MG-MORA SAIYYAN MOSE BOLE NA(complete)

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HEY GUYS HERE IS AN OS...
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She was walking endlessly on the road cursing her cruel destiny '''.cursing her fate for not giving her life a second chance'..a second chance to love''a second chance to him''he was her guardian angel whom she has insulted''.yes she has abused his pure love by her rudeness'..rudeness that she has kept for herself ''Unknowingly she has poured that venom on him'''.He was only trying to bring back her happiness which she has lost once''.she ignored his warmness 'his pleadings to her to forgive him once'..what he did was out of the situation he was not intended to do witout her consent'''He told her many times to lead her life her way''.he will never force her for anything''..she is his sole priority'''. But what she did she attacked his dignity questioning him about his character questioning about his actions''''.she did a sin which cannot be forgiven'''''..And now he is away from her for which she is the one who is to be blamed'''.


saawan biton jaaye piharava saawan biton jaaye piharava
mann mera ghabraaye
mann mera ghabraaye
aiso gaye pardes piya tum
aiso gaye pardes piya tum
chain hamein nahi aaye
chain hamein nahi aaye
mora saiyaan mose bole na
mora saiyaan mose bole na


its been two weeks maan has been gone away ''he is away from her with no information about him'..neither any one in the family knows about him or if anyone knows she doesnot want anyone to know about it'''guilt is killing her '.killing her deep within for not understanding maan''her maan yes the only person in her life who has showered his unconditional love on her without even letting her know''his were actions always marked with his genuine love'.. every passing day ''..every passing hour '.and every second in which she is breathing is making her die '.she is dying of remorse ''.the pain .., ''..the longing that she is boring in her heart is unbearable ''.. Geet: maan where are you'''''.. ??????????? I am sorry '..i am really sorry ''.i know I have done huge offence for which I don't deserve your forgiveness'''''.Please come back'''please come back to your geet ''..please '' babaji please sent my maan back to me I promise I will never ask anything from you'but please give me my maan'''''.. With the guilt conscience she broke down on her knees sobbing loudly and whimpering between hicupps''..just pleading to babaji to give her atleast some news from maan'''''.



main (laakh jatan kar haari
main (laakh jatan kar haari
mora saiyaan mose bole na mora saiyaan mose bole na


She is cursing that very day she had said those cruel words to him'.. From that day he had even stopped talking to her but never backed in fulfilling his duties as a husband'''he is her angel whom babaji had given to her '..and she tortured his pious soul by her piercing words'..making his heart bleed'''..




tu jo nahi toh aise piya hum
tu jo nahi toh aise piya hum
jaise suna angana
jaise suna angana
nain tehaari raah nihaare
nain tehaari raah nihaare
nainan ko tarsaao na
nainan ko tarsaao na
mora saiyaan mose bole na
mora saiyaan mose bole na


collecting her shattered and guilt conscious soul geet walked endlessly like searching for her fate again'''..searching for her love that she had insulted '''''.she's been looking forward to the path where she is heeding just to give herself the punishment for doubting his moral'''. his love'''his affection ''''.he 's the who is to be worshiped she just abhored his feeling ''''.today she loathe herself '''..she can't stand her guilty self '''..she was greatful to her mother in law vishal's mother for ,making her realize the importance of the diamond whom she was considering as a filth as a dirt '''.. again on realizing her mistake tears of remorse made their way down her hazels'''. Geet: mom you were right maan has always been the right choice for me''even vishal has not taken that place which I have realized for maan''. Maan you married me the circumstances that tied us were not wrong I was wrong maan ''.your geet she's been at fault''..and will be always''.

