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Hey All 😊

This is the first time that I am trying to write something 😊 so please read and comment to let me know if I should continue or not ?


Enough of my bla bla and now let it begin

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Khushi was sitting on the floor beside the pool. She was totally heart broken. Every where she sees she finds dead ends. She has been trying to retrieve information about Arnav but so far she had not made any substantial progress and in addition to all this she has to bear Shyam and his cheap antics. Though she tries to sound brave infront of her partner NK but deep down she was broken. She could not bear the pressure.--------- pressure of handling Arnav's kidnapping, pressure of keeping all other family members ignorant of this fact, pressure of saving herself from the root of all evils ---- Shyam, no matter how disgusted she felt she has to stay close to him who leaves no opportunity to get close to her., to touch her. the thought itself made her feel disgusted and above all the thing which she finds most difficult is to keep up a brave face and smile ----------- yes Smile which was once part of her existence, which everyone associated with her has now become the most unbearable pressure she has to carry with herself. She has to act brave and smile for the sake of NK who was constantly trying to help her in every way he could, for the sake of HIS family, her family whom they both love alot. But deep down she has broken down. She was crumbling down on the heap of disappointment. She put her hand on her heart and said the name of the person who has become the reason of her existence ---- ARNAV JI.



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Far away Arnav was sitting with his back to the wall. Every day he tries to escape this cage and every day he fails. He had tried almost everything he could but fate had not been in his favor. Fate???? Did he just thought of fate??? He did not believe IN fate he believed in WRITING his own fate. But now the circumstances have landed him in the pit of despair and he felt like the weakest man alive on earth. He misses his family. He never believed he would ever miss them this much. He misses his Di and does not know how she would be now? He knew he loved his Di more than anything in the world but he missed others also. His cool and calm brother Akash who has in so many cases handled his hot temper with his calm attitude, Nani who despite of his rude behaviour has always forgiven him in the end and even Mami Ji with her english and antics. A small smile appeared on his lips when he thought about all of them but it was soon replaced by ache in his heart ---- ache of seperation from his loved ones. But more than anything else he missed the person whom he love to hate or to pretend to hate ----- Khushi ------ Yes the great Arnav Singh Raizada who never believed in love has bowed down before the wish of his heart, before his love. He placed his hand on his heart and said the name of person who has completely changed his reason of existence ----- KHUSHI.


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Khushi felt a bright light behind her closed eyelids. She opened her eyes to find her love sitting right infront of her. But she knew it was not real yet she did not raise her hand to ensure because she knew if she'll try to touch him he will disappear and she did not want that. She just sat there frozen looking at those mesmerizing eyes who have power to capture her mind and soul with just one glance, looking at those manly hands which became her shield and shelter in the darkest times of her life, those strong arms which have supported her whenever she was about to fall in the pool of sorrow, those lips which when smile makes her heart flutter and that broad chest where she could lose herself and her every fear and replace them with comfort.

And then the thought struck her. Can she loose this person ??? Her heart stopped at the mere thought of losing him. She knew she can not do this. She can not loose this gem. He is hers and she is his. She has lost so much in her life but she would never let him go. This thought filled her with energy that was missing in her ------ She would face everything to get him back in his home in her life as he was her life. And with this thought she smiled -------- smiled like the way she used to, smiled that smile which is considered to be part of her, smiled that smile which ensured she is going to get what she want and her wish who was sitting right infront of her portrayed her smile.

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Arnav felt a bright light behind his closed eyelids. He opened his eyes to find the reason which had made his heart believe in love sitting right infront of him. Whose life he had tried to ruin in every possible way but in return has always got care and affection. But he knew it was not real yet he did not raise his hand to ensure because he knew if he'll try to touch him he will disappear and he did not want that. She just sat there frozen looking at those twinkling eyes which had kept him sleepless for several nights, that smile which made him forget all his worries, those beautiful lips which always encourage him to come close, those silky long hair which he wish to touch and feel, and that nose pin which twinkles like her eyes and increases the beauty of her face. How he crave to hold her in his arms and never ever let go. How could he doubt that innocent soul who has put herself in danger just for him. He wished that he had said sorry to her for all the bad things he had done to her. He did not want it to end in this way... No he will not let it end this way. He can not let her go ... She was now a part of him , his soul and he won't let any one rip him apart from her. No he will fight and with this thought Arnav turned into ASR------- not the ruthless one but the one who knows how to pave his way in any situation and then ASR rose again to get his "Khushi".

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Miles apart the eyes of both Arnav and khushi shone with love and determination. They new they were going to do it the only question that left was who is going to find whom first?

And then they both raised their hands to touch the shadows sitting across them knowing that those shadows won't leave them because they were not shadows they were parts of their own souls and souls never leave bodies till death tear them apart and they knew that even after death their love will keep them together.

And by raising their hands they both said

"STAY WITH ME"

The "shadows" touched their fingertips with their own spreading warmth in their bodies and replied in unison

"I WILL ... ALWAYS"


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Aww so sweet..šŸ‘.they r gonna meet soon ...awww i m so happy i just saw the promo...
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Loved it !!! Very well written dear ! Do write more and thanks for the PM sweetie šŸ¤—
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Ohhh it was brilliant! You should definitely continue this!! The emotions were beautifully portrayed and was very well written too! Enjoyed it alot! Thanks for the Pm 😳
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Yaar you should i was really good and dont forget to pm me
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Awesome waiting for update now...
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AWWW SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
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its so beautiful
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