New Abhi Nikki FF - From You to Me-Completed - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago

prash n mitzi i just read your latest os.. a budday gift for nammy..

aww that is sweet pieace of writing..
i just love the way you explaind how that suman lata came in badminton court widout nikkis knowledge.. n at the last you let abhi know it too.. n cleared his misunderstandings abt her.. otherwise in dmg abhi neva got to knw abt it..love these smal smal things u explain.. i surely get these things from ur os..which i really wanted in dmg but it never happend ova there..
and i always love the way you patray nikkis character.. you are great in potraying both but i kinda like it more when you present nikki.. u truely have cought th esence of her character very accurately.. coz she is very unpredictable n diffclt to assume wat she wil do next.. truely love it..
oww i love the whol os.. the way she was trying to meet him.. her excuses , games.. his mock anger..
n specially sending flowers to herself.. only nikki can do it.. but wateva she does no matter how smart abhi is,he always gets trapped in her pranks.. n i love angry and specially jealous abhi.. nikki is pro in making him J!!
i love how nikki curses all men for not getting rickshaw..😆 it alwas happens wid her..
arey dear nikki when u have BMW of ur personal property wid personal driver(abhi) why do you even need that rick?😆
n abhi.. i alwaz love his contradict nature.. zuban pe kuch or dil me kuch or..
love love love his caring gasture when he lifts her up.. no need to sey a word actions and eyes do all the talkings.. i love it abt AN.. which makes me love them mor n mor.. though they fight ,insult eachother..in frac of sec all these bad things gone as they come close to each other just one touch n sometime not evn touch but the eyelock and evrythng flips in 180 degree.. la la la..😳
and aahhh last kiss.. i dunno y u guys dont give me pleasure of reading some hot scenes..
i mean proper description of a kiss..😉
hehe.. kidding.. don mind.. m besharam.. u dnt know me yet😛😆
but great work guys..
love it..
keep it up..
n thanx for the os..😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Prash ... actualy every single line of ur ff is so bful ... ke main kya kahoon ... i ahev inserted smilies to indicate i like them but of course i cant put smilies everywhere :)
Cherry detailed comment later ..
but when You find no detail in the story ...be assured that part is written by me hahahahha
Its pRASH AND nAMMY who describe things so bfuly ...
and love ur take on AN you have described AN nicely ... how they dont need words :) and how they can never be friends ..they can be either enemies or lovers :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update. Great to see the passionate Dr Modi ;) am totally loving Sid in this ff. Wish he had ended up with Tamanna rather than in his own :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Missy-rc

Fantastic update. Great to see the passionate Dr Modi ;) am totally loving Sid in this ff. Wish he had ended up with Tamanna rather than in his own :(

Thank u Missy :) . and i know , poor sid was treated so unfairly in tht show. first tamanna and thn riddhima. they made him a complete heartbreak machine :(.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great writing in da first part.. Cant wait to Read rest of story.. Thanks Mitzification for the link.. Thanks Namy for pestering me to read it.. Without wasting time, I'm getting back to reading :)
*res with a promise I'll update it soon*
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sid is such a swtheart.. he cooked for their date.. love dat boy. :D
hope his own date was also a success.. ;)

now back to my AN...😃
ohhh ☺️
I knew it . Abhi's house is actually a hot place to start with lol ;)
thanks fr taking my suggestion.. :) 🤗

My fav parts are..

She turned around abruptly when she heard the click of the door being locked . Something told her that it was just the two of them inside the house and this realization made her blush suddenly .☺️☺️
^ and I got the signal whats gona happen..😎 😛 .

woah woahhh ...

I lve it the way he took off her earing n then start kissing.that was sensuous.. 😳😳 .my own heartbeat started racing at dat moment.. ☺️

She could feel sensations that she had never felt before as a light moan escaped from her mouth and she tilted her head towards him in an attempt to give him better access ..
^
aww losing all d control.. 😳😳

Nikki saw her knees almost give away under the pressure of his soft and tender kisses . She held onto the platform for support , but soon her arms were up and against his neck , as she let go off all her reservations and kissed him back hungrily.

^ finally lost it all... 😆🤪☺️☺️
☺️
aww that I love you Abhi... 😍.. amazing.. update.. 😃
applauds for you.. 👏
cntinue soon.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi1812

Great writing in da first part.. Cant wait to Read rest of story.. Thanks Mitzification for the link.. Thanks Namy for pestering me to read it.. Without wasting time, I'm getting back to reading :)
*res with a promise I'll update it soon*

Ashi , thanks 😊. and welcome to our thread .Hope you enjoy reading rest of the FF .
Thanks to Namy and Mitzi too ..
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANrucha

Sid is such a swtheart.. he cooked for their date.. love dat boy. :D
hope his own date was also a success.. ;)

now back to my AN...😃
ohhh ☺️
I knew it . Abhi's house is actually a hot place to start with lol ;)
thanks fr taking my suggestion.. :) 🤗

My fav parts are..

She turned around abruptly when she heard the click of the door being locked . Something told her that it was just the two of them inside the house and this realization made her blush suddenly .☺️☺️
^ and I got the signal whats gona happen..😎 😛 .

woah woahhh ...

I lve it the way he took off her earing n then start kissing.that was sensuous.. 😳😳 .my own heartbeat started racing at dat moment.. ☺️

She could feel sensations that she had never felt before as a light moan escaped from her mouth and she tilted her head towards him in an attempt to give him better access ..
^
aww losing all d control.. 😳😳

Nikki saw her knees almost give away under the pressure of his soft and tender kisses . She held onto the platform for support , but soon her arms were up and against his neck , as she let go off all her reservations and kissed him back hungrily.

^ finally lost it all... 😆🤪☺️☺️
☺️
aww that I love you Abhi... 😍.. amazing.. update.. 😃
applauds for you.. 👏
cntinue soon.. 🤗

Hey Rucha , was desperately waiting for your comment Tongue and am very delighted to read it finally . Glad you liked the update and it was "HOT" enough for you and made your heartbeat race ...😉. Haaa haaa . Thanks so much sweetie .
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG ... Prash ... i thought of this song reading ur line ... yesterday , i dint know u were gonna use this song 😊
Nikki saw him go and felt her heart overflow with love and tenderness . This was amazing , the mere feeling was reason enough to live ...
Edited by mitzification - 13 years ago

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