FLASHBACK


Geet handa she is an orphan who was brought up in an orphanage''.. completed her education on the basis of scholarships ''..married to vishal mehra ''for vishal it was love at first sight ''.. after marrying vishal geet thought that everything is right now nothing can went wrong finally she will got a family ''love of a mother ''pampering from her husband but destiny had set something else for her just after the three months of her marriage that dreadful accident took place taking her vishal away from her''..vishal's departure from her life had created a void and filled her life with grief and longing again '''She became like a dull soul devoid of any feelings'''.. Maan 'MAAN SINGH KHURANA''son of top business man yashraj khurana had came back to India after completely his higher studies from London'..managing khurana industries with utmost perfection,'''. It was one of the days maan had went to meet his childhood best friend vishal mehra'..vishal and maan had been best buddies since age four ''.maan was very excited to meet his friend after long two years'''..the moment he entered his place ''he was shocked beyond limits he couldn't believe his eyes what he saw ''..Vishal's picture placed in the hall with a garland on it''' his mother and father crying sitting there with few relatives in white clothes''.it was the third day of his death''Vishal's father saw maan and he went him and hugged him'..It was the first time he saw her '..clad in a white salwar kameez swallon eyes'..pale and yellow face devoid of any colour''that's when he came to know about her that she is vishal's wife ''now his widow that's what he heared people calling her ''''He didn't like her that state '..some women calling her widow'..an unlucky omen for mehra's'''.. Maan second time saw her on the thirteen day of vishal's final rituals taking place havan going on ( guys its called theravi in hindu culture mainly what I have seen in my family '..after this the soul gets departed from earth to heavenly abode)''after all the rituals that incident took place''One of the relative '..vishal's aunt his father's sister was cursing geet holding her responsible for vishal's death''.and it was the limit when she literaaly abused geet ''. Aunt: geet now you are satisfied after taking our son away from us''bhabhi I always told you not to get our vishal married with her '..look now you and bhaiyya will be satisfied na''She is such a b**** who killed our vishal'' Geet you are such a witch and see look at you you are not at all looking like a widow''.now my brother has to bear you all his life'.. Vishal's aunt was cursing while some other also started talking rubbish about her and she was just standing numb'.listening to all nonsense''' It was enough when maan shouted grabbing all the towards him'' Maan: what rubbish you all are saying''.how can she be responsible for vishal's demise '..it was an accident'.. Aunt: you stay out of it maan ''.its non of your matter'''. Maan: it matters to me and to all the people standing here attending vishal's rituals buaji When aunt interrupted and said she is such a evil spirit who took my vishal '''.and she will destroy every person's life she would be associated ''and now she is also a widow''''.Means more misfortune will occur''..Such a devil spirit''. God knows who will she destroy now '.who's happiness are at stake now''' Maan's anger went out of control''and he just shouted on her to shut her mouth which was blurting the venom''. Maan: this is all your stupid thinking'..and I will prove it to you now''with that maan took geet's hands and shocked everyone by filling her parting with the sacred vermillion powder and shouted on everyone'' Maan: now she is related to me '..maan singh khurana''.our destiny are binded together now''..now let me see also what misfortune will hit me''.. With that maan went to vishal's parents asking for forgiveness for his sudden action to which vishal's parents supported his actions somewhere they were also contented to see geet again as a wife of someone and on the very other day they got married in a temple maan's dad and mom and his daadi were his biggest support they never questiond anything about his sudden action they too understood him''..

FLASHBACK ENDS'''


Geet was moving ahead on the deserted road 'a small smile crept upon her lips when she recalled how maan filled her parting'..this place everyplace is reminding her of maan ''maan's affection'..Her eyes are yearning for just once glimpse of him'''.Geet: this life is worthless without you maan '''I can't live without you please forgive me maan''..


main laakh jatan kar haari
main laakh jatan kar haari
mora saiyaan mose bole na
mora saiyaan mose bole na


geet was unaware of her surrounding 'didn't even see what is heading towards her she came out of her reverie when a car suddenly stopped infront of her ''..geet closed her eyes due to sudden headlight'''.Suddenly she felt being jerked towards someone'''..when she looked towards the owner of that jerk''.tears started flowing unknowing from her hazels'.she tried to touched his cheek to feel his presence to make sure its not a dream''' When maan returned from germany after finally setting the problems there he met the worried faces of his parents '''.then he came to know that geet was out since morning and her cell being switched off''.That took maan's breath away '''.. when he was away from her he was satisfied his heart was at peace that she is atleast happy in her life ''' But seeing her worn out self he felt at sudden panic''..and shouted at her'. Maan: what the hell was that geet were were you''..since morning'.and do you even realize if I have not haulted the car at that place what would have happen'. With that he dragged her to the car ''' geet just quietly followed him without questioning just staring at him with all her love with her guilt conscious self''..


pyaar tumhe kitana karate hain
pyaar tumhe kitana karate hain
tum yeh samajh nahi paaoge
tum yeh samajh nahi paaoge
jab hum na honge toh piharawa
jab hum na honge toh piharawa
bolo kya tab aaoge
bolo kya tab aaoge


the time both reached the mansion no one was there maan had informed his parents about geet and lied to them that geet had been at her friend's place'''..when they entered their room maan was about to go out of the room taking his pillow and blanket when geet held his hand and she dropped on his feet asking forgiveness for her behaviour since they were married '''.telling him to slap her to give her punishment of that horrible offence that she had done''. Geet:(on her knees crying continuously '''..) maan please forgive me please punish me maan please I am truly a B**** maan buaji was correct I can only make anyone's life worst than a hell''.i accused you when 'when you took utmost care of me you saved my life you hold me with my dignity'''..i know I don't deserve your forgiveness and your hatred will be equal to your love'''A person like me doesn't have any right to live''.with that her hold on maan started getting loose and she sobbed '''' I am sorry for those harsh words that I inflicted on you''.I am sorry''I am sorry'..


