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Divya

@Divya1503

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

its just awesome dii!!👏 pls continue!!! can imagine Arnav while reading it! BS in such scenes will be a treat to all of us!!!😍 hope they come up something like this scene on the show!!!😃

sorry cudn't comment earlier!

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UltimateBarun

@UltimateBarun

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

wow!!!! is that the end!!!!

Made me emotional,,n made me cry,,I love this complex man,,n this is how he will exactly act when such a thing happens!!!

AWESOme !!👏

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Such a beautifully emotional OS. 👏

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Mahika84

@Mahika84

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Lovely OS...no words.you better continue this

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Scintillating
Such a beautifully emotional OS. 👏

Thanks dear 😊

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Wow! Priya...that was fantastic!

Amazing writing...👏

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Nina

@-Maggie-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Wow...took my breath away! So poignantly written...my heart clenched at times.What a great story..I do hope you will continue, as I am interested to read, feel and experience what our couple will go through in your eyes.

You are a woman of many talents...I was surprised to see your name linked to an OS, as I am only familiar with your Crooners. But now that I think about it, you write so well in Crooner, that writing a story should come naturally to you.

Congrats. Please PM if you can with updates.

😊

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Spectacular OS. I loved reading each word, each touch, each thought, each pain. You are a master of relating and describing emotions. Arnav's love is all there to see, it is the moment we have been waiting for and you brought it to us perfectly. All our wishes for Khushi, you granted. Thank you, I just loved it. Look forward to your update.👏👏

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