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Thanks to everyone for ur love nad sport dear freinds.All tomatoes and egg all welcome for late update.Seriously i really held with work,nobody beleive ke i write this part before 1 month but dont get time to post it.Further any delay here is the update

PART-10

She smiled at his hubby gestures.They both get distrubed by cell ring.Maan get irritated by phone he is going to cut the call in anger when he see caller name.He decided to attend the call.

Geet is make baby faces.She got an idea,she smile naughtly.She go and stand in front of maan.She first kiss him on his forehead.Maan just surprised by her act.

She nautily kissed his nose making it a noise kiss.Maan started losing his control,he don't even lisen to the caller what he saying.Maan cut the call.

Geet smile winningly at effect she has on her Maan.Geet further kiss his eyes,maan closed his eyes in anticiptation.Maan moaned her name demanding for more.

She swetly peck him on his both cheeks but slowly.She just brush her lips with maan but not kiss him.She torchering him by taking her own sweet time to complete her task.She kiss him on his jaw.
Maan couldnot take it more he capture her lips immediately.They kissed passionately.Maan becoming more and more wild.But alas his phone again start ringing.

Geet again do shocking think for maan,she take switch the buttton of adending call and take near to maan's ear.

Person:HELLO?

Maan shocked he break the kiss and looked angryly at his JAAN like saying i will not left u.U have to be punished.She try to control her muffel seeing maan's face.

Person:Hello hello?

Maan:Ji hai boleya.

Person;--------

Maan:Theek hai me abi ata ho.

Maan cut the call.

Maan:Jaan abi muje jana hai ek jarooori kaam a gaya hai.

Geet:Theek hai par jaldi a jayega.

Maan:Ye bi koi kehne ki baat hai jitni jaldi kaam katam ho jayega me apni PARI ke pass a jaoga.

Geet:Maan ek baat bataeya ke apko itne naam sujte kaha se hai?

Maan:Tum se.

She blushed and hide herself in his chest.Oh she look so cute just like a PARI.Maan parted themselfs and kissed her MANGAL SUTRA.She smiled

This is not any odinary MANGAL SUTRA.Maan designed it by himself.It have maanet together.In center their is written MG,this MG attached with black thread.Ye jalkata tha ke vo dono ek saath paroye[attached] hua hai,humesha ek dosre ke saath rahege koi chah kar bi unhe alag nahi kar sakta.

She take his right hand in her both hands,and kissed the center of heavy silver chain,with her ouertmost love.Their is MAANEET written in the center.Maan intentionaly wear it on his wrist to significance that they are together till this heart is beating.

Maan leaves with it and geet goes to EKAM room.She again started telling the story to ekam.

*********FLASHBACK*******

Vikram-Dad agar mere aur geet ke beech koi aya to uska me sir dhad se alag kar duga.

Brij-Acha hai bete asa hi karna.

Vikram-Dad ap to serious hi le gaye mene to majak kia tha. [Lol]

Next Day

Mk again with his student to pataofy geet but with the same line.they see geet coming and he start his class.

MK:Abrahim linkam says If friendship is ur weakest point then u r strongest person in the world.

Geet come and see him teaching.

Geet:Excuse me i can talk with u few minutes[in one go]

MK dont understand a single word he ask shocked

Mk:Hai?

Geet:I means ke kya me apke 2 minute le sakte ho muje apse kuch baat karni thi.

Mk:Kyu nahi ji.

Geet:Wase kya ap yaha professor lage hue hai?

Mk;Ohh nahi ji shayad ye specticles dekh kar apko asa laga hoga ja ye kitab dekh kar.Hum abi game guma dete hai.

Mk give book to his soo called students and wear goggles.

Geet:Wase mane apko kal bi dekha tha ap wahi lesson pada rahe the aur ajj bi wahi.

Romeo[speak in his mouth]:Jo do akshar isne sekhe hai wahi wahi padayega.

Geet:Excuse me?

Mk;Vo kuch nahi ji wo darsal ye bahot hi kamjoor bache hai to ishe wahi bate bar bar samjani padti hai.

Romeo[thought]:Ye apne chakar me humari reputation ki dajiya uda raha hai:(

Mk:Chaleya bahar chalte hai.

They come out.

Romeo:Low ji bhabi ne bula kya leya sala hume hi bool raha hai.[hahaha]

Geet:Darsal me ye kehna chahti thi ke ap in gareeb bacho ko pada kar bahot hi acha kaam kar rahe hai.

Mk;Ache bure ka toh muje pata nahi ji,muje toh sirf itna pata hai ke agar vo pad likh jayege toh acha kaam karege,apne liya khud kama kar khayege.

Geet:Ap aur MSK ji ne ye bahot acha socha.

Mk[shocked]:MSK?

Geet:Me unse kal mili thi,vo darasal kal muje jaldi ghar jana tha aur meri gaddi karab ho gai to muje msk ji ne lift de di,toh rasme me unho ne muje bataya ke ap dono itni ache dost hai aur pehle MSK apko padate hai phir ap in gareeb bacho ko.

While in geet Mk getting angry with msk.

Mk:Wase ji usne humari dosti ke bare me toh apko sab kuch bata diya par PINkY ke bare me kuch nahi bataya?

Geet:Kon pinky?

Mk;Moge wali apne MSK di SAHELI

Geet:SAHELI u mean Girlfriend?[geet asked shockedly]

Mk:Hain ji sare collage ko un dono ke bare me pata hai.

Geet felt sad after liscening it,her thoughts train start but broken by mk voice

Mk:Vo dono toh ji ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai ji ke vo toh kehte hai ke kab unki padai katam ho aur vo dono shadi kar le.[bechara msk]

Geet:Hmm but muje toh msk ne is bare me kuch nahi bataya.

Mk:Vo lagta hai sharma gaya hoga bechara.

Mk:Wase apko pata hai in dono ki jodi bilkul Pataka hai ji.

Geet:Pataka?

Mk:Ah means Heer Ranjha type.

Geet:Oh heer ranjha type.

Mk:Are vodekho vo raha MSk chalo ussi se baat karte hai.
HereMSK sitting with tej and other friends.
MSK:Dekhaya apna kamal sari baji hi palat di humne.Manna padega ustad ji ko.
Tej:Bhai ji agar us MK ne kuch aur acha kar diya?
MSK:Tu kabi kuch acha nahi bol sakta..
MSK see MK anf geet coming towards them.
Precap:

MSK:Pinky kon pinky?

Now plz plz give me ur feedback and press the like button.If i live upto ur expectation or not.Ur all comment r realy means to me😛.And will continue soon as possible😆
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg..MK ne MSK ko fasa diya..😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update👏
Loved maaneet moment😳
Mk-geet conversation hilarious😆😆
Poor MSK ..😆
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
naughty geet hehe
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally, kaha gayab thi?

Awesome as always but small part. Loved it.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one ...loved it...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 10
lovely part...
present was so lovely...
past
MK and MSK sigh...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

Thanks nahtani for ur precious comment dear😛

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