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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

gr8 ud dear...continue soon

thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

hope veer doesn't commit any mistake now

thanks dear...😊 lets see in the next update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow can't believe i missed out on a couple of updates.. :(
but i don't know what to say your doing an amazing job ahh i can't till the next update... please update soon... wondering what happens next...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojm

wow can't believe i missed out on a couple of updates.. :(
but i don't know what to say your doing an amazing job ahh i can't till the next update... please update soon... wondering what happens next...

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thanks dear...i am updating now...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 26


with moist eyes she looked at him... "please Veer...don't do this"



"i am not good...but I am not that bad" he pushed her away... the incident shocked her...she cried out and fell on her knees... with her hands on her face...she cried bitterly...



Veer was about to leave...but he couldn't see her crying...



slowly he bend down, touched her shoulders...astonishingly she looked at him...his eyes were moist...she couldn't see danger in his eyes anymore...



he helped her get up "i will drop you...sit in the car" for some reason she stopped for a second and then moved towards his car and without saying anything slid inside... he drank his last sip and started driving...



there was silence throughout the journey...neither spoke anything... soon they reached Darjeeling... he parked outside her house... she stepped out of the car and walked towards the main door of the house...



she casually turned around and looked at him... "Veer..." she screamed... "just get out of the car" she came running towards him...



Veer was surprised to see her shouting... "Chandni what happened??"



"Veer come out...fast"



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"some stories can be unsaid...some can be wrong...and few of those stories always hide the truth..." Acharya ji completed his sentence...



"but Acharya Ji, I didn't understand" Shama said...



"you must wait...what's her name though?"



"Chandni..." Shama answered...but she was waiting for an answer to her question... "my sister is always worried for her Grand Daughter's life... please help Acharya Ji"



Acharya Ji smiled "well she already completed half of the thing that she had come for...she was a prey of a misunderstanding, that had cursed the entire generation...but now she has liberated him..."



Shama was confused "prey!!! misunderstanding, !! liberated him... sorry Acharya Ji...can you please elaborate the entire thing..."



Acharya Ji looked at her "don't worry...she herself will find out about herself...Chandni is a strong girl...why do you worry for her..."



Kamini was waiting for Shama's phone... as she had somehow managed to meet Acharya Ji...



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Veer immediately came out of the car... Chandni hold his hand... "thank God you are safe"



Veer didn't understood anything... "what do you mean??? is this a drama or what??"



Chandni angrily looked at him "drama!!!... there was something behind you...as if grabbing your neck..."



"what???? my neck!!!" he laughed... "i don't mind if that's your ghost...well I must admit you haunt me at night" he smiled...



"i...i haunt you??? are you insane Veer...why will I???...one more thing...i have felt and always felt someone around you...i am not creating a drama"



Veer looked at her for a moment but didn't say anything...she watched him driving out of her driveway...



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Next Day...



"i don't know...but I feel my life is incomplete...something is missing from my life...i feel like crying..." she went on talking by herself while strolling in her tea estate...



her mind wasn't listening to her heart...it was not only Veer but it was only and only Veer that she was thinking about...



Is she doing something wrong with him...or may be she's not trying to understand him...confusedly she walked towards Mrs Verma's office...



"so these are all the reports Chandni...you may want to give it your mother...did you come by car??"



"no Mrs Verma...the weather was clear so I walked...you know I don't like driving around the valley...and last night my car got stuck and its with a mechanic now"



Mrs Verma kept the files neatly in a plastic bag... "rains are uncertain as our life is" she smiled...



Chandni picked up the bag and started walking...



"rains are uncertain as our life is"


the words echoed in Chandni's ears... what was happening with her...she should be happy that she's away from the monster instead she' s missing him...what is this feeling...was she falling in love with him... "no..." she said



While walking Chandni felt a drop on her hand...she looked up, it started raining... that was enough to annoy her...she never liked rains, on top of that she didn't carry any umbrella... she remembered rains are uncertain...



she started walking quickly towards a steep path...as she knew it was a short way of reaching home... her foot slipped over a stone... "ouch" she turned and looked at the stone...

she found it unique as it shimmered a little... she picked it up...thought it was partially covered with mud just like any other stone, but she found something strange about it...



