Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 1. Chapter 1 - 42. - Page 28

Originally posted by: dona86

loved it...

Thank you😃

Originally posted by: spvd

part 22
fantastic...
i have just fallen in love with this FF dear...
love the story unfolding and also the writing...
so here Geet is annoying Maan and there Arnav is annoying Khushi...
Maan Geet scenes were fantastic...
loved the way Geet is doings things...
and my God she called mushtanda and hatta khaatta naujawaan...
excellent...
Dev kya timing thi...
couldnt he call Maan some time later...
but Daadima and NT are getting to see muft entertainment...
har baar they are missing the pop corn one...
next time include the pop corn too...😆
and Arnav too has come to know about Soni's antics from Maan and it reminded him of Baby...
cant wait for that part though...
and Arnav hes irritating Khushi...
the girls are bringing out the other side of the guys...
khoob match hai...
cont soon dear...

PS - thanks for the dedication sweety...

Thanks for such a lovely review😃

CHAPTER 23. YOU ARE IMPORTANT TO ME

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was a Sunday morning. Maan walked down to the dining table in his casuals only to encounter three glum faces. He raised one eyebrow. What was wrong here? As he stepped near his chair, three upset faces of Dadima, Naintara and Dev gave him a glance and went back to their plates. "Kya baat hai? Aap log itne udaas aur gumsum kyon baithe hain? Aur Soni kahaan hai?", Maan questioned. He looked around and looked at the kitchen. Where was she? From the time she realized that her legs had almost healed she had made it a habit to cook to as many tasty dishes as possible and feed it to the family. Maan had a doubt that she must have been a chef before her memory loss. Infact, today he was eager to eat because Dadima had requested her last night to make her yummy speciality parathas. Maan's mouth watered at the thought of her tasty parathas.

"Veerji, Woh Soni ne aaj maun vrat rakhne ka faisla kiya hai.", Naintara informed him. Her tone indicated that the news seemed worse than the news of a relative's accident. Maan smirked. "Achcha hua usne aisa vrat rakha. Aap logon ko toh khush hona chaahiye. Atleast aaj ke din toh uski bak bak nahi sunne milegi. Finally, ghar mein shanti hogi.", Maan spoke up. "Maan!", Dadima said his name in a scolding tone. "Sirf aadha ghanta hua hai unhe maun rakhe hue aur poora ghar mein sannaata sa chaa gaya hai. Unki awaaz sunne ko kaan taras gaye hai. Unki baaton ki itni aadat lag gayi hai ki ab unki baaton ke bagair khaane ka ek niwaala bhi nahi utarta hai.", Naintara spoke and she pushed the plate of parathas away. Meanwhile, Dev, noticing his wife's action, took the parathas from her plate and put them in his plate. Even though he was sad that his bhabhi had taken such a vrat he was not fool to let go of his favorite parathas. NT and Dadima looked at him and shook their head in disgust.

Maan shook his head at his family's antics. After taking few pieces even Dadima pushed her plate away. "Bas, Davaai ke liye jitni khaani thi humne khaa li, ab aur nahi humse khaaya jaata.", Dadima got up and walked off to her room followed by Naintara. Maan was baffled. Why were they not eating? Is it just because of Soni's maun vrat? Dev decided to put him out of misery. He informed Maan, "Soni ne subah se kuch bhi nahi khaaya. Usne kahaa ki woh shaam tak maun vrat ke saath saath upwaas bhi rakhegi. Thoda khaayegi par woh sirf davaai ke liye uske alaawa kuch nahi legi. Aur aaj poora waqt woh ghar ke mandir mein hi baithi rahegi." Maan was stunned. "Par usne aisa vrat rakha kyun hai?", Maan questioned Dev. "Woh bhabhi ne bataaya nahi. Jab tak poochte tab tak unka vrat shuru ho chukka tha." Maan got up from his place. His hunger died with the news of Soni's upwaas. "Kya hua bro? Naashta nahi karoge?", Dev asked him in a confused tone. "Mujhe bhook nahi hai.", Maan informed him and walked off.

