My version of Jiya Dhadak Dhadak

Hey guys, seen us though we all love the Jiya Dhadak song so much lets try our hand in coming up with new lyrics…who knows it may end up in Kasamh se..wouldn't that be great!

These are my versions, arz karti hoon…(sorry just had to say that, seen as though I'm going all poetic!)

Jai's current situation:

Maine dard itna diya

Phir bhi pyaar tune kiya

Mein rehta tha anjaana

Pyaar ko na pehchaana

Muskil mein aagayee hain jaan hai…

Jiya dhadak dhadak… jiya dhadak dhadak…jiya dhadak dhadak jaye

Still Jai's suffering (I'm sure he will continue to suffer for some time!)

Saathi mera rooth gaya

Sapna jaise toot gaya

Kya mujhko maaf karegi

Meri ban kar rahegi

Pyar ka kya hoga anjaam hai…

Jiya dhadak dhadak… jiya dhadak dhadak…jiya dhadak dhadak jaye

When Jai and Bani FINALLY unite (I quite like this one):

Zindigi ke har woh khushi

Mujhko to aaj hai milee

Sada tumko chahenge

Tumse na door jayenge

Mujhpe tu kar aitbaar hai…

Jiya dhadak dhadak… jiya dhadak dhadak…jiya dhadak dhadak jaye

Hope you liked them? Like to hear some of your versions…if you can think of any!!!

oh wow these r wiked. well done

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all the three of them were fabulous dear

👏 👏 👏 lovely parts so apt to the situation

Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooo cute the last one i loved .Gr8 👏

awwww the second one was quiet sad 😭 awsum job dear!!kip it up!!bye 😳

hey thanks for ur comments...nice to know i'm not that bad a poet! Hope some of you can come up with something as good or even better!

those were really nice lyrics....

That was superb! Amazing! No words to discribe it! I try to write myself but
not as good as you! I loved it! 👏
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Why don't you become a songwriter.. specialy for Jai And Bani maybe.. 😉