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Shama asked Kamini to relax "nothing is happening to Chandni...i don't understand why are you unnecessarily getting worried..."



Kamini looked at the holy book "you know when Chandni was young, the priest told me already that there will be sometime in her life when she will struggle the most...she light loose something precious...i only want her happy and from the past few days, she looks sad as if she is missing something..."



Shama got up "you and your predictions...i will make some tea that can relax you from your imagination..."



Soon they heard the horn outside...Meenakshi parked her car and came running in... "oh these rains"



Meenakshi saw her aunt "hey Shama Aunty '.when did you come...that's a pleasant surprise..."



"i was missing you all...so I thought I would spend few days in Darjeeling...i was going to make some tea...should I make for you as well?" Shama patted Meenakshi's shoulder...



"i love your tea Aunty...please do make one cup for me..." Meenakshi smiled and looked around "Chandni hasn't come yet??" she kept her bag on the couch...



"her car is with mechanic...she went walking till the tea estate" Kamini retorted...



"mom...that's alright, well she usually walks till the valley..." Meenakshi walked towards the kitchen...



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It was late night...

Chandni didn't wanted to join them for coffee and chat...she loved her grandmother's sister but she felt too exhausted and wanted to sleep...


if she wouldn't have come, she would have skipped her dinner as well... she joined them for dinner though she wasn't hungry but now she simply wasn't interested in their chat session "Mom grandma...can I please sleep...i am tired..."



Meenakshi smiled "of course...you have to attend college early morning...go..."



Shama "goodnight beta..."



Chandni smiled and left...



she bolted her room and went to change... she was about to sleep when her eyes fell on the stone she had kept on the table...



she got up and washed the stone...it was blue color, she had never seen such a different color before... her fingers could feel something strange as if it got something scribbled on it... she thought of using a brush to clean it...



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Veer thought about having another drink when he looked at the watch he was wearing...he looked at a small black button and pressed it...

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Chandni was startled... "oh no." the stone fell from her hands... and broke into two pieces... "what is this sound"... it was a long beep... she looked around... then realized the watch on on her dressing table... she picked up the watch and remembered the similar watch she gave to Veer...



annoyingly she picked up her phone...



"wow sweetheart...this watch really works..." he smirked...



Chandni was furious "watch...my foot...now listen Veer...don't you dare call me again..."



"i think you have a weak memory sweetheart...when did I call you??" he smiled while teasing her...



that was enough for her "that's it...i mean that watch...stop giving me signals..."



he laughed "I have the right to do anything with my watch...you can't stop me...and you know that, I never stop"



annoyingly she picked up the watch "its going in the bin...good bye"



She was about to throw...but stopped... "hmmm...what should I do with it..."



she kept it in her bag... then moved back to the stone... to her surprise there was something written on it...



"garh" she was surprised '..but then she realized another piece that was lying on the floor... she picked it up and joined together "garhmehran" '.. she thought something...it could be the other way around "Mehrangarh"



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Next Day...

"it seems its a name of some place Chandni" Maneka looked at the stones...



Chandni replied thinking something "yes...it is...but where??"



she quickly opened her laptop and checked on the maps...



Maneka carefully observed... "but Chandni even if we do find out...how does it matter...i mean why are you so much concerned??"



"i don't know...but I think I might get my answers from here..." she said unknowingly while checking the map...



Maneka was confused...she couldn't understand what Chandni was trying to say or do...



After few seconds '.. "got it..." Chandni smiled...



"really??? where is it??" Maneka was least interested...



"in the middle of Rajasthan" Chandni thought something... "Maneka I must go there"



Maneka was shocked "what??? are you insane Chandni...you find a stone on the road and if anything is scribbled on it...does it mean its related to you in anyway...??? can't believe you are doing this...you were so rational and now how could you do this foolishness...??"



Chandni was reluctant to listen anything else... "i am going...i have to find out why this stone came in my way and what does this place want to tell me..."