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

Arnav got dressed for office and walked towards the stairs as fast as he could. He wanted the day to start and end as fast as it could, so that he could go and meet his Afreen as soon as possible. Why doesn't the day pass fast, Dammit? Arnav fumed in his mind. He walked of to the door leaving his family baffled. Akash ran upto to his brother and stopped him right at the time when Arnav was about to open the main door. Arnav turned around and barked, "What? Don't you see I am getting late?", Arnav questioned. Why is Akash stopping him? And why wasn't Akash ready? "Tum tayyaar nahi hue. Don't you have office today, Akash?", Arnav questioned him only to receive sounds of laughter from his family. He glanced at them. Why were they laughing like this? Have they all gone mad? Mamiji spoke up after seeing his confused face, "Hello Hi Bye Bye. Arnav Bitwa, today iss Itvaar, meaning Sunday. Aaj aafis (Office) bandh hai bitwa." The family went back into laughing while Arnav, in an embarrassed manner, walked off to his room.

How could he forget that it was Sunday?, Arnav questioned himself. It is all that Afreen's fault. If I had not been so eager to meet her, I would never have acted in such a manner, Arnav thought. He picked up his phone and dialed Khushi's number. The moment she picked up the phone, without giving her a chance to speak he started blasting her, "Yeh sab tumhari galti hai. Sab tumhari. If you had not become my friend, I never would have been so eager to meet you. And I would have never confused Sunday with a workday." Before Arnav could say anymore a voice started speaking from another side, "Haayre Nandkisore! Ee kaun angrezi ma patar patar karatwa hai?" Arnav closed his eyes. Shit! Shit! Shit! Her bua had picked up the phone. Arnav disconnected the call and threw the phone on the bed. He had met the bua once when they had Akash's rishta for Payal. He had reached late after meeting Afreen and he had the first glimpse of Madhumati Bua. After that one experience, he had promised himself never to meet the lady again and stay away from that infernal woman as long as he was alive. The way she had pulled his cheeks still scared him.

Place - Khushi's Room at Laxminagar

Khushi came out of the bathroom after taking bath and was rubbing her hair with the towel when her bua came and spoke to her, "Arre Sankadevi! Tumre liye tumra phone ma kauno caal aaya tha. Kauno angrezi ma patar patar kar raha tha. Tanik daikhlo." Her buaji walked away leaving her confused. Who would call her? After thinking a while it striked her. Her Rakshas must have called. Aur kaun hai jo angrezi mein patar patar karenge? Thought Khushi. She picked up her phone to call him when her buaji called her for some work. She left the phone and walked off not noticing that unknowingly she had pressed some button and her mobile had gone into silent mode.

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

Arnav fumed as he paced his room. It was nearly one hour and Afreen had not called him back. He paced to and fro. He was so wanting to shout at her for making him so crazy that he forgot it was Sunday and here she was not calling him back. Suddenly, he stopped pacing and sat on the bed. He just realized that it was Sunday. That meant he could not meet her today. He swallowed. How was he to spend the whole day and night without meeting her? He picked up the phone and dialed up her number. The ring went on but no one picked up. He called up again but still no one picked up. He tried for three more times but it was of no use. He threw the phone on the bed and walked off to destress himself by trimming his plants.

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was lunchtime and Maan came down for the lunch only to see a morose Dev eating alone. Maan was about to enquire when Dev himself answered that NT and Dadima had gone to feed Soni some lunch so that she could have her medicines and both would eat with her. Maan sighed and took his place. He took some dal and parathas and started to eat. After taking few morsels he remembered how Soni had run behind to feed him because he was empty stomach. If she could not let him go hungry then how could he eat more than few bites when she had eaten only few bites herself? Maan pushed his plate and walked off. He had to ask Soni the reason for her vrat in the evening. What was so important that she decided to do away with food?

Place - Arnav's Poolside at Shantivan

Anjali was worried. She had come to call her Chote for lunch only to see him trim the same plant for nearly twenty minutes. She went and called her husband and her Chutke and both were shocked too. When enquired, Arnav had just shook his head and walked off. And now on the dining table, he was not eating and playing with his food. What was wrong with him?, Anjali thought worriedly. Shyam noticed his Rani Sahiba's expression and nudged Arnav. Arnav came out of his trance and looked at his Jijaji who pointed at the food and then at his Di. Arnav looked at his Di and realized that she was worried because he was not eating. He started eating and Anjali relaxed. After lunch, Arnav walked off to destroy some more of his plants before he either damaged furniture and worried his sister or actually went and killed a certain Afreen for not responding to his calls.

