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Posted: 13 years ago





Chapter 1:



It's a chilled winter and the weather is so pleasant. Small small children are playing in the park with their friends and some children are running to their school after their lunch break. Some aew busy in their house hold work and some are busy in their office. Love are are roaming on the hills of shimla enjoying the weather. But a girl her face is so sad as if she is forced to do that. A class filled with students and the whole class is listening to the class seriously except one girl who sat on the last bench and looking here and there. It's a torture for her sitting in the class and listening the class which she hate the most. Her eyes are dropping due to sleep. Another girl who sat beside that girl is listening to the class. She turned aside and asusual found her not listening the class.

Oyyy don't look here and there listen to the class told that girl 2.

Yaar what we will listen bolo.. the same lines, the same story daily. We r in last year no need to listen told girl 1.

Oh just shut up yaar, I don't understand why u r not at all interested in studies. Did u see ur marks all border marks told girl 2.

Arey yaar what will I do after studies waise I am sure that my family will get me married after this year. And I don't want to do job and all mera pati karega wo sab told girl 1 with a dreamy look on her face.

Ufff tum na.. just leave it told girl 2 and again concentrated on class.

After sometime the class got over and girl 1 sighed in relief.

Yaar what a boring class huh!! Don't how u all r listening told girl 1 while both are going out. Oyyy teri yaar its 4 pm. I have to go home badimaa will be waiting for me.

GEET ruko ek minute told girl 2.

Kya hain meera? Asked geet.

Geet I know what work u have after going home, no need. U r staying in hostel and go there directly told meera.

What r u talking meera badimaa will scold me if I wont go there told geet.

What the hell geet.. u will go there and do all the house-hold work and come back to hostel hell tired. Why u will do all these things when she don't care for u told meera.

Geet smiled at her and told she is my badimaa yaar, mere ghar mein kaam karna koi paap hain kya?

U think like that but not ur so called badimaa told meera.

Chill na yaar u go to hostel I will be back in an hour. Main tumse ek baat poochu? Asked geet making baby face.

No way told meera as she knows what she gonna ask.

Geet made a puppy face and told meri sweet meera, plz yaar. U r my best friend na. I know u cant say no to me.

Ahaa.. hey who r u? I don't know I am seeing u for the first time. R u new to college? Asked meera all innocently.

Geet made a baby sad face and told dramatically u.. u don't know who am i? she again smiled and told but I know who r u. she kissed her cheeks and told u r my cute meera. And I know that u will do my assignment. Ok ok I am going now. Kal subah tak mera assignment complete karna. Ok? Bye dear love u. hostel main milte hain.

Saying that geet rushed from there leaving a smiling meera behind.

Meera (st): pagal ladki, hey babaji now I have to do 2-2 assignments, again night out today. Koi baat nahi babaji geet ke liye kuch bhi.

When geet was going to her badimaa's house she saw a big cutout of beautiful wedding bangles of different. She just lost in those bangles. Geet is crazy of bangles. She just love to wear them, when she was small her mother use to buy her variety of bangles but after her parents death her badimaa didn't care geet much. But cant say that she hate geet but she don't like her too. But geet always love her badimaa, badepapa and her veerji. But she is princess of veerji. She will get her pocket money from her veerji.

Geet came out of her BANGLES thought when driver told that they reached home. When she entered the house she saw no one is there in the house except her veerji reading some file. Geet smiled widely and shouted VEERJI..

Yash turned back and saw his princess and smiled widely.

Hey gudi...before yash speak geet started her blaberring.

Veerji veerji mujhe jald se jald shaadi karni hain told geet.

Hearing this yash dropped the file which is there in his hand and shouted what?

Ha veerji when I was coming from college I saw a big cutout (she stretched her hand showing big) with beautiful wedding bangles. Agar aapne meri shaadi karenge tho u can buy me those bangles na told geet dreamily.

Yash sighed in relief.

Geet tum bhi na mujhe dara hi diya told yash while caressing her hair.

Really veerji that set.. wowww.. Exclaimed geet.

Ufff tum aur tumari pagalpan told yash shaking his head.

Seeing him geet laughed out loud and yash too joined him. Later geet did her work and left to hostel. Yesh dropped her in the hostel.

Yash (st): kitni pyaari hain par mom I don't know why she don't like her. But geet never complaints anything. She wants people around her happy. Atleast after larriage she should be happy.

Yash sighed and left from there.

In another city:

A man doing his work in office and his mobile is ringing continuously. But he didn't care to pick the call. For him when it comes to work he don't want any disturbance. He is so immersed in the work that he didn't notice that someone came into his cabin and waiting for his single glimpse from past 5 min. suddenly he shot his head up and was shocked to see that person infront of him. Seeing that person's angry face he smiled nervously. Seeing his smiled her anger rised. Basically she wont get angry but today..

What the hell u r thinking of urself huh!! Shouted that person.

He got up and went near her and said I am sorry making baby face.

She turned her face aside indicating that still she is angry. But he made her sit and asked do u need anything?

