In his arms, she found her haven...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay...i really dunno what i'm gonna write in this post...coz, tbh...the JV scene today was sooo brief. Still, am making it...coz some friends want me to make one on them today as well. So, fairyland13 n Sara (sara.8811) this one's for you...😃
Jeevika had built a wall around her heart, as soon as she got to know of Manvi's cancer. She didn't want to be weak...she couldn't afford to be weak...she had to face it with all her strength and courage...she had to put up a brave face, for other's and especially for her sister...and she succeeded!
But the pain in her heart was constantly stabbing it...breaking her from inside...weakening her very senses, her existence...and despite her best efforts, it managed to make that wall collapse. Her tears joined n mixed with the water from the shower, falling on her...playing with the fire that was errupting from within her...as she sat on the floor...helpless, clueless and completely shattered. Fate had played its deadliest stroke...and Jeevika had NO idea how she would counter attack it. Some time back, she was assuring her sister that she won't let anything happen to her...that ALL will be well...but HOW? All her strength n conviction was melting under the water...as she hugged and held her knees with all the force she had.
And then, not finding her anywhere, her soulmate ...who knew very wall that no matter how brave she was trying to show n behave, she was devastated from inside...came searching for her. As Viren spotted her in thw washroom, drowned in tears...his heart ached for her.
He rushed to her...and completely enveloped her in his arms, in his strong hold...assuring her of his support...assuring her that NOTHING will go wrong. She melted in his arms...and clung to him, held him tightly...as if he was her only ray of hope...the anchor of her sinking ship...the ONLY person with whom she could share her pain, her grief.
She didn't know what to say...except ask the question, that had captured all her senses..."how can Mannu have cancer...how is this possible...?"...
Viren, holding her firmly in his arms...pacified her..."nothing will happen...everything will be fine...trust me..i'll never let anything happen to Manvi" (the writer played a spoilsport here again..).
And they kept sitting there...under the flowing water...washing their grief under it. He kept on hugging her close to him..very close...trying to transfer his strength to her...n return share her pain, so as to relieve her...
In his strong hold, Viren brought her back in the room and took her to the bed. There was nothing left in her...and if not for his hold, she would've easily collapsed on the floor. He sat next to her...and gathered her in his arms. She wrapped his arms around his waist...and burried her face in his chest, her haven...where she could shed all her pain. Her tears didn't stop...they were beyond her control now. He kept on stroking her hair, her arms...till her breathing slightly calmed, as she had drifted to sleep...
Dunno what i've written here...my post is defo quite lengthy as compared to the JV scenes. I've tried my best to describe them in the best possible way I could, though there was nothing much in the scene. 😳 Fairy n Sara...i hope u girls like it.
Haven't proof read, so sorry for the typos. Looking forward to comments...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u so much ayesha for this... it matters a lot... excellent post as always... i too agree d scene was quite short n d dialogues were not as impactful as they used to b ... bt seriously thank u so much.. its always a pleasure to read ur post... thnk u
Fatima
Edited by fairyland13 - 13 years ago
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viren nd jeevika r perfect couple. u write very nicely. i will post it on da official group if u not mind???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ya the scene was very short...but virika was amazing in the scene...i loved that scene when they were in bed and she was crying and resting her head on his chest and slept in that position...but i wish that the scene would be long..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fairyland13

thank u so much ayesha for this... it matters a lot... excellent post as always... i too agree d scene was quite short n d dialogues were not as impactful as they used to b ... bt seriously thank u so much.. its always a pleasure to read ur post... thnk u

Fatima

Aww! The pleasure is all mine, Fatima. I'm just glad that u liked the post. Tbh, there wasn't much in the JV scene...whereas, there could've been a long one, esp. today. But whatever it was...KT-KD rocked...the pain was there, expressions were perfect...so, i din't find it very difficult to blabber. 😳
If u din't ask me to...i wouldn't have made this post today...so, the credit goes to u n not me. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh My God!!! When i asked you to make the post and you and Resham were discussing how short the scene was, i was almost sure that you won't be making a post today. And it was probably justified too. There wasn't anything much in the virika scene, was just the precap thing.

So seeing your post was an extremely pleasant surprise. BUT when i read it, i was speechless. The depth you have brought in the scene with your words and analysis, even the CVs could not. Hats off to you.

Loved the post as usual. I am off to sleep now. Will write in detail in the morning.

Thanks a lot for making this post on our request. I can understand, that it must have been very difficult for you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved got a lot to say will be back

Okay so it has been a while but I am back.
I thought that the scene was beautifully captured and would have been absolutely perfect without the Manvi entering scene. I mean why was that needed. It would have worked if Manvi would have seen Jeevika crying or even heard her crying but why think that they are romancing. Also what irked me was Viren's dialogues they just didn't seem to have that care and love in them that Viren usually has. But I think they edited the part with more of his dialogues.
Otherwise it was so well presented. Jeevika's disbelief was totally believable. And you are right in his arms she found her haven. She really did. At that point she couldn't and wouldn't share her pain with anyone else. Only Viren could be there for her, and so she poured her heart out to him. Just holding him, hugging him and falling asleep in his arms gave her the comfort that she needed at that time. She knew that if she could count on someone it was her Virenji. She had that faith in him that he would somehow make everything all right. I thought it was really sweet how Viren took her to the bed and let her fall asleep in his arms.
Virika truly are made for each other. They know each other so well and understand each other's pain without them telling each other. Viren knew Jeevika was upset so he was looking for her throught out the party.
Though the scene was super short Kryran rocked it like they always do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_80

Aww! The pleasure is all mine, Fatima. I'm just glad that u liked the post. Tbh, there wasn't much in the JV scene...whereas, there could've been a long one, esp. today. But whatever it was...KT-KD rocked...the pain was there, expressions were perfect...so, i din't find it very difficult to blabber. 😳
If u din't ask me to...i wouldn't have made this post today...so, the credit goes to u n not me. 😃

ya the scene was too short.. u knw i have two complains regarding virika...
first is they do not get any impactful dailogues ..forget impactful they dont get any good dialogues
n second is why r their scenes so short... there was so much to show in yesterdays scene...bt. d cvs!!.
now i dnt understand why this is happening...
there r not many virika fans who r active on fb or other sites..so r d cvs thinking that there r not much virika fans n they r listening to d fans groups on d sites...n we knw our cvs have a special talent of listening to online fan groups n then taking the story forward in that direction..this has been clear from their past shows..
..or r they thinking that virika fans r too loyal so no matter what we will always watch it...
now i knw actors walking out of show cause they r not satisfied with it.. i so so hope that this does nt happen here...
sry i went off topic n once again thnks.
Edited by fairyland13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey ayesha...!!!

This post is longer than the JV scene...but definitely the shortest out of all the ones of urs that i hv read...😆

For me ... the JV scene was going fine until manvi entered and thought they were romancing...the CVs could hv esily skipped that part...and the intensity and seriousness in JV scene would hv remained...as soon as manvi entered i thought she will actually catch a glimpse of Jeevika cryin and leave all upset...but NAH...she thought tht her sis is romancing...The very same day that she got to know of her cancer!!!

The scene lost its value after that...for me!!

ALL i noticed after that was Virika and Kryan...!!!

But yes...the hug...and Jeevika falling asleep in Virens arms crying...was a nice scene...once again...manvi shouldnt hv cum!!!!

Another thing i wanted was JV tlking of Manvis treatment...CVs gv that a skip too!!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant Post👏👏Agree With Each n Every Word😊

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