FF : My greatest mistake ever. (part-2)

-CrazySobtian- thumbnail
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Hi guys, hope u all will like it.
link to part-1 :
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Anjali was so damn angry at Arnav. She wanted to go home at that very moment but she couldn't as
she did not want anyone else to know about their fight. She waited till the party ended and as soon
as the party ended she rushed back home. Everyone was tired so they all went to their room except
Anjali. She just barged into Arnav's room. Arnav just spranged out of his bed.
Anjali: Ye saab kya hai chotte?!
Arnav: Kya di?
He was confused.
Anjali: tum ne khushi ji ke upar kyu chillaya?
Arnav:aapko kese pata..
Anjali cuts him and she says: hum Khushi ji se phone par baat kar rahe they jab tum un par ek choti si galati
ke vajase chilla rahey they.
Arnav: Di maine jan buj ke us par nahi chillaya, voh to office ki itni tension thi ki baas gusse main moo
se nikal gayi.
Anjali: chotte to phir bol ne phele do bar sooch to lete. humein kuch bhi nahi pata aapko khushi ji se
maafi maang ni paregi.
Anjali ordered Arnav.
Arnav: what! no ways! galati to uski bhi thi voh..
Anjali: to phir thik hai hum aap se baat nahi karengey.
Arnav: par di hum..
Anjali left the room without listening to him.
Someone heard their conversation. It was Shyam.
"saale sahab aur khushi ji ke beech jhagra. aacha hai, issi bahane hum unke beech aur bhi duriya paida
kaar sakte hai" he thought by giving an evil smile.
*ting tong* Someone arrived at RM.

Precap: Khushi decides not to talk to Arnav anymore whereas Arnav practices to say sorry and
someone will help him. (guess who)
Well, how is it??????? do u like it????? is it too short?? leave ur comments guys plz😊😊😊😊😊😊
U guys take a guess- who arrived at RM?
what is Shyam's plan to keep Arnav and Khushi away?
who will help Arnav to practice how to say sorry?
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velangini thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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anjali you could have slapped your precious chhote you know
i was waiting for that day
hmm asr and sorry
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: velangini

anjali you could have slapped your precious chhote you know

i was waiting for that day
hmm asr and sorry
update soon



that would be too harsh😊😊😊😊 isn't it
jenshad thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You GOOO Anjali But Why Does Shyam Come In The Wrong Time ?! :( 🥺 Longer Update Please :) 😳
ajvandana37 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
It's very nice but it's too short...make it as long as possible
deeswarna thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice work. plz PM me wen u update the next part
soomaiyah thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7

Too good 👏... but too short😆 now is it nk at the door ?? hope so😉 ...anyways i want a jealous Arnav and yes ..i hope Khushi does not forgive him that easily!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...👏👏👏
eagerly waiting for ur next update...
farha5556 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was too short but ok loved it thanks for the pm update soon
chandana.s thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved where the story is heading..Well written

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