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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii
i m late today, but thnnk god, still first

~~EDITED~~


wow, i lovd it reading...
''i m nt gud, but i m not dat bad...!!'' .oye hoye😎...hero👍🏼
veer i m proud of u dude...
really lov ur cool avataar...
saachhi kya kamaal ke ho yaar tum, javaab nhi tumhare..
yeh andaaz tumhare, haye kya kahe...really killer...

acharyaji ki baatein mujhe bhi ek baar main samjha nhi aati...
he is juz like ma teachers, :P
😛

but maine phirse padha usse, next turn i got dat in ma head...

thnx for bringing the ghost aunty back..
i really missed her,
though i hate her, but i miss her...
like u said, i hate ma teachers but i will miss dem,

and 1 more like...chand hate(..fake hate) veer, but miss her,
may b dis point i worte in last ud to...
dat means i m boring u...

veer, dnt make fun of her...
she is saying truth...

but u noe one thing...
evn i wud hav reacted same way like u if sm 1 say der ws sm tng grabbing ma neck...
😆

oops! barish aa gyi,
bolo tha, chandini veer k baare main itna deeply mat socho ki pata hi na chale ki kaha chall rhi ho..
lag gyi na chott

pattar...stone ki yeh himmat ki usne chandini, veer ki chandini... chandini raichand ki girra diya...

by d way chandini raichand, ssounds so perfect.. ☺️...(disis not ma blush... its on behalf of chandini 😉)

hehehehehhe...
i just lovd dat watch scene...

''sweetheart, this watch really works..!'' 🤣
''watch...my foot...dont dare to call me again ''

just loved it...amazingly awesome...
god i read dis so many times...

crazy, fultoo fataak...👏

i m proud of u chandini...
now i m very proud of ma self too..

at last u r behaving like ma friend...
like crazy head, ditto me...

at last i changed u wid ma crackness...now evn ur skull is a loose screw..🤣


"in the middle of Rajasthan" Chandni thought something... "Maneka I must go there",.....evn i think dis way...ur r awesome chand...u r crazy like me today...i lov u...

got a stone on road, i solving its mystery...

dese foolish things i use to do alot in ma childhood...

i m detective since birth😎...

i find evrything mysterious...

hehehehehe...

Maneka was shocked "what??? are you insane Chandni...you find a stone on the road and if anything is scribbled on it...does it mean its related to you in anyway...??? can't believe you are doing this...you were so rational and now how could you do this foolishness...??".....lovd dis reaction of maneka...
menaka, ur friend is no more urs, she is more mine now,
dats why she is behaving so crack,

ud soon di
lov u🤗



Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dhanvi di very nice part 👏 👏 👏
loved it thoroughly
Veer didn't do anything wrong wid Chandini and He wont 😊
Chandini was thinking about him 😳
yes dear you are misunderstanding him😕
Loved that watch scene ...😆
what is new about this Stone ??? 🤔
one more mistery ...
She is going to Rajstaan ...Lovely hope so Veer give acompany her 😉
update soon
love u ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Suberb update... loved it :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx dear for d second installment of ud in dis week, now i know u'll ud in next week , i'll wait till then...

Abt update, ye bhi baki parts ke tarah ekdum jakas hai. Well maneka shud understand dat chand is madly in love (though she deny dis fact) nd when some1 is in love all rationality goes for a toss... Now chand will go to rajasthan, one request Dhanvi plz veer ko bhi bhejo na uske saath. Dono ke sare doubts clear ho jayenge nd they will get all answers to their question.

Actually wat i was thinking dat ,u all writters here are superb in ur writting. U all write far better stories den professional writters. I mean u, ranju, ruchi,rashmi, prehika, pranita nd yes rashmi u all r fab just fab.

Rt nd Mc kitne lucky hai ke unke fans itne talented hai aur unse itna pyaar karte hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing ud dhanvi...
first of all i luved their watches ...
luved their scenes ... i think chandu ka gussa utar raha hai...
and another twist in the tale...a stone mystery...
n chandni is going to rajastan...superb... i hope veer would accompany her...
continue soon...
luv u

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