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Posted: 13 years ago
Good songs matched their feelings exactly
Hope he tells her everything in nainital
Hey they had their fake honeymoon there right
Good update man
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update loved it alot.

Plz update soon & thanks for PM 😊 😊 😊 X X
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing! I loved it!

Pehla birthday patti ke saath! 😆

Nainital, huh? Cute cute! And the songs placement and choice was great!
Am so excited to read the next part! Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww sweet arnie.
Loved the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sjm15

Amazing! I loved it!


Pehla birthday patti ke saath! 😆

Nainital, huh? Cute cute! And the songs placement and choice was great!
Am so excited to read the next part! Thank you for the PM!

Haan na pehla B'day kam se kam creepwa k aas paas main nahin honey de sakti! Thanks a lot for liking it. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soniyahkhan

Hi girl! Watched the repeat telecast a while back cuz was out earlier. Yeah even I found the visa passport thing wierd. However the end was good.

Yaar I forgot u had nainital in your OS as well cuz I was still stuck in your last ASR update! So sorry about that.

And thanks for liking it!


No issues...chill...i really don't mind about the nainitaal thing...plus i don't think our story line have anything else in common so it doesn't matter :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: randomiesta


No issues...chill...i really don't mind about the nainitaal thing...plus i don't think our story line have anything else in common so it doesn't matter :)


Okay chill marliya! Par soon many things on my mind that its impossible 2 chill rite now. The project, the SS and barun's screen presence today! My head might just explode! Haey Allah Mian!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys! Im done with my project submission! And back to the SS in great spirts. Have all the next few updates lined up in my mind. But I have written this update in a very bad condition: its that time of the month and I want to cry!

I have used 2 songs in this update. Both are my choices. I had earlier selected 2 love songs from ur suggestion list, but they are to be included in nxt updates.

The first one is Dil ye bekaraar kyun hai, from the movie Players. must listen. Here is the link:

https://www.songspk.pk/indian/players_2011_mp3_songs.html

The second song is a personal favourite. It is the title song of the superhit Pakistani drama serial, Humsafar which was a rage wherever Paksitani dramas are watched. U must must listen cuz it's a very different song..atleast I find it very touching. A few words are in difficult urdu so I have pasted the English translation as well. Here is the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kl2XeZnpV4M

EDIT: thrice i have tried to edit and fix the font size, but for some reason, IF changes the size of half the post on its own. plz bear with it.

Part 9:

Arnav and Khushi comes out of the Pantnagar airport at about 7:15pm. Khushi still very excited and Arnav still holding her hand, like he had throughout the flight.

"Arnav Jee, ab to chod dey haath, log kya socheygey?"

"Kya socheyngey, yehi k honeymoon couple hai, ghar ke bahar full chance maar rahey hain aur kya? Plus im not going to leave u ever, Khushi...beshak tum mujhey chordo...tab bhi nahin"

"Kaisi baatain kar rahey hain, aap? Hum kyun choraingey aap ko?"

"Kya pata..meri koi baat pasand na aye...ya phir Nainitaal main koi aur acha lag jaey!"

"Haan doosri wali baat tou ho sakti hai, kya pata...!!

"Acha? Pehley haath tou churwayo! Bhaagne doonga tou jaaougi na, Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada!

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They reach the Shervani Hilltop Inn around 8:30pm. Khushi who had been exited ever since they rode through the beautiful roads, jumps out of the car immediately.

"Kitni sundar jaga hai yeh aur ye hotel bhi!!! Har jaga yeh oonchey oonchey pahaar, itna neela aasmaan, chaaron taraf haryaali hi haryaali! Ab tu hum se delhi waapis nahin jaaya jayega Arnav Jee!"

"Theek hai...phir tum yahin reh jana! Main tumhari cheezain bhijwaa doonga ghar sey!" and he steps in the Inn.

"Humara matlab tha aap k saath yehi rehne ka!" She shouts to him.

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The resort was made up of different cottages here and there, which gave the feeling of your own house in this lush green paradise. Their presidential suite was the best in the resort. It had a big well furnished sitting and dining area including a bar. The sitting area also led to the bedroom. On the way to the bedroom was a dressing room and a bathroom. The bedroom had a bed with an old style wing chair and wooden polished parts. A writer's desk set with dark wood and leather sat in a corner and a LCD on the wall. The suite also included a kitchen area.

Khushi gasped on entering the suite. Arnav looks at her smilingly.

"Sahi laga?"

"Sahi kya.. Arnav Jee yeh to bohut zabardast hai! Ghar se bhi acha! Ab tou main bikul waapis nahin jaa rahi!"

"Haan tou kaun keh raha hai waapis jane k liye...bedroom dekhey?"