She nodded in a no and told what r u thinking of urself ha? Do u know how tensed we r? dadimaa is trying to call from 2 hours. And I too tried many times but nahi aap kyun phone uthayenge.

I am having work so didn't see the phone told that maan.

Mr. MAAN SINGH KHURANA tell me when u don't have work told that girl making annoyed face.

MONA I am sorry yaar.. dekho just 10 min I will complete my work told maan.

Mona and maan are neighbours from childhood. They both are best friends. Mona is studying her architecture 2nd year. She wants maan to get married and live his life happily but not like a machine. Mona is like a family member to maan.

No no no no no work now. Come we will go home told mona.

By the way how u came here asked maan.

Oops hey babaji maan ko ab yeh question kyun poochna tha? Thought mona.

Wo.. wo.. I came on bike told mona and made a baby face.

Maan's anger rised and shouted what the hell are u thinking. Last week u met with an accident did u forget that.

I am sorry.. told mona.

Sorry my foot.. chalo ghar chalo first. I want to talk to uncle now told maan and smiled inwardly.

R u mad? U will tell dad no no way. Plz maan plz requested mona.

Maan gave I don't care look and told chalo my dear mona.

Mona made a baby face and followed him. After a short journey they reached home.

Maan plzz told mona.

Maan smiled and told ok from next time don't'

Wow maan u r the best. Thanku so much told mona and hugged him.

Maan smiled at her antics.

Waise tomorrow u r going to shimla na? asked mona.

Ya yaar.. for 2 months. Other wise dadi will kill me told maan with baby face.

Aww don't worry.. enjoy ur holidays. Don't think about office and all ok? Adi and sasha will take care told mona.

Ok madam, anything else? Asked maan.

Nothing nothing.. ok bye good night told mona and left from there.

Maan too went to KM and wished dadi.

(P.S.: Dont worry guys mona is only friend of maan.. )


Precap: maan in shimla.. 😉

Ufff maneet meet... 😆😆

Hi friends here is part 1. Hope u all like it.

Plz tell me should I continue or not.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Waiting for ur response.

Give me 150+ likes then u wil get next update fast.

Come on come on give me my likes and comments.. PLZ WRITE OTHER THAN AWESOME N OTHER ONE WORD ANSWERS.. I DONT KNOW WHAT IS UR OPINION ABOUT UPDATE.. PLZ ITS A REQUEST.. IT TAKES NOT EVEN A MINUTE...

PS.: I AM SNEDING 220 PMS IF I WONT GET 180 LIKES AND ATLEAST 14-15 PAGES OF COMMENTS I AM NOT GONNA UPDATE NEXT PART. SORRY GUYS I AM DAMN SERIOUS THIS TIME. WHETHER IT TAKES 1DAY OR 1 WEEK OR 1 MONTH I DONT CARE... BUT I WANT 180 LIKES.. ITS UPTO READERS NOW.. IF U WANT UPDATE FAST THEN PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT.. NAHI THO ITS UR WISH. I AM TOTALLY TOTALLY SAD AND HURT WITH UR RESPONSE. IF U GUYS WANT TO READ THEN PRESS LIKE NAHI THO.. I WONT TELL ANYTHING.. ASK ME UPDATE WHEN U FIND 180 LIKES AND 15 PAGES OF COMMENTS...THIS NOT ONLY FOR THIS FF BUT FOR ALL..

Love

-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
meena.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay im first to comment
awesome dear
loved it
continue soon
Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
Shefali16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes yes plz continue
its interestng
luvd it
Nivedithachand thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow SB !!!! The update was really interesting !!!! Maaneet seem to be unique in this !!! Awww... am very eager to read next update !!! Plzzz continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely...
Geet is tooo dreamy... Bangles k liye shaddi..ufff
meera us soo sweet...
Bt badima...again a hitler...
Mona only frnd na... I hope she dosen't love maan...
Maan cuming to shimla...yipeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon yaar
-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow
me neighbour of maan..hayee hayee hayee hayee
thanku thanku thanku so much darling..love u muaah muaah
oye u included my accident story n maan se dat pad gaya na muje..sachi yar how u got ths idea?omg omg in in cloud9
poor geet..grr i hate her badi maa..wow yash sweet sweet bro..ha ha geet wants to marry 4 bangles..dnt worry tumhara sajaan is on d way..hey darling thanku thanku so much again..cnt asap
love u muaah
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for d link dear
geet ko toh badi jaldi hai shaadi krne ki
waiting for their first meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jyothi 🤗...thank u for the awesome update...awww this Geet is such a sweetheart ❤️...she cares so much for her family...wonder why her baremaa hates her...thank god she has Yash and Meera...u scared me with that Mona...happy she is just a close friend ...waiting for Maan to meet his Geet 😍...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is total jhali 😆
yash get heart attack ''veerji meri shadi karwa do''😲
maan workholic when he is not 😕
nice update dear
waiting for next update
cont soon..

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