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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for late comment di.Nice update..Mayank won the race and nupur is scared of loosing him...great sign...continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Sorry for late comment di.Nice update..Mayank won the race and nupur is scared of loosing him...great sign...continue soon.



oh my dear ruchiji aap kab apni updated dengi...
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Posted: 13 years ago



This update have Kheya n Ruchi's request..hope u like it

Chapter: 16 (LAst Part)

Saint: hey u will be going back

Mayank: yup I have to .. I don't belong here…

Nupur who was listening to his heroic story smilingly as he was narrating it like a hero.. was stopped in her track and looked back at him… at his words of leaving back to NY>>>

Did he just said he didn't belong here .. so what he have thought about us… is this was just the way it has always been for him, but it wasn't he himself has said that numerous time…I have felt it the other way..no way it cant be… just wait nupur…what he is goonna do with u.. ur not gonna go n ask..let him show wht he thought…

Mayank: ben strt packing things we'll be leaving it's a long journey and I need to finish up the mess soon pretty soon…

Ben: tonite… don't u thing its to early have some time here than…

Mayank: no ben he is sooo much on my mind that I cant just do anything else right now other than telling him wht I can doo… plss ben.. I know u r tired running around with me.. but this last thing .. than ur off to long vacations… I promise

Ben: shut up dude.. donot act so senti… anything for my bro… he tagged him and went to pack his things..

They were placing their things in the car and he was searching whole house.. there was no sign of her.. he was looking all around.. since morning he was busy in his things so didn't talked with her that much… and now where she is …

Mayank: saint where is nupur…

Saint: she isn't home… I haven't seen her since evening….

Mayank: crab man… now how will I meet her… u know were she has gone

Saint: u know I never ask her… and today even I don't know when she left and were she is….

Mayank: I need to ask her sumthing… oky just give me a min I am coming back….

………….

It was along journey towards their home back.. but it was an amazing feel. The place where he though he can never return alteast with so much inside him …finally he was towards it… with new life new feel, and new courage to make addy know wht he messed with…but in all that one thing he cant just get out of his mind was the fact she didn't meet him….

Ben: where are u amigo… still in Miami

Mayank: I don't like it this way… I mean I need to talk to her.. why she went there..

Ben: that u need to find an answer to within urself… she must be expecting somthin

Mayank: god these girls n there stupid expectations…

Ben: whts the plan for addy…

Mayank: u know wht I am thinking… to trap him in the same way he did me..

Ben: u cant.. ur in eyes of police… plus we will be needing more drivers for this…

Mayank: so what to doo… people are not rplying even to my text to hell with them….he threw his mobile on dashboard… and closed his eyes to catch sum sleep while benji was driving….

……..

It was after two days he has reached NY, he hasn't went out nor any clubbing or fun he has done, he didn't when addy to know tht he is back and in such a good condition all these days he was scheming the whole plan…and now tonite was the implementation day….

He took his cell and called one of his reliable source..the girls..

Mackz: hello sweetheart.. howz my girl…

Girl: I m good dear..

Mackz: okay so I have a plan that I want ur help on… wanna join me….

Girl: anything for u mackz… just name it….

……..

It was a Saturday night, and the pub was on height of party.. addy was too there having fun all around with girls and drinks..he was dancing on like anything..having his share of fun all along…

A girl highly beautiful, her hairs were open, wearing a knee length skirt, making her dam hot came inside and took the seat just opposite to where addy was dance…. She order a drink and kept looking at him quite seductively…

Addy can see it all, he was drooling over the girl, she was hot, he was too attractive, she was all he can ask for himself tonite..he smirk and left the dance floor and came and sat beside the girl..pretty closely

Addy: looks like we have guest here…

She didn't respond and kept looking at dance floor…

Addy turned her set to him, and she looked at him with a frown

Addy: hey beautiful.. I am talking to u

Girl: aha really… so than

Addy: ah..ladies with attitude ahh I so like them….ur new at NY

Girl: how u can say tht.. I m not..

Addy: oh really than how cum such hot girl never came in addy's eyes… he placed his hand on her leg slightly and she looked at his hand and than to him..

Girl: get off ur hands..

Addy: okay…he leaned close to her, just an inch away… wht if I get on u..

