THE STORY OF CUMBACK OF KRIA

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krias come back story


kriya will in a state of saadness after he leave rey . always sit alone and thinking. her mom noticed this and she also felt sad and she say about her life to kriya . kriyas mom was also a dancer and she enjoyed her life very much
she enjoy her life and she found someone who really cares her and she love him very much but he cheated her and when she is pregnant and she alone take care of kriya .thats why she doesnt want kriya to dance and fall in love she thinks the things come same in kriyas life too after hearing this kriya say sorry and wanted to know her fathers name but kriyas mom dont say that
on the next day when they go for shopping then kriyas mom met an accident and she say that kriyas father live in mumbai and he is married now and his name is rai... her mom died kria after funeral went to mumbai in search of her father
so kria again come to st louis college all wonder to see kria.rey get shocked kria wants to tell everything to rey but she knows that tani and rey are now in a relationship so she continued her rudeness towards rey and also she cant break her mothers promise. kria started searching for her father .

she firstly go to the college where her mom studied and ask about her moms friend and she got one of her moms friends address.when she go to that house she found that they shift to states years ago. kria lost all hope.rey in angry and also in love with kria wanted kria jealosy.so he always be with taani and she thinks that he really love her.kria seeing this become very hurt.she go to the secret place where rey and kria met and started crying.swayam see this and console her sharon see this and started doubting on kria and swayam.
next day

rey behaves very rudely toward kria .swayam notice this and he talk with rey but he doesnt change his behaviour .another programme come in college and one more couple dance .everyone want swayam sharon but swayam say for kria rey. both not accepted.rey accepted but kria on her promise with her mom not say yes .rey again become ery angry and he decided to dance with taani.

kria behaves very happy infront of everyone and she go to the step(secret place) and cried and say dad where are you mom made me a promise that i cant dance until i find u .dad where are u... cried.swayam see this and say kria to tell everything and kria tell all incidents that moms promise his father and everything. swayam console her and go to tell everything to rey.kria stop him and say dont tell anything to rey tujhe meri kasam so swayam dont tell anything.kria tell that rey is happy with taani and dont make them hurt.



Next Day

kria on road coincide with a women and her book fall down her moms photo too falls she notice that and say is it smriti gay.kria says yes she is my mom do you know her.then women says she is my best friend .kria says my mom died two weeks before .women sadly ohhh thats so sad
lady ask about her father kria said thats what i want to ask u aunty.i know mom had an affair in her college do you know something about that.then she says ya i know they both loved very much.may be fate dont give a chance.kria sad. lady says i dont know his full name but we call him rai. kriya:-you have any adress then lady says no ya i have phone number and she gave it kria tried no reply she return to house and call again he took phone and say hello kria heard that crying kria:-hello
rai:-ya who r u
kria:-do you know me
rai:-no who r u
kria:-but iam sure u know my mom
rai:-hey who r u
kria:-smiriti gay she is my mom
rai:-get shocked
kria:-i want to meet u
kria say the time and place .its night kria waiting for him a car comes and someone come out fom the car and walk toward kria. kria cant see him
kria:.rai
rai:-smiriti...
kria:-oh now you remember that name. where are you mr till now ahh you cheated the lady who love you the most she left her whole family just for your love and when she got pregnant the time she want you the most you left her.
rai:-so you...
kria :-haaa i kria ..kria ghai daughter of smriti ghai and you... no iam not your daughter iam the daughter of my mom alone i dont consider you as my father and you are not deserving it
rai:-that i...
kria:-my mom doesnt tell anything about you to me because she loves you that much she dont to create any problem in your life and she never comes to your life anymore
rai:-smriti wher is smriti i want to meet her
kria:-no you cant meet her u cant meet her
rai:-why
kria:-because she is not anymore in the world she left me alone
rai:-what smriti died my smriti died
kria:-your smriti dont tell my moms name
rai:-beti
rai:-no you are not my father u cheated my mom no
then a car go through there from the light of car kria see him and say you...
kria:-raiprakash you you are my father but...
raiprakash:-ha iam your father but actually i dont cheat her plzzz hear me .then he says his story to kria(a story similar to abhishek bachan and vidya balan in film paa) they loved each other...
kria cried a lot and say that but you married again and live happily then he said iam really so helpless in that time i search a lot for smriti but i cant find her then kria says when sharon comes to know about this then what will you do ha. he shocked and say you know her kria replied me and sharon studied in one college and we know each other then he says plzzz dont tell her anything about this she hurt a lot plzzz
kria:-you can see your one daughtrs pain and you dont look other daughters pain kria goes he cried