Place - Khushi's room at Laxminagar

It was nearly four in evening when Khushi finally entered her room. One of the neighbours, Preeti wanted a special type of Mehendi in her hand and Khushi had gone to draw it. Soon, other ladies came and asked Khushi to apply mehendi for them too. And hence, Khushi spent the whole day at Preeti's applying Mehendi to ladies of all ages. She looked at her phone screen and gasped. Her Rakshas had called up and she had not responded. Haiye Devi Maiyya! Yeh kya humne kar diya? Woh Rakshas toh humein khaa jaayenge! Khushi thought worriedly. She dialed his number and he picked up. Before she could speak, he blasted her, "Abhi time mila tumhein phone karne ka, Khushi Kumari Gupta?" She could feel that he was barely holding onto his anger and he had spoken while gritting his teeth. She automatically corrected him, "Afreen." "Haan Haan! Jaanta hoon. Maine hi tumhein yeh naam diya hai bhoolo mat.", she heard him reply angrily. She rolled her eyes. This guy was seriously mental, Khushi thought. "Hum nahi bhoolenge. Lekin aap yeh toh bataayiye aapne itni baar humein call kyun kiya?", she questioned him. There was silence from other side. Khushi got worried. Was he alright? "Who…..actually…..I missed you.", came a reply from the other side after a while. "Kya?", Khushi asked in shock. He missed her. She smiled tenderly. How sweet of him! She thought. "Aapne sach mein Mujhe miss kiya?", she asked in wonder. "Nahi! Mujhe toh jhoot bolne shauk chadha hai.", came a sarcastic reply. Khushi pouted. "Mujhe tumse milna hai.", he told her. She swallowed. "Abhi?", she enquired. "Nahi! Ek kaam karte hai. Hum do din baad milte hain. Theek hai?", he told her in a sweet tone. She frowned. "Do din baad kyun? Aap humse kal nahi milne aaoge?", she asked him sadly. Won't he meet her tomorrow? Why? She sadly wondered. "Khushi Kumari Gupta urf Afreen! Agar tum Mujhe aadhe ghante mein nahi mili toh main tumhein ghar ke andar aake uthaake le jaaonga.", he informed her in a stern tone. "Kya?", Khushi asked aghast by his demand. "Yes! Aur wahin pe milna jahaan main roz tumhein drop karta hoon." The call was disconnected. Khushi looked at phone in shock. She swallowed again. If she did not come he would carry her from her house! What was wrong with him? Khushi wondered.

Khushi got ready in record time. She was about to leave when she noticed her hair. The Rakshas preferred open hair, she remembered. She opened her hair and smiled at herself in the mirror. She ran out of the house giving some lame excuse to Buaji. She ran as fast as she could to the spot where he would drop her off daily. She stood there panting when Arnav's car arrived. He got out of the car and walked towards her. He was not dressed in his regular suit and was wearing simple jeans and long sleeved T-Shirt. Khushi gulped. She had never seen him in casuals and was shocked. Haiye Devi Maiyya! Yeh uss angrezi suit mein kya kam hero lagte the ki ab yeh aise kapdo mein aagaye. Her heart started beating faster as he came closer. She took a step back and he stopped. He stared at her face for few minutes and gave her a tender smile. Khushi's eyes widened at his smile and her heart started beating faster. She was sure that pretty soon her heart will burst out of her chest. He stared for few minutes and then turned and walked off. Khushi looked at him incredulously. Yeh kya tha? He came, he stared, he smiled and then he walked away. What was going on here? "Suniye, Arnavji", she ran after him and put her hand on his shoulder. He turned and looked at her. "Yeh kya tha? Aap bina baat kiye chal diye. Kyon bulaaya yeh bhi bataaya nahi.", Khushi complained. Arnav gave her another smile and spoke, "Main tumhein dekhna chaahta tha. Dekhliya. Ab chalta hoon. Kal shaam ko milenge." He started his car and drove off leaving a stunned Khushi behind. She stared at the road for few minutes and then walked off to her house confused.

Place - Khurana Mansion

Maan stood at the mandir behind his family members while Soni distributed the Prasad. She came near him and gave him the Prasad and smiled at him. Maan's lips unknowingly stretched into a smile shocking his Dadima, Naintara and Dev into silence. Soni was about to walk off when Maan stopped her by holding her wrist. Dadima, NT and Dev stared at both of them waiting for their daily entertainment to start. But what started was a small discussion which ended with a sweet reply; a reply that touched their heart.

