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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika18A

Awesome Update!. Great, great and absolutely great write up!!..
Loved it to bits. Eagerly waiting for the next part. ;D

Keep continuing. Thanks a bunch! 😛

Thankyou sooo much! ur comments are always sooo heart warming! nxst part will be up tomorrow!! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww. Such a sad day... I feel so bad for them!

Great update, and the songs were amazing!

Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update.
want to see what khushi will do an dhow she will react.

Thanks for Pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!
I had the aong Woh humsafar tha stuck in my head all day and then I read it here! Lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys, hope ur all doing great! I got some mixed reactions...some were sad, some were expecting romance but I think overall those who commented liked it. Can't say about the silent readers cuz the number of likes dropped like anything. Why? Because there was no HOT romance? Come on...we all knew that there was going to be the sad part in the future.

Anyway, the song used in this update was suggested by a very dear reader Enrique who never fails to comment on this thread. Thank u soo very much Enrique! And actually she was the first to suggest a song at all, so a special Thank You! The song is Kuch Khaas hai from the movie Fashion. The link is:

https://www.songspk.pk/indian/fashion.html

Part 10:

Arnav was sitting on the sofa with a glass of wine in his hand.

"Why, Why, Why did I tell her? Iss se tou acha hota k main Khushi ko kuch batata hi nahin! Kitni khush thi woh yahaan aakar. She wanted to stay with me forever in this place. She got dressed for our dinner, and she was thanking Devi Mayaan for granting her wish to marry me! SHHIITTT! Yeh maine kya kardiya!

Eik aur din guzarney deta, atleast Khushi ka birthday achey se guzar jaata! Kitni naraaz hai woh mujhsey. kehti hai nafrat karti hai, koi rishta nahin rakhna aap k saath, aap ko mujhye choone ka koi haq nahin hai! I mean...mujhey haq nahin hai? I know she doesn't actually mean it...lekin woh meri baat sunney tou sahi...she's scared of the dark par andherey main ro rahi hai..I can understand how she must be feeling. Jaisey mujhey bura laga tha jab maine usey Shyam ki baahon main dekha tha...waise hi she must be hating herself for loving the man who doesn't even trust her, who thought she had no character.

Par ab main kya karun? Jo hona tha woh tou hogaya! Kabhi na kabhi tou batana hi na tha sach Khushi ko, warna humare beech humesha dooriyaan reh jati, main kabhi usey khush na rakh paata. Par ab kaunsa woh khush hai, pata nahin kab se ro rahi hai, na darwaaza kholti hai, na sunti hai!

What was I thinking k Khushi ko sach bata kar maafi maang loonga...usey jhatka zaroor lagega par woh mujhey maaf kardegi aur us ka birthday bohut achey sey celebrate karengey! Par hua kya? Yeh koi itni choti baat to nahin thi k woh mujhey jhat se maaf kardegi!

But I can't accept defeat! I won't step back at all! Khushi ko sab bataounga. Beshak woh sunna chahey ya nahin. Main bhi tou pyaar karta hoon us sey, sirf woh hi to nahin karti. I have to win her back at any cost!"

He put the glass back on the wooden table and glanced at his watch. It was 2:30 am! Khushi ka birthday tou shuru bhi hogaya. I wanted to be the first one to wish her at 12! Damn, I have messed up everything!

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It took a couple of minutes for her to understand why she had slept in a sitting position, when Khushi woke up in the morning. And when it did dawn upon her, her head began to ache worse than ever. And today was her birthday, she remembers.

"Aah, iss sey acha kya toufa de saktey they aap Arnav jee!

Kyun humare saath aisa hota hai...kal hi tou hum kitne khush they inn ki baahon main uth kar. Kal subah aur aj ki subah main kitna farq hai...eik raat main sab badal gaya, Devi Mayaan! Hum jiske I love you se pigal gaye...sab bhool gaye jo kuch pehley hua usey bhi! Par unhon ne I love u bola bhi tou kyon? Taakey hum inhey maaf kardain? Hum se asal pyaar kiya hota toa aisa soch saktey they kya humare baarey main? Nahin na? Bas sab humain istimaal karney ka naatak hai, hum..."