FLASHBACK

It was one of the day no one was at home maan came from office and went to his study ''..he had his dinner and that day he didn't saw geet thought maybe she is busy''
It was almost midnight when he entered his room and saw geet shivering and when he went to her and checked her forehead she was burning and was having very high temperature suddenly his eyes went to her clothes and he realized that they were completely wet''.he was about to wake her up'..then one of the maids came to his room to inform that she is leaving for servents quarter''' on asking from her maan came to know that geet had been playing in rain and may be slept after that''. Maan told maid to change geet's clothes while he went to grab some medicines and boul of cold water with some cotton strips''.When he entered that maid had changed her into maan's kurta which he had got for himself''.. He sent the maid to the quarter and covered geet upto her neck ''.and placed cold cotton strips on her forhead to reduce her fever''..whole night he nursed her checking her temperature several times and slept in the sitting position beside her''..Next morning when geet opened her eyes she found herself wearing only maan's kurta and then what she did was beyond imagination for maan'' On seeing maan entering the room geet shouted at him when he asked about her fever ''Geet: maan I never thought you will do this on seeing my vunerable condition you tried to take advantage of it'''Why did you do this'.????Why?????Tell me why I am in your clothes '' You are also like others you want me to fulfill your desires ''.. come just do what you want to do'.last night was very difficult for you to resist yourself'''I never wanted to marry '''. You forced me''I never want to see your face again '.i hate you just go away''While maan heard her accusations and quietly went away without uttering a single word''.


END OF FLASHBACK

Maan couldn't see his love getting broken down like this ''he soul is dying every second seeing her condition''Yes it was true he love her''.she had captured her soul the very first day he saw her'''.And he kneel down 'geet looked at him and still saw his pure love in her eyes'''Which is just for her'''Geet took his hands and started hitting her self with his hands in order to get punishment from him''' When maan saw her action he shouted GEEETT''.. And to stop her from her hitting herself he captured her soft lips with his he was very passionate yet gentle on her not to hurt her''.he nibbled her bottom lip sucked it and continued his nibbling till she opened herself to him she started responding him with tears made their ways through her cheeks''.His tongue entered her mouth he was sucking her sweet nectar '''it was a pure flow of emotions to get rid of the guilt and to experience the love''''' They parted from each other when they ere short of breath''Geet was not able to meet his eyes due guilt'..and she again said with tearful eyes maan I am sorry ''.. Maan wiped her tears and nodded his head in a no and told '.geet will you consider me to be your life partner ''.Geet just stared at him and lowered her head'..Geet: maan I am not worthy for you''. I am really a''.( before geet could complete )maan was about to go'..when geet said maan I am sorry'..Maan turned and looked at her and said you don't need to be'..i am such a low character''..wih that geet houted at him for saying so cheap about himself when he deserves to be worshipped'''''.and geet captured his lips to tell him her answer and confessed her lve between their kiss geet: I love you'..with that hugged him tight'.. maan kissed her forehead , eyes, cheeks , chin leaving her lips''.And moved to her collarbone where he kissed her and bite her leaving a love mark he was about to unpinned her pallu when he stopped and was about to move away when geet hold his hand'..this was enough for him to know what she wants''With that he scooped her in his arms and took her to their bed to complete their lost relation where there will be only love and respect for each other

mora saiyaan mose bole na
mora saiyaan mose bole na


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simply superb os dear and nice sng selection...
Finally they r together..
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wow!that was so beautiful..
Full of emotions...love,pain,guilt...
Very well written..
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wonderful.awesome.loved ti.loved the pure hearted maan.after so much problems they are together.its just gr8 to see them together.
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Beautiful OS dear...
excellent song selection...
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awesome n beautiful os...

loved it...

n thank u very much fr d lovely os...


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WOW CUTE LOVE STORY..I LOVED IT SO MUCHHH...

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Fabulous update dear...👏
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oh it was such a beautiful and emotional OS😊

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