Ansh/last part1st may/arshi/2nd kidnap/fight scene

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Happy ending...Happy ending...Happy ending...Happy ending...

loved it yaar...
Loved that punch...For DI and for Khushi.😊
that was so nice
Sad ,,,,,,,,,,,,,I didn't get a chance😭

It was really cute

Edited by sooryalekshmi - 13 years ago

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sharanya

@shaaranya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

LOvely story & a beautiful end

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veenu

@veewriter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sooryalekshmi
Happy ending...Happy ending...Happy ending...Happy ending...

loved it yaar...
Loved that punch...For DI and for Khushi.😊
that was so nice
Sad ,,,,,,,,,,,,,I didn't get a chance😭

It was really cute

Thanks u so much for liking and appreciation 🤗
haha i was imagining the real scene while writing, when will arnav will punch him??😆

Edited by veenuasr - 13 years ago

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veenu

@veewriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shaaranya
LOvely story & a beautiful end

Thanks 😊

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Silvy

@SilverBell

Viewbie

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Loved The FF. Please Write Another Soon.

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veenu

@veewriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Artemis678
Loved The FF. Please Write Another Soon.

Thanks for appreciating n liking my story...

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Ash

@~sweet Ash~

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Heyy veenu

Loved the story specially the ending!!

I could visualize Shyam 's dhulaai!!! Picture perfect!

Loved the way u portrayed Anjali being a strong woman happy wit her arnie!!

Arnav Khushi and their Ansh one happy family!!

Laxmi's wedding is classic!!!

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veenu

@veewriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~
Heyy veenu
Loved the story specially the ending!!
I could visualize Shyam 's dhulaai!!! Picture perfect!
Loved the way u portrayed Anjali being a strong woman happy wit her arnie!!
Arnav Khushi and their Ansh one happy family!!
Laxmi's wedding is classic!!!

Thanks Ash 😊
thanks that u liked it and commented 🤗
i always like happy ending😊 shyamu dhualai was needed n this time i wanted anjali to be strong 😊