#@$BARRED IN$#.(KR ) ss *title changed.note pg 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
it was awesome
something new on kriyaansh loved it
aur hum yeh bhi jaante hai ki rey jyaada din kriiya ko ignore nahi kar payega
waiting eagerly for nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
u r seriously a filmy queen... wat an update😊
It is just awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awesome... waiting 4 the nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So nice n u have portrayed kriya's character so beautifully...n very sensitive n beautiful concept...
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nyc concept...luved it😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
hey deetha plz plz plz update na waiting eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey... thanx 4 writing a new SS... i jst loved it re... 😊

though i was vei upset wid ur previous kriyaansh SS... it had a horrible ending... bt is SS se uski bharpaayi hogyi... 😛 😆

i loved it a lot... 😊

though it was a lil filmy types... bt still i just loved it...

i cn nvr stop readin ur stories... no matter wat...😊

amazing update yar...

all the best aagey k liye...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
amazin story soo far gr8 start kria in pain very well described...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey deetha when u'll update!!i m waiting yaar!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys !!!!!!!!!! so here im back with the update...and this will be the last part so it would be really big one...so be honest...agar update chota ho toh then u can give one line comment ...but its gonna really be long...so make sure,...lamba cmnt...😉...i love long cmnts...and haa so now goes the update...and pehle hi bata rahi hun ye bohut filmy hoga...naughty cat ko meri filmy style pasand...as this ss is for her it will be very filmy...and haa...thank u kriyansh24 its really a big compliment to my filmy ness😆😳...

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rey was fully disturbed...he was just seeing her sitting on the bed as she slept quitely...yaha meri neendh udadi aur kitne ache se so rahi hai dekho...apne aapko best patni kehti hai huh!!!!!!!!he sat pouting...finally light made its way into the room...he sighed...meri pyaari neendh!!!!!!!!!!*sigh* and then he saw her moving he quickly fell on the bed as if he was in deep sleep...he sensed her near him ...again she gave a peck on his forehead and made her way into the washroon...argghhh!!!!!!!!!!!meri poori raat barbaad kardi ab poora din bhi...he thought ...after sometym he saw her come out of the washroom and took some clothes and again made her way in...after she went he sat on the bed...

"meri dimaag ki fry banake kitni ache se apna kaam kar rahi hai dekho...kaam????? yes...dekhun toh sahi aakhir saara kaam karti kaisi hai...hmmm...now its 5:00 mai toh 8:00 ko jaunga dekhta hun kya kya karti hai..."he was talking when he found her cmng out...before her noticing he slept again...she sat in front of the mirror and was getting ready ..he was seeing 4rm his half opened eyes...she got ready and started her daily routine...she was soo engrossed in her work that she didnt notice him seeing her ( wide eyes)...made the room perfect...ironed his dress...went down ...he too followed after freshening up...he stood at the door of kitchen leaning on it...she was fully into her work...made breakfast ...then he found sam coming there...he slowly hid...

"bhabhi...!!!!!!!"sam cried...

"kya hua sam itni jaldi uth gayi???"kriya asked...

"pata nahi neendh nahi aaraha par phir bhi bohut lazy feel kar rahi hun..."sam said...

"toh mrng coffee?????? "kriya said with a smile

"haa...grt idea...i will feel fresh..."sam said

"toh just 5 mins banake deti hun" kriya said...

"donon keliye"sam insisted...

"as u say madam..."kriya bowed...


sam sat on the slab while kriya prepared coffe...kriya prepared it and stood leaning on the slab before sam...

"umm...mrng coffe...itni yummy ho toh din acha jayega..."sam said closing her eyes...

"sam mujhe makkan lagana chodo/..."kriya laughed...

"no bhabhi ...aisa koi baat nahi hai...par bhabhi ek baat bolun"sam asked...

"haan bolo..."kriya replied instantly...rey was just listening to the girly talk...( haww!!!!!!! bad rey...u should not hear the girls talk)...

"bhabhi to be frank aap black mei khafi hot lagte ho..."" sam said winking...
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"haaww!!!!!!! sam...sharam nahi hai kya????"kriya asked open mouth...

