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Originally posted by: spn-abhay
nice story😃
sach ka samna😆loved the character of abhay in ur story😊plz pm me the next time u update😊thanx😊
Originally posted by: lost_in_love
Ress
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Lovely update anji..👏 thanks a lot🤗
ya..it had tinge of sadness bt blended wth sum beautiful moments! 😳 glad u felt like this😳
aww..i lyk shona very much! Lovd her convo wth pia!! 😳 they are very close share almost everything😉
hm..so pia noticd d cheating!!! And it seems arnab is a very kind hearted man. Bt d lyn where pia askd hr dad to b careful cz she wud b busy wth hr studies..there was a hint of a nt so pleasnt evnt i guess!! Or am i wrng? 😕 yes pia worried abt the overtrust of arnab on chand thats why she said that...though chand himself wont do anything because arnab is imp. for his company...but if time demands chand can be very mean.😈
and is dis d reasn dat bth of thm wil get separatd in future? 😕 haha..i knw am going too far bt wat to do..i felt lyk dis!! And if its so den i must say ur technique of separtn is too gud totaly diffrnt frm all..👍🏼 😉 well...yes u r going too far 😆its too early o say that this can be the reason of their seperation or not but yes once chand will know abt abhiya he will definitely try his best to separate them as he has already promised khuranas for abhay- alina mariage...enough now😳..i am not going to reveal everything so soon😉😆
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oh..haseena-chand fightng n abhay listening..felt really bad 4 hm! He has such a unhappy lyf..
ves he didn't has normal family life...but still he is not pessimistic infact somewhere he believes that chandeena still love each other but sometimes ...you really cant help it...i mean he is human afterall..he too get sad but believes in never say die attitude
bt thankfully pia is always there to cheer hm up!😊 lovd each n evry word n moment of their little tym togthr..⭐️ 😳
again it was soo natural n beautiful..⭐️ though small bt enough to survive til d nxt updat..😊 yes pia is his support system right now...he is finding solace in her company n their bond will grow stronger in coming updates😳
u knw anji ,i love d way in whch u blend humour n romance so beautifuly...😳 'majnu'..wel d way abhay said it dat was soo romantic n humorous too,yet at d same tym truly depictng hs currnt cnditn... Fav!👍🏼 awww thanks for compliment...glad u liked it😳
cntinue soon n thanx for pm..tk..cre..😊 will try to update today
p.s. Sorry 4 unresing late bt am busy wth studies so didnt get tym! :( hey dont be so formal...no need to sorry yaar...i can understand after all studies come first😊
Originally posted by: spn-abhay
sorry
ur frnd reques got deletd as i dnt know much of how to do anythng on i-f as i m new here nd dnt know much.
cn u plz snd it again
plzzz
hii frnds here is the new chapter...enjoy n do press like button n leave your comments if you liked it
CHAPTER 9 THE DEAL
Abhay has come home after meeting pia. He is looking confident more than ever. First he went to haseena's room. He saw that she was sleeping or may be already passed out due to drinking. He went near her bed and sit on one side n caressed her forehead. He said- "sorry mom cause of me you had a fight with dad n thanks for supporting me . I knew you will understand me." He left the room n asked the servant about chand. Servant told him that chand is in the study room since morning. He went there to talk to him.
STUDY ROOM
Chand was sitting here ever since abhay left the house in the morning. He cancelled all the meeting n appointments as he was very angry n upset but he had composed himself thinking that anger is not the solution of his problem. Abhay is young, hot blooded, he can become rebellious and even walk out of the house if he force him for anything. In such situation he will lose his son forever. So its not the time of shouting at him but to think some way to make him realize his mistake. Chand came out of his thoughts when he heard some foot step n turned to see that abhay was coming to him.
Abhay went near the big comfortable chair on which chand was sitting, he set on his knees in front of him and kept his hands on chand's hands n said-
Abhay (in a low voice)- dad I know you are upset with me and you have every right of getting angry on me...after all its my fault entirely. But believe me dad I didn't want truth to come out like this...i tried to tell you many time...but...
Chand (calmly)- abhay, your result is not the matter of my concern but your decision to pursue music as career is.
Abhay (trying to explain his pov)- I know dad you want me to join your business but I have no interest in it.
Chand (stood up jerking his hand away)- then why did you agree to do MBA when I asked you?
Abhay (also stood up)- you never asked me dad you have always ORDERED me. I never had any interest in MBA n probably that's why I failed as you can't succeed in anything with half hearted attempt.
Chand (little frustated)- why don't you understand abhay??? There is lots of struggle in that field. Its just a waste of time...you will not get anything from it.
Abhay (trying to reason)-I m ready to face all hardships I wont give up without trying. I have already taken my first step by enrolling myself in the reality show.
Chand (sarcastically)- and you think you will win it. Even if you win it you will become star overnight... huh!!! These types of show come every year n nobody remembers the winners after few days.
Abhay (confidently)- say whatever you want dad...I will not give up...I have decided it.
Chand (seeing that he is gonna loose in argument, took a pause for thinking something )- son..if you have decided it...then lets have a DEAL.
Abhay (confused)- what deal???
Chand (calmly)- since you are so hell bent on doing mistake...fine...i will give you some time, lets say two years, to fulfill your whims n fancies but if you fail you have to do whatever I say.
Abhay (expression of disbelief)-but two years is very less time dad.
