Tum Se Hi (MG) #2 (last part/Epi @pg 71) 15th July - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

THERE WAS A DESPERATION IN THEIR LOVE MAKING

IT WAS LIKE THEY KNEW THAT THE EQUATION HAS CHANGED AND THE FUTURE WAS SCARY AND UNPREDICTABLE

THOUGH MAAN HAS CONFESSED GEET IS STILL UNWILLING TO TRUST HER HEART



loved what u said abt their lovemaking...true...very true...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Beautiful described. Loved the whole scene.

Finally Maan had confessed his real feelings to Geet. But it looks like he confess it out of the little excitement they had because he regretted it the next minute.

And now it all depends on Geet on what she needs to do next. She said "NO". Does this means its a No from Geet!!!

I guess both of them need to sit and talk about their relationship. It looks like they are moving without direction.



thnx ajenn...

yes he has...but sometimes in excitement we do say the truth...😉...no matter how much we deny later...

u will get to know her feelings in the next part...

yes...they need to clear the air between them...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maya7

waiting dear,when are you going to update,please update soon naaa.



sorry for the delay...

updating today itself...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_mew

awesome dear..
waiting for next..
update soon..



thnx angel...

updating today...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet desperatly wanted Maan so that she can take off her mind frm her thots.
She is begininng to love Maan but is avoiding her feelings.

This update was hott n passionate. Read it again n again.
Luved it.

The scene was beautifully written.

Maan confessed his love for her.

Omg Why did Geet gad to say no.

Now aar will be Maan's reaction

Continue soon.



thank u so much...

she knows she loves maan n accepted it in her heart...but is not expressing it...

glad u liked it...

updating today...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

The kind of a past she have its really difficult 4r geet to fall in love...but wat she doesn't know is that she already falling 4r him... I hope will able to manage this situtation...



she has accepted in her heart that she loves him but is not sure abt it ...as u said her past is not letting her move forward...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Hello...di...🤗
I don't know when to welcome you back on IF and when not!!!
You keep on switching between 'Active' and 'Inactive' thingy!!! 😆
Di...you are such an amazing writer !!! 😍
I love the way you describe each and every everything!!
Brilliant writing!!! ⭐️
I loved Maan's family bonding..All of them are so friendly and affectionate
Liked their betting thing too! 😆
Liked the way Arjun teased Dev before announcing the weight of the cute li'l baby girl!! 😆
Maan's feelings have taken the form of words and he confessed his feelings.
Geet's past is sill overpowering her...She can't forget it so easily but she should give herself an another chance.Sadness is a part of life , her past was bitter ,dark but she probably shouldn't stop the bright sunshine that's entering her life. Maan is an amazing companion.
It's better if she allows herself to express things freely. Though saying things is much easier , relieving herself from her past memories is not so easy *sighs* Waiting to read the next part.
You haven't updated this since one month ...more than a month!!! 🤔
It's such a beautiful SS..Please continue soon!!
I'm missing their Urdu words !! 😛
I came accross your other SS...Khamosh Zindagi too...Going to read that one too..Waise bhi I'm khaali...velli now a days!! Atleast for next 4-5 days!! 🤣

I wish some miracle happens and you update this one today or tomorrow!! 😛



hello namrata...🤗

i know...these days even i dont know whether i'll be active or inactive on IF...😆...but now-a-days i am mostly inactive...

thnx for the compliment dear...😳..

glad u like the whole khurana bunch...a happy-go-lucky family...

yes u r right...maan has confessed but geet still fears...her past drags her back when she moves forward...

i am updating this today...ur wish came true..only a few days late than u expected...😛

will be waiting fro ur comments there...n i hope to complete that SS this month itself...n this FF too...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your comments and for pressing the like button...😳

love you all...🤗





THIRTY FOUR






Maan lifted her off him and nestled her close to his side. He placed one finger beneath her chin and lifted her face, forcing her to meet his gaze.






"Listen to me," he said gently.






