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OS Virman: To new beginnings, part 3(last) on pg10- Page 9

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Melony Jane Tryphosa Saripalli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Plz pm me if you write! Ur a writer after my own heart!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Beautiful ending ❤️

Loved it 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Just finished reading the whole SS...That was so brilliant...😊

Loved every single word...keep up the good work 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

So sorry for the late comment but I only just read the os because I had exams. Loved Manvi's confession. As always your writing is beautiful.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Aww...i loved it...it was beautiful..btw..i'm sorry that i generally comment late..bt wat 2 do..was really busy n cud'nt take tym out 2 make a proper comment that u truly deserve..i love ur work..n always luk forward 2 any SS/OS from ur side..do continue writing n often plzz...N do pm me venevr u come up wid something new!!😃

Also..u hv'nt updated ur previous SS Beautiful Series since quite sometym..i remember that u were'nt able 2 decide as 2 how 2 make Virat n Manvi fall in love in ur story..bt now that v r getting such amazing epis i'm sure u'l b able 2 draw inspiration n come up wid something brilliant..do try..pretty plzz..it was one "Beautiful series" that u started n i wish u'd able 2 continue..no pressurizing..LOL😉

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sneha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

amazing writing part
loved it
pm me if u wrte more

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Menika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thank you Shivrajput52.

And you!

I really love all your stories.

You write them so real, with

feelings, it's so natural.

So simple. I totally understand

the characters.

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Gunia

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Posted: 14 years ago

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So I finally got a chance to catch up on some of the writings and PMs I've been meaning to catch up on! I just read all three parts of the OS and I think it was really amazing hun! I really liked the characterization and the depth of emotions. I, too, agree with you that if there was an arranged marriage between them, it would prolly be simple like this. Also, I am very glad that you didn't incorporate any sexual tension because I think the subtler emotions portrayed actually gave a very nice, romantic feel to the entire fic and including tension like that would have been a bit more forced and turned the fic into a different direction!

*phew* I guess I'll end my monologue by saying that I really enjoy your writing style and this is def. one of your best works!!! Thanks for keeping us entertained 😆

- Gunia

PS: heading over to catch up on some of your other work now 😃

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