Girl: u cant win me like that..she trace his fingers on his face… and gave him a drink..he gulped it down in a one go…

Addy: really u think so… encircling his hand around her waist … how u want me to win u…

Girl: she smirk…and placed her hand around his neck… tonite I am with sumone else… make him loss.. and than.. we will celebrate in our way…

Addy: ah.. oh mine… I have already start celebrating…. Cum on I we will make him loss

Girl: not like tht… he is the best of Miami …and nobody has beaten him in race… I have heard u race too

Addy: yes I do..its like tht.. than my lady just wait n watch… I am the best of states… just be ready to make it grand for me tonite…

Girl: cum back wining… I will make it huge..dear

He took another drink and gulped it down in a go…

Addy: so where is ur so called man….

Girl: u go out in ur car I will call him.. im telling u his car no…

Addy: okay..

He went out side and she dialed a no…

Girl: he is on his way …

Gr8… lets rock..

Addy came out in drunk state.. he sat in his car and look here and there for the car..just he saw that girl on his side window…

Girl: she placed her fingers in his hairs…. There the red car… get him quick.. u have to pass to the central street and cum back here…who so ever is the first one will win…

Addy: I will cant wait any more….

She moved away and the red car press accelerator letting him know he is ready, addy to put his car in gear and without waiting for the other he rushed his car to the street…

The race start and addy was in lead…the red car was drived my mayank… he too near him… the were driving on the maian street, yet it was emeoty unlike the day…

Mayank hit addy's car from the back in the same way he did his car….one time two time n third time…twirling his car round

Addy was to drunk to control the car… but still he put his car in the right track and strt chasing mayank…. He was too muvh drunked and was highly arose to get the girl any how… he put his car in high speed..and came beside mayank's car ..he looke at him n smirk… there was a diversion cuming in front…he hit mayank' car to left.. more n more…so that it went to the divereted road…

Addy: aha… the girl is mine… ur a jerk

Mayank: u cant beat me this time addy…. He stoped his car and turned back to catech him… addy car was in high speed and his vison was not to clear due to too much alchol…he was in the lane of pub…yet he found mayanks car to close to him…

Addy without thinking tht its to naroow street hit the NOS… he couldn't control the car…and mayank hit the NOS too this time.. with it ..he hit Addy's car from the back

Addy was out of its wits… he was freaking out the way car was twirling around and he couldn't control it any how…mayank stoped his car way back…

The car crashed with high speed in to the wall of pub, addy was compleltey out of vontrol, he wasn't ablt to handle such speed in such drunk date… yet he wasn't bothered about anything… the main galss door of the pub was broken and people strted together…

Addy cum down… and was having difficulty in walking…he has turned mad in this state…he saw the girl and came to her and grip her hand

Girl : don't touch …leave me….

Addy: not now sweet heart..see I am first here…. He was trying to get close to her, griping her shoulder's..in an urge to kiss her …. when it was too much of mackz's tolerance to see all this…. He step down and went near him

Mackz: move ur hands off… he griped his hand and pushed him back, while the girl came behind mazck 's and hold him from his shoulder….

Addy: u… u are here… and wht u think ur doing with my girl..he again moved to her and this time hold her nap of neck…

Mackz punch him hard on nose…he got droped back at the floor

Mackz: donot u… he went to him and grip his colllor….donot u evr even try to touch my girl..smacking his face on more time…. And now its pay back time

Girl: mackz we gota leave from here cops are here…she griped him…and pulled him out

Girl: common leave him….

Mackz took the other side and slowly went to his car.. yet was watching all that was happening from the tinned class…

Addy was arrest for diring in drunked stage, for crashing the pubs entrance..and for almost killing atleast 50 people….

Mayank felt a hand on his shoulder.. and he smile…

Mackz: I did it to him… now he will pay for wht he has done..unlike me who paid for nothing..

Girl: relax dear… so finally u have done it… are we getting any celebrations…

He smirk and truned to her…. But than get angry

Mackz: celebration… why the hell u need to do all this to him...u know I hate the way u were touching him and allowing him to touch u anywhere ….that was too much nupusi

Nupsi???…. Ya … do u think that they aren't together than ur mistaken…

Nupur: what I was trying to seduce him…as u have asked me to..whts my fault..she said with an inncocnet face …

Mackz: aha really… and why I haven't got the privilege of this seduction….

Nupur: oh .. so its is that so….

Mackz: ya sweetheart its that so…. And its pay back time for u now…

Nupur: well I agree with u now..ur plan was gr8…/

Amckz: thanku…

So u all must be wondering when did all this happened…okay last go back to the start..remebering leaving Miami mayank went back to house..he actually went back to her room, leaving a note for her….

