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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Amazing..
I loved it.
Armaan is soo cute.
Guess I'm thed special one for u Niks.
Thanks for it..
Shanky's buddy is goin to get Ridz as his friend then love.
OMG!I'm so excited..
Plz update the next part soonest.
This ff is gonna rock!!
love ya
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Love Is Mistake - Dreadful Or Beautiful Who Knows

  
                                            Face Of Life 2 
       New Member In Life Always Brings Happiness And Tears Of Joy

And an excited armaan barged in Gupta House where he saw his girl friend was sitting on the chair beside dining table whereas his mom Ananaya Mallik was standing beside her with fruits plate in her hands

Ar:''girl friend girl friend girl friend''

He ran towards Samriti Gupta but he was stopped by Ananaya

An:''armaan beta aaram se aapki girl friend koo lag jaayegi''

She said as Samriti was pregnant by 8 and half months and her stomach was visible clearly

Ar:''mom mujhe girl friend aur aapko kuchh btana hai merii nayii dostt kee vaare meiin''

An:''armaan beta abhii nahin abhii aapki girl friend koo bhookh lagii hai naa oonhein kuchh khane dijiye naa hum aapki bat bad meiin soonege''

She said try to make armaan understand and turned to samriti who was smiling

An:''samriti chl abhii yeh fruits finish kar''

But she was cut short by armaan

Ar:''par mom merii bat bhi jaruri hai''

An:''armaan beta bad''

But she was cut short with samriti's voice

Sa:''rehne dijiye naa bhabhi mai pehle aapne armaan kii bat soonogi''

Ar:''yea girl friend aapko pta hai buddy ne mujhe bola joo yeh merii nayii vaali dost hai naa sirff merii hogii''

He said happily while ananya and samriti looked each-other with confusion about whom he is talking

Sa:''achaa boy friend par yeh kaun hai aapki nayii dost aapne tou humein nahin milvaya''

An:''han armaan kahin aap jo humare saath rehne aye oonki baby kii bat kar rahein hoo kya''

Both of them asked and armaan hit his for head

Ar:''nahin aap dono buddhu hoo vo tou rotii rehti hai raool hii khelta hai ooske saath''

Both the ladies smiled seeing his antics then only samriti

Sa:''tou fir aap kiskii bat kar rahein hoo boy friend?''

She asked and before armaan can reply

An:''samriti yeh tou pta nahin kya kahee jaa rahaa hai tum aapne fruits khaoo''

She again forwarded her plate of fruits and

Sa:''nahin bhabhi mujhe janana hai please''

Ananya nodded seeing her face and she

Sa:''han armaan batao naa  kaunn hai aapki nayii dost aur kahan hai''

Ar:''areey girl friend vo tou aapke pas hai naa''

And hearing him samriti and ananya was confused while looking at each-other what is he saying

Sa:''mere pas armaan anajali tou aapki pehl se hii dost hai fir vo nayii dost kaise hui?''

Ar:''oho girlfriend anjali nahin''

An:''tou kaun armaan''

Ar:''oho aap sachii meiin buddhu hoo vohii joo girlfriend hoppital se lane vaali hai buddy ne kaha vo merii nayii dost aur vo sirff merii hogii girlfriend mai ose kisiko nahin doonga girlfriend''

He replied while hugging samriti putting his tiny arms around her bulky stomach and that time miracle happens the baby kicked in her womb that too so hard and in the anticipation samriti holds armaan close to her stomach and armaan was little frightened feeling movement in samriti's stomach

Ar:''girl friend aapkii tummy hil kyoon rahii hai?''

He asked innocently while samriti and ananya smiled not knowing what to reply to him so she just suppressed her smile along with samriti at his innocence

An:''achaa armaan tumne yeh bat aapne dad koo  batai''

She asked try to distract his mind

Ar:''nahin mom nahin btaya maine abhi dad koo''

An:''tou fir jao btao oonhein''

Ar:''han mai abhie bataonga dad koo mom''

And he ran after placing a kiss on samriti's stomach as he was hugging her from stomach and as once again samriti feels kick of child that too very hard kick and she sat on chair and ananya looked at her worriedly

An:''kya hua samriti tabyeet theek nahin  hai kya''

Sa:''nahin bhabhi lagta hai ise (caressing her stomach) bhi armaan bahut pasand hai jab bhi ata hai bahut zor se kick karti hai''

An:''karti hai samriti''

Sa:''pta nahin bhabhi mujhe bhi armaan jaise lagta hai kii yeh (caressing her stomach) ladkii hogii armaan kii dost''

An:''achaa yeh bhi theek hai par pehle tu yeh fruits finish kar le armaan kii dost healthy honii chahiye naa oskee  saath khelne kee liyye''

Sa:''kya bhabhi fruits''

An:''jii han fruits aur aapko yeh poore khane padege''

She said making a face but ananaya makes her ate finally with lots of samriti's protests.