"arey isme galat kya hai...waise maine sach hi bola...infact sach ye hi hai ki aap normally hi bohut hot ho...pata hai bhabhi agar mai ladka hoti na then bhai se nahi mai khud karleti aapse shaadi...and ..."sam slowly dragged and...

"chup ...badmash kahi ki...bhagwan kaisi ladki hai ..."kriya said slowly beating on sams head

"pata nahi bhai kaise control kar parahe hai"sam continued...

"sam ab chup...bohut hogaya..." kriya said blushing

"wah bhabhi bhai ke naam lete hi blushing haan..."sam teased..

"sam/..." kriya gave a stern look still blushing...

rey ka thoughts nahi bataya nah...ye dekho...

hot????? really???he checked her from top to bottom...waise hot toh hai...wat?????? rey ye kya soch raha hai ab jao aur tayyar hoja...pata nahi kya kya soch raha hai...he took a lst look at her...blush karte waqt kitna cute lagti hai...😍 rey!!!!!! wake up...ab jao dude...nahi toh kuch bhi soch ta rahega...

with this rey went to room and got ready...she finally entered the room with his bed coffee after total 30 mis...she was shocked he was already ready for office...she handed him the coffee...while taking his hand slipped and the coffee fell directly on her fingers...she bit her lips and closed her eyes when he started the sorry mantra...he took her hand...rushed to the washroom and kept it under the tap...it was then he noticed blood...coffee girane se blood aata hai kya???? he saw her...

who was telling that its ok she can manage...

"ye khoon"rey was abt to ask when she drew her hand...

"khoon????? kaha??? kahi pe toh nahi...jaldi breakfast keliye aajayiye..."by saying this she rushed down...

he was confused but finally he went down...she was near the dining table doing her work as a typical bahu...never letting the servants work...

all sat when she started serving...when she went to rey he asked...

"ab haat kaisa hai??? "rey asked...

"haat ?? kya hua beta haat ko???"reys dad asked concerned...

"ji papa woh kuch nahi coffee gir gaya tha..."kriya replied ..

"nahi mai uski baat nahi kar raha hun...he was talking when she pleaded with eyes not to say...he being he didnt get what she was telling and spilled the whole with a confused face.😆...woh tere haat se khoon nikal rahi hai na uski baat kar raha hun..."he said...

while kriya glared at him with a crying expression...as if telling...kehni ki zaroorat hai kya????

"khoon?????"sam, reys parents said in unision...rey was surprised to see their reaction...earthquake toh nahi aayi nah ab...toh ye sab aise react kyun kar rahe hai...kriya glared at him agin as if...sab aapki wajah se...

"beta idhar aao...haat dikhao..."reys mom asked.

"maa mai bilkul theek hun woh bas choti si kat gayi..."she said while gng to mom and as soon as she went reys mom took hr hand and was examining...infact kriya had a deep cut to her thumb of ri8...

" itni gehri chot...kaise lagi kriya???"mom asked concerned...

"maa woh carrot cut kar rahi thi salad keliye ...woh chaku naya haina isiliye woh kat gaya..."kriya said hesitatingly...

"hey bhagwaan ye ladki ka mai kya karron??? kitni baar kehti hun kaam na karne keliye sunti hi nahi..."reys mom started her lecture...kriya again glared at rey...he looked down...

"bhabhi aapne band aid kyun nahi lagaya???"sam asked...

"hume pata chal jayega nah isiliye..."reys dad said...

"nahi papa woh kaam karne mei thoda irritation horahi thi isiliye..."kriya said slowly...

"chup...aaj se koi kaam nahi"reys mom said...

"maa"

"maine kaha chup...ab baito ...breakfst karo..."she siad...

"maa mai bad mei..."kriya started...

