Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna - part 5

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Kabhi Alvida Nah Kehna

Starring

Eijaz Khan as Soham

Vickrant Rai as Jai

Nooreen Khan as Noori

Anita Hassanandani as Anjali

Co – starring

Jayne

Rach

Shezz

Yug

Shaurya

reewa

Bauji

Dida

Bebe

Disha

Shlok

Nihal

Sandip (salil)

Nitya

And co

Character descriptions

Soham – is a successful nightclub singer and is a total flirt but only has eyes for Anjali and is faithful and is best friends with Noori he tells her deepest and darkest secrets which he hasn't even told Anjali.

Jai – a successful business tycoon who always respects his family wishes and is a sweet, caring person but in the office a completely different person he is a hardworking, angry young man in the office.

Noori – a popular dancer in a nightclub and is best friend with soham. She also pickpockets from guys who come to watch her perform and after taking money out she returns the wallet to them.

Anjali – is blind and is in love with Soham but what she doesn't know is that Soham is looks like her past love kavya. She has been blind since her car accident she is also good friends with Noori and she lives with bindiya.

Kabhi Alvida Nah Kehna – Part 1

Scene starts at Central Jail and a guy is sitting down on the floor holding a photo of Anjali

Guy: Anjali Maine yeh saab tumhare liye kiya I couldn't imagine u with Kavya I couldn't bare to see him to touch you

Then they show his bloodshot eyes then light comes on his face and its Yug

Yug: that's why I killed him Anjali for us to be together for once and for all leekan tumne u put me in jail

Then a guard comes

Guard: eyy chup kaar and here here u go have some food

Yug looked up in anger and pushes the guard against the wall

Yug: agar tumne mujhe phir kaha nah phir mein tumko bohot maar daar loon gha yeh sirf ik sample hai

Guard: acha teek hai choro mujhe

Yug lets go and begins to eat his food Meanwhile At Blue Ice Club

Club owner: jaldi karo the guys are getting bored we need your voice yaar to make them excited

Then they show the guys blue eyes

Guy: you know I don't like entertaining these idiots

Club owner: well you will have to entertain dem won't ya cuz I control your pay

Then the guy turns around den they show his smile

Guy: ok I am going chill

Club owner smiles

The guy goes outside and turns around its none other than soham he begins to sing ahista ahista title song

All the guys clap and then chant dancer over and over

Soham: the idiots are chanting good luck sweetie

Then they show the girl put Pink lipstick on

Girl: I don't need luck but I think they do cuz I mean I do take there wallets and money ( she laughs)

Soham: yaar tum bhi na abh jao they are chanting and its getting on my nerves

Girl: bye (gives soham a kiss on the cheek)

Soham: yaar tum bhi na ur lipstick

Then mahi mahi mainu challa comes on from kismet and the guys get up out of there sits and begin to dance

*then the girl begins to dance*

(Challa challa challa challa

Challa challa challa) 4x

(Challa pawan de mahi) 4x

Mahi mahi mahi mainu challa pawan de

*Then the girl turns around and its Noori*

Mahi mahi mahi mainu challa pawan de

Kheech meri photo te batwe jala de

Noori takes the wallet out off one of the guys pocket and takes the money out widout him noticing and puts the wallet back in and carries on singing and dancing

Mahi mahi mahi mainu challa pawan de

(Challa pawan de mahi) 4x

Khwaabon mein dekha kitaabon mein dekha

Khwaabon mein dekha kitaabon mein dekha

Sapno ki rangeen raaton mein dekha

Khwaabon mein dekha kitaabon mein dekha

Sapno ki rangeen raaton mein dekha

Kahan tune rakh liya khud ko chhupaake

Aaja mujhe le jaa teri dulhan banaake

Then the guys cheer and clap and Noori makes her way back

Noori: uff I am so tired here take these wallets

Soham: omg Noori yeh tumne kaise

Noori: I will tell you after take the money out and pass them back to me jaldi karo

