#@$BARRED IN$#.(KR ) ss *title changed.note pg 18

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

An emotional one...
Luvd d concept...
Poor kriya is in so mch pain...can't see her lyk dat...
Thnk god vicky went 2 kriya on rite tym n stopped her nai to gadbad ho jati...
Finally rey strted 2 feel her pain somewat...
Hope he falls in luv wid her soon ...
Waitng fr nxt part...

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

An emotional one...
Luvd d concept...
Poor kriya is in so mch pain...can't see her lyk dat...
Thnk god vicky went 2 kriya on rite tym n stopped her nai to gadbad ho jati...
Kriya made simmi understand so easily...darrs so adorable...
Finally rey strted 2 feel her pain somewat...
Hope he falls in luv wid her soon ...
Waitng fr nxt part...

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Mera comment two tyms post ho gya...sry...maine dekha ni...

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karankritz4lyf

@karankritz4lyf

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow hehe really like d character summary, the concept gr8 plz continue😃

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

awesome update lloved ittt...
continue soonn...
thnks 4 pm😃

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awesome part...it was heart touching

and very emotional

loved it very much

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

wow u've written a lot of gud stuff . . . Maine to kal kriya ki entry se pehle tak hi padha tha . . . 😛
wat a stone heart rey is . . . . . . & kriya is really sweet 😊
a caring bhabhi,,, loving sis,,, obedient daughter-in-law & a good wife 😳
loved kriky's bonding . . . 1st I thought ki koi inhe misunderstood na kar le,,,, but its good dat she calls him bhai 😆
& he's so understanding . . . . Dats nyce 🤗
well said,,, abt her insecurities 👏 . . . . . When she thinks that he deserves better than her after luking at the gals in the party . . . . Dats indeed a bitter truth 😭
& the way she took care of simmi . . . . Her life had been a misery itself,,,, she did'nt get love ever . . . . . . But when she got married . . . . . Her new family loves her alot except rey . . . . . . May be dats her fate! 😭
her words of pain were a clear stabs of 1000 knifes altogether 😡 😭
Thankfully,,, he is feeling something dat how much she loves him 😃
I really enjoyed this update 😉