"haat dekhi apni????baito aur khao"reys dad demanded...

kriya obeyed and preeti( chalo yaar same as baatcutter ff...aur koi naam nahi mil raha) fed her...and she too ate quitely...

rey left for his office...

days passed...reys heart was melting for her...she almost had all the qualities he wanted in her...he started questioning himself of why she couldnt be part of his lyf...now the only left things were ...the list to hate kriya ...but to his wonder as days passed his list became short...one by one the reasons were erasing...and rey was being attracted more by her day by day...sometyms he used to get lost in her ...and every night he would just sit seeing her...and think how innocent and simple she was...and in tyms he found her sad ...eyes red and conclude that she cried ...that too coz she was craving 4r his love ,care and affection and this would bring her more close to him...he sometyms wanted to tell that he accepted her but something would stop and he thought he didnt accept her totally...

nivky bro's observed the change and sometyms gave some talks lyk she is good , u can trust, she is perfect for u...she loves u a lot and lot of stufff...

and now half of his day...hehe to be perfect most of his day went in her thoughts...

he used to smile thinking of her smile...his heart cried on seeing her in pain...he gets lost as she pouted of smiled ...whenever she and sam used to talk he wouldnt miss it coz then she lives to her fullest...how he wished she would be lyk dat every second...but he never realised he was the one who can do it ...without any effort...his one word with love and care brings it...but he really had that heart...CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!

one day rey was busy in his office...and at lunch tym as usual there was a knock on the door...

"come in.."he said...without looking...after a total of 10 mins he heard that voice...and suddeny his head jerked up...there she stood...god itne dinon ke baad poori tarh se concentrate kar paraha hun work pe par phir se aagayi distract karne...she stood there nervous...

"woh...woh kaka ko kuch kaa...k...kaam se ghar jaana tha...isiliye...m..mai..."she started...

"arey arey koi baat nahi...aao...waise tumhe knock karke aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai"rey said smiling...

"woh maine socha agar aap meeting mei ho toh..."kriya said looking down...

"phir bhi ...koi kuch nahi sochega...bina knock kare hi aa sakti ho..."he said...she smiled slightly...he felt bad how she feels uncomfortable in his presence...

"wahi khade rahogi ya phir mujhe khana lagaogi bhi??"he asked sitting on the couch...

"huh!!!!!! ji ...ji..."she went to him and served him...he said her to sit beside him...she was just looking at the door while her hands continuously strugling with each other...he in b/w took glances at her and smiled...finally he completed ...she was abt to go when he said that he too would accompany her till parking lot as he had to go some where else...

both were gng ...rey stopped in b/w to talk to one of the staff...when the staff back of them started their talks...

girl 1 : yaar yahi reyaansh sir ki wife hai kya???

girl 2: haan...

girl 1: achi hai na...they look cute together...

girl 2: haan cute toh lagte hai ...par pata hai woh house wife hai...

girl 1: kya reyaansh sir ki wife house wife hai??? yaar unki wife toh very talented and working honachahiye tha...

girl 2 : yeah i too think the same...actually jahan tak mujhe pata hai yeh reyaansh sir ki mom ki choice hai...

girl 1: ohh ...wahi toh mai dekhun...reyaansh sir ki choice aisi thodi hoti hai...

rey and kriya could hear those...rey saw her...she was folding her hands and rubbing her left arm with right hand and was looking down...yeah she felt embrassed and uncomfortable...rey turned and glared at the girls...he didnt want to shout at them and let the whole office know what they were gossiping and make kriya more uncomfortable...the girls shut their mouths up...rey lead kriya out...both were silent ...they were on the way to their cars...reys saw kriya still feeeling uncomfortable...he thought to console her so he while walking slightly went close to her but she moved away making a big gap b/w them...he found a tear rolling down her cheek which she instantly wiped off...rey was abt to speak...
"toh mai chalti hun..."she said as they reached their car...she literally ran into the car and asked the driver to start...

he felt bad...a tear flowed down his cheek ...

unki himmat kaisi hui kriya ke baare mei aisa baat karneki...house wife hai toh kya???/ bohut achi hai...infact koi doosri hogi toh bhi aisi nahi hoti...aur kriya ko kaam karne ki zaroorat bhi nahi...mere na honepe sab ki ache se khayal rakh thi hai...dil se achi hai usse jyaada kya chaiye...wo posh na ho, style na marti ho, par jaise bhi ho i love her...he froze...love???? kya sach mei mai kriya se pyaar.????? rey kyun na ho???? wo teri wife hai ...sabse jyaada wo bilkul waisi hai jaise tumhe pasand hai...yes i love her...yes...

a tear rolled as he grinned...he went and his meeting was the best...he went home ...he was very happy ...and very excited to take her to tonights party threwn by one of his client...he was very excited and rushed to his room...but he froze...