Soham: ok ok chill

Soham takes all the money out of the wallets and hands them back to Noori then Noori flirts with the guys and quickly puts the wallets back

Then a girl enters with a stick they show her shiny brown hair and he smile then they show her eyes

Guy: arre wah deekho yaar koi naye larki aye hai kya khoob hai yaar ajja soniye

The guy then grabs her and makes her sit on his lap

Girl: choro mujhe

Then Soham taps the shoulder and the guy turns around

and Soham punches him and the girl is none other than

Anjali she hugs Soham and they both make their ways

to the changing rooms

Soham: Anjali Maine kya kaha tumko akeeli Nahin Aao yaha leekan tum gal Nahin soonte

Anjali: acha baba I am sorry

Soham is quiet

Anjali: Soham kaha ho tum

Then Anjali begins to tap everywhere but she doesn't know he is behind her and he hugs her from behind but she hits him with her stick in his private area without realizing its Soham

Soham in pain: Anjali mein hoon Soham

Anjali: haila I am soooo sorry soooo sorry omg

Soham: its ok its ok

Anjali and Soham begin to laugh

Meanwhile at Nanda Household

Nitya: beta jaldi Aao nashta khalo (she shouts)

A guy comes out of the shower all wet just in his towel (ahem ahem) he sees his black suit with a blue shirt and black tie on his bed he rolls his eyes and quickly gets changed the guy turns around and its Jai Nanda

Jai: good morning everybody

Nitya: good morning

Naveen: good morning beta

Vanchita: good morning

Romilla: food morning

Jai: hahahahaha aunty u mean good

Romilla: dats what I said

Bauji: arre jai puttar good morning I wanted to ask you

kya woh virani industries ka project mil Gaya

Jai: haan bauji humara tender teek tha

Bauji: arre yeh tou acha hai

Then Shlok enters

Shlok: mama jaldi garam garam parthe

Nitya shakes her head

Shlok: there u go beta

Shlok: thanks mama they smell great

Nitya smiles

Bauji: um jai humne socha tum shaadi kyon Nahin karte

Jai: phir yeh baath bauji mujhe shaadi Nahin karne Maine

pehli bhi kaha anyways I am getting late for the office

shlok tum jaldi ana

Shlok: ok bro

Jai: bye everyone

Bauji: uff yeh larka kaab shaadi karega

To be continued

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori

Shall i continue or not hunz plzzzzzzzz comment on😳

Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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zat's really nice noori...
plz continue.....
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Aww Nice..The Fan-fic should be called Fanaa...It has some simularities
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plz plz plz continue, v v v v interestin and funni! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 this is great yaar u have gotta update this soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a great fanfic I think you should really continue.GREAT JOB!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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di u changed parts lol!!!
luv ya!!!!
its gr8!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg noori jaan i luved it 😃 😃 😳
wow u luk gorgeous mashallah 😳
luved ur entry - sounds quite hott 😃 😆
plz continue soon cant wait 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww thanks guys for commentin here is part two for u

Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna – Part 2

*Special Guest Ronit Roy as Mihir Virani*

Jai is working on the phone to Mihir

Jai: fiqaar maat karo Mr Virani hum Saab perfect karoge

Mihir: I know Mr Nanda isliye humne appko yeh project diya I mean after Mr Kavya Nanda's death you are the only one who can make it done now

Jai: I know Mr Virani like I said u have nothing to worry about since Kavya's death me and shlok have been working hard to make our company excellent as it was before

Then Shlok enters

Mihir: I have full faith in you both and the company

Jai: thanks Mr Virani u take care now

Mihir: you too Mr Nanda bye

Jai disconnects the phone

Jai: kya baath hai shlok

Shlok: jai I am bored

Jai: acha tou yeh project ka material's deekho

Shlok raises one eyebrow

Shlok thinking: oh no kaha paas gaya

Priyanka (secretary) enters

Priyanka: sir app ki biwi ka phone

Shlok: thank god

Jai looked up at shlok

Shlok: uh I mean mein abi ayya priyanka just transfer the call to my office

Priyanka: ji sir

Jai Shakes his head

Meanwhile at the club soham (still in pain poor baby) goes past and drops his drink!!

