Childhood Crush of Raizadas Pt 7 Pg 52 *COMPLETED* - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
hmmm... nice, interesting and cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
its cute
continue plzzz 😊
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Hey guys first of all thanks a lot for all your beautiful comments. That was unexpected to have so many comments. It really encouraged me so much to write more. I really didn't expected that you all will like it so much. So here you go with an update. Well well well chamkili- our Khushi is not yet up in school. But I know you all want her great entry. I hope you all will enjoy this one too like the previous post. And guys please don't copy updates to other sites.

The teacher began her class. She said everyone to open their books. It was an English class. Some students were opening their books and some were taking it out of their bags. Payal was sitting next to Aakash who was in other row. Arnav was on his right side sharing the same bench. And Payal was on the next row which was Aakash's right. As she was taking out her book it fell on the ground. Aakash picked it up and gave her. She smiled and replied.

Payal: "Than u" she smiled a little.

Arnav on the other hand started irking around Aakash. He pulled him by his shirt.

Arnav: "Aakash why don't you do your work?" he murmured in Aakash's ear. It was audible enough only to him and not to anyone else.

Aakash: "Bhai she needs help." he says him in a slow voice.

Arnav: "Okay but don't talk to her." he ordered him.

Aakash: "Why?" he asked him innocently.

Arnav: "Because girls cry a lot." he replied with disgust and stopped without saying anything furthur or giving any explanation.

Aakash was silent for a while and he looked back at Payal. Trying to see the signs of crying but she was not. She gave him a smile. He smiled back. Arnav on the other hand saw this thing going on between Aakash and Payal. As he was in school he had to behave otherwise he knew he would be punished. But he was more shocked to see both of them.

The whole day classes went on and after two hours of study their class was over as it was their first day. All the students were picking up their bags and books are were hurriedly running out eager to go home. Arnav was putting up his books in his bag slowly arranging them in the order but Aakash had a hurry to go home.

Aakash: "Bhai' come on we have to go home. Driver is waiting. I'm hungry." he was urging him to hurry up.

Arnav: "So what driver can wait and so can your hunger. Let me arrange my books." he was slowly putting up his books. Two more books were left. Aakash had no patience for this as he was excited to go back home and play. He knew that Arnav wouldn't hurry up. He turned behind and saw Payal arranging her bag too. He gave her a smile and waved at her. Arnav saw this and he hurriedly shoved up his remaining books in the bag which messed up the neatly arranged books and zipped up his bag.

Arnav: "Come on Aakash we are getting late." he hurriedly held Aakash's wrist and ran away from their taking him away with him as if he was running away with a girl. He ran outside the class with his bag hanging on one shoulder and lunch box in one hand holding Aakash's wrist with the other.


Even Anjali reached at the car. She was just a year older and was in 1st standard.

Soon they reached home. Aakash jumped up on a sofa and was playing it hard where as Arnav went up in his room to play his new play station. He was so excited as he was playing a boxing game. His mom bought up his food in his room. No one else in the family was allowed to enter in his room except his mom. Not even his DI or Aakash. Just his mom.


The day passed soon. Arnav was playing his play station whole day. As he came down for dinner he saw his dad working on his laptop and talking to himself. He walked up to his dad.


Arnav: "Papa do you see ghosts?" he asked in low and cute boy voice. He was looking so innocent when he asked his dad about it.

Dad: "No beta why?" he questioned back.

Arnav: "Okay but if you will speak in normal tone then mom cannot hear you. She is at dinning table." he said him.

Dad: "What? But I'm not talking to your mom." he said.

Arnav: "Then are you talking to yourself?" he asked again.

Dad: "No beta." at first his dad dint understood and then suddenly he laughed out loud.

Dad: "I'm talking on phone dear." he explained him.

Arnav: "But there is no phone in your hand." he said cutely.

Dad: "See this is bluetooth. After putting this you don't need to be always on phone." he showed him the bluetooth. He admired it with tiny eyes glaring at it deeply that how can a tiny device act like phone.

Arnav: "Wow''.Dad can I also have this?" he asked pleasingly.

Dad: "But whom will you call dear?" he asked laughing.

Arnav was lost in deep thought as to whom will he call?

Arnav: "Okay Dad when I will grow up then can you bring me one?" he asked again making a requesting face.

Dad: "Ya sure beta and by the time you will grow up you can buy it too when you will start earning." he explained him.

Arnav: "Okay."

They all had dinner and went to sleep.

Precap:

Next day of school.

Aakash cries a lot and Arnav stares him.

Our the great chamkili enters.

The beginning of ArShi fight from childhood itself.



Okay guys how was this update? Low and Dull?

Please leave your precious comments.

I would love to know how you feel after reading this?

And also if you have any suggestions.

Plz ignore the mistakes.

Edited by Rosyln419 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
its really good update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
thnx for the quick update
it was sweet
soon after Arnav ...his very famous 'Bluetooth' too makes an entry ...wow!!
waiting for entry of khushi
n wondering wht makes akash cry as said for precap

update soon
n if u do then plzzz PM me
thnx 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Really really gud
just loved it
plz update next part soon
Quite excited for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: natashaa46

thnx for the quick update

it was sweet
soon after Arnav ...his very famous 'Bluetooth' too makes an entry ...wow!!
waiting for entry of khushi
n wondering wht makes akash cry as said for precap

update soon
n if u do then plzzz PM me
thnx 😊


Thanks a lot for liking it.
Add me to buddy list for PMs of Updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Hehehe. I loved the cutness of our great ASR sho shweet !!! I loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
when u uptade can u pm me please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Awww Arnie baby wants a bt nd taking away Akash grumpy cutie pie
cant wait for K's entry
update soon
thnx 4 pm

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