"ye kya kiya kriya tune??? have u lost it??? maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha...aakhir meri baat samajh thi kyun nahi...ab chup mat raho ...answer me...ri8 now..."vicky was shouting...

there were no one in the house...rey was confused...why is vicky shouting at her...and why she crying lyk hell...

when vicky shouted she broke more...and next moment she was in vicky's arms...

"kya hua bacha...aisa kya hua ki tumne divorce papers pe sigh karliya...aur itna ro kyun rahi ho???? mujhe pata hai kuch toh baat hai...apne bhai se bhi nahi kahegi??? mujhe batao kya baat hai mai sab theek kardunga...sab sahi kar dunga..."vicky said as tears rolled down his eyes...

rey got a blow on hearing she sighned the papers...he totally forgot abt the papers...

"kuch sahi nahi tha bhai...isiliye sab sahi kar rahi hun...bas isiliye ...sab sahi karnekeliye mera uspe sigh karna zaroori tha..."she said tightening her grip...

"aisa kya hua kriya batao mujhe..."vicky asked concerned...

she narrated the office story...

( kk chalo kisiko pata nahi na ki rey ke aane se pehle kya hua tha/...so here it goes...

vicky came grinning to her she was sitting on the bed...

"bhai aap yahan????" asked...

"haan mai hi hun...kyun acha nahi laga???"he asked ...

"bhai aisi koi baat nahi par aap kar kya rahe ho???"she asked...

"tereliye saadi dhoondh raha hun...hmm...yeh acha hai ...chal ye jaldi pehan ke aaja..."he said and pushed her into washroom before she could ask anything...she had no idea of what was her bro upto but she changed and came out.
...

"wah...meri behan hamesha ki tarah bohut khoobsoorat hai ...ab yahan aao aur bato..."he said dragging her in front of mirror and making her sit...

"bhai par"she was cut...

"chup pehle mai jo kehta hun karo baaki baad mei hi bataunga..."he said...


she sighed...she sat quite...vicky handed her a very light jewelery demanded to do her make up ...

"finally perfect..."he said looking at her...

"bhai ab toh batayiye nah..."she asked...

"arey wo kya haina rey ki wajah se uski client ko bohut badi profit mili...so woh aaj specially rey keliye party rakh raha hai...and mai chahta hun ki sabki nazar meri behan pehi rahe..."vicky grinned...

"kya???? sorry bhai mai nahi aasakti..."she said and went towards the bed and stood beside it looking out ...

"kya???????par kyun??????"vicky went to her and soon found some papers ...he saw it and was shocked she had already sighned those and there in the corner layed her bag...

vicky got angry and shouted...

ab yahan se continue...)

rey felt very bad...

"bhai agar mai unki pasand hi nahi toh wo mujhe pyaar kaise kar payenge...mujhe usi din karna chahiye tha...par mai jhalli thi...kriya turned around back faced to vicky and spoke walking forward slowly...rey entered the room and lookd aat vicky ...vicky understood and left closing the door behind...sorry bhai mai party keliye nahi aasakti par bhai plzz aap mujhe apne saath leke jayenge kya apne ghar...waise bhi ghar pe koi nahi hai ...koi rokhne wala bhi nahi..."she said...but no response...

"bhai agar aapko acha na lage toh koi problem nahi mai kahi aur ..."she was abt to completed when she was pulled by arm into a strong kiss...she saw him but didnt want to be with him ...so she tried to free herself just to make his kiss more wild...finally she gave up ...and tears rolled down and she directly looked into his eyes who was still kissing her...he slowly cupped her face and kissed her passionately...she closed her eyes and left him do what ever he wanted...he made his way through her mouth...finally pulled back when she was lack of oxygen...she was breathing hard looking down and he was looking at her cupping her face and breating hard...after sometym kriya finally got normal and started...

