New FF:Perfect Betrayal.. Chapter_10 updated pg 25 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
I'll surely keep reading...U keep Updating !!! ASAP 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have yet to read some of the prev chap., will read this weekend
keep up the gud work 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
looking forward for next chapter! this is better than previous ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
well done yaar...
keep it up...
it's really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next morning as usual always late, bt detrmined nd ofcourse beautiful like always,nd dress up in purple frock,with lite blue ribbin on outline,with purple jwellery bt decent lite purple nd ferozi make up,nd the most important opened silky hairs,she came out nd came to know tht raghav has nt cm out of hz room nd has refusd to take breakfast,ramu kaka told hr abt hz futile atempts bt still she forced him to bring the breakfast tray,tht she 'll take hz bfast to hm.She went inside nd found the entire room totaly mess,nd ya the broken vase telling hr tht her fathom was right,the room was telling hr tht he hv not sleep the whole night,she saw hm sitng on the window nd was gazng outside,she cleard hr throat for beckoned him,he lukd at hr bt then again startd lukng out of the window,she spoke in a very lovely tone wd a wide smile:GD MRNING...
No response...
She kept the tray on the table nd went to him,kept hr both hands on hr waist,was gvng a teachr expressions,she started peeping out of the window nd found the beautiful panorama of the lake which was shining in the sunlight,bt she pretnded to b unknown,raghav lukd at hr,she lukd at him from the corner of hr eye nd said,arey!Yeh kya dekh rahey ho,mujhe laga, ya to bahar malika sherawat ki movie chal rhi hai,ya phr khud m.s hai,par ye kia?Yeh b koi dekhne ki cheez hai,she thn brust into laugh,bt raghav even didnt passed a single smile,she grinned 'bad joke!' Nd sat infront of him on the window,mm...Ok, tumhara mood theek krne k lie,mein tumhe joke sunati hun,he folded hr hands nd took a deep breath wdout lookng at hr.
she smirk ok,koi bat nahi,phir kbhi.
he was luking stunning in hz black silk night shirt,hz hairs were on hz forehead,hz broad chest was visible 4m hz shirt,his attitudes were making him more attractive,she lost hr senses nd gazing him continously,as she luks at hz lips,hr throat went dry,she wanted to fulfil hr dream may b, tht she have seen countles times,bt only she knew how she was controling hrself,will she evr gt the chance to kiss his soft juicy lips,he lukd at hr cause may b he was waiting for hr more tries to make him smile,she lost in hz almond ocean of eyes,she never wanted to broke this eye lock,she came back to his senses when she heard the pecks of sparrows on the upper glas window,bt she stil didnt broke the eyelock,she wanted to hide hr feelings she again played a trick to make him smile,she smiled widely,nd beckond at hz lips nd said agai,raghav who was already amused to saw in hr shiny black eyes,felt a pinch in hz heart nd focusd on hr words "agae",kaha na agae,wo pyari si cute si,agai,bs ek mere lie, agai,agai na wahi."kya?" Escaped 4m raghav's mouth.
J:"SMILE!!"
Raghav closed his eyes nd smiled widely,nd shook hz head on hr infantile behaviour,bt actualy the smile didnt came coz of the trick,it only came to saw jhanvi's beautiful,cheeky smile.
J:yes!She joy in happines,Hansa dia na,chalo ab jaldi se mood theek kar lo,nd hv sm bfast,chalo chalo,khane ko kbi intezaar nahi krwate.She hold hz hand 'knowingly' nd drag him to the sofa table.She was trying to read hz expresion on her evry action,nd felng succesful in hr tricks.
J:is ki kya zrurat hai jhanvi,mujhe bhuk nahi hai,
j:kaise nahi hai bhuk,ek bite khao gay to khud hi bhuk khul jaye gi,
she made hm sit nd feed hm from hr hand,chalo mun kholo,said jhanvi.
Raghav ate nd felt relax in hr company.
J:kaise bne hain? Meine ramu kaka se kaha tha,k tumhare lie aloo paratha bnayen,tumhe pasand aye?
J:han bht tasty hain,he stopd hr hand to feed hm,saying ab tum khao, mein khalunga.He said while eating,"Waise raat ko khana ziada tasty tha,shayad phir se ramukaka kisi new chef ko lay aye hain,bt ye cook pehle wale se better hai,ise rakh laite hain."While eating she chocked ahem..Ahm..,of hz coment
R:u ok?
J:drank water, han theek hun,
aftr bfast ramukaka came for tkng the dishes back,while they both were taking tea,
J:ramu kaka,kal jis chef ne diner bnaya tha,use permenantly rakh lain,
rk lukd at jhanvi,while she was bzy in enjoing tea,ignoring them.
Rk:ji par?
J:kya ?Wo salry ziada mang raha hai?Us se puch lo,
rk:raghav baba,ap khud hi puch lain,apke samne hi to bethi hain.He took the dishes nd left Raghav in cnfusion,he lukd at hr questiond?