Maan held Soni's wrist and Soni turned around. He left her hand and asked her, "Tumne bataaya nahi?" "Kya?", Soni questioned with a confused expression on her face. "Yahi ki tumne yeh vrat aur upwaas kyon rakha?", Maan asked her. She smiled at him and replied, "Woh Dev kal bata rahe the ki aapka ek important project ke tender ka result kal aa raha hai. Agar yeh project aapko mila toh KC ko karodon ka faayda hoga. Aur Dev ne yeh bhi bataaya ki yeh project aapke liye kitna important hai. Toh maine socha ki kyon na main Babaji se aapke liye prarthana karoon. Toh bas maine yeh vrat rakh liya. Aap toh jaante hain ki Mujhe baatein karna kitna pasand hai. Toh maine socha ki upwaas ke saath saath kyon na maun vrat rakh loon. Taaki Babaji ko pata chale ki mere liye aapka jeetna kitna important hai aur woh meri sunlein." She walked off leaving behind a shocked Maan behind. Maan looked at her reatreating back and questioned her in his mind, Am I that Important to You?

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

Arnav was about to go downstairs for dinner when he received a message from Afreen. "Kya aap humein kal subah aath baje pick up kar sakte hai? Humein kuch kaam hai. Hum aapka wahin intezaar karenge jahaan hum aaj shaam ko mile the." He smiled and replied back with a 'Yes'. He smirked as he realized that he was going to meet his Afreen in the morning itself.

Place - Dining Table at Khurana Mansion

It was dinner time and three members of Khurana family - a certain Dadima, NT and Dev were presented with a shocking view; atleast shocking for them. While Soni served every family member like a typical elder bahu and sat down to eat herself, her future husband, atleast to her, decided that staring at her was lot more interesting than eating the food. So three fifth of the Khurana family was treated to a view of Maan staring at Soni the whole time they were eating.

Place - Pick up and Drop off point for Khushi near Laxminagar

Arnav waited for Khushi in his car while checking his blackberry. Soon, Khushi arrived and sat down in the passenger seat. He smirked as he noticed her open hair but refrained from commenting. He did not want her angry early morning or else he would be treated to empty drive in the evening. After saying Hi and Hello the drive started with Khushi directing Arnav to the place she wanted to go. Soon, they reached the place and Arnav was shocked to see a Mandir. She wanted to visit a Mandir today! Arnav looked at her in shock. Khushi did not even glance at his face as she got out of the car. He also got out when she turned and smiled at him. "Kal humein pata chala ki aaj humaara Second Year ka result laga hai. Humaari Jiji aaj shaam ko jaakar pata lagaayengi ki hum pass hue ki fail. Pass toh hum ho jaayenge par humaare rank ka humein bahut dar lag raha hai. Pata nahi kitna rank aayega. Isliye hum yahaan aaj aana chaahte the. Chaliye! Devi Maiyya ke darshan karlein." She caught hold of his hand and tried to drag him up the stairs but he refused to budge. She turned around and looked at him quizzically. "Mujhe bhagwan pe wishwas nahi.", he informed her. She was taken aback by his confession and was about to give him lecture on believing in God when she stopped her self and noticed in his posture. His eyes and his body language spoke of nothing but pain and Khushi took a step back. Something was wrong here! Arnavji must have had a very strong reason for not believing in Devi Maiyya, Khushi thought as she looked at him. She realized for the first time that Arnav must have had some reason for being so arrogant too. She realized that he was a human too but just with some hurt in his heart. She turned around and decided to go alone to pray to her Devi Maiyya but she could not take another step. She slowly turned back and looked at Arnav. She came close to him and caught hold of his hand. Arnav glanced at her hand and looked at her. She gave him a tentative smile. "Aap Devi Maiyya par vishwas naa karein par ek dost ke sahaare bankar toh chal sakte haina? Hum jab bhi result ke liye Devi Maiyya se prarthana karne jaate hain tab humein bahut darr lagta hai. Toh hum hamesha Jiji ko saath leke jaate hain. Par ab Jiji yahaan nahi hai aur Jiji ke baad aap hi ho jo mere sabse achche dost ho. Please chaliye." Arnav was touched that she considered him second to her sister; him who harassed her so much few days back. Then he looked at her pleading face and nodded his head. She smiled brightly and dragged him towards the temple. Arnav decided that if ever he entered politics the first thing he will do is ban emotional blackmails; he seriously was scared to think what else his Di and Afreen will make him do next with their pleadings.

After Devi Maiyya's darshan were Khushi prayed and prayed to her Devi while Arnav stared and stared at Khushi as he had no other thing to do, they got into his car and Arnav dropped her off at KC.

