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EPISODE 18

NARRATIVE IS RANBIR

We all reached home...mini was too exited to hear to me...since it was a rule between us that we all will live like humans and not use our powers for each other and that included reading minds...hmmm...my mood has changed , I am more happy now as compared to the last week...I went to my room and after two minutes mini came runnning to my room...

"so ranbir ...tell me all" mini was jumping in exitment , she sat on the sofa

"patients mini, I will...later"I sat beside her

"no bhai now..."

"okay fine ...she is different all I can say as a overview...voh alag hai apne doston se aur college ki etc ladkiyon se" I laughed "subah usne mujhse poocha that'does she smell bad?" I laughed even louder "how ironic thatt question was that I preferred not to reply...she is definitely a good person at heart...but I could'nt guess why she is not like humans...I need time for that...the english class was fine , i asked her about " mini cut me "hey ranbir let me read your mind"

"okay fine...that would be better this time ...but remember only this time "

"yeah ...i know"

After 2 minutes hse spoke "what the hell ...voh history mai bhi tumhare sath thi..."

"ya unfortunately...mujhe pehle pata laga lena chahiye tha..."

"were you able to control without being prepared"

"I ignored ...uski peeche vali seat par jaana hi pada"

"ab kal kya bologe...jab vo poochegi ki you were rude again"

"I simply don't know...have to think about it"

"all the best ..."she got up "and ya she is different ...she thinks the other way round always...so beware of her...kahin vo tumhare or rather humare secret ko na pakad le...uske sath normal humans se zada savdhan rehna hoga...vo kuch bhi kahe...insaano ki tarah hi jawab dena..."

"I know mini...mai poore koshish karunga gusse mai na behne ki" she smiled and went outside.

Then I started to think about the reasons for today;'s ignorance I would have to give abhya...it was never a human occupied so much of my thoughts and attention...surely there was something about abhya'and I need to know that badly...kyu hai vo auro se itni alag...ab uski smell ke baare mai na hi socho to better hoga...but I am glad maine apne aap ko kuch time ke liye control to kiya .though history mai vo achank aa gyi ...i was'nt prepared mai bina saas roke uske sath mai kaise ja pata...i was rude again to her...but ek tarah se sahi bhi hai'mai usse zada gehri dosti nahi kar sakta.she's a human afterall...

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narrative is abhya


I woke in the morning...it was a pleasant weather...quite pleasing...i realized I was thirsty...i drank one glass of water ...but stilll my thirst was there...but I tried to ignore it in a hurry to get ready for college or I can say a part of me wanted to see ranbir ...but I thought he would not talk to me since he ignored me in the history class .


i as usual reached my college and in my audi i could'nt realise that the parking lot was all digged , but when i came out i realised and unluckily i wore my favorite black heels because they perfectly matched my red dress...but i wished i would'nt have worn them..then another bad luck i saw ranbir and his family getting out from their BMW ...then i decided to walk fast from there to avoid them and even moving fast would help me get out of this digged area...i started walking and i was praying badly to not o fall down...and for a moment i closed my eyes to pray...but that was'nt helpful at all ...ek bada sa pathar mere heels mai takra gaya aur mai gir gayi...but then i realised mai giri nahi hoon...infact i realized i was in someone's hand...i looked at the face and it was ranbir's...his face was so close to my face ...his eyes were coal black...gorgeously attractive...after a minute of staring i got back to my standing positions...i then remembered i was angry to him ... and i spoke "what was the need to save me"


"since we were friends... should'nt i ought to do that?"he was calm


"FREINDS!!!...to yeh friendship history class mai bhool gaye the...you did't even smiled back to me , ek 'hi' to karna dur ki baat hai"


"you won't understand why i did that" he became angry now


"acha so we are friends so explain ranbir...aisi bhi kya vajah thi??"