R:jhanvi?
J:wd a wink,q mein acha khana nahi bna skti, they both brust into laugh.Acha ab mujhe ye btao kal raat tumhein hua kia tha?I mean aisa kya kia tumhare p.A ne?
R:jhanvi ek director apni movie k lie mere peeche para hua tha,bt i refusd to do tht movie.Prblm kuch nahe hai,bs wo movie india k bahar shoot honi hai,mere asistant ne dhoke se baqi movies k sath sath us movie k papers b mujh se sign krwa lie,agr ab main mana krta hun to,i will have to pay 5lakh as a fine.Lekin dukh is bat ka nahe tha,jst for sake of few rupees he deceived me.Mujhse kehta kitna paisa chahie tha usey mein deta.Bt..He..Raghav gt emotional.
J:calm down raghav,she kept hr hand on hz shouldr,
R:realy jhanvi,m extremly sorry abt my behaviour,meine tumse b kal raat itne gusa mein baat ki.
J:look Raghav,we should do not harm ourselves for those selfish people who even dnt care abt us,we only should live happy for those peoples who realy care for us,who realy need us,we should only smile,smile plz.Raghav smiled.
J:thts like a gud boy,hamesha aise he muskurate raho,qk apki ye muskurahat kisi ki zindagi hai,they lookd deep into each other eyes,i mean tumhare lakho fans kitna chahte hain tumhain,
r:or tum?
J:she gt uncomfortable,han?She lowered hr eyes said sheepishly,Han ofcourse,mein bhi.
Raghav hold hr hand nd said:thts gud,vrna i thought k tumhein shahrukh ziada pasand hai,they both laugh on hz smirk,knowing tht he said to ease the situation.
R:thanx,thanx 4evry thing,meine suna tha,aaj dekh b lia,kuch log waqai itne khaas hote hain k unke hone k ehsaas se hi,sari pareshania,mayusian khatam hojati hain or dil ko sukoon milta hai.Sach mein tum bht achi ho jhanvi,thnx alot,nd dinner waqai bht delicious tha thnx 4it also,
j:yeh acha hai,mujhe kehte ho frndship mein no thnx,no sory or khud dono ki ratt laga rkhi hai,she withdrew hr hnd 4m hz,she didnt wantd to b again lost in hz touch.Acha ab tum fresh hojao,dupehar k 11.Bje hain,or tum abi nahaye b nahi,mein abi ati hun,nd she left or may b escaped 4m hz fragrance,whch was making hr moand nd lost in hz world,While going to hr room,she blushd to think of his touch.Bt got disturbed coz of conclusion in hr mind between viraj nd Raghav.Mujhe kia hojata hai?Q mein uske samney ja kr wo sb kuch bhool jati hun jo meine plan kia hota hai,or aisi baatein krne lagti hun jo kbi sochi b nahi hoti.Main pichle 1saal se viraj ke sath relationship mein hun,par kbi uske pratee mere man me ye sb q nahi aya.She lukd hr self into dressing mirror,nd thought jhanvi tune sirf islie uska mood thk krne ki koshish ki na takey to us sey natasha k barey mein puch sake?Ya phr islie k tu usey udaas nahi dekh saki?She sat on the bed in frustration,saying,Uff,main pagal hojaungi.Oh God plz kisi tarha is natasha ka kuch pta chal jaye.Aftr some time,Hr thoughts interrupted by Raghav's voice,
R:Jhanvi,jhanvi kaha ho tum?
J:why he is calling me?She went out
R:jhanvi,wo maine abi doctor ko call kia tha,unhone kaha k tumhe check up k lie lay aun,abhi to tumhara plastr utra hai to check up zruri hai,if ur ready, so lets go.
J:ya sure,chalo..!
In hospital..Aftr check up doctor prescript some medicines for inner recovery,nd oil for foot massage.He also strictly advise hr not to run,nd not to walk alot.Aftr tkng the medicine 4m the pharmacy of hospital they drove home.On the way,jhanvi said to hrself agr raghav mere bichhaye hue jal mein phas rha hai to wo mujhe kbi jane nahi dayga,agr wo sch mein mujh mein interestd hoga to mujhe kbi job nahi krne dayga,wd this thought she threw an other card nd said:Raghav,stop the car,he stopd while askng kuch chahie yahan se?
J:wo yaha meri ek frnd rehti hai,usne mujhe job k bare mein btaya tha tht uske ofice mein vaccancy hai,raghav plz dont mind bt m realy gt tired of this unemployment,pichle 3,4months se mein useless bethi hun,bt now i thnk m f9 so i should start my search for gud job,nd waise b mein yunhi ziada din tumhare sath,tumhare ghar par nahi reh skti.She was abt to opnd the door of the car,bt he startd drivng the car again,
R:han jhanvi,ur right, bt uski koi zrurat nahe hai,i hv already arrange a job for u.U hv told me once tht u were asistant manager some where,so i hv find a gud job for u,acording to ur taste.Tum ek bar dekh lo,nd agr tumhe koi aitraaz ho to phr beshak tum apni frnd k ofice mein try kr skti ho,or jahan chahe reh sakti ho.
Hr eyes widened to hear ds,ise to koi faraq hi nahe para,she was lukng at him shockd nd sense less,ye To ghar se bhi nikal raha hai,nd job b dilwa raha hai.It means sab waste...Nothing affect on him?
Only one line she wanted to say at tht time
"HEY BHAGWAN MUJHE UTHALEY..."
Precap;
jhanvi:Natasha arora,tumhari kon thi raghav???
He was looking at hr in shock!!!
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