Girl shows hair, skirt then Watery eyes!!

Girl - aaaaaaa!!!!! *burst out crying* mera dress!!!!! mera dress karabh hogaiya!!!! main kya karoon!!!!!

Girl 2 shows clothes*shawler kameez*and shows Sunglasses!

2 - Uff yaar kuch aur pehnlo!!!! Harbaath pai rohti hi rehti hoo

Girl*continues crying*

Soham - array!!! Shezz!!! Tum!!! Uff yaar kuch nahi hoga!!! Here let me go and get u something else to wear what about Noori's clothes

Shezz - kya!!! Array, nahi Nahin baba u seen her clothes!! so revealing!!

Girl 2 - hey Soham!!! Long time no see

Then the girl removes her sunglasses and they show her smile and the girl is "JAYNE"

Soham - hey babes!

Jayne - I and shezz back to this club now

Soham - good good

Jayne - hey so how is Anjali (she says with a cheeky smile)

Soham: beautiful as ever and I mean she's great after she has me nah

Jayne: tum bhi na come on shezz come with me let me get u summit to wear!!

*changin rmz*

shez covered nooris eyes

shez - guess who

Noori - omg!!! Aaaaaaa my lil sis!!!!!

Shezz:hugged Noori*

shezz - di!!!!! how r u

Noori - im f9 haan where were u?? Left me just like that!! Kuch khabar kuch nahi!! Me worried u know

Jayne - now we r back to join u so don't worry

Noori *group hug*

then the 3 of them sing mere naseeb

Mere naseeb mein tu hai ke nahi
Tere naseeb mein main hoon ke nahi
Mere naseeb mein tu hai ke nahi
Tere naseeb mein main hoon ke nahi
Yeh hum kya jaane, yeh wahi jaane, jisne likha hai sab ka naseeb
Mere naseeb mein tu hai ke nahi
Tere naseeb mein main hoon ke nahi
Mere naseeb mein tu hai ke nahi
Tere naseeb mein main hoon ke nahi


Meanwhile Soham is wid Anjali

Anjali: are you ok now soham

Soham: uh huh bilqool I mean after we get married your gonna even beat me more hai na

Anjali takes out her stick

Soham: ok Anjali I was only joking baba

Anjali: kya howa dhaar gaye (she laughs)

Soham: nahin tou mein kaha dhaar gaya

Anjali: acha (she moves closer to soham then she begins to touch his face and she starts having flashbacks of kavya

*flashback*

Kavya: Anjali jaldi karo na mujhe murti deekna hai

Anjali: acha baba wait

Anjali touches kavya's cheeks then finishes doing the clay work

Kavya: is it finished

Anjali: uff tum bhi na aur haan it is

Kavya then hugs Anjali from behind

Kavya: wow its amazing jaan

Then they show kavya's death

*Back in reality*

Anjali: KAVYA

Soham frowns and rolls his eyes

Soham: Anjali humne yeh baath kiya mein kavya nahin hoon mein soham sen hoon ufffff Anjali

Anjali: uh I am sorry soham I am sorry
Soham: its ok don't worry

Soham hugs Anjali

Soham thinking: when will u get over kavya Anjali and when will u get over the fact I am not him jab tumhare ankhein teek honge phir tumko paata hoga kay mein kavya nahin hoon leekan mein soham sen hoon

To be continued

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori

Plz Plz Plz Comment on ppl

Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey hun looking goood!!! so haps u included me in 😆 😆 😆 jald se jald mera dialogue bhi lik le!!! haha will catch up with u later!!!!! mwahhzzz luv u!!!

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