Abhiya SS : deal of love ch 10 upd pg 81 - Page 35

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Chapter 7 :


HOSPITAL

Sajan and mishka , all arrived at hospital for the cc tv recording to expose T , unknown tat piya is also there . In the corridor while samrat was Thirsty , so they all stopped to drink water , where gunjan suddenly saw piya In corridor

Gunjan ( nervously ) : Piya !!!

Samrat smiling : ha pani pi liya maineh

Gunjan : areee piya piya

Samrat irrtatingly : kahana pani pi liya

Gunjan almost shouting : akal keh dushman , Teri bhabhi piya

Kabir shocked : ooo Teri !!! Mish tune toh kaha tat bhabhi's on a holiday today

Misha : mujhe Kya pata tha tat she will cum , I m not her personal secretary

Kabir : bhabhi neh Dekh liya toh band baj Jaygi , Sab Teri galti hai mish

Misha shouted : oh hello , itna hi hai toh khud Sab detectivegiri Karo na

Gunjan : oh shut up u both , piya neh Dekh liya toh Apna long questionair shuru kar Degi

Samrat : bakwaas khatam ho gayi ho toh shall we go to cc Tv room

Gunjan : common dusre side seh chalte and plsss mish no shouting

They went from other side and reached the cc tv room , there 1 watch man was sitting

Watch man : Kya Kaam hai tum logo ko ? Chalo bahar Niko

Kabir ( taking out few 500 Rs notes ) : Dekh bhai , hame sirf ek recording dekhni hai , yeh paise leh and hame Hamara Kaam Karneh de !

Watch man : nai Shaab ! Main itne paise mien gadari nahi Kaunga

Misha ( angrily holding him by collar ) : see , main already gusse mein hu , don't make me more angry , warna ...

Samrat holding mish : calm down mish , Dekh I m giving another 1000 Rs note to u , maan ja or else we hav more ways

Watch man : Tikh hai Shaab ,but sirf 10 min lekin

Then they searched Sunday 's recording of around 1 pm and found it They were seeing it carefully

Gunjan : guys , see this man , I think he is the one spying

Samrat : kabir zoom in to tat man

Kabir : ok ...

Samrat : Haila ! He is the watch man of office , who does night duty , and he is in office right now , great

Misha : Tikh hai Let's go then

They went to office , kabir , misha and gunjan stayed outside office while samrat went inside , after all most 20 min he came back with watch man , first he denied that he didn't do anything and nor he worked for T but when they gave him huge amount of money , he opened up everything and also gave the unedited recording to them

Gunjan smiling : finally guys , mission accomplished

Samrat : yeah finally , Ab jaldi seh yeh recording ham ko abhay dikhte hai , chalo guys

Misha : no no no , mein us abhay ka chehera bhi nahi dekhna chahti or else I don't know what I will do

Gunjan : mish is right we r not cuming to raichand mansion , tum log jao

Kabir : ok fine , bye girls

Samrat ( winking at gunjan ) : bye chashmish

Gunjan rolled her eyes : bye

Samrat and kabir went to raichand mansion,they saw sad vanilla on floor as if hasn't eaten anything without its mistress while abhay was working on laptop as usual
Abhay : hello guys

Kabir : hello keh bacche , u know bhabhi is been upset because of u

Abhay : plsss kabir if u wanna talk about tat then I m not interested

Samrat : oye just shut up , u should be ashamed, u don't trust your wife and trust tat T atleast ek baar Sachai Jane ki koshish toh ki hoti

Abhay : I believe In what I see

Kabir : what u see is not always the truth abhay

He showed abhay the unedited video to abhay , abhay just dumbfounded see the truth , he had no words to say , he sat closed his eyes and remember the harsh words he said to piya , he remembered each and every thing , piya even tried to explain him but he refused listen , moreover he even told her tat she is a deal , how can he be soo insensitive , he remembered those tears eyes of piya , he thought tat he will get her back no matter what , he got up suddenly while samrat and kabir were jabbering sumthing which he wasn't listening

Abhay : samrat , slap me I deserve 1 slap

Samrat slapped him hard

Samrat : yes u Deserve it

Then kabir gave another slap to abhay

Kabir : u deserve 2 slap abhay

Then abhay took the car keys ran downstairs

Samrat : oye kahan ja raha hai ?

Abhay ( while going down ) : at piya's home

Samrat : ruk ! Hamareh bina mat jaana , we r also cuming

Kabir : ha warna mish will kill u there only

Samrat and kabir ran behind abhay & sat in car , vanilla also jumped in . Then abhay started car in full speed as if he will slow down piya will leave him forever .

Kabir : ruk ! ruk ! ruk ! Pagal ho Gaya hai Kya ?

