New AarYa FF; K@$hm@k@$h IMP NOTE pg 79 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
It's very nice. Keep it up.
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Beautiful story. Pls update soon.😊
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awww i so so so luved d update...superb job cutie!
i luv aarti's strength...n zeal to live for her daughters...
m glad ansh has become so fond of aarti in few meets...
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now waiting eagerly for arya's life to move on 😃
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The English translations of the update are in the brackets...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if you are comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...''

Part 10


Both of them see their children playing and enjoying together…All of the sudden rain disrupts the play and they were forced to leave….

Aarti: payal palak chalo jaldi…nahin to sardi lag jaegi…. [payal plak move otherwise you will catch cold…]

Here yash asked ansh the same thing and all of them ran away…while both of them were going their own ways yash noticed that aarti was waiting for a cab and was by the time all wet….it was not only aarti but her two angels were in the same condition…yash took his car and went towards her…

Yash: aarti car mein baitho main tumhe chod deta hu…[aarti sit in the car ll drop u…]

Aarti: nahin yash tum chalo abhi koi auto mil jaega….[no yash u go ahead….we will get an auto soon..]

Yash: aarti tumhari behes karne ki aadat abhi bhi nahin gayi na…apne liye nahin payal or palak ke liye baith jao….[aarti u still the same …if not for u just sil for payal and palak…]

She was forced to sit in the car now….and upon that she was sneezing badly…

Palak: mumma apko to cold ho gaya…[mom you have caught cold…]

Yash: aarti jab tum jaanti ho ki tumse sardi bardasht nahin hoti to tum aise karti hi kyu ho? [aarti when u know that u cant tolerate this weather then y do u do that..?]

Aarti: nahin main thik hu…[no m fine…]

Yash: haan vo to main dekh hi raha hu….ab tum wahi karogi jo main kahunga samjhi…[yes I can see that…now u will do as I say…]

He takes aarti to his own home….aarti hesitates but he doesnot listens and she was forced to go….Yash and aarti being best friends at the college time, his mother had a hint of Aarti…here aarti was sneezing badly….

Payal: ye hum kaha aaye hai…? [where have we come?]

Yash: beta aap hamare ghar chal rahein hai…aap ache se bheeg gaye ho na to thori der hamare pass ruk ke main apko wapis chod dunga….[you are going to our place….you guys are all wet and you will stay with us for a while and then I will drop you to your place…]

Aarti: lekin yash ma or bauji hamara wait kar rahe honge..[but yash mom and dad might be waiting for us…]

He gives his cell to her and tells her to inform them that she is at yash's place…she even had no option rather than doing the same….finally they reached Sindhiya mansion….payal and palak were really happy to see such a big house….he takes them to his house…

Vidhi and gayatri are sitting in the drawing room….where they notice yash coming with someone else….they were shocked because they had never seen yash like that before….behind them were payal, palak and ansh..

Gayatri: ye tum log itna ksie bheeg gaye…? [how are u guys are so wet?]

Yash: ma vo park gaye the wapis achanak se baarish hui to …. [we were in the park and all of the sudden it started raining…]

Aarti again sneezed….gayatri offered her to sit...

Yash: ma lagta hai apne aarti ko pehchana nahin…? [mom I guess u dint recognize aarti..?]

Gayatri: muje aise lag raha hai ki maine isse kahi dekha hai par yaad nahin aa raha…[I feel that I have seen her but unable to recognize where…?]

Yash: mom ye mere college ki friend aarti hai…[mom she is my college mate Aarti…]

Gayatri notices payal and palak who were standing next to aarti…..she hugged them….

Gaytri(looking towards aarti): or ye tumhari betiyan hai?? [and both of them are ur daughters?]

Aarti nodded her head and again sneezed…..

Vidhi: apko to sardi lag gayi hai….aap mere saath aaiye main apko apni saari de deti hu…. [U have caught cold…u come with me …I will give u my clothes….]

Aarti: nahin aisi koi baat nahin main thik hu,…[its nothing like that…I m fine…]

Vidhi: ghabrayein mat main yash ki bhabhi hu…..chaliye nahin to zyada beemar pad jaengi….aap apni betiyon ko bhi saath le aiye….meri beti ke kuch kapde hai unhe change karwa dete hai…chaliye[don't be scared…I m yash's sister in law…come fast otherwise you will catch cold….and take ur daughters along so that they can even change….now come…]

Gaytri: jaao beta….or haan yash tum or ansh bhi change kar lo…. [go aarti and yes yash you and anshe even change your clothes…]

All of them leave….after a while yash comes and sits next to his mother and tells about aarti's past and how he met her after a long time….gayatri did not react but something else was going in her mind…after sometime Aarti also comes after changing her clothes…

Gayatri: to tumne yash ka office join kia hai…[so u have joined yash's office..?]

Aarti: ji aunty…[yess…]

In the meantime vidhi gets karha prepared for her…..she hesitates in drinking but yash interrupts..

Yash: ye to tumhari purani aadat hai aarti…pehle apna khayal ni rakhti or uske baad dawa lene mein aanakani chup chap isko pe lo…[its your old habit…first you don't care for yourself and then u hesitate in having medicine…now just take it…]

Gayatri and Vidhi were noticing Yash and even aarti agreed to what he said….Here Aarti was even quite comfortable with vidhi…. it was already late for them to be there….

Aarti: aunty ab hum chalte hai ma bauji hamara wait kar rahe honge…[aunty we will take a leave…mom and dad must be waiting…]

Yash: main tumhe chodne chalta hu…[I will come and drop u…]

Aarti: nahin main chali jaungi ab to mausam waise bhi thik ho gaya hai…[I will go my myself now the wather is also fine…]

Yash: tumne suna nahin….[u don't listen..]

Here aarti and yash leaves after aarti taking blessings from his mom and vidhi…gayatri was stunned by the authoritative nature of Yash on aarti….

Vidhi: ma ji kya aap bhi wahi soch rahi hai jo… [mom are u even thinking the same as i…]

Gayatri: soch to main bhi rahi hu….agar aisa ho gaya to mere yash ki zindagi ka sunapan dur ho jaega…. [even I m thinking the same….and if that happens…the loneliness in yash's life will disappear…]

Precap: Aarti's first day at office….😳😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
HAPPY TO BE FIRST ...


Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice dear n thanks 4 the PM...can't wait 2 read further
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update dear..
Loving this FF..
Waiting for next part...
Thanx for pm dear...

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