All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 6:-
amazing part taani ki tho i hope reyam usse zor ka thappad maare...rey full on concerned and ya rey ne sahi kaha kriya is kriya kabhi nahi badlegi...loved d whole epi
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy amazinggg update,,,,,,,,,,swaron was awsummm,,,,n this tanni arhhh😡😡,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bt i luv kriyansh jungle prt ,,,,,eagerly waiting 4 nxt prt update soon😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all thank u...all...for such nice comment ab bara bara comment karo bhai we r on 7th ch...😆
chalo idhar udhar ki baatein chor k point p aate h kal mera exam h but m giving u guys an update so jese b ho jhel lena ...😆and yeah pray for me...😭lagta hai kal paper m ff likh k aunge...😆
chalo chalo meri bakwaaas band kari hun ..heres ur update...
Kria did Rey bandage and luked into his eyes ..and LLHH setion started ...suddenly wind came and they get back into senses...
Kria:Ahem...Rey wo mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai abhi jo hua...(Rey cuts her in between)
Rey:mujhe pata hai tum kya kehna chahti ho...
Kria:par..(Rey again cuts)
Rey:trust me...(he smiles)...
Kria: wese aap gusse m bilkul bandar lagte ho...
Rey:wat????
Kria:haan...bandar...(she ran and Rey was running to catch her)
Rey:tumhe to m bata ta hun...
they were laughing running after 1 another..
Kria: humein wapas chalna chaieye...sab pareshan horahe honge...
rey:haaan i completely forgot...chalo..they went towards camp holding eachothers hand ..(zyada free mat ho jungla tha raat thi isiliye haath pakra samjhe😆)
IN The Camp..
boys came...
Swayam:guys rey kahan h..Vicky wo tere saath tha...
Vicky:haaan yaar tha to par pata nhee wo kahan gayab hogaya..
Tani: gayab...tum yeh..yeh ..kya keh rahe ho...(she started crying...)
Bharat: arey yaaar mjhe lagta hai RDX sir ko bata dena chaiye...
in that time Neha said:rey..Kria..
every 1 turned and luked...
Tani luked at them and ran to hug Rey...
Kriyaansh saw Tani coming they left eachothers hand but constantly luking at eachother...
Kria moved on other side and Tani hugged Rey but kriyaaansh were still luking at eachother...
girl came to Kria started asking is she ok...and there Tani asking Rey..where were u...
Tarey broke the hug...and all of them got in...
Vish:but guys hua kya tha...and yeh chot...
Kria:wo...(Rey cuts in middle)
Rey:wo Kria jungle m gir gai the issiliye y chot(this is wat Kria wanted to tell him in jungle that not to tell any1 about this incident but he understud cuz he knowz she'll b uncomfortable by this..)
Kria luked at Rey with surprising eyes but he winked his eyes like trust me...and she nodded...
Tani:(jealous)ohhh...(luked at rey shirt worn by Kria)to yeah shirt...
Kria:haaan wo ...
Rey:haaan wo jab Kria giri to uski dress tear hogayi so i gave it to her...
Swayam:chalo...guys its good k Kria bilkul theek hai...and tum sab b chalo kal pata nhe RDX sir hum s aur kya karwaen...
Sharon:ya guys ...come on lets go to sleeep..
Rinni:haan aaj raat k liye itna adventure kaaafi hai...
every 1 laughed ...and girls moved towards their respective camp so as boys...
IN THE TENT...
Sharon:Kria tum dress change karlo...
Kria:yeah...(she changed and every 1 went for sleep but she was not feeling able to sleeep so she took her diary slowly and get out off tent and sat beside the lake and wrote ...)
Lonely sad girl on the dark beach Stock Photo - 10317037
just like this buts itx night...
"You believe in the lies you were always told
your heart filled with hatred look what you behold
thinking that you know me like im a puppet to control
but let me tell you one thing you'll never take my soul


nothing you can ever do could make me change my mind
cause when the day comes i know it will be my time
now you turn your back on me and now im despised
to see your sad face turn into a horrible disuguise.


all these years you never had the courage to confess
the lies that you've been living in has made you obsessed
i wish that i could save you away from this mess
but now it's to late your life has been written to death

these years that ive known you i think i fell in love
but ll you wanted was someone by your side someone you could trust
and i tought i was that one but it's all lost
you were unique and special but all those memories lie in a dead place
but only the last thing i could see was your sad face"
and wrote ...
I am sorry...and a tears started flowing off her eye...and some of them were shed on the Diary...
and she sat there for a long time and then went in ...
Next morning...
evry1 woke up...
RDX:guys its drizzlings so we cant go for rock climbing ...cuz its dangerous and the rocks will b slipperey...for now u can enjoy here go for boating in lake or swimming wateveru want but be safe...after the rain we can think of going sumwhere...
Every1 was happy...
Sharon:come on guys boating...
every1 sat in the boat..it was a big 1...they took few rounds...
Nil: its boring yaar mjhe wapas jaane h kinaare par..
Vicky:ya come on waapas chalo...
every 1 also was getting bored...
back to camp...every 1 sitting sadly dont know wat to do...
in that time Vishaka started singing sumthing in her sad tone...
listen this i'll b fun...
Vish:Dil Kabhi Gandaa, Kabhi Hai Nek Bandaa
Dil Ka Bharosa Kaise Koi Kare ...(she stud up and
luked at every 1 like and actioned like wat)