Samrat : Dekh abhay , it's not a film were bhabhi is leaving for an airport , she is here only dude , CHILL

Abhay : just shut up

Kabir : but what it bhabhi will not be at home

Abhay : it's 7 pm , she must hav been home by now

After almost 10 mins they reached the dobriyal house , vanilla barked whereas kabir and samrat where scolding abhay for Such a fast driving but abhay seem to be not listening he just wanted to see his piya , after almost ranging the bell 50 times gunjan and misha opened the doors , before both could say anything Abhay ran upstairs to piya's room and opened the door , he found tat his piya was crying looking at their wedding pic , piya was hell shock to see abhay , then abhay gave her a bone crashing hug , he murmured " I m sorry " while almost crying , he was remembering every good moment he spend with piya , their first date , their marriage , their SR everything , he also thought how much he has hurt his piya ,he thought he will take all her sorrows away , where piya couldn't control here emotions , she has missed him soo much even if it has been only 2 days , she was feeling incomplete , there was an pain in her heart in this 2 days but now coming in abhay's embrace , her pain had finally gone , she broke down into tears but then she remembered that night where she saw different abhay , she remembered those not so good words , she remembers tat she is just deal to abhay , anger came to her she pushed him

Piya angrily : how dare u cum here ! Just go away

Abhay ( guilt and tear in his eyes ) : I m sorry piya , I know I made a mistake , I should hav trusted u

Piya mockingly : u telling me sorry huh , for saying those harsh words u telling me sorry ! For not trusting your wife u telling sorry , ( almost crying ) for making my marrige a sick deal u telling me sorry !

Abhay wiping her tears : don't cry piya plsss I know it was my mistake , I should hav trusted u

Piya moving away : don't touch me abhay , plsss just leave these place I don't wanna see your face

Abhay firmly : I m only gonna leave this place with u mr.s raichand

Piya : tats never ever gonna happen and why should I cum with u , I m just deal na

Abhay : no no no , u r not a deal to me , u r the most special person in my life

Piya : u only told na tat u married me cause of tat deal with my dad then why this emotions huh

Abhay : I agree piya tat I made a deal with your dad but I married u only cause I ... I like u piya

Piya : if u hav liked me na abhay then u would hav trusted me

Abhay : I know , I know I made mistake of not trusting u ! Now u tell what should I do to earn your forgiveness

Piya : make me believe tat this will never happen again , the day I m convinced I will cum back ( looking down ) but m sure tat day is never gonna cum

Abhay lifting her face by her chin : tat day will cum soon

They just stared at each others eyes ,pain was visible in both there eyes

Abhay ( still staring at her ) : I hav never seen such beautiful eyes

Piya turn around : now If u will plsss get out , I need to sleep

Abhay : sleep ? At 7 :30

Piya : any problem ?

Abhay : nope not at all , I will also sleep with u

Piya : no need , there r other rooms in the house so just get out

Abhay : I m not leaving my wife's room At any cost

Piya picking up a vase : jate ho ki I throw this vase on u !

Abhay : by this if u forgive me ,be my honour

Piya threw the vase but abhay catched it

Abhay with a smirk : u need more practise wifey

Piya angrily throwing a pillow : if u wanna sleep , then sleep on floor but not here with me
Saying tat she switched off the lights , Went to bed , took a blanket and closed her eyes and slept .abhay was staring at his sleeping angel , he stared at her for like 15 mins then went towards and caressed Her silky hair while he sat down on his knees
Abhay : I promise piya everything will be fine soon
Saying tat he kissed her forehead and went to sleep on floor , then piya opened her eyes and in a low voice said I will be waiting abhay , then she again slept with a smile on her face , the sleep which was missing since 2 days .

On the other hand samrat and kabir were finally able to convince gunjan and misha not to burst out on abhay today , let him and piya talk , if misha wants to kill abhay she can do tat in morning but not now ,gunjan was convinced easily but it was hell tough to convince misha then finally samrat and kabir stayed at dobriyal house for abhay's safety and all went to sleep

MORNING

It was about 6 am when abhay woke , he looked around in room for piya but didn't find her then he looked throughout the house but didn't found her finally he found her in the garden playing basket ball
Abhay with a smirk : so u play basketball I didn't knew tat

Piya not paying attention : there r many more thing tat u don't know about me

Abhay : do u even how to play it or just like tat only

Piya : excuse me u r talking to Captain of girls basketball team of mount college

Abhay : whatever u can never beat me

Piya : oh please I would beat u in 5 mins only ,

Abhay . U sooo sure ?

Piya : absolutely

Abhay : then let's hav deal , we play basketball match and I if I win u coming home and if u win u can stay here as long as u want

Piya : I m not going to agree to any such silly deal of yours

Abhay : And i thought u really know how to play basketball

Piya : I know how to play it and better then u

Abhay : then why u r scared of me ?

Piya : I m not scared of u

Abhay : prove it

Piya : fine then , game is on ...


Precap : abhiya basketball match , abhiya romantic moments and plan to band bajao for T

Hey guys , how was it ? Hope u liked it , next upd will be very soon and yes do hit the like button and give your lovely comments which means a lot to me , thanks for reading my SS , TC guys :)


Edited by sweetmonaya - 14 years ago
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This is just great dear as well as funny! Abhiya part was awsome, loved it! I think in next chappy pia will come back to abhay...as there will be basket ball match! I think abhay will win...hope abhay will take good lesson of pia!!
Update soon this time and take care!
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wow..lovely update..hope abhay will win match..๐Ÿ˜ณ

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