Jeevan Saathi- MG ff part 11-pg 47/14 feb

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Hey guys
Hinal here
Im back to bore u all with not one but two ffs
ok so enough of my bak bak for no n here is it




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Character Sketch

Mohinder Handa -

A well known business man. Strict in nature but loves his family a lot.

Rano Handa-

Wife of Mohinder. Is a house wife n loves her family a lot.

Priya Handa -
NDTV Imagine''s "Basera'''' Actress Priya Bathija at a press-meet in New Delhi on Wednesday

Elder daughter of Mohinder n Rano Handa. Is an architect by profession n loves Geet very much. Has a down to earth nature.

Geet Handa/Khurana -

Younger daughter of Mohinder n Rano. Very bubby n charming girl who lives her life to the best. But 1 incident in her life changed her from a bubby girl to a very silent girl. Is married to Maan Singh Khurana n loves her family a lot.

Maan Singh Khurana -
Gurmeet Choudhary at Rahul and Dimpy Mahajan's 1st wedding anniversary party

Only son of Amar n Seema n MD of Khurana Constructions. Loves Geet a lot n is a very charming n fun loving guy. Loves Geet's family more than his.

Amar Singh Khurana -

A well known businessman n best friend of Mohinder Handa. Loves his son a lot n always wanted to Shashank's daughter to be married to Maan.

Seema Singh Khurana -

Amar's wife n Maan's mom. Loves her son a lot. N loves Geet as her daughter.

Yuvraj Shah -
Syed Yasir Shah

Priya's would be husband. Architect by profession.
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Plz let me know if I should continue or not??? N will post first part soon along with my other ff.

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Hinal
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Handa Mansion,
All are running around to complete the wedding preparations.

Rano "Arre woh phool waha mat lago. Yaha lagao... Aur yeh laal parde nahi Nile wale dalne hai... Uff kya tum log koi bhi kaam theek se nahi kar sakte. Ab jaldi karo Baraat ko anne main todhi hi der baaki hai aur yaha ek kaam bhi pura nahi huva."

Mohinder "Rano shaant hojao. Sab hojayega. Tum ghabra kyu rahi ho."

Rano "Ji dekhye na sab kaam baaki pade hai aur koi bhi theek se nahi kar raha"

Mohinder "Rano tum jaake Priya ko dekho main yaha ka sambhal lunga"

Rano "Ji" n left to Priya's room.

As she entered the room she saw Priya sitting in her bridal outfit looking very beautiful. Rano had tears seeing her little princess grown up wearing a bridal outfit.

She remembered the time when her both princesses were small n use to dress up in her saree n played "Shaadi... Shaadi" n today is the day when her one princess is already married n the other one is going to be married.

As Priya saw Rano standing at the door with tears in her eyes she called out, "Mumma..."

Rano came out of her thoughts n said "Meri Bachi toh kitni khubsoorat lag rahi hai. Kabhi kisi ki nazar na lage tujhe."

Priya "Mumma mujhe dar lag raha hai..."

Rano "Arre isme darne wali kya baat hai. Tu toh Yuvraj ko phele se janti hai na aur unke ghar bhi toh rahi hai. Toh phir darne kya baat hai???"

Priya "Haan Mumma main usse jaanti hu aur unke ghar bhi rahi hu lekin aaj ke baad humara rishta badal jayega.Isliye dar lag raha hai."

Rano "Arre Bacha usme darne ki koi baat nahi hai. Tum log ek dusre ko jaise jaise aur achi se janoge waise hi tera yeh dar bhi chala jayega. Ab mujhe ek smile de"

Priya "Thank u Mumma." n hugged her.

Mohinder who had come to check on Rano n Priya saw them hugging n said "Mujhe hug nahi milega kya???"

Priya "Kyu nahi papa" n got up n hugged him.

"Arre Bidaai main abhi time hai toh abhi se kyu rona shuru kar diya aap teeno ne???"

Priya came out of the hug n pulled Geet's ears n said "Tu inti late kyu aayi."

Geet "Ouchhh Di chodo na."