And time passed samriti's due date is coming one night she was sitting on bed with shashank caressing her stomach and seeing him samriti

Sa:''shashank mujhe lagta hai betii hogii''

Sh:''kaise pta samriti''

Sa:''pta nahin jabse armaan nee kaha mujhe bhi lagne lga hai aur aapko pta hai jab bhi yeh (points to her bulky stomach) armaan kii aawaz sunti hai naa itnii zor zor se kick karti hai jaise abhii bahar aayegi aur armaan se khelne lagegi''

And then once again baby kicks and shashank feels that and looks at her

Sa:''dekha aab ooske nam par bhi''

Sh:''han lagta hai buddy aur iss princess (kissing her stomach) kii bahut gehri dosti hogii''

Only then he heard samriti's loud cry

Sa:''oouch aah''

She cried in pain holding her stomach and shashank panicked and knows may be she was in her labor

Sh:''kuchh nahin hogaa samriti mai abhi billy aur ani bhabhi koo call karta hun samriti''

He said dialing their number

Sa:''aaa oouch''

She again winced and after few minutes Shashank, Billy and Ananya was pacing in hospital's corridor while inside the labor room Samriti was delivering a child and shashnak was hell worried and billy was trying to calm him down, though he himself was doctor but seeing samriti in pain, he is like feeling so much restless not able to do anything for her only then doctor comes with a new bundle of joy in her hands and with smile on her face and the trio rushed to her and

D:''congrats Dr.Shashank bitiya aai hai''

Sh:''thanks so much doctor kirti''

He said taking that bundle of joy in his hands and kissing her lightly

Sh:''billy buddy sahii tha it's my princess''

Bi:''han shanky it's our princess''

He said hugging him and

An:''bahut sundar hai bhaii sahib yeh''

Shashank nodded and then he

Sh:''doctor kirti samriti theek hai naa?''

D:''jii Dr.Shashank Dr.Samriti bilkul theek hai aabhie thodi der meiin oonhein hum general ward meein shift kar denge tab aap mill lijiyega''

Sh:''thnaks doctor kirti''

And she nodded and leaves from there after sometime they also met samriti who was shifted in the room and she was as happy as everyone seeing her daughter and like shashank she also says that Armaan was right for having them a daughter and shashank says like armaan was his buddy she was his princess but he was cut short by billy and ananya that she is their princess as they have already armaan now she is theirs and in morning children comes to met them.

First it was armaan who quickly rushed to her girl friend who was lying on bed and seeing her like that firstly he frightened what happened to her girlfriend and he quickly placed his tiny hand on her forhead

Ar:''girl friend aapko feevl hai kya''

He asked and samriti smiled seeing him and nodded in disagreement but instead of samriti shashank answered

Sh:''nahin buddy aapki girl friend theek hai bilkul par aapki nayii dostt laani thi naa tou hum yahan aye hospital meiiin''

Ar:''buddy merii nayii dostt aaa gayyi kahan hai mujhe doo naa''

He said getting all excited and shashank smiled

Sh:''vo aapki mom kee pas hai''

Only then samriti entered with new born child in her arms

Sh:''voo dekho aaa gayyi voo''

Ar:''mom mujhe do naa please''

He said rushing to her

An:''nahin armaan vo aapse gir jaayegi aap bahut chote hoo betaa''

She said but

Ar:''buddy aapne bola tha mai ose ootha sakta hun''

He said making a face and shashank picked him in his arms

Sh:''off course buddy''

And he made her settled on bed beside samriti and then take baby from ananaya's hands and placed her in armaan'a lap and

An:''bahii sahib vo bachaa hai''

She tried to warn him as armaan himself is too small that too handle a new born kid but shashank nods and smiles and caressed armaan and child's hairs

Sh:''koi bat nahin bhabhi hum sab hai aur armaan ooska dhayan rakhega hai naa buddy''

Ar:''han buddy dekho yeh mujhe jaanti hai isnein kaise merii finger pakdi''

He said whole caressing her face with his tiny fingers and everyone also smiles seeing the fact that the tiny one actually holds armaan's finger in her tiny hand and seeing this, these words escaped from samriti's mouth

Sa:''lagta hai yeh merii betii mere boy friend koo nahin chodegi kyoon shashank''

She said making everyone laughed while armaan was too engrossed in the baby that too intently and she also was not leaving his finger as if she has got someone very close to her just after few minutes of her arrival in the world

And here the elders were still chuckling at samriti's words.