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Though i'm swaron fan
i liked kriyansh too. Hope Cv's bhi aisa hi kuch sense use karke kriya ki story aage badhaye. 😊
missing old D3. 😒
but becoz of u all IF writers we can enjoy with imagination of kriya.
Thanks.
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Originally posted by: arsha.kriyaansh

krias come back story



kriya will in a state of saadness after he leave rey . always sit alone and thinking. her mom noticed this and she also felt sad and she say about her life to kriya . kriyas mom was also a dancer and she enjoyed her life very much
she enjoy her life and she found someone who really cares her and she love him very much but he cheated her and when she is pregnant and she alone take care of kriya .thats why she doesnt want kriya to dance and fall in love she thinks the things come same in kriyas life too after hearing this kriya say sorry and wanted to know her fathers name but kriyas mom dont say that
on the next day when they go for shopping then kriyas mom met an accident and she say that kriyas father live in mumbai and he is married now and his name is rai... her mom died kria after funeral went to mumbai in search of her father
so kria again come to st louis college all wonder to see kria.rey get shocked kria wants to tell everything to rey but she knows that tani and rey are now in a relationship so she continued her rudeness towards rey and also she cant break her mothers promise. kria started searching for her father .

she firstly go to the college where her mom studied and ask about her moms friend and she got one of her moms friends address.when she go to that house she found that they shift to states years ago. kria lost all hope.rey in angry and also in love with kria wanted kria jealosy.so he always be with taani and she thinks that he really love her.kria seeing this become very hurt.she go to the secret place where rey and kria met and started crying.swayam see this and console her sharon see this and started doubting on kria and swayam.
next day

rey behaves very rudely toward kria .swayam notice this and he talk with rey but he doesnt change his behaviour .another programme come in college and one more couple dance .everyone want swayam sharon but swayam say for kria rey. both not accepted.rey accepted but kria on her promise with her mom not say yes .rey again become ery angry and he decided to dance with taani.

kria behaves very happy infront of everyone and she go to the step(secret place) and cried and say dad where are you mom made me a promise that i cant dance until i find u .dad where are u... cried.swayam see this and say kria to tell everything and kria tell all incidents that moms promise his father and everything. swayam console her and go to tell everything to rey.kria stop him and say dont tell anything to rey tujhe meri kasam so swayam dont tell anything.kria tell that rey is happy with taani and dont make them hurt.



Next Day

kria on road coincide with a women and her book fall down her moms photo too falls she notice that and say is it smriti gay.kria says yes she is my mom do you know her.then women says she is my best friend .kria says my mom died two weeks before .women sadly ohhh thats so sad
lady ask about her father kria said thats what i want to ask u aunty.i know mom had an affair in her college do you know something about that.then she says ya i know they both loved very much.may be fate dont give a chance.kria sad. lady says i dont know his full name but we call him rai. kriya:-you have any adress then lady says no ya i have phone number and she gave it kria tried no reply she return to house and call again he took phone and say hello kria heard that crying kria:-hello
rai:-ya who r u
kria:-do you know me
rai:-no who r u
kria:-but iam sure u know my mom
rai:-hey who r u
kria:-smiriti gay she is my mom
rai:-get shocked
kria:-i want to meet u
kria say the time and place .its night kria waiting for him a car comes and someone come out fom the car and walk toward kria. kria cant see him
kria:.rai
rai:-smiriti...
kria:-oh now you remember that name. where are you mr till now ahh you cheated the lady who love you the most she left her whole family just for your love and when she got pregnant the time she want you the most you left her.
rai:-so you...
kria :-haaa i kria ..kria ghai daughter of smriti ghai and you... no iam not your daughter iam the daughter of my mom alone i dont consider you as my father and you are not deserving it
rai:-that i...
kria:-my mom doesnt tell anything about you to me because she loves you that much she dont to create any problem in your life and she never comes to your life anymore
rai:-smriti wher is smriti i want to meet her
kria:-no you cant meet her u cant meet her
rai:-why
kria:-because she is not anymore in the world she left me alone
rai:-what smriti died my smriti died
kria:-your smriti dont tell my moms name
rai:-beti
rai:-no you are not my father u cheated my mom no
then a car go through there from the light of car kria see him and say you...
kria:-raiprakash you you are my father but...
raiprakash:-ha iam your father but actually i dont cheat her plzzz hear me .then he says his story to kria(a story similar to abhishek bachan and vidya balan in film paa) they loved each other...
kria cried a lot and say that but you married again and live happily then he said iam really so helpless in that time i search a lot for smriti but i cant find her then kria says when sharon comes to know about this then what will you do ha. he shocked and say you know her kria replied me and sharon studied in one college and we know each other then he says plzzz dont tell her anything about this she hurt a lot plzzz
kria:-you can see your one daughtrs pain and you dont look other daughters pain kria goes he cried

even i had thought about kria's mom's death and then kria's return
Edited by dhaakshu - 13 years ago
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