sooper cool dialogue..
really lovely it ws..

god veer wil b veer,
kabhi nhi sudherga...
bechari chandini isse kab tak sahegi...baghvaan jaane...

lovd the forest scene vry much... do i need to tell dat??😃..

hmm...
wat kinda diary is dat..

grandpa has written something on a lady- is it chandini or dat bhootani...🤔..hmm. mystery...
kamini promised sm thng to her husband...one more secret related to dat diary i feel..

insect bite reason.. funny..
she ws drinking water to prolong her period of answer..
so innocent she luks dis way..

veer's dialogue sm times reallly crack me up...

but di u noe, aaj mujhe tum mere ho ki yaadd aa gyi...😭.. i miss dat ff...
vry much...
remeber, of course u remember, u wrote it... nandini also got hickles on her neck, tried it hiding by cover her stole..
lovd dat ff...


ud soon di, lovd the ud,
lov u


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

vry vry vry sweet ud it ws, chandini helplessly n silently is surrendering herself to him..

but , u proved it once again..
jealously wrks...

really awesome reaction of chandini as expected..
menaka and veer interaction ws interesting too..
so misha is going

''i love to work on hard subject!''.. cool, sooper cool dialogue..
really lovely it ws..

god veer wil b veer,
kabhi nhi sudherga...
bechari chandini isse kab tak sahegi...baghvaan jaane...

lovd the forest scene vry much... do i need to tell dat??😃..

hmm...
wat kinda diary is dat..

grandpa has written something on a lady- is it chandini or dat bhootani...🤔..hmm. mystery...
kamini promised sm thng to her husband...one more secret related to dat diary i feel..

insect bite reason.. funny..
she ws drinking water to prolong her period of answer..
so innocent she luks dis way..

veer's dialogue sm times reallly crack me up...

but di u noe, aaj mujhe tum mere ho ki yaadd aa gyi...😭.. i miss dat ff...
vry much...
remeber, of course u remember, u wrote it... nandini also got hickles on her neck, tried it hiding by cover her stole..
lovd dat ff...


ud soon di, lovd the ud,
lov u


hi sweetie...loved reading your comments...but i feel it was short this time😛...but honestly i love read it twice...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
luvd it
so chandni is jealous
wow wat a way 2 manaofy her
Veer has angered her even more
I just luvd that forest scene too much
Awe poor chandni had to lie for him
n look at the audacity of the guy
he openly said that he wud repeat it again
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sweet n romantic update it was

i loved it thoroughly😃

diii i love u u r fabulous writer... i love ur writing😃

now about update

oh chand jealous😲 yehhh...chalo accha h👏

bhot maza aya wo canteen wale scene...it was amazing😃

i hate that misha😡but in this update i like her becouse of her chand jealous 😆

n veer smiled he didn't bothered about anything😕

he is so carelessbut fir bhi i love him becoz he love chand😃

n chand also knew that tabhi to usne kiss karne se nhi roka...i love that ahem ahemc☺️ scene very much...i read it three times😳

that is my fav part...but what about that diary meenakshi found...something secret🤔

oh she touched his bandage😍n hugged him wow😳

n veer bite her neck...this is not fair veerbechari ko bahana bnana pada granny ke samne😆

insect ne bite kiya🤣

but wo insect bhot smart n handsome h😆

i loved her bahana😆

dii i loved this ud very much bhot dino baad romantic ud mila😃
but update soon plsss

can't wait for next update
plsss plsss ud soon

love u😛
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago

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