Chand - frankly speaking I won't allow you to waste your whole life on this stupid thing. Besides two year are more than enough. This silly show of yours will take few months, I guess 4-5 months...then also you will have full 1.5 year left with you to prove yourself. It's a fair deal.
Abhay (sarcastically)- I thought I am talking to my father but no this is chand raichand, the business man who is trying to buy his son's dream with some stupid deal. But I am your son dad...more stubborn than you. ...Fine ...let it be...I ACCEPT YOUR CHALLENGE...THE DEAL IS ON.. But you have to promise me that during this period you will not force me for anything n let me concentrate on music only.
Chand (smiling wicked ly as he was sure abhay will lose)- fine, I promise...but remember...two years mean two years only.
Abhay (confidently)- don't worry dad...that will be enough for me.
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After that deal abhay become more serious all of a sudden towards his goal. Any how he wanted to win this challenge not because he wanted to prove his dad wrong but he wanted to make his own identity separate from the "the soul heir of raichand industries" or "chand riachand's son", he desired that people should know him by his work, by his albums not by chand's name. till now everyone close to him has come to know about his challenge with his dad n was offering whole hearted support to him.
Many days have been passed n the whole band has done lots of practice. They were confident now that they will qualify the first round of auditions with ease which was scheduled to happen tomorrow. everyone decided that they should relax for today as tomorrow will be a big day for them so they wanted to give their best. Kabir suggested that they should go to disc to enjoy the evening but abhay refused to come with them as for him there was only one person who can take away all his worry n in whose company he'll feel relax n that is none other than his pia.
His relationship with pia has grown much stronger in these few days. When he made that deal he was little nervous but it was pia who had given him courage n confidence to carry on. They went on few more dates in these days n every time they came more close n their bond grew stronger. She was with him in all these days being his strength. He was already sure that he loves her now pia also became sure of it. She finally has accepted that what she feels for him is nothing less than true love n finally shaking off all her fears, dilemma, confusion aside she has accepted this fact with whole heart. Though they knew that they are irrevocably in love with each other yet none of them has confessed it officially. While pia wanted that abhay should confess first, abhay on other hand was waiting for perfect occasion because he wanted to make it perfect n memorable for pia.
ABHIYA ,AT THEIR FAVOURITE PLACE, BEACH😉
As pia knew that tomorrow is a big day for abhay. She felt that abhay will need her n she was right. Abhay called her n they went for another outing. After having their dinner they were just laying on the sand side by side watching stars in the sky. Abhay was calm n silent more than usual. So pia asked him-
Pia- abhay are you nervous about tomorrow's auditions???
Abhay - no, why u asked this??
Pia - then why are you so quiet??
Abhay (looking towards the stars with a sad smile)- nothing...wahi hamesha ka problem...mom and dad again (sighs)
Pia (hesitatingly)- abhay...I don't know if it's the right time or not...but can I ask you something??
Abhay (still looking upwards, now with genuine smile)- since when you need permission to ask me anything???
Pia (still hesitating)- uncle n aunty..i mean your parents ...were they always like this...i mean...(she couldn't complete the sentence)
Abhay (understood what she was trying to ask)- no pia...my parents did love marriage...as my mom told me...they were like any other normal happy couple but after sometime differences started growing between them...as they both had different preferences in life n no one was ready to adjust according to other...n after that accident...everything changed forever.
Pia (confused n curious)- what accident???
Abhay (pain visible in his eyes)- I had a little sister. Her name was pari. She died in an accident . She was only five year old at that time. Mom was devastated after that incident, I don't exactly remember all the things I was young too at that time but she put all the blame on dad for this...n from that day till now they are husband n wife just for the world but inside the house they are nothing better than two people who can't even bear each other's sight. (he turned towards pia while laying supporting himself on one elbow )
Pia (tears started falling from her eyes)- I m sorry abhay...for starting this topic...I didn't want to...
Abhay (wiped her tears with one finger n placed his hand on her lips)- sshhh..you don't have to be sorry pia...you have every right to know everything about my life.
Pia (hold his hand n smiled a little)- you know I am proud of you.you have to bear all this things but still you didn't loose hope in life...you are a true fighter.
Abhay (smiling)- yes I am...but thanks to you too...even fighter feels low sometime n needs someone to cheer him up...ever since you came in my life I feel complete...you are my rock, my support, my crying shoulder...plz promise me you'll never leave me alone.
Pia (assuring, holding his face with one hand)- I will never leave you...you will always find me by your side whenever you need me...I promise...yeh vaada raha.
Abhay looked at her lovingly n leaned towards her to seal this promise with a kiss. It was not a slow but hard n passionate one. They forget about their tension, worrries , pain n everything. They were just living in this moment, sucking n teasing each other lips. Pia slid her hands in his hairs n pulled him closer abhay deepened the kiss at her response n moved his tongue inside her mouth and soon their tongues were moving rhythmically creating fireworks in their senses.
After several dates, it was nothing new for them but still the kiss was special as it was the memorial of first promise of love they made today n the beautiful night, the deep sea, the blowing wind n shining stars were their evidence, witnessing the passionate moment of two lovers.
Background score-
Never break my heart
Or else I 'll fall apart
The promise you made
Is now my sole aid
Which gives me strength
To go on n on
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PRECAP- as i said earlier i will give you POV's of some characters so here comes Pia's POV (here you will get to know story so far with pia's pov...it will be like pia is introducing herself to you...you will get insight of her feelings)