"rey ..."but soon her lips were blocked by his...he bit her lips , sucked them ,kissed and what not everything...she just closed her eyes taking in the moment...finally he pulled back...

"mai neeche jaa raha hun jaldi tayyar hoke aajao hame jaldi nikalna hai,..."he said and left...

she stood there dumb... she was not able to get what just happened...she just got ready and went down...rey and vicky sat front and she sat back...the drive was silent...vicky saw both ...both were silent so he too went silent...rey drove silently and she was just looking at him...finally they reached...three of them walked in...kriya in b/w them...but as soon as she entered she saw everyone and she slowed down...rey and vicky looked at each other...rey went back and placed his hand around her waist...it was his first touch...both felt shivers...she breathed hard and pulled her stomach in...rey gripped her waist and pulled her to his side possesively and walked...vicky was very happy that finally they were one...she was just looking at him...he took her to everyone introduced her and went on...suddenly someone took the mike...

it was the clients wife...she spoke...

"hello everybody...welcome to everyone...we r very happy coz of the success we got ...but all this credit goes to mr . REYAANSH SINGHANIA ...agar inhone help nahi kiya hota toh shayad ye success impossible hai...so i wanna thank u from the bottom of my heart sir..."she said...

rey smiled and looked at kriya...she was looking at the stage and had a proud smile...he felt that he had won something great...he proud smile made him feel more proud and special...he smiled wide and pulled her more closer...but she was just listening to the host...y not...aakhir uski pati ki badai jo ho rahi hai...

" and sir i wanna say aapki wife bohut beautiful hai...u make a perfect pair together..."the lady said impressed by the cute pair...

their eyes loked...and the first LLHH started...they were brought back as everyone clapped...they blushed ...vicky was just lyk jumping on seeing them...finally they lead back home ...

preeti opened the door...rey was still holding her waist...preeti wasabt to fall when vicky caught

"kya mai sach dekh rahi hun??????"she asked as everyone looked at them with hanged mouths...kriya blushed to core...rey gave his million dollar smile...

"haa maa ye sach hi hai...aakhir pyar ho hi gaya donon ke beech..."vicky said...

kriya turned red...she saw sam cmng ...so she quickly rushed up...


after having a lot of teasing and talk rey came to his room...his eyes searched 4r her...there she stood in the balcony looking at the sky with a wide smile...

"sam sahi thi ...kaafi hot lagti ho tum black mei"he said...

she was startled and turned quickly just to bump into him...he caught her by waist...he slowly lifted her in arms never breaking the eyelock...he gently placed her on the bed and layed beside her...his peircing eyes made her blush more...she looked down not able to meet his eyes...he slowly move the saree away on her waist and kissed it...she gasped...he slowly played with his fingers on her waist making her move frequently /...he slowly passed his hand and cluthched the other end on her waist...she cluthed the pillow with her hands...he came up kissing and finally took her lips into his...after sometym he made his way through her neck ...she was not able to take the pleasure but she just let him do what he wanted...while kissing he slowly muttered a sorry to which she looked at him...tears rolled down her eyes...she cupped his face and kissed his forehead...he loved it when ever she kissed on forehead...he again took he lips into his...he slowly removed her saree and his shirt...and finally made love to her making his way into her...giving her sweet pains...as she moaned more he grew more wild...finally after a long tym both layed beside each other sweating...he slowly looked at her...

love is not for u coz ur love

he said ...she was shocked...but soon slid into his arms...he took her in his arms hugging her tight and slept ...


aaj se chain se so paunga...

he smiled and closed his eyes after seeing her face and giving a peck on her lips to which she nuzzled more close...




~~~~~THE END~~~~~






so kaisa laga plzz plzz plzz cmnt...and lyk too😳

luv all...🤗

❤️deetha❤️


Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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