"Maan, no, I,--"






"Chup, bilkul chup," he said. "Just hear me out." He paused and moved his hand to her cheek. "I do love you. I know without hearing you say the words that my saying this frightens you because of what happened to you in the past. I am not expecting you to say you love me in return. I do belive that you care deeply for me, might even love me. But I also know that if you say this, it might form a commitment, take a step toward a future that you're not prepared to make yet."






"Geet, do something for me tonight, all right? Don't say anything. Just think about what I've told you, knowing it's the truth, that it's honest and real. Think about the fact that from the very beginning, we did not have sex, we made love. Made love, Geet. Far more beautiful and intimate, special that anything I, and hopefully you, have ever experienced before. Think about what you felt as you saw the babies that were born tonight, knowing that our miracle'the child we would create'is within our reality. Just think and feel."






He kissed her on her forehead. "Good night, Shehzadi Geet."






Maan left the bed, dressed quickly and walked out of the room, not looking at her again.






Through the mist of tears filling her eyes, Geet watched him go, then she buried her face in the pillow and wept, the sobs choking her as tears streamed down her face.






Having no idea how much time had passed, she finally rolled onto her back and pressed her fingers to her now throbbing temples. She drew a shuddering breath, then sighed.






All that she'd accomplished with her waiting she thought was to produce a headache. She had to think, sort, sift, and deal with all that had happened.






I do love you, Geet.






"Oh-h-h," she moaned, feeling fresh tears threatening to spill over.






Maan Singh Khurana loved her, was in love with her. He had, in a way, said he wanted to marry her, make her his wife, his partner in life, and create a miracle that would be their baby.






Maan Singh Khurana loved her, and she loved him.






It was amazing.






No, no, no! It was terrible, a disaster, a frightening scenario in which she could not, would not, take part.






She would not tell Maan that she loved him.






She would not place her heart in his hands for safe keeping, thus rendering herself totally vulnerable.






She would not give up the career she'd worked so hard for, and that was a part of who she was.






The price tag for loving Maan Singh Khurana was far too high, and more than she as prepared to pay.






Geet flopped back onto her stomach, and gave the pillow a wack.






"Babaji," she said aloud, "why didn't he just stay being The Project, like he was supposed to? Aap hi ne sab gadbad ki hai, aur wo Maan ne."






And so had she, because she'd fallen deeply in love with him.






But he would never know the truth; never know that when he was gone, her heart was going to shatter into a million pieces.





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Anvesha sat propped up in the hospital bed, a smile of delight on her face as she looked at the two huge teddy bears sitting at the foot of the bed. One was pink, the other was blue and they were grinning.






"The bears are wonderful bhai," she said. "They're as big as two year old children, so they'll have to be decorations in the nursery until the twins are older."






"At least they won't eat you out of house and home," Maan said, settling onto the chair next to the bed.






"Since you are here at three in the afternoon," Annie said, "I assume that you are still on vacation from the ever-famous Khurana Constructions."






Maan nodded.






"Speaking of famous," she went on, "Arjun told me that Geet was here at the hospital with you last night."






"She was here," he said quietly.






"You still haven't given me any details of your social life with Geet, not fair Bhai."






Maan shrugged. "You had other things on your mind. Two little other things, as a matter of fact."






Annie folded her hands in her lap and studied her brother. Maan met her gaze for a moment, then directed his attention to the smiling teddy bears.






"Okay, big brother, what's wrong?"






"Wrong?" he said, raising his eyebrows as he looked at her again. "Nothing is wrong. What could be wrong? I mean, I am the uncle of two new fantastic kids. That's great. You're great. You and Arjun are great. Everything is great. I've got such a long list of great, that--"






"Stop," she said. "This is me, Annie, remember? I know you very well bhai, and something is most definitely wrong." She paused, narrowed her eyes and nodded, "Geet Handa."




Next -- Part 35 -- page 39



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if there is anything missing, be sure to tell me so that I can improve...


i know this is a short part...sorry for that...i am pressed for time ...but i will try to update next week again...n will try to write a longer part...
Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
after such a long time u update.
its awesome.
now what will be geet's decision waiting to know
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 34
nice part...
Get is still scared...
cont soon dear...

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