SS: 'A NEW LIFE' c-13 pg52 (14sept)

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Hello dear frnds'I have written an ss.. As its my frst time..i hv never written any before this..pls do read.. I dnt knw how it is bt I cn make it better with time wd all ur support n suggestions n response..m nt good at writtng as I hv never tried to write ny sort of thing..

Bt there's someone who hv motivated me n I would say I got inspired by her..big thanks to u aaliya(CheekyArshiLove)..I want to dedicate this one for u..

"A New Life"

It was 1am and was thundering outside badly weather was not so good. It was also raining.. Khushi was pacing here and there in her room worried about where her husband, he was too late today..

It has been 7 months when everything was again fine and settled. She Mami and NK has successfully saved Arnav and Shyam's truth has been out he was behind bars.. Unfortunately Anjali had a miscarriage because of biggest shock of her life that her husband whom she loved more than anything, the one whom she worshiped, her life used to be exist in that person and what not she did for him, never doubted him never raised any questions..n list goes on.. Before she used to pray that every couple should be a couple like they are.. she now realized how wrong she was about damn everthing..it was really a tough time for her to cope up with everything.. she doesn't wanted to live anymore she wanted to die.. but she stayed only because of her family her chottey who needs her..

She was still trying hard really hard to forget that bloody person who even don't deserve to present be even in her memory now.. begging to god to help her forget that part of her life so she can move ahead..waiting for some kind of magic..

Khushi was really now scared it ws 2am and there was no sigh of him.. Getting impatient she picked up her cell umpteenth time to call him again..that was when she heard the click of door and she turned immediately and saw her husband Arnav Singh Raizada.. She rushed to him hugged him tightly..sobbing..

He hugged her back smiling that he has such a pretty wife.. He feel so lucky the luckiest man on earth having a wife life Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada..who care n love him so much..sometimes he feel he dnt deserve her..Coming to her sense and now relaxed khushi realized he was all wet water dripping from his head to toe..she spoke-U r wet..!! how.. u have car then'..making a confused face..

Arnav- vo I ummm'he took out a packet from his pocket..i bought u these bangles..i remember u said in morning that u need matching bangles for ur new saree I gifted u..

She was now confounded whether she should be angry or love that he cared so much..she just took the packet from him n went towards closet n took out his towel n gave him go and change I am going to kitchen to get coffee and something to eat. in a very normal tone..he just silently took towel from her n smiled at her n went to bathroom..

After 15mins she came with a tray in her hands. She sat down next to him on recliner. He stared at her for few seconds she still looked scared..she had once told him that her parents died in car accident and that day also it was raining heavily..

and then he hugged her from side and kissed her on her head..i love u Khushi..he said and trying to calm her down..

Khushi-if u love me then don't do silly things n be at home on time..no..from now u will not go out when the weather will b like this..its too bad outside..and i.. tears welled up in her eyes but she controlled and hold them back..closed her eyes and hugged him back tighly..but she was still shivering..

Arnav- ok..as u say..i'll stay with u.. happy..?

Khushi nodded and smiled at him..he kissed her on cheeks and she kissed him back..they drank coffee and went to bed..she was turning off the lamp when her phone beeped..

She read the message and she smiled widely still looking at her cell..arnav was observing her she looked happy so happy.. She replied to the text and kept her cell back at side table..

Arnav- who was it?

Khushi- huh.. umm no no one..

Arnav- u hiding something..tell me who was it.. I saw u also replied back..who was it?

Khushi- uumm yea a friend..a very good frnd of mine..now go to sleep'

To avoid further questions she tucked her inside the duvet and said m so sleepy goodnight..

Not giving more attention to dat text he too slipped inside the duvet and kissed her caressed her cheek n muttered pagal and then fell asleep..

Precap-

jiji he is coming jiji..m so happy..i was missing him so much.

pleaseee let me know should i continue or not..i have written alot bt thought to post this much first and see wat response i get.. sorry if i bored u..or wasted ur precious time..apologies..

would really love to know ur response..,please comment with all ur suggestions advice..anything..good or bad.. share ur views.. so should i continue or not??

if anyone want pm for future updates add me as buddy..:)
read my other ff also if interested...here is the link
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tanvia thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful...i loved it...it really sound like them...
do continue soon...
omg first to comment...:D
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amazing...👏👏👏
interesting...⭐️
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks alot guys.. i ws so nervous abt the response had my finger crossed..now m so happy.. i dnt knw how to how to post reply individually otherwise i would hv done that..

Edited by princessritz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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When I Saw the PM I was jumping with joy but then saw the other then relised tht i was to late somene must of already commented and got upset but alwell. Yay i loved it so much i wonder what going to happen nexts? who is the guy or girl
Thanks for making it out for me!!
this was just beautiful and lovely
do continue soon i cant wait to read more
please do PM me again for this.
feel sorry for anjail. hope tht person (if it is a guy) becomes her life and be lovely to her.
LOTS AND LOTS OF
LOVE
FROM
Aaliya 😛😛😛😛😛
oh i forgot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting, please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CheekyArshiLove

When I Saw the PM I was jumping with joy but then saw the other then relised tht i was to late somene must of already commented and got upset but alwell. Yay i loved it so much i wonder what going to happen nexts? who is the guy or girl

Thanks for making it out for me!!
this was just beautiful and lovely
do continue soon i cant wait to read more
please do PM me again for this.
feel sorry for anjail. hope tht person (if it is a guy) becomes her life and be lovely to her.
LOTS AND LOTS OF
LOVE
FROM
Aaliya 😛😛😛😛😛
oh i forgot...
C
O
N
T
I
N
U
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S
O
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thankyou sweetheart..n yea i ws too hoping that i'l see ur comment at first bt its ok..neva mind..m so overwhelmed with the rersponse..i dint expected this..within such a short time..m so happy that u loved it..yea i'l update soon..n yea d one who is coming is a guy..u got it right hann..loves yuhhh...😃TongueTongue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanvia

it was beautiful...i loved it...it really sound like them...

do continue soon...
omg first to comment...:D

glad that u liked it..n yea u first to comment on my ever first post..:) congo to both of us..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one..as first attempt its really good...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats very well written!!! I really like it... honestly :)
do continue i'm sure you have something good in mind :)
P.s: how did you get the hyperlink?

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