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Negotiate Through Leaves - chapter 1

Dear God,

I am writing to you for seeking your help. I am an 8 year old little girl; I have no parents but I have one brother who loves me very much therefore I can't bear to see him sad. My Brother is very disturbed by his girlfriend; La. She is like a chipkali, always sticking around with my brother. She is not a good future bhabi because she never let me do anything i want. She wants me to dress like her; be Fashionable and wear short skirts but I like wearing salwaar kamiz. Please help me and my brother, take La away from our life. You took my parents away but I did not blame you, yet I still believed in you. Please keep them happy and help me find a solution to my brother's problem. Please God, grand my wish.

P.S. Please don't tell my brother that I asked for your help, because he does not believe in you. And he will get angry at me because he thinks its all nonsense.

With love,

Neha (Pyaar se Nia)

She Fold the piece of paper into a plane and tied it with a kite. On the way to the park for kite-flying, she saw her brother sitting under the tree with his laptop on his lap. Scared of being caught; she quickly loosens her grip and let go of the kite. The kite had flown away; knowing that she won't be able have it back; she gave up and ran to her room. While she was doing her homework, a paper plane falls on her book. She opened it and read the message out loud.

Dear Nia,

My dear, I have learned your problem but I can only help you and your brother when your brother starts believing in God. And you don't have to worry, your parents are living happily and their blessings will always be with you and your brother. They are always around; you just need to feel their presence.

P.S. You can show this letter to your brother so that you can prove to him that God does exist.

With love,

Daughter of God (pyaar se Khushi)

"What are you reading Nia?" A familiar, emotionless and mechanical voice came from behind. She turned her face back and caught sight of her emotionless brother. "Nothing bhai" she replied with smile while her heart was full of scariness. He saw the fear in her eyes and knew that she was hiding something.

"Okay then you can tell me when you think it is the right time." He said with a smile. "Now do your homework, you have school tomorrow' come to me if you need help." He turned around and walk towards the door. He was leaving when he felt his sister's hand holding onto his shirt from back. "Bhai I got a reply from the daughter of God. "She said it with innocence but he was boiling with anger. "How many times Nia. Just how many times have I told you god does not exist!! Why can't you accept the fact? How can you believe on someone who does not exist?" He bristles at her with anger. He does, mama said God exist and we must believe in him. Mama won't lie to me." She says while sobbing. "Just shut up and do your homework." He went out and slams the door with anger.

___________________________________________________________________________ Authur's note: okay guys first of all let me clear this, although in this FF i wrote many things maybe against God but it didnt mean that i dont believe in God, infect i do a lot. however i have no choice because the character of the guy is like this. i did not mean to write anything bad about God. im sorry who ever feel bad after reading it. Now tell me if this FF should be continued or i should stop is right here? i need your opinions guys.
P.S i have chosen picture B as the cover Page because more votes were for Picture B.
Farah <3

~ index ~
Chapter 1 - up
Chapter 2 - page 10
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oh it was really really cute…u shd definitely cont it…..
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so I'm happy that you chose this as the banner!!!

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I was waiting for you to update this and I wasn't disappointed!!!!
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amazing one, pls cont soon,loved it to the core, as they say a positive persons approach can change the dimension of ur life and thinking, hope it has come in the first update itself in the form of khushi
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farah... love u yaar
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