Little did they know this was going to be true she was not leaving armaan in any way, in any circumstances, in any conditions at every moment and part of life she was going to be with him only in his heart like his heart beats in his heart where she can stay for forever?


p.s. do tell me how is this one going on people?

Edited by niki.5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
nice story yar
cont soon
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Awesummm
amazinggg concepttt
plzzz pm m
continuee ssoon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
API this is grreat
i mean read your other ff as well
but this hassome kind of magic
greatly writtn
continue soon
love
maria:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing part Niks.
I just loved.
Armaan is so cute.
Finally Ridz has arrived in Armaan's life..
Waiting for an ARlicious part eagerly..
love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Love Is Mistake - Dreadful Or Beautiful Who Knows

  
                                            Face Of Life 3
Names Gives Meaning To Personality And Relationships

It was almost one month that the little new member arrived in the family to be precisely says armaan's new friend arrived, though everyone was very happy with this new arrival of the little bundle of joy but armaan his happiness has no bounds, he wants to remain in Gupta House only from the time when his new friend arrives and most of the times it was very difficult for ananaya to send him to his play school as he just wants to be with his friend all the time he was like eating with his new friend, sleep with his new friend, play with his new friend in short everything he wants to do be with her only and this irritates ananaya as he was not letting samriti rest but shashank always supported armaan saying

Sh:''bhabhi I promised my buddy''

And armaan was not only loving the new one he was very much caring also about her whenever she cried and samriti was nor around her he start calming her by showing her teddy bears or another toys as samriti and ananya told him but if she continues to crying he ran to his girl friend to call her by saying her that

Ar:''girl friend chaloo naa melii dostt roo rahii hai bahut zor se chaloo naa''

And like these he called her whenever the little one cried and if samriti said she was coming in a minute as she was picking her clothes only to change

Ar:''nahin joo kalna hai bad meiin kalna aap girl friend aabhie melii dostt koo chupp karao naa dekho vo kasie roo rahii hai''

He acted like a stub born kid and pulled her by holding her duppatta not understanding that his girl friend was picking his friend's clothes only to change her and samriti finally give in and went with him otherwise he will not let her rest in peace till he saw his girl friend calmed his friend and the little one also reacts at his voice she opened her eyes hearing him.

Not the caring one also armaan was also possessive for the new one as whenever anjali, rahul holds her as she is their biological sister armaan immediately comes and

Ar:''mujhe do merii dostt vo sirff melii hai tum jao sab''

He said and whenever anjali said she is her sister then armaan said no she is his only and

Ar:''nahin anjie tum jao atull bhaii kee saath kehlo''

And same reply to rahul as whenever he holds the new one

Ar:''jaa naa tuu oos ronee vaali baby kee pas yeh melli hai (points to his friend)''

And  the little one also as if agreeing with armaan whenever any other kid holds her she start crying that too loudly and whenever armaan holds her she never leaves his finger as if she is agreeing that she is his only and all the family was sometimes surprised  seeing this and happy seeing the bonding between them and sometimes was surprised seeing the armaan's stubbornness regarding the new one he was always around her not even for a single time he let her go from his sight even he sleep near her cot only and then billy took him to Mallik Mansion  but they smiled also seeing how armaan loved the child so much sometimes they thought he loved her more than them as she was his only friend as he thought and did tell to shshank and everyone else.

Today was also samriti was changing the diper of the little one when armaan barged in the room in his school dress and seeing him samriti somewhere knows what the reason of his visit is this earlier  but still she

Sa:''areey boy friend aap yahan?''

She asked while putting armaan's princess on bed

Ar:''girl friend mujhe school nahin jaana aap mom koo bolo naa''

He said making a face

Sa:''par mere boy friend koo tou school jaana pasand hai naa''

She asked caressing his cheeks and

Ar:''han pal aab mujhe aapni friend kee saath rehna hai naa aagal mai school chala gayya tou ooska khayal kaunn rakhega kaunn khelega iskee saath naa''

He said and samriti smiled knowing this is coming so she picked him up and settled him in her lap while armaan looked at his friend

Sa:''han yeh tou hai par armaan jab aapki dostt badii hoo jaayegi aur school jaayegi tab ose kaunn sikhayega sab ABC, 123 aur rhyms''

Ar:''mai sikhaonga girl friend mai''

He spoke at once and samriti smiled and kissed his cheeks

Sa:''han tou ooske liyye pehle aapko bhi sikha padega naa''