"maine kahan na tum nahi samjhogi...tumhari soch se kahin aage hai voh vajah...well mai tumse baat na hi karoon to acha hoga...tumhe jhelne se toh bachunga...excuse me"he breathed unevenly

i was even more angry with him...i felt disgusted.this person was sick...what does he want ...i reached the courtyard in anger ofcourse...i did'nt talk to anybody...nor they asked what happened ...it was clear from my face i did'nt wanted to have a word with anybody...this ranbir suddenly chose me from the whole college to talk to and then now says he does'nt want to talk to me...maine kya bigada hai uska...i need an explanation to that...come on i deserve that much ranbir...well now i don't think he'll ever talk to me .his expressions were so serious i should'nt expect any explanation ...

Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want abhya to be equally arrogant for few dsys
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the idea...i will try it depends on whatever turns the story will take...
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Posted: 13 years ago
For a change, I enjoyed Ranbir's POV, more than Abhya. I hope you write more of Ranbir, really want to know what's going on in his mind. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar!!!
Ranbir and abhya both of their.pov was good.
I loved all the convos and ranbir with attitude.
Hmmm, pls show some abhiya moments too, if possible.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
both the narration of abhya and ranbir was gud
ranbir is attitude huh
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update... dono ek dusare ke bare main sochate rahate hai... nice
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EPISODE 19

THE NARRATIVE IS ABHYA

i went to the english class he was already sitting there and then i looked at him and then ignored him & just sat beside him since maam would not like me to disobey her ...i readily showed anger in my behavior because i was actually very angry...i started to look in my chapter...and then ranbir spoke "abhya..."he stopped once when i did'nt face him "please listen to me"
i turned to him "what you are now talking to me..mujhe jhel rahe ho fir se ...kyu ranbir iss aehsaan ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...i am fine tumse baat kare bina..."

"please abhya...trust me tum nahi samjhogi ki mai tumse rude kyu ho jata hoon..."

"oh really...mai kyu nahi samjhoongi ...tum bata kar toh dekho...aur agar nah batana hai toh it's fine... this sort of friendsip is over ...jo kabhii thi hi nahi ...and one more thing agar tumhe lag raha ho ki unn bimbo ladkiyon ki tarah hoon jo kisi bhi ladke se baat karne ko ready ho to mai vo nahi hoon infact i am different from them..." i turned my face forward and threw my hair backside...

his tone became full of anger again "ye hi to problem hai abhya tum sab se alag ho ..." he controlled his breath in anger

"what are you saying ...say it clearly" i faced him and i shouted that much so that no one could hear me exept him

"tum ek dum... "he could control his facial expressions which were going dangerous " you are empty... i mean your head...it's empty" he was breathing unevenly straining his temple

"what rubbish?? tum muhe ek empty head keh rahe ho...you are disgusting ranbir..." he just said i was an empty head...he meant mai dumb hoon...how could he say so...i became damn angry with him now...so i asked the teacher "maam culd i please change my seat .you are not audible here..."

"oh !! okay abhya...as you wish ...come here"she offered me the second seat of the second row and i go up in anger and just went there...then she began to give some notes...i realised i forgot my pen on that table...i was in no mood to see ranbir's face again now...i borrowed from tina ..thankfully she was in the next row...this how my english class went ..i could'nt actually pay full attention all because of ranbir...

then my maths & chemistry went disturbed as well..at lunch i hardly spoke...and then i did'nt wanted to attend my history class but my love for history made me do that...i went there i was the first one there ..i sat on the first seat of second row...slowly children started coming...and then came ranbir... .i ignored him completely...he deserved it...he sat beside me on my seat...how dare he sit beside me ...i got up and went to the second seat showing a frustrated face...he also got up and sat beside me...i stared him...and then i was agiann getting up for the last seat...he spoke "please abhya don't go" ..i decided to sit making an angry face "i want to talk to you..please"
"but i don't want to ranbir"

"fine only i talk you listen...please let me explain..."