Place - Khurana Mansion

It was evening when Maan arrived home in excitement. He had won the tender and wanted to give Sonia the news. He excitedly walked into her room and stopped. She was not there. He looked around but she was not in her room. Shrugging his shoulders, he ran to his Dadima's room but she was not there too. He checked Dev's room expecting her to be there chatting with Naintara but she was not there too. He checked all the rooms upstairs and then checked the rooms in the ground floor but his search yielded no results. Where was she? Maan was beyond worried now. What if the people who wanted to kill her took her away? Maan's heart stopped beating for a second. No! That cannot happen. Maan refused to believe that. Maan was so into searching for Soni that he did not notice that the whole house was empty.

Suddenly, Maan realized that he did not check the terrace. He practically ran to the terrace and looked around but it was of no use. Soni was not there. He sat on the floor in shock. Where was she? Fear gripped his heart. He had trouble breathing. He took deep breath but even that seemed hard. He could not think of what to do next. Suddenly, he heard Soni and Naintara's voice. He ran to the terrace edge and he saw them. They were chatting while coming from the direction of the outhouse trailed by his Dadima with all servants trailing behind them carrying many furniture with them. Of course! The Outhouse! How could Maan forget that Khurana Mansion had an outhouse too? He ran all the way down from the terrace and reached the lawn. As soon as he was near Soni he grabbed her and hugged her. Soni was shocked to say the least. Even NT and Dadima were shocked by Maan's reaction. Maan hugged her for good 15 minutes before he left her. His concern soon turned into anger at her for making him worry so much. He grabbed her shoulders and shook her. "Kahaan thi tum?", he roared at her. Soni was by now used to him shouting at her for no reason. She shrugged his hands from her shoulders and spoke in an exasperated tone, "Arre! Hum sab Outhouse mein the. Woh Dadima ne socha ki ab unke saath NT aur main bhi hoon toh kyon na hum dono outhouse ki renovation ke liye unhein humaare ideas dein. Toh hum sab wahin the. Aap bhi na Maan, bewajah pareshaan hote hain." Soni walked off from there followed by NT and the servants while Dadima put her hand on Maan's shoulder. "Aap theek toh hain Maan? Aapne kabhi is tarah ka bartaav pehle nahi kiya. Aap theek haina?", Dadima asked him and Maan nodded his head. Dadima walked off leaving a baffled Maan behind.

Maan entered his room and sat on his bed totally confused. What happened there? Why he behaved in such a manner? Why he felt as if he would die if he did not find Soni soon? Maan walked up to the mirror and questioned himself, "Yeh Mujhe kya ho raha hain?"

Place - Outside KC

Arnav waited to Khushi in his car and soon she came. Arnav drove off to her area and dropped her off at their regular drop off point. She waved him and was about to walk off when her phone rang. She smiled at the screen and signaled him to wait. He got out of his car and stood beside her. She spoke for few minutes then disconnected the call. She turned around and gave him a big smile. "Jiji ka phone tha. Hum pass hogaye. Woh bhi poore class mein top aaye.", she told him. Next thing she did shocked Arnav to his core. She hugged him tightly and gave him a kiss on his left cheek. She grinned at him and ran off screaming to everybody passing by that she has topped her SY.

Arnav was shocked. His heart started beating faster. His left hand went to his cheek while his right hand went to his chest right where his heart was placed. He took a step back and leaned on his car. He closed his eyes trying to stop his heart from beating so fast but as soon as he closed his eyes he was reminded of her soft lips on his cheek. He opened his eyes, turned towards the car and sat into the driver seat. He rested his head on the steering wheel. Why was his heart beating as if he had run a marathon? Why she affected him so much today? He questioned himself, "What is happening to me?"

P.S. My answer to both the boys, "Abe Ghadhon! Pyar ho raha hai!" Hehe Hehe!

Next update on Tuesday! Enjoy the weekend!

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A SMALL SCENE

DING! DONG! DING! DONG!

NT walked towards the door wondering who was there. She opens the door to see a behenji type girl wearing a salwar kameez and specs and smiling like an idiot. She murmurs to herself "Is FF mein itne behenji kya kam the jo aur ek bhej diya. Soni, Khushi, Payal aur ab yeh. Yahaan toh behenjiyon ki fauj lagi hai."

NT: Yes! How may I help you?

The girl: Hello! I am Kalpana, a writer

NT: Oh! Kalpana means imagination. No wonder you are a writer. But how may I help you?