Khushi laughs...

"Wah re Wah! Teri tou nikal pari Khushi!" She instantly sits on the bed, as the journey had tired her up.

"Aisa kartey hain thore dair rest karletey hain phir fresh ko kar diner par chalengey, ok?"

He comes on the bed from the other side and pulls Khushi to his chest and rests her head on his shoulder.

He saw Khushi smiling and closing her eyes. She was at peace, there was nothing to worry her and she was oblivious of what was going on inside him. He was constantly putting up the show of a happy husband but actually, he was on the verge of tears. He hardly ever cried, but when he did, it was for the people he loved the most: his Maa, his Di and Khushi. He was scared like a small child who couldn't gather up the courage to tell of his mistakes to his parents. He was more concerned of how she will take up the news: will she break down, will she hate him? Will she be able to forgive him? Oh God, what mess have I put myself into? He closes his eyes and rests his head on the bed crown.

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Around 9:30 Khushi stirred and saw Arnav Jee looking at her. She winked at him and he tightened his grip on her waist.

"Agar tumhara bed se nikalne ka mood nahin hai, tou dont worry main khana room main hi bulwa leta hoon" He whispers in her ear.

"Bikul bhi nahin! Kis ne kaha mujhey neend arahi hai?" She turns to look at him

"Tou maine kab neend ki baat ki? He touches the flick of her hair.

She understands his double meaning.

"Arnav Jee...plz bahar chaltey hain na! Ap sirf 15 minute rukey, main fresh ho kar ati hun"

She hops off the bed, opens her suit case, takes her toiletries and clothes and rushes to the bathroom.

Just as Khushi leaves, Arnav becomes his gloomy self again. He goes to the bar and pours himself a drink.

Kitni khush hai Khushi! Kaisey bataoun isse, kaise kahun k jis k saath tum ghoomne ayi ho, jis se tum itna pyaar karti ho, jisse apna pati maanti ho, woh yahan tumhey kyun laya hai...kya kehna chahta hai tum se! Kaise torru us ka dil, kaise bataoun k kyun maine uss se shadi ki, kya samjha tha usey maine!

He fills up another glass and drinks it.

Damn it, I can't take this anymore! Mujhey usey kal sey pehley sab bataan hoga, main itni bari baat kal us k birthday par kaisey bolun? No way! kuch bhi kar k aj hi Khushi ko batana hoga! Taakey kal sey sab set hojaey, us ka trip kharab na ho...

"Kya hua Arnav jee...aap itne pareshan kyun lag rahey hain?

Khushi enters the sitting area and his hand holding the drink stops midway. She looked like a vision of paradise. Clad in a navy blue sari, she was dressed to kill. His eyes moved from her kofl filled eyes to the silver bindi, from her soft cheeks to the luscious pink lips. He puts the glass down on the bar counter and gets up.

Dil yeh bekaraar kyun hai...
Ispe dhun sawaar kyun hai
Kyun hai ye khumaar kyun hai... Tu Bataa...
Tera intezaar kyun hai

Tujh pe aitbaar kyun hai
Kyun hai yeh khumar kyun hai... Tu bataa
Tu Bataa aa aa ...
Tu Bataa aa aa ...

He comes forward and cups her face into his hands

Kyun tujhe dekhe bina aata nahin dil ko sabar
Kyun tere chehre se hatti nahi ye nazar
Kyun tujhe paake mujhe rehta hai khone ka dar
Kyun tere siva saari duniya se hoon main bekhabar
Dil yeh bekaraar kyun hai...

"Arnav Jee...batayain na kya hua...ap aaj kal..kuch chupaa rahey na ap mujhsey?"

"Kya Khushi! saara romance kharaab kar deti ho! Kuch bhi tou nahin hua! Chailain ab?"

"Chale bhi jayengey lekin, agar kuch hua nahin to yeh sharaab kyun pee rahey hain?"

"Tumhare pyaar main devdas ban gaya hoon, Khushi! Jiski biwi itni sexy ho, us k hosh kaise thikane hongey?!

Khsshi blushes furiously, fidgeting with her pallu.

"Chalain?"

They step out to eat in the large dining area. It was dimly lit and a soft romantic music played in the backround. All eyes were set on the beautiful couple but Khushi tonight had eyes only for her husband.

"Arnav Jee, ap ko pata hai humain wishwaas nahin ho raha k aap humain yahan humara janam din manaane k liye laye hain! Yehi kya, jab hum woh din yaad kartey hain jab aap ne garden main humain I..love you kaha tha, humain soch kar ab bhi hairat hoti hai!