There was a knock at the door...

"Khushi??"

She looks at the door, with irritated expression. Opens her mouth to retaliate, but then... Humain kya zaroorat hai inn k mun lagne ki, huh! Bajaatey rahain darwaaza, humain kya

"Khushi, plz darwaaza kholo, Di ka phone hai!"

The door opens at once. She doesn't even look at him properly, snatches the mobile phone and turns away. The door is slightly open though.

He however had looked at her in desperation. Her eyes were swollen, the kohl all smudged up. She had cried her eyes out because of him. And in those few seconds, he had gathered that she was not going to forgive him anytime soon. Arnav stays there to hear her side of the phone conversation.

"Haan Di! Kaise ho aap?"

"Thank you Di! Humara phone...pata nahin... shaid battery khatam ho gayi hogi isliye band araha hai!...hahaha...Di aap bhi na!"

"Gift? Di inhon ne jo gift diya hai...aisa gift humain pehley kabhi nahin mila!"

"Woh to aap apne Chote se puchey! Abhi tou waapis akar aap sab se bhi leney hain...humare gifts tayar rakhiye ga, haan?

"Bohut achi jaga hai Di, bikul jaisey swarg main agaye ho! Aur hotel bhi! Itna aaraamda room k hum araam se sogaye raat ko!"

"Hmm...acha...chalain theek hain! Di aaap se baat main baat hoti hai! Apna khyaal rakhiyega!

She ends the call and looks at the door. She could see at Arnav standing near the door. She walks up to him and hands over the mobile to him.

"Khushi I'm sor..."

"Di Nainital ki photos maangne wali hai ghar ja kar, isliye un ki khaatar main tayaar ho kar ati hun" and turns away.

"Khushi baat tou suno..." She turns back

"Aap ko kal humari baat samajh nahin ayi thi kya? Kyun suney hum aap ki baat jab humara koi dhang ka rishta hi nahin hai aap sey? Humain koi zaroorat nahin hai apne contract pati ki baat sune ki, samjhey ap! Yeh shadi hum ne JiJi k liye ki thi aur is naatak ko khatam honey main ab bhi 3 mahine baaqi hain! Issi liye kuch tasweerain dikha kar Di k saamney aur drama karna parega..." He holds her by both arms.

"Khushi yeh drama nahin hai ab...I love you...aur tum meri asli patni ho, sirf yehi sach hai, why don't u understand"

"Jab jo aap sahi lagta hai, woh sach ban jata hai! Pehley humara affair sach, phir kahin se aap ko pata lag giya k yeh tou jhoot tha tou sorry karne lag giye, I love u bol diya! Pehley sharto par contract marriage, ab achanak humara aap ki patni hona sach ho gaya! Yeh kahan ke neeyam hai! Mr. Arnav Singh Raizaada, yeh duniya sirf aap k ird gird nahin ghoomti, k jo ap kahain woh sach, baqi sab jhoot! (sighs) Jo drama shuru kiya tha, woh khtaam tou karna hi parega na!

And she approaches her suitcase which was still unpacked. Arnav looks her leaving the room, and he drops on the bed, both palms around his head.

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Arnav is in the sitting area thinking hard about what to do to make everything alright. He hadn't even gottent the chance to wish her on her birthday. Of course, the fault was his, but Khushi was claiming to hate her, which was not going too well with ASR. He had to make her his before her birthday ends, yes he had to! And when a girl says she doesn't want to talk to you, that means she needs you the most!

Just then Khushi enters the sitting room wearing an indigo Anarkali dress. Of course!!! Just when I tell Mrs KKGSR that I want her to wear Sari's, she turns up wearing this to ignore my wish! Lekin kab tak Khushi?

"Bohut hot lag rahi ho, Khushi!" She looks at him angrily and surprised...how dare he?

"Hum Di k liye jaa rahey hai shaid, tou..."

"Par main tou sirf tumhare liye jaa raha hoon...tumne hi tou kaha tha k u want to spend ur time with me here forever, bhool gayi kya???"

