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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Di mai aapse bot bot naraaz hu ... Aapne subah inni saari baatein ki bt u dint tell me ki u r writing OS...
Ab cntinue karna warna mai double naraaz...
Superb and i am eager to know what is gonna happen next...
Bt naraaz to mai hu apni di se...



bachi...meri pyaari bachi...

tu mujhse naaraz tho ho hi nahi sakthi... u love me ... i know...

baba moring main i didnt ahve a clue whther i will be writing one...

aise hi ek idea aa gayi.. aur likhe diya...

not sure its its good or not.. but 100%b sure will finish it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

KAMINIII


pehle purani wali to khatamkar!!


grrr



he he he

aashu...

'i know.. i couldnt write it... i was not sure about teh story...

i am not into FFs yaar... lol

yeh khatam karungi poori.. sachi muchi!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

main tujhay jaan se mar doongi Smashed Smashed

tu ne new OS start kiya aur PROLOGUE and PART1 bhi send kiya but mujhay PM nahi kiya
KYUN
about OS oh i HATE IT bohat BEKAR likha hai
but abb FRIEND hai too JHAPPI paMUAHHH



sweety,,,

sona...

even i didnt know.. i was gonna write...

lkol

pm abhi tak nah bheja darlin.. lol

thanks for ur love and support!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2:

what...what did u just say... Parineeta Khuarana.. who is that...

Maan: my sister in law. Can i meet Ms Handa please miss...

Main hi hoon Ms Handa.. Geet... and i dont have any sister... please go away. i dont want to meet anyone..

Maan: Ms Handa.. please hear me out once.. even though i am a legal advisor to khuranas, i have come as a special request from my bhabi...

But i dont want to meet anyone.. I am alone and have been since 10 years... no sister concern was there then.. why now...i dont wnat to meet anyone.. please aap jaayiye yahan se... mujhe kuch bhi nahi sunnna... please understand...

Geet goes inside, and cries in front of her babaji...'Why babaji why... why now'...

Suddenly she hears sound of laughter.. 'hmmm lagtha hai.. pinky aur baki vanar sena aa gayi...'

Geet comes out... pinky and all u.. get to work.. we have less time for preparing food...I want all well prepared... she donned on her attitude wala look...

Pinky: kya geet... tu hume karne kaha deti hai.. tu want ur hand on everything... chal..logon.. madam ki mood sbah subah kharab lagthi hai... chalo.. kitchen main...

She comes with more glasses to setting the table...she saw him sitting on one of her tables..she looks at him...He was the only one sitting there as it has not been time... to open her dhaaba.

He keeps looking at the chaos going on.. Geet's ' Khana apne desh ka'.. ' What a name.. only crazy person will keep a name like that..'

Rina, her waitress comes out.. and goes to Maan...'hey handsome.. what do u wanna for breakfast'...

Maan looks at her...and says... a toast would be fine...RIna: sorry... Sir, we dont have toast on menu..

Geet who was going by his table hears and says, 'yahan pe sirf desi khana miltha hai.'. if u dont like.. please go away...

RIna and all others shocked to see geet behaving rudely to her customer for the FIRST TIME...

Maan stands up. ' Ms Geet i know u are angry.. but u need to hear me out.. please.. this is for ur welfare. not mine...

Geet looks at him.. and after some time.. signals rina to go inside and she sits opposite to the table wheere he sat..

'Bolo...

'Ok Ms Geet... here is it. I am coming on behalf of Mrs Parineeta Khurana.. my sister in law..

This is regarding the will Mr Handa, father of my bhabi and u.. have written...

Geet: I dont know any Handa...

Maan: please hear me out... When Geet was silent, he started again... This is wrt to will.. Mr Handa wishes to give you half of his propeerty for his second daughter Ms Geet Handa.. I was trying to find you for months.. You dont use ur surname why? that was the difficulty. and Now you will ahev to come to Delhi to sign the papers..

Geet: why.. if i am that geet...why didnt u bring those papers to me. i would have signed it here

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Posted: 13 years ago
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maan will geet not listening



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Posted: 13 years ago
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INTERESTING


WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: craziekudi



he he he

aashu...

'i know.. i couldnt write it... i was not sure about teh story...

i am not into FFs yaar... lol

yeh khatam karungi poori.. sachi muchi!!!

agar nahi ki to tere bandaro ko terepe chod dungi😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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