OS: Kriya's memorable trip

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok so this has nothing to do with the current track but it is one of my creations! Hope u enjoy it...

~ KRIYA's MEMORABLE TRIP~

(Krishna & Pratigya are on a picnic to Himachal Pradesh, this is their train journey)

K: Ekdum aaraam se baithna babu...

P: 1 minute, hamara samaan toh rakhle

K: Arre woh sab chodo yaar...woh hum rakh lenge, pehle ee batao ki tumka kuccho khane pine ke liye chahiye?...hum station se lekein aate hai.

P: Krishna...hume yahan train par sab kuch milega.

K: Accha? Matlab...aisa bhi hota hai?

P: Haan baba...ab tum baitho aur aaram karo!

(K comes and sits next to P, holding her tightly)

P: Krishna, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Krishna...sab log dekhlenge, chalo chodo hume

K: Arre yaar, kitna samjhaike ee trip ke liye bauji se...permission...li hai! Taki hum ek dusre ke saath vakat bitai sake aur tum ho ki chodne ki baat karti ho?

P: Haan lekin woh sab pohochne ke baad...yahan train par nahi

K: Pakka?

P: Haan baba pakka.

(Now its night and everyone in the train are sleeping)

K: Babu ab ee kitab padhna band karo yaar

P: Tumhe isse kya pareshani hai?

K: Kauno pareshani nai na...uu light chalu hai na, toh humka neend nai aa rahi hai

P: Oh sorry!

(P switches off the light. Instantly K grabs her and they get locked into a tight hug)

K: Arre humra kashmiri seb...

P: Krishna tum bhi na...

K: Kitna din se ee intazaar mein the...

P: Sach?

K: Bilkool yaar. Jab tum haveli mein thi aur hum adde pe, hum bahut akele mehsus karte the...tumri ek ek zhalak ke liye tarse hai hum...par ab nai, ab hoga humra milan!!!

Then K rests his head on P's shoulder and P gently and lovingly scrolls her fingers through his hair...

Its midnight and K&P finally sleep...

End of part 1 😃

Part 2 coming soon...

So tell me if u like it! Do u want me to continue KriYa's journey to HP? Comment ur thoughts below 😃😃😃

P.S: If u think there r any mistakes...point out. I'll improvise on them!

PART 2 coming soon...

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Abhishek

@abhiloveriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely...pls continue...😃

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M.Qasim Badil Khan

@Devil86

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Posted: 13 years ago

train main ager private cabin lay toh theek hai

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Devil86
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Tnx!!! 😃

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishek_kriyaa

Lovely...pls continue...😃

Tnx Abhishek! Yeah 2nd part will come soon...

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M.Qasim Badil Khan

@Devil86

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Posted: 13 years ago

make like this
pratgya visit krishna restaurant
krishna is not in restaurant
chandu opens krishna office for pratgya and tells he krishna will come
wait in office
then pratgya see krishna office and his name plate on his desk
written
KST
pratgya feels to much proud of him and then pratgya seee
that some guys came to restaurant too meet krishna fo some bussness offer o krishna is upto buy a restaurant for himself
pratgya see krishna behnd the office black miros that krishna wellcome them and tell them that come to my office then chandu tells him that pratgya is in his office waiting for you krishna leaves everybody and rush to his office to meet his babu

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Devil86
make like this
pratgya visit krishna restaurant
krishna is not in restaurant
chandu opens krishna office for pratgya and tells he krishna will come
wait in office
then pratgya see krishna office and his name plate on his desk
written
KST
pratgya feels to much proud of him and then pratgya seee
that some guys came to restaurant too meet krishna fo some bussness offer o krishna is upto buy a restaurant for himself
pratgya see krishna behnd the office black miros that krishna wellcome them and tell them that come to my office then chandu tells him that pratgya is in his office waiting for you krishna leaves everybody and rush to his office to meet his babu

OK as soon as i am done with this OS's upcoming parts, i will try 2 make one like this ok? Tnx for the advice!! 😃