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Posted: 13 years ago
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ram ruth jata hai priya se kyunki vo kuch majak kar deti hai ... priya maana kar thak chuki hai sorry bol chuki hai lekin ram man
nahi raha ... ram gussa hokar room mai chala jata hai ... priya aati hai lekin vo cold look deta hai... priya ko tab ek idea aata hai
... vo changing room mai jati hai aur red color ki nighty pehen ke aati hai... ram dekh kar schocked hojata hai vo bed se uth jata hai
aur priya ko stir karne lagta hai ... lekin phir vo gussa hoker beth jata hai...
background song bahoon mai chale aao...\
priya goes close to priya nd sit near ram then she holds ram hand...
ram move away go near window in anger...
song ... chale hi jana hai najar chure ke yu ...
priya comes near ram nd holds his hand nd in dancing mood puts his hand on her neck ...
ram then kiss her on her neck...
nd then ram takes her on his arm and takes her 2 bed nd then they unite...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hmm.. nice idea... but can you please elaborate??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
small & nyc... hope to c more detailed ones frm u !!



thank u... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey its wonderful...why dont you start from this ...you can continue it as an ff or os ...
its very good

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's look like part of story...did you pick it from somewhere?
Anyways..nice one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
it is my imagination...
i can't elaborate it more becoz i mn't a gud writer if any body can plz continue my imagination in a better way ...its a request
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi neha very good attempt short n sweet do write more👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic imagination dear..hum dekhna to bhut saare scenes hai parekta mayiyaa hai ki maanti hi nahi :)

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