Hi nupsi….

I need u to cum to NY, though I though it must be obivpous u will be accoplying me, but than I think I was thinking worng… I am just asking to u be there so that I can have u with me when handling addy… and after that…it will be ur choice were WE are living..its doent matters to me… wht matters is u beside me….

And I mean it….

Mayank…

PS: cum ASAP to NY… address is here….i 'll be waitng…

Nupru when came in morning at home, fins this note stick on the miro of her room, and hated him more for being so chilled on this, how can he be so sire that she will not be angry on him for not even talking to her.. huh.. she is not going to help him at all…

But than it is hard to be away from him, the person whom she loves so much… and wht she expected from him.. a proper romantic emotional talk…. Sigh…no way…his so many miss calls and so many msg have sumhow convinced her to help him….

So she went to NY and one nite he find the bell rung of his door, though when she stop answering his msg and calls he thought he has to go back to miamai to manfoy her…. Bithe didn't knew that she is playing along with him so well..

Mackz: ben get the door…ben…. Wht the hell… I have to do everything, have to live here Alone, handle my problems Alone, rome around this big house Alone, even when I will beat addy ..i'll be partying Alone… and now have to see the droo…Alone..huh..

With that he opened the door and his jaw droped….nupur was standing at his door…

Nupur: so mackz has finally lost it, talking to urself Alone…

Mackz: he oved forward and wept her off feets hugging her tight.. I knew it I knew it..i so knew it….ur not gonna leave me alone…he crashed her more…gosh I so miseed u…

Her all anger and plans to make him feel worsed, punishing him for leaving her back like that slipt away when she flet a strange warmth this time in his touch, it shows yes he missed her, and that so pretty much….

He moved back after time he realize he has feel her enough…and cuped her faced and kissed her forehead..

Nupur: u want me to stay roadside….

Mackz: ohh.. sorry… cum on in… he took her bag and took her inside…

She looked around and droped herself on th sofa…and he came and sat beside her offering her coffe…

Nupur: wao…thanks…. Ur surving ur guest…

Mackz: ur a guest?...huh…how mean

She was silently having her coffee ans he was trying and compiling his words to let her know wht he wants to…yet ..

Mackz: nupur…i..

She turned to him to listen carefully, his expression's were cute and hestitant….

Mackz: I am sorry.. I didn't mean to hurt u that way….

Nupur: which..n why actually it matters to u…u even didn't feel like talking to me…

Mackz: it isn't like that seriously it isn't like that…. U just thought it isn't obivious u r will be with me…

Nupur: how cum it is so obivious…. Haan..will u explain…u decide to leave the place…did u said even once to me that is in ur plans….am I a psyuchic reader or wht…

Mackz: nupsi pls ..listen.. I never have told anyone from years wht I am doing n wht not… and with u ..i have taken u compeleteyly for granted… for me its to obvious that u will be beside me always…

Nupur: n wht abt u …beside me

Mackz: isn't it …. He cuped her face… i am alwys there… always… its just not a night stand with u… I really love u a lot…. I am not gonna leave u evr..i just cant do so…

Mayank was caught off guard when he flet her lips pressed against his, she was returning the confeesion.. he hold her close to him and kissed her back with the same passion and love for her….

Later at night he was lying beside her hugging her from back, kissing and playing with her fingers…

Nupur: wht u have planned for addy…

Mayank: I planning to trap him in the same way he did me, yet with a driffrent style…

I need ur help fpr that..

Nupur: how…

Mayank: 2morwo is saturaday and he will be found at the night club he always went… I wantu to go there and just attract him…convince him to race with me…

Nupur: okay…

Mayank: make him drunk…but… be very very carful…he is a B**** and he loves to force girls… so be very carefull…stay away from him

Nupur: maynk u want me to attract him and than stay away from him wht…

Mayank: I mean attract him, but not go to close to him….

Nupur: how can its possible.. he is not a kid who will drool on girl , he wants her beside close to him…I wil handle it…

Mayank: wht do u mean u handle him.. I will be there all around u…so u don't have to worry..we will drop the idea if he try to manhandle u… okay…

Nupur: I said I can handle him… oky..fine I made him agree to race with u than

Mayank: than we will race on the sane track and than cum back to pub… as he was drunked and must be dribing at pretty high speed… u will be there at pub and will call police ..saying he is trying to abuse u, he is drunked, and he was dribing on to high speed, and has almost killed sum people on road..that I know he will hit…

Nupur: hmm… okay..but still it wil not pay him to much…

Mayank: let see dribing in drunk state …how much contrl he can have…will make him pay for it….