She sighs and walks out of the room, leaving Arnav smiling.

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Arnav and Khushi reached the Naini Lake in a chauffeur driven car.

The eye-shaped lake was a beauty in itself being the tourist hotspot and a magnet for all those visiting the hill resort. The northern end of the lake was called Mallital, while the southern one was called Tallital. The Lake Bridge that connects the two banks had quite a few shops as well as a post office, the only one in the world to be located on a bridge. Khushi is mesmerized when she sees the lake. Always been a nature loving girl, for a few moments, she just forgets her state of mind and is looking here and there, enjoying the beautiful weather and the scenery.

Arnav slid his hand around her waist and grabbsit before she could push him away.

"Kitna khoobsoorat hai na...bilkul meri tarah?" he chukles.

"Chorain humain" she began to resist. "Aap ki himat kaise hui...?"

"Agar tum bhool gayi ho, tou let me remind you Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizaada, k tum ab bhi mere contract main ho, and I can hold you, whenever I like!"

"Par...aap...yahan naatak karne ki kya zaroorat hai...?"

"Miane kab kaha k main naatak kar raha hoon...I told you I love you...phir?"

"Jhoot! Aap...aap hum se koi pyaar nahin kartey!"

"Khushi..i don't lie, do you understand? Not to you anymore! Main tum se pehley bhi keh chuka hoon. And you yourself have admitted that you love me as well. Beshak tumhey nahin maan na hai, tou na maano! That's your problem. Lekin main apni biwi ka birthday usi k saath celebrate karna chahta hoon, have I made myself clear?" spoke ASR.

"Aap hum par chilla rahey hain...kal jo hua us k baad bhi?"

"Khushi stop it yaar! Mujey pata hona chahiye tha k biwiyaan kisi bhi jaga lar sakti hain! Come on darling, today is your birthday! Lets have some pictures taken ...Di k liye!!"

Khushi didn't know what to do...why in the world was he acting so normally...how could he?

Before she could do anything, Arnav had given his camera to someone and had positioned himself and her in front of the lake. He was holding a non-cooperative Khushi by the waist again, whispering in her hair, "Ab itni sharmaane ki bhi zaroorat nahin hai, smile to kardo...Di k liye!!"

She smiled her beautiful smile, making Arnav's heart beating faster all of a sudden. He had to bring that smile back! He just had to!

"Sir idhar dekhey camera ki taraf, madam k nahin!"

Khushi looks to her left to find Arnav looking from her to the camera now...smiling the rare Arnav smile. How can someone be capable of constantly breaking her heart and still making it beat for him? Nahin, humain ab in sey pyaar nahin hai! Nahin hai!

She turned towards the man with the camera and got a few pictures clicked with Arnav holding him closely throughout!

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch dooriyaan, nazdikiyaan,
Kuch hans padi tanhayaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahaar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad!

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Guys, please please please comment and let me know how did you find this update. Bohut mehnat se likhti hai bechari Soniyah. Bari meherbani hogi agar comment kardain.

Please Do hit the Like button if u liked it. Thanks!

As you can see this SS has been moved from the IPKKND Forum to the Fan Fictions Forum. So if u want me to PM u for updates, plz Buddy me. Thanks.

Edited by soniyahkhan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a lovely update: can understand khushi's reluctance to give in to arnav or to believe his words now that her trust has been betrayed; love this feisty khushi! arnav will sure nieed to work overtime to win back her love... can't wait for those scenes
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...really loved the song choice.! aww i can imagine their pictures.! arnav luking at her and she luking at the camera with their perfect height.! haye that would be awesome.! loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

khushi's dialogues are so powerful

lovely update

continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update!! Feel sorry for khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

a lovely update: can understand khushi's reluctance to give in to arnav or to believe his words now that her trust has been betrayed; love this feisty khushi! arnav will sure nieed to work overtime to win back her love... can't wait for those scenes

Thank u sooo much...really! After seeing a crying khushi on tv these days, i think this khushi is a nice change, na?
Edited by soniyahkhan - 13 years ago

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