sirf promo se kaam nahi chalega.. Update karo 😈


haha..here is the chappi yar..sorry for late..love ur devil may emo...nd devil may avi😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu.sundas

very well written, keep it up...😃


thanx dear..plz keep reading..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne

Yaar Ayushi...galat baat huh...aise promo dekar impatient karti ho...😆 Please update soon...😊 now I'm more eager for it...😆😛


haye yar..u were waiting nd me idiot diidnt update..bt now have it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update...👏 Really liked it a lot...👏 Raghav-Jhanvi part was very sweet...😳 and when Raghav told Ramu Kaka to hire the new "chef" and all that...that was was so funny...😆 and Jhanvi is in a dilemma as to what is happening to her and why is she getting attracted to Raghav... and Jhanvi wanted to kiss Raghav's lips...😳😆 and Raghav is himself providing Jhanvi a job...that means woh khud hii Jhanvi ko ghar se out karne ka bando-bast kar raha hai...😆 poor Jhanvi...seems like her "plan" to trap him is failing...and I really liked the last part when jhanvi said--Bhagwaan mujhe utha le!!! 😆 Precap is interesting...😛 Over all a very nice update...👏 Please continue as soon as you can...😃 and thanks for the PM...😊
Edited by SheIsTheOne - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really lovely update.. 👏 This story is getting interesting by the day! Fab work dear, thanks for the pm🤗🤗

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