Kisi k saath itna acha kaisey ho sakta hai...humare Maata Pita k guzarney k baad bhi,humain Ama Bauji, Jiji, Bua Jee, eik naya pariwaar mila...kya yeh kam tha k humari aakhri khwahish bhi Devi Mayaan ne puri kardi. Humian aap mil gaye...Aap ko shaid andaaza bhi nahin k hum kab se kab se pyaar kartey hain Arrnav Jee!

Arnav just smiles as he has gone tounge-tied. He puts his fork down and gulps the fourth glass of wine in one go.

"Tum sahi keh rahi ho Khushi, mujhey sach main nahin pata tha, k tum mujhse kab se aur kitna pyaar karti thi. Main to..."

"Kya? Bataye na?"

"Khushi main kal se tumse kuch kehna chahta tha" He looks sideways.

"Kahye?" She manages to say just this, her heart sinking.

"Apni galti batana chahta tha..maafi maangna chahta tha...batana chahta tha k kyun tum se... Zabardasti shaadi ki, kyun tumhey itna bura treat kya..."

"Kyun?"

"Kyunke...kyunke..mujhey laga tumhara Shyam k saath..."

"Shyam k saath?"

"affair hai...Im sorry Khushi , I know"

She stared at him...unable to comprehend.

"Aap ko pata hai apne abhi kya kaha hai Arnav Jee? Aap aisa soch bhi...aap humarey baarey main..."

Words failed her...and tears dropped down her face. She looked at him with pain. It was hard to believe what he just said. She sniffed and tried to talk once again.

"Aap koi mazaak tou nahin kar rahey na?"

He shook his head.

"Kyun lekin??? Yeh samjha aap ne humain... isi liye I love you bola tha na..taakey hum maaf kar dain aap ko? Hum aisi ladki lage aap ko! Arnav Jee aap ne..."

And she ran away...many people saw the pretty girl running away crying...Arnav called out to her.

"Khushi ruko! Khushi baat tou suno."

He found her standing at the suite door cuz it was locked and he had the card. He swiped the card and she entered immediately.

He pulled her hand,

"Khushi plz wait. Eik minute meri baat sun sakti ho? Dekho im really very sorry. Jo maine dekha, main...

"Haath chore humara!" She jerks off his hand.

"Ab aap ko koi haq nahin hai humain pakarney ka! Aap iss laiq hai hi nahin k hum aap ki shakal bhi dekhey! Humain nafrat ho rahi hai aap sey, apney aap sey, sab sey!"

"Par Khushi im still ur husband. Tum kya bol rai ho...dekho I know tum gusse main ho! Plz calm down main tumhey samjhata hoon k kya hua..."

"Nahin samajhna hai kuch ab...samajhdaar hotey tou yeh na hua hota humare saath! Hum aap se aakhri dafa keh rahey hain k humain ab koi baat nahin karni hai, aur na hi koi rishta rakhna ha iaap sey.

Aap ka kya bharosa, kal socha humara Shyam Ji k saath affair hai, aagey kisi aur k saath jod dengey humain!

"No Khushi, tum kyun aisa soch rahi ho, im sorry!"

"Apna sorry ap apne paas rakhey Mr Arnav Singh Raizaada, kyunke humain ab aap k saath koi rishta hi nahin rakhna, sun liya aapne!

She turns and shuts herself in the bedroom.

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It had been 2-3 hrs and Khushi had been crying in the dark bedroom ever since she locked herself in. Arnav had knocked countless times, said sorry, tried to give explanations, but to no avail. She just wouldn't respond.

Tark-e-taaluqaat pe,

Roya naa tu naa main,

Lekin yeh kya ke

Chain se soya na tu na main

Woh humsafar tha...haan woh humsafar tha...

Magar us say humnawaayi na thi,

Woh humsafar tha

Magar us say humnawaayi na thi,

Ke dhoop chaayon'

Ke dhoop chaayon ka

Aalam raha, judaayi na thi

Woh humsafar tha

Magar us say humnawaayi na thi,

When we parted ways,
Neither you cried nor I,
But, what is this,
A peaceful sleep since,
Has not touched our eyes?

He was my companion, yes, he was my companion
But not in harmony were we,
Like the clouds and sunlight,
Together but as apart as can be.

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Guys, please please please comment and let me know how did you find this update.

Do hit the Like button if u liked it. Thanks! (I send 142 pm's. so i shud get the number of likes accordingly na!)

OMG such less likes!!!! itna bura tha kya???

EDIT: How were the songs?
As you can see this SS has been moved from the IPKKND Forum to the Fan Fictions Forum. So if u want me to PM u for updates, plz Buddy me. Thanks.
Part 10
Edited by soniyahkhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome u r too good

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really good. thank you for the update.

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