Nil: Dil Kabhi Thanda, Kabhi Hai Atom Bomb Sa
Yeh Dhamaka Kaise Koi Sahe .(he stud up too and pointed every 1 like come on get into the lake)
kria:Dil Ki yehi Khata Hai, Dil Ko Nahin Pata Hai (sadly thinking)

Neha:Dil Ki yehi Khata Hai, Dil Ko Nahin Pata Hai
Ke Dil Chaahta Hai Kya ..(came to Kria and said come on get in she took kria's ahand and got her)
both ran...
every 1
Nazrein Milana, Nazrein Churana,
Kahin Pe Nigaahein, Kahin Pe Nishaana
Nazrein Milana, Nazrein Chura Na,
Kahi Pe Nigaahein, Kahin Pe Nishaana
(all were in the lake dancing singing romance fun)

Vicky:Niyyat To Dil Ki Hamesha Hi Sahi Thi
Dil Ka Irada Bhi Samjho Nek Tha (on the tire inside the lake)

Rinni:Kudrah Awaara To Kya Kare Bechaara
Uska Ho Jaaye Dil Jisko Dekhta (sweetly luking at amar)

Tani:Din Mein To Dil satai
Raaton Mein Dil jagai
Din Mein To Dil Satai,
Raaton Mein Dil Jagai
Are Chaahta Hai Kya(getting her hand over Rey outside the lake)

every 1 came to Tarey and sung..
Nazrein Milana, Nazrein Chura Na,
Kahin Pe Nigaahein, Kahin Pe Nishaana
Nazrein Milana, Nazrein Chura Na,
Kahin Pe Nigaahen, Kahin Pe Nishaana


Neha: Aankhon Mein Koi Hai Basa Jaane Kyun Lage Yeh Dil Khaali (luking at Vicky)

vicky:Jaan Lo kyun Yeh Dil Bajaa Raha Kyun Ek Haath Se Taali (clap with Neha)

Bharat:Honton Se Jaane Kya Kaha Phir Bhi Dil Ki Baat Hai Dil Mein..(shyly)

Kria:Yeh Raha Tera Humsafar Kis Ko Doonde Dil Ke Mehfhil Mein (took Sharo's hand and gave it to Swayam both of them smiled)

Rey:Jaan Hai Phansi Ke Bina Hasin Aaye Hal Dil Pe ..(hugging both swaron)

All came to them and
Nazrein Milana, Nazrein Chura Na, Kahi Pe Nigaahein, Kahi Pe Nishaana
Nazren Milana, Nazren Chura Na, Kahi Pe Nigaahein, Kahin Pe Nishaana...

all of them danced and danced...and at the sat gossiping and it started raining hard...

RDX: guys humein abhi yahan se nikalna hoga...baaarish buht tez hogai h...and itx not safe to b in jungle so pack ur bags and get into the bus...
evry 1 were sad but happy that they enjoyed that much...

so thats its for today hope u like it...
do pray for my exams...arey update parh kar h dus kardena😆...
bara bara comments dena...and buht saara lyk karna...pasand na aaye to b btana...so i cud get better...

for pms add Angel56...


"Duniya mai hoti na mohobbat to,
Rub se rusva na koi hota,
Mohabbat mey di hai jaan jinone,
Saayad duniya mai un ka bhi koi naam hota


yaadon mein itni gehrayi kyun hai
muskurate huye chehron pe tanhayi kyun hai
is duniya ki bheer mein kho gaye hain phir bhi
sochun mein aaj bhi teri yaad ayi kyun hai"


THANK U








kritzzz_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update n best of luck 4 ur exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazinng updt...rey understands kria soo well!!
loved the way they njoyed...song selection was nyc
All The Best for ur exam
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update especialy song seq LOVED IT<3 bt please yeh taani ko rey se dur rakho.. I dnt like her wid rey.. And Please add sum more KR scene.. And all the very best for ur exam !! Update ASAP !
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm update best of luck for ur exams

kriyaansh part was nice

hate that taani kaise chipakti hai rey se!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was really
awesome
i really want this song to be played in d3
but with kria
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
Bst of luck 4 ur exam...
Thankx 4 d pm...
Update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
really loved d upd8...
wats unique wid ur ss is dat u always write smthg realted to kr at the end thru pic msgs & poetry...
really loved d song part n yeah pls keep this taani away from rey...

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