Priya left her ear n then asked "Ab bata late kyu huvi???"

Geet remembered the morning events n blushed a bit n said "Woh kuch nahi Di. Maan ka kuch kaam agaya tha isiliye late hogaye."

Rano "Acha tum log baatein karo main neeche chalti hu. Aur Geet yeh kya tu Maan ko akela chod ke agayi??? Uff kab sudhregi yeh ladki" n went with Mohinder to welcome Maan n look at the other arrangements.

Anjali, Priya n Geet's friend said after Rano n Mohinder left "Arre Priya tujhe pata nahi hai kya ke Maan ka kya important kaam agaya hoga subah subah Geet ko dekh ke" n winked at her.

Priya "Haan Anjie woh toh koi moka nahi chodta Geet ke saath romance karne main "n hi-fied Anjali while Geet was blushing hearing it.

Geet "Aisa kuch nahi hai di aur waise main bhi kal se dekhti hu ke jiju aapko kitna akela chod te hai." n hi- fied Anjali.

Geet "Waise di jiju dekhte kaise hai??? Yeh galat hai ke aapne abhi tak jiju ki ek photo bhi nahi dekhiye hume"

Anjali "Haan Priya bata na kaise dikhte hai woh"

Priya "Woh... Unki aankhein... mendak jaisi hai..."

A pair of hazel brown eyes are shown.

"Unki body jaise ko budha mota insaan hai waisi hai..."

A guy looking extremely handsome is seen.

"Aur woh aise bolta hai... Pri...iiiya Mu...jh...se Sh...aa...diii... ka...roo...giii..." started laughing.

Geet "Wah di kya description di hai jiju ki ab toh unko dekhna hi hoga."

Rano from downstairs "Geettt Neeche aa..."

Priya "Ja Mumma bula rahi hai"

Geet "Haan jati hu" n went down n Rano told her to take the Thali to pandit ji.

Geet took the plate which had sindoor,mangalsutra n flowers n gave it to pandit ji. Pandit ji asked to get something from the kitchen n as she was taking out the thing a pair of hands held her from back n she gasped out loud.

"Maannn. Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho chodo na kisine dekh liya toh."

Maan "Arre koi nahi dekhega aur agar dekh bhi liya toh kuch nahi kehega akhir tumhara pati hu main. Kisi padosi ki biwi ke saath romance nahi kar raha main." n turned her towards him.

Geet "Aapko aaj badi masti suj rahi hai kya baat hai???"

Maan "Agar tum itni khubsoorat lagogi is saree main toh main kya kar sakta hu." n was about to kiss her when Geet pushed him n said "Baaki ki masti ghar par" n ran away with the thing.

Maan smiled at her retreating figure n went to Mohinder to help him in the arrangements.

After sometime the baraat arrived n Rano did the aarti n as Yuvraj was about to lift the sehra someone called Geet n she turned away. After welcoming Yuvraj he was lead to the mandap n all the rituals began. Geet n Anjali stole the shoes without anyone getting to know from the groom's side.

Geet did the ghatbandhan n came n stood next to Maan n Geet was showering the flowers on the couple when she felt the flowers on her n turned to see Maan showering the flowers on her. Geet glared at him but he didnt stop n then she shook her head n left from there to bring the shoes with Anjali.

Anjali "Jiju ab toh sehra hataye aur apna chera dikhaye. Baadi taraf suni hai aapki..."

As Yuvraj was about to remove his sehra the guys from the groom's side said "Nahi phele aap jhoote dijye uske baad hi aapko dulhe ka chera dekhne ko milega"

Anjali "Phele hume paise dijye phir hi jhoote milenge vaharna baithe rahe yaha bina jhooto ke." n hi-fied Geet.

Yuvraj then took out money from his pocket n gave n then he lifted his sehra n Geet n Anjali were shocked n the next second Geet fainted.

Precap -
Blast from the past

Priya's outfit -

Geet's outfit -

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Yuvraj's outfit -
Beige Colored Grooms Sherwani

Maan's outfit -
Resham Worked Mens Indian Sherwani

Love,
Hinal
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 11 years ago
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