Hearing her armaan nodded and

Sa:''tou ooske liyye tou aapko school jaana padega tabhie aap aapni friend koo sikha paoge naa armaan bolo boy friend hai naa''

Ar:''han girl friend''

Sa:''tou fir aap jaoge naa school''

Ar:''jiii jaonga mai''

He said while jumping from her lap and samriti pecked his cheeks and hugged him and

Sa:''that's like a good boy''

Armaan smiled showing his dimples and to their surprise the little one also laughed while throwing her legs in air as if saying to pick her up by armaan

Ar:''nahii dostt aabhi mai school jaa rahaa hun aapke saath aakar khelonga tab tak aap girl friend kee saath khelo hum aaker khelenge fir mai aapko bhi sikhaonga sab ABC,123 aur rhyms hai naa girl friend''

He said while kissing the little one and samriti nodded

Ar:''girlfriend yeh (points to his friend) school kab jaayegi''

He asked and

Sa:''jab yeh badii hoo jaayegi aur mere boy friend jaise chalne lagegi tab''

Ar:''theek hai tab hum saath meiin jaayenge''

He said enthusiastically till then ananya also comes with armaan's school bag and

An:''armaan chalo beta school kee liyye der hoo jaayegi''

Ar:''han mom mai school jaonga fir mujhe bda hokar aapni friend koo bhi sikhana hai naa sab chaliye bag dijiye mujhe jaana hai''

He said while taking his bag from ananaya and ananaya was surprised seeing this and hearing this

An:''sikhana hai kya?''

She asked looking at samriti who told

Sa:''bad meiin bataongi''

Ar:''bye friend mai abhii aaa jaonga tum darna mat aur ronaa bhi mat''

Where the two ladies busy talking armaan leaned over the new one and said while kissing her tiny cheeks and the little ones smiled and both the ladies smiled hearing armaan that how he is caring about her now only when he himself was a little one child and then armaan hear billy's call who was going to drop all the children to school

Bi:''armaan aao beta''

And armaan once again kissed his friend bidding her bye

Ar:''bye friend bye''

And ran to his father for his school to learn for his new friend not for himself.

Like this two more months passed and now the little one little princess was three months old and today was her ''Namkaran'' ceremony everyone was busy with the prepration but the one more busy is with armaan who was from morning with his princess his friend sitting while she was in his lap and they both were playing and she was looking so beautiful in red frock and armaan also wore a new greay half pants with red shirt actually he was wearing blue shirt but seeing her wearing red frock he insist ananaya to make him wear red shirt and ananaya did that otherwise he will not let her rest in peace and she can not afford this.  Right now samriti was holding the child while shashank was sitting beside her and on her other side armaan was sitting playing with her as she was holding his finger as usual behind them billy and ananaya was  sitting with nikki in her lap and anjali, atul and rahul was playing there and other guests were sitting on matteresses and pandit jii was performing the rituals then pandit jii said

P:''shashank jii aab bachii kaa nam rakhiye''

Sh:''jii pandit jii''

P:''pehla akshar "R'' hai sahshank jii''

Shashank nodded and

Sh:''chalo bhaii batao humari gudiya kaa ''R'' se nam''

While everyone was busy thinking and deciding the name armaan bends and whispered in her ear

Ar:''RIDDHIMA''

And all looked at him in disbelief and shashank was surprised and

Sh:''buddy kya kahaa aapne''

Ar:''buddy ''riddhima merii dostt kaa name''

He said and

An:''armaan chupp sorry bhaii sahib armaan nee bachii kee kan meiin bol diyya nam''

She said to shashaank and samriti as it is ritual the name was first conveyed in child's ear and

Sh:''kya bhabhi bahut achaa name hai''

Sa:''han bhabhi humein tou sochaa hii nahin aur armaan kii choice  bhi achii hai mere boy friend kii''

P:''shshank jii grehon kee hisab se bhi nam bahut achaa hai''

All smiled and

Sh:'' biklu pandit jii thanks armaan''

Bi:''tou fir yeh final princess kaa name Riddhima Shashank Samriti Gupta''

All smiled and

Ar:''riddhima armaan kii riddhima armaan kii best friend''

He smiled and kissed riddhima's cheeks happily all looked at them happily.

Little did he knows he is right completely she is going to be his riddhima only, only his no matter what happen always his in their future.

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Edited by niki.5 - 11 years ago
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abhi tak riddhima badi nai hui loll
acha api i am likking your ff,wana sse posesive arman
plz continue soon
love
maria:)
Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
y u didnt send me pm earlier its just ...

i have no words left

update soon
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awesummm
loveeelyyy
continuee soon