"fine...only one chance"

he was about to speak then the peon came "bacho aaj aapki history class nahi hogi maam absent hai" the class began to shout...

then ranbir spoke "since there is no history class ...baahar chal kar baat kare please"

"okay ..."
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THE NARRATIVE IS RANBIR

we both went again to that tree where we talked for the first time...i felt better to talk in open atleast i could run easily if anything happens to me from her smell

"see abhya ...i did'nt meant what i said"

"oh so now you mean that you did'nt wanted to say me a dumb head ...an empty head" i said with full sarcasm

"nahi abhya...tum meri baat ka matlab samjhi hi nahi..." kya batao aur kya nahi...shayad jo karan ne kaha vahin bol deta hoon...hmmm

"oh !!! to ab samjhao ranbir...ya fir se ye keh kar taaloge ki mai nahi samjhoongi...and it's okay agar aisa karna hai to mai ja rhai hoon" she started to move

"ruko abhya...dekho mai nahi janta tumhe yeh sunne mai kitna ajeeb lage...tum shayd mujhe paagal bhi samjho" of course every human would "the thing is..."she was listening every word with attention "...mmm...mai logo ki shakal dekh kar pad sakta hoon ki unke dimaag mai kya chal raha hai...i mean inshort mai logo ke dimaag pad sakta hoon" i looked carefully at her expression ...i wished for just a moment i could read her mind as well...but she was normal to my surprise...not shocked at all...how was this possible , finnaly she spoke "bas itni si baat ranbir ...aur iss mai mujhse rude hone vali to koi baat nahi hai...maine tumhare baare mai buraa kabhi nahi socha...fir " i cut her because i just told her i read minds aur voh sirf mere rude hone ki padi hai ...she was unbelievable..."abhya the problem is i cannot read yours ...bahut focus karne ke baad bhi nahi kar pata hoon tumhe read"

"oh...par aisa kyu..." she stoped for a moment thinking something "why me??"

i huffed slowly "agar yeh pata hota to baat hi kya hoti abhya...mujhse tumse baat hi nahi karni padti"

"toh yeh buri baat hai ya achi...ki tumhe mujhse baat karni padi"

i had no answer for her ...i heard the cracking sound... i realised humare uppar vala tree girne vala hai...oh no the trunk is towards abhya ...i looked at the tree ...i would have to save her...uska khoon dekhoonga toh tempt ho jaonga...no ...the tree started falling ...she just saw the tree falling and started staring in shock ...the tree was just above us i threw it besides us ...not using much of power...i just shifted the direction of three besides us ...not very far...but fir bhi abhya ko uss tree ki branch se lag gayi i her right arm ...she started bleeding...and my throat started aching badly with thrist ...suddenly all the crowd started moving towards us...i wish abhya ko samajh na aaya ho ki kya hua...but i was wrong ...she went towards the tree and started to move it and i spoke "abhya lets go to the emrgency room tumhe lag gyi hai" i stoped breathing trying to control myself.

"ranbir ye tree to bhaari hai"

i laughed ...in a way to hide my fear ki usse pata chal gaya "of course abhya ..ek tree toh bhaari hota hi hai...now lets go" the ache was increasing...i was controlling myself badly

she came back to her old position "to fir tumne isse side mai kaise pheka" she looked to the tree

"what????...maine pheka side mai...aankhen kharab ho gyi hai kya abhya"i tried every bit to prove her wrong

"nahi ranbir...maine dekha apni aankhon se...don't lie"

"i am not...ab kya hum baad mai baat kare i need to take you to the emergency room...please " i holded her left hand
"wait...promise me first that you will do so"

"ya ya...promise" ussse talne ke liye maine promise toh keh diya...but mai jaanta tha ki ye promise mai tod dunga.

"theek hai then"

i moved away the crowd "please give us way...she's hurt...excuse me" and they all looked fine just a thought of accident...no one was suspicious ...thankfully...we reached the emergency room...she was sent inside to operate...and then i breathed a air with no tempting blood smell of abhya...


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys i feel ki meri mehnat paani mai ja rahi hai...very few likes ...very few comments...very few views...so please when you read my posts please do comment either it's good or bad...!!1atleast tell about the way plot is going..and what special part of the episodes you like...please do tell !!!
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nyc update dear i really liked it a lot😊

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