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Posted: 12 years ago
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its my first attempt i hope u like it .pr is really boring now so decided to write this read and enjoy.

this is a story on arjun purvi of pavitra rishta
purvi
a sweet and simple yet beautiful girl.dhe is so beautiful that any guy can fall for her.she even looks charming in a simple salwar kameez.
arjun
a handsome guy who has fallen in love with purvi
archana,manav,savita,sachu,sulo all are same as shown in pr
story starts from when arjun purvi has confessed thier love and purvi gets to know about arjun"s engagement and is hiding her love for ovi
but arjun doesn't love ovi and he wants to tell the truth to everyone.
place:arjun's bedroom
arjun: i can't bear it now.i will tell the truth to ovi.
and he called purvi
purvi unwillingly took the phone
purvi:yes sir,
arjun:purvi mai tumse kuch jaroori baat karna chahta hun plz phone mat katna
purvi:ohh i see,sir chinta mat kariye kaal ki meeting ke liye maine sare arrangements kar diye hai
arjun:purvi,(he was tryin to say that he will tell the truth to ovi but changed)kal tumhari sisters ka b'day hai aur unkeb liye
bahut special gift laya hun khaskar ovi ke liye
purvi:kaisa gift sir
arjun:wo to tum kal hi dekh lena and disconnected the phone
arjun:kal mere liye sabse khass din hai .
next day
place:deshmukh house
archana:(with a gift )happy birthday ovi
ovi:😑and threwed the gift
archana:
archana:(with another gift)happy birthday tej
tej turned back tej:😊😊thank u aai
archana was happy to hear aai from teju
tej bowed down for blessings from archana
archana:god bless u my child😊😊😊😊😊😊
tej;😊😊😊😊thank u aai
archana was thinking that both are the daughters of manav but both are opposite
manav was seeing all this and was happy for tej's behaviour
tej:aai plz can u bake a cake for me
archana:haa tej isme puchne ki kya baat hai abhi banati hun😊😊😊😊
tej;thank u aai app bohot achi ho😊😊😊😊😊
archana went to kitchen
ovi:tej'kya hua tujhe tu uss aurat ko aai bol rahi hai,i mean jisse hum itni nafrat karte hai usse tu itne acche se baat kar rahi hai
tej:ovi tujhe pata hai baba hame kehte the ki kabhi kabhi jaise log dikhte hai waise hote nahi hai
ovi;haa par iska uss aurat se kya kaam
tej:maine unki ankho me sacchayi dekhi hai ki woh galat nahi hai par kisi karan humse kuch chipha rahi hai aur wo mai pata lagayungi.sach ovi wo bahut acchi hai😊😊
ovi:mujhe nahi lagta .wo aurat sirf paise se matlab rakhti haiπŸ˜•πŸ˜•
precap:ovi and tej are cutting the cake. archana reaches there tej goes and hugs her and manav smiles😊😊😊.ovi,savita and sachu are giving an angry look suddenly ovi goes there and starts shouting at archana.😑😑😑😑
hope u will like it.plz do comment and critisize and tell if i should continue or notπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
I liked itπŸ˜›
Liked the phone call between Arjun and Purvi!
Please continue.. want to know what gift will Arjun give OviπŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it was damn awsum πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
want more of our ARVI
plzzz do cntinue soon πŸ‘πŸΌ
vil wait fr it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue but please translate the Hindi into English for non-Hindi speakers. thumbs up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was good...want to c more of arvi..plz do update as soon as possible..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx for the comtments.here goes my next part hope u like it
PLACE deshmukh house
tej:yes ovi but i have seen love for us and baba in her eyes
ovi:i don't aggree i think the best way for their happiness is their divorce ovi gets a call and goes away
tej(thinking):u haven't seen ovi but i have seen her eyes which tells the truth that she isn't wrong
PLACE shopping mall
archana is buying dresses for ovi tej and she buys some veru beautiful dresses
archana(to salesman):plz pack it dada
salesman:yes mam,(looking at the dresses)wow these are very beautiful dresses mam for whom they are???
archana:for my daughters
salesman:i am sure they will really like their mother's choice
archana (thinking):i hope they like it
PLACE deshmukh house
archana goes to tej ovi's room to give them the the dresses but it was empty she comes out and finds tej i n the kitchen
archana:tej'what are u doing here
teju:i am hungry aai and no one was there so i was looking for some food to eat
archana:go to ur room tej i will make something for u and take these dresses
tej opened the packet
tej:wow aai it's so pretty i wanted it from 2 years oh my god i am so happy and she hugs archana
manav was passing by and he was happy seeing her daughter and archana so happy with each other😊😊😊😊
tej:aai u also have come to the birthday party
archana:me...no ovi will never aggree with this
tej:am i not ur daughter u will do as i say
archana:ok
PLACE party hall
guests were present and cake was ready ovi and tej went near the cake
archana was coming in from the main entrance purvi was already present there
tej sees archana and goes to her and hugs her
ovi sees these ans become😑😑😑she startsshouting at archana
ovi:how dare u come here who called u here han tell me who called u here😑😑😑
archana was trying to tell somthing but
tej:i called her
ovi:tej u...u are trusting this women she...
and ovi was trying to slap archana when tej stopped her
tej:behave in ur limits ovi
ovi:limits...what limits tej...what limits
tej(in a quiet voice):ovi keep queit now everybody is watching i will tell u later
and finally the cake was cut with a 😊 face of tej and a 😑 face of ovi
PLACE arjun's house
arjun:dad today i am going to give a very good gift of her life
DK:i know what u mean now go fast u r late
arjun:yes dad
precap:arjun is entering the hall with a small box in hands ovi isπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒand hugd arjun but he stops her ovi is shocked😲😲😲
I HOPE U WILL LIKE IT PLZ TO DO COMMENT AND CRITISIZE.WE WILL GET TO KNOW ABOUT ARJUN'S GIFT I THE NEXT PART...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: purethought

I liked itπŸ˜›

Liked the phone call between Arjun and Purvi!
Please continue.. want to know what gift will Arjun give OviπŸ˜†

FOR THIS U HAVE TO WAIT FOR MY NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i realy lyk ur writeupπŸ‘πŸ‘
plzz update d nxt part soon
vil b waitin fr it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow really nice😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really liked it...
plzz update soon..
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