Nupur: okay….but still I m not fining it to good plan…

And that's how they did it with addy…together….

They were in there car towards there home…

Nupur: I though I m getting a party..

Mayank: not here… we have a flght to catch in moring

Nupur: wht..

Mayank: ya sweet heart… we r going to maiami for good…

Nupur: Mayank… are u sure abt ti…

Mayank: ya nupsi… I m somhow hating this city..it has always taken from me everything I have earm… so I just dono want to live here…

Nupur: is it so or its because of me

Mayank: both ways..anything for my princes….he stop the car infront of his home…

And they came out…

He pinned her to the door of the house…

Mayank: though I do have a different way of partying plan today..

She turned the knob and door opened..making him loss his steps and she got out of the grip

Nupur: really I m not finindg ut ways being exicutated …she smirk…

Mayank: just wait n watch.

He run towards her n swept her in his arms.. n kissed her passionately..

………………..

A week later…

Saint: well I was aplaning to ask u from so long….

Mayank: wht…

Saint n mackz where at the dirnks counter and ben n nupur were dancing on the floor…it was tonite they were celebrating addy's caught… and partying all night

Saint: wht are u doing with my sister

Mayank: he raised his eyrborws n smirk…. U really want to know the detail of wht we do.. how shanless of u…

Saint: mackz… im serious… she isn't ur types of girls..

Mayank: relax dude..im not playing along with ur sister…I love her..

Saint: are u sure…

Mayank: yes I am….

Saint: donot ever do sumthing that I will regert I treated u as my borther

Mayan: common dude u wont…he huuged him nad went to dance floor…

Will u excuse my girl

Ben: yes pls.. I will find mine..he wink and left them….

And he pulled her to him..enciling his arms around her..touching there foreheads..they were dancing intiamely….

Just than nupur's cell rung…

Nupur: ya..oky…thnks for info

Mayank: wht..

Nupur: there is a race about to strt in 30 mins…she smik

Mayank: and my time strts now… lets rock…

The both smile and went out to the car…

The race began in

3…2…1…

The End

...

Ok so here cums the end

As I donot want to delay it further I have posted it without replying to u all

Thanku all for reading it…. And enjoying though initially I was pretty apprehensive about this story…but I love u all for letting me experiment so much

Cya at Muhabbat YUn…

N soon at a new ff too…..

Thnks a lot

Fiza Ahmed


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated.

another thrilling ending Fiza.

u named this ff was true ... gear up!! it was all about speed ... speed ... n speed ... but with brain too, either it would have ruined everything.
but u handled this ff beautifully i must say . i alwz appreciate ur writing ... apart from all ur classics, I love gear up most ... not only its unique storyline, but a total different ff with total different characterization.
from start to ending, this ff was a in rolar costar ride. n ending too was very nice. i like the way mackz punished adhiraj ... that was high time for pay back, n mayank did exactly same what he did, but in very intelligent n sharp way ... loved it loads.

thanks for giving us such a beautiful ff.

thanks again.

love ya ...

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice ending ..


OHO aap to fully CV's ko takkar dene lagi hai..

but frankly speaking ..i truly Loved this FF ..makhan nahi laga rahi hun..sach mai ..😃

Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...

this was certainly unexpected...Fiza di...

amazing update..
Very nice ff..

This was something different from your other one


and was... actually very thrilling..

do make more..
i thought that it would end at sentimental note.

but taking the consideration of the concept of the ff..

i actually liked the ending...


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Posted: 13 years ago
ososssmmm
luved it
surprise was bst
mujhe tu shak ho geya tha nups ho gi
amazing update g
and congo on it's ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing ending fiza
Loved the whole part...starting part, nupur coming to NY, seducing addy, mayank-addy race n the ending part was just superb...Loved mayur sweet, cute n romantic moments.
And i loved most this kind of thrilling, suspense, passionate, interesting writing.
Loved this thrilling ff...Do write more😊

Edited by love.mayurarti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice Ending Fiza,it was really a different one although i could not understands the story bit but i enjoyed Mayur moments...
Plz come up with another one soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was very apt ending Fiza di...loved Mayur throughout the FF.
Perfect that addy got his punishment,and about surprise It was not a surprise for me..I knew wo nupur hogi😆 but I love it..really different FF.

Start a new one soon.
Love ur FFs and writing😃😳
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago

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