Kalpana: Madam, I have a delivery for you.

NT: You are a writer and you are delivering?

NT wonders whether the girl has gone mad.

Kalpana: Sort off, Ma'am. It is a special delivery.

NT: Oh, Okay! But from whom and what is it?

Kalpana: It is from Deepa Ma'am from spvd services.

NT: Kaun Deepa? Main nahi jaanti Deepa ko.

Kalpana thinks "Finally hindi boli. English bol bolke main thak gayi thi. Aur English mein yeh baat karti toh main iska Khoon kardeti."

Kalpana: Aap unko nahi jaanti par woh aapko jaanti hai. Aur yeh free hai.

NT (excitedly): Free hai?

NT excitedly grabs the box and opens it. The box is nearly three feet in height and contains popcorns. NT smiles but frowns.

NT: Ab iski jaroorat nahi.

Kalpana: Kyon?

NT: Maan aur Soni mein jhagde kahaan ho rahe hai.

Kalpana scratches her head. She thinks: But I wrote lots of nok jhok in chapter 21 and 22. Why she is telling such things.

Kalpana: Par Ma'am jhagde kahaan bandh hue? Abhi haq pe jhagda hua phir parathe pe jhagda hua.

NT: Par chapter 23 mein nahi hua. Wahaan toh ek sweet scene hua aur phir doosre din Maan ne Soni ko gale lagaya.

Kalpana: Arre! Yeh toh pyar ke taraf jaa rahe hain. Kya aap khush nahi hai?

NT: Khush hoon. But what is the use of popcorn now if there will be no nok-jhok.

Kalpana bites her nails. She thinks: Arre! Isne popcorn nahi liya toh Deepu ke request ka kya hoga. Soch Kappa Soch.

Soon, Kalpana ki dimaag ki batti jail.

Kalpana: Par chapter 24 mein nok-jhok guarantee hai. Woh Sanyal aunty ki beti ki shaadi mein hi hoga.

NT: Par hum sab uss shaadi mein nahi jaa rahe. Sirf Soni-Maan jaa rahe hai.

Kalpana slaps her forehead. She thinks: Arre! Buddhu hoon main! Maine hi toh Maan aur Soni ko akele bhejne ka plan kiya tha.

Kalpana: Toh uske ke baad mein Parathe par bhi ek jhagda hai.

NT brightens up. She asks: Sachchi?

Kalpana: Promise!

NT smiles and drags the box inside.

Kalpana turns to her readers and gives them a thumbs up.

Kalpana's message: Le Deepu, tera kaam hogaya. Ab next time ke jhagde mein Dadima aur NT ka popcorn pakka. Aur baki readeron, Aapki aisi farmaayish ho toh pesh kijiye. Main poori karne ki koshish karoongi but no guarantee haan!

P.S. Arre! Bataana toh bhool hi gayi. This scene is dedicated to Deepa (spvd) Thanks for the idea.

awsome update

Wow! Nice update! Loved how Maan and ASR are finally starting to wonder what's happening to them. Soni fasting for Maan's tender and Maan also not eating except a few morsels was very cute! And finally Khushi hugging and kissing ASR on the cheek after topping was a surprise! I never thought Khushi would be the first one to kiss ASR...I always thought it's the man who takes the initiative. That was amazing!

you are so right when you say abe gadhon isse pyaar kehete hain
really for two very intelligent boys they can be so dumb sometimes parr kya karein pheli baar aisa hua hai naa inke saath toh kaise pataa chalega inhe ki kya hai yeh
bless soni keeping vrat for maan so he can get the tender and afreen managed to get arnav to the temple
waise ek baat toh hai you are too good in understanding the characteristics of all four and the other characters too
waah ji arnav toh inke driver ban gaye hain not that i am complaining sure beats the times he said get out to khushi in the serial
this is getting better and better with each update and i keep looking forward to your next updates now that love is in the air for the boys at least hope you take little bit time with the girls though so that our boys do realise their love first it will be good to see htem in love before our girls but thats just a suggestion
arnav kitne bechain hoo jata hain jab woh afreen ko nahin dekhete aur maan bhi jab woh soni ko nahin sunte kya baat hai lage raho
waise dev ki pitaai hui ki nahin nt ke haathon because of his untimely arrival in the last update
what else can i say this is really my fav ff i just cant wait for tue, thur and sat anymore you are the best man
thanx for pm