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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: mechantefille
I know, I'm so dying to know what Abhi's side of it was... But the idea of him not kissing her for all the time they went out - gave me the impression of him not tainting her innocence...I dunno why - but that was the flavour I got from the "varun=balcony=night before marriage'' episode.

I feel back that time he did'nt give her any rights or took any liberties...for whatever she felt for him...😳even after she declared he was distraction when they studied...he gave her good advice on love and infatuation( When Niki witnessed the next scene she felt it went down the drain) 'coz on somelines she falls among those people 'once you fall...you fall hard and forever!! and deep down he knew...
Nor does he look like a man of fickle values...or emotions to shift them...for a kiss...and...what his relationship stood with the lady is yet to be seen😊

...Read this..."And I never thought that the Niki I knew would just go along with anything that anyone threw her way. I have never misunderstood her goodness to mean that she is a pushover."

Edited by FaithnFate - 13 years ago

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

nice one, pleasent surprise it is

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

i am speechless... i love the way you write... read all chapters at one go...

i started reading it because you had written Lavender and its one of my favorite ff's.

amazing play of emotions so beautifully described... i could see their expressions in my mind...

update soon!

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

cannot really have enough of what you write. and how you write it. I think in this chapter I was past liking/disliking Abhi.. I am only very intrigued as to what might have led him to break Niki's heart so shabbily when he obviously is a man of integrity and quiet dignity.

not to undermine the crackling tension between them which shifts in intensity and color with every spoken word,or not.

hope you continue soon:)

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-publicenemy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

poor girl...stuck with a guy who wont open his mouth to eliminate the ghost of d past...

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priya..

@priya..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Wow..Manu is trying to give her some space... Nirmala is super stubborn.. Go girl...I will wait to see if Manu can keep his hands off her...there always seems to be a necessity for him to touch her every time they face each other!

All alone in a houseboat...moonlight, backwaters and UST...endless possibilities!!!!

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Huge family... So many people...

Abhi is an intriguing character, really. Just when I think I have sized him up, another surprise springs up!

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nims6

@nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

im loving this story more and more...she has got good in laws who loves and cares for her...i loved krishna mama..he can lighten the situation by his sense of humour...i felt bad for both nirmala and abhi...he does care for her...i think he loves her bt what was the past? and what made me more happy is that they are going for their honey moon in kerala...because im also from kerala,,,any way its beautifully written

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Seriously!! I want to hurt them both! physically hurt them!

what does she expect? to just not interact or talk or touch or be with him for the rest of her life? She needs to face reality and either yell and punch him or just give up!

HE NEEDS TO TALK! seriously! "i wont touch or talk to you" FOR AN ENTIRE WEEK alone!! and then to tell her she wont have to see him after that either! yeah that is how we will solve all the problems!

clearly i am upset! lol!!

LOVE the mama! pure brilliance! I shall keep my frustration and hope these two take theirs out!