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brilliant update tanzie!!! 👏 Terrific portrayal of emotions...👏 the way u presented the realistic life,mixed wth their beautiful, hopeful world along wth the harsh nd cruel reality was brilliant!!! 👍🏼 ⭐️
So pia is expecting!! Wow!! You added mandy here?!!! 😆 That was great!! 😉 And being a doctor herself stil,pia didnt undrstud!!! But it was soo sad dat be4 she cud tel abhay the gud news,the harsh world came inbtw again!! 😔 I just hope nthng happens to abhay,ya i knw the world by whch he is surrounded wth nthng gud can b expected bt atleast nt so soon!! Just hope they cud share the newfound happiness wth eachothr nd enjoy be4 sumthng terrible happens!!!
i wonder wat abhay's boss will do,wen he gets to know abt abhiya!!! Mayb he will leave abhay or the opposite mayb!!! Sigh..Well lets see...
And ya i loved the part where abhay took care of pia n hmself,fed her the cake! The car part,where abhay laughed carelessly showing hs dimples...was just lovely n ur way of writing it made it even more beautiful!!! ⭐️
by the variation of hs touch alone,pia undrstud at once dat sumthng ws wrng wth abhay..and i soo loved dis part !!😳 It shows the depth of her love for abhay!!
and the receptionist scremed!! Wonder wat happnd!! Bt i guess,sum1 hit pia,mayb abhay's boss(pia's real fathr) or mayb sum1 frm hs gang!! 😕but wat's wth abhay's surname? And Wats d truth?!! 😕 Waiting for the mystery to unfold...
awaiting the next part and thanx for the pm.. 😳
and ya,tanzie everytime i think of telling u,bt bola r hoye othe na,dat my exams r over nw...and Though i am still busy wth other works,bt ryt nw,i am also hvng my holidays ,nd dat is the reason dat i hav dared to start working on so many ff's at the same time!! 😆 though i hv no idea wen wil i updat ..!! 😆
a/w..waiting for ur updat!! And me too hope ur new job givs u enough time to enjoy ur persnl life!!! 😊 do take care..🤗
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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