Written Update - July 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi, i dont know who the updater is on the forum, but i didnt see an update, so i thought i would do it for today😊 hope no one minds..im not quite good myself...but i'll try



the scene starts off with Ranvir being brought back to the hospital with Aditya. As he gets out of the car, outside of the hospital, he looks up to find a man on the roof of the hospital. The man sort of smirks and waves to Ranvir and our dear chap waves back, then Ranvir sees the man jump off the building. Ranvir, utterly freaked out of his mind screams at the man and then faints in the arms of Aditya.

Ranvir is brought inside the hospital where Aditya questions the doctor about these weird happenings and sightings that he keeps having. The doctor explains that it is because of the 8 year coma and that its quite normal for it to occur. Aditya then tells the doctor that Ranvir thought he saw a man jump off the hospital buidling today. As the doctor is walking away, he turns back to tell Aditya that someone committed suicide 10 days ago, not today. Aditya is perplexed.

Ranvir on the other hand is in the hospital room having dreams about the man jumping off the building and is seen screaming and getting up. Aditya runs into the room and trys to calm Ranvir down and tells him that a man committed suicide 10 days ago, not today. Ranvir is confused and he keeps muttering about the man on the building.

Suddenly, there is screaming heard and Aditya runs outside to find out that a fire has happend in the hospital and that they needs to get out. Aditya runs to tell Ranvir that they need to get out. Ranvir walks with a cane while people all around him are running around to get out of the hospital. He makes it out and is seen going back to his home and sitting down on the floor (i wonder where Aditya went off too leaving poor Ranvir alone!)

The next scene takes place the day after where Adtiya and a bunch of doctors and police officers are standing outside a hospital van. The doors are open and Aditya says that he is glad Ranvir is coming back to normal. Ranvir replies that he doesnt want to go back to the hospital, he doesnt want to leave his mother. Aditya gets angry and says that he needs medical help and that he must go back. All of a sudden, Ranvir spots Gangster Dude (the one who was shot 8 years ago by Ranvir, i forgot his name). Well Gangster Dude is shown walking across the street and Ranvir shouts his name and starts to run after him.

Ranvir keeps following Gangster Dude and they are back at the place they were 8 years ago, where Ranvir shot Gangster Dude on the rooftop. Ranvir is aware of this and he continues to follow Gangster Dude to the rooftop. Once there, he sees Gangster Dude at the edge of the building. Ranvir keeps shouting "STOP STOP" and Gangster Dude jumps of the building, while Ranvir runs to the edge to see that no one is there.

Its starts to rain and theres a whole lot of thunder clapping going on and we see this figure appear on the roof. HAILa its SAVIO! (sorry, i just love this guy😆) anways, Ranvir is utterly perpelexed as to how Savio is here in front of him. Ranvir asks him how he is here and trys to touch him, but realizes that indeed Savio is dead. Ranvir asks Savio why he can see his mother, Gangster Dude and now Savio, who are all dead. Savio tells Ranvir that hes been given a new life to help others and that he has the sight to see both people alive and dead. He says that Ranvir was so close to touching death and that he has been brought back with a "power" to help the millions of souls who have died without fulfilling their last wishes, or who have been injusticed in a way. Savio says that is Ranvirs duty to help these souls because he is the only one who can see and speak to them. He also tells Ranvir that he is with him like he always was...

Ranvir is shown walking down a road with determination (wow he looks so hot!) newayz, he suddenly hears "fire fire" and so he runs into this sort of alley where he sees a man on fire and then realizes that the man is actually a ghost named Sandeep.

Sandeep tells Ranvir that the place used to be his building and it caught on fire and he died in the fire. He asks Ranvir to do him a favour, which is to tell his wife where his daughter's birthday gift is because he died on the day of her birthday and wants to fulfill her wish. Ranvir agrees to help.

He goes to Rupali's house (Rupali is Sandeep's wife). She thinks Ranvir is a fraud of some sort but ranvir tells Rupali to check the bedroom closet for the gift. She checks and finds nothing and kicks Ranvir out of the house. Ranvir is walking out when he meets Nikky (Sandeeps daughter) and Nikky says that she believes him. Ranvir asks her if anyone else has opened the closet, and she says that it may have been ?uncle (sorry!! i forgot this new uncles name!)

Ranvir asks Sandeep who ?uncle is and Sandeep says he is his buisness partner. Ranvir asks if there was anything else in the closet and Sandeep says that the property papers were with the gift in the closet. Ranvir goes to find ?uncle

He goes to ?uncle's house only to find ?uncle is in the hospital. Ranvir goes to the ICU in the hospital and tries to talk to ?uncle, who is in critical condition. the nurses try to kick him out and then NEW ENTRY....DR.ROHIT (btw, who uses their first name😕) anyways, this DR.ROhit comes in and tells Ranvir to get out. Ranvir listens to Dr.Rohit and leaves with the promise that he can come to speak to ?uncle in a bit. He meets Kinnari outside of the ICU and he is surprised to see her there, so is she. They both speak for a bit until Dr.Rohit comes out and argues with Ranvir. Both are arguing when Kinnari says she knows Ranvir is a good man and asks Rohit to let him in.

Ranvir goes inside the ICU and threatens ?uncle to speak the truth. Ranvir says that he knows that ?uncle is a murderer and that he made the building go on fire and then stole the bag with the property papers. ?uncle denies at first and then gives in. ?uncle asks how does he know this stuff and Ranvir says that Sandeep told him. ?uncle gets all freaked out because Sandeep told Ranvir and Sandeep is dead.

Ranvir sees Kinnari outside and asks her why shes here. Kinnari says she is waiting for Dr. Rohit. She also tells Ranvir that Dr.Rohit is her husband. Dr.Rohit comes out and both Kinnari and him walk away together while a silent Ranvir looks on (aww bechara)

A few days later Ranvir goes to Rupali's house to give the gift to Nikky and Rupali apologizes for her rude behaviour. Both her and Nikky are happy and Ranvir is happy too.

Ranvir is going up a building when Savio shows up on the stairs. Savio tells Ranvir that what he did was good and Ranvir asks Savio what he should do next. Savio says he needs to help the millions, he needs to go to their families and help them. He also tells Ranvir to join the force again since he wants to see Aditya and Ranvir together. Ranvir complains about Aditya not understanding, but Savio dismisses it. Ranvir pretty much smiles and walks away, while Savio looks on.

Ranvir is shown in Aditya's office asking Aditya to join the force again. Aditya says he will try, but he cant guarantee anything. All of a sudden, the mueseum's owners (or something) shows up at the office and wants to speak to Aditya. Ranvir politely leaves while Aditya and Muesum Dude speak. Muesuem Dude says that something weird has been happening in the muesum at night, where something would be moved from one place to another.

Aditya and Mueseum Dude go to the muesum and they see that a knight's armour has been moved from one spot to another and the Muesuem Dude claims that nothing is seen on the camera tapes either. Aditya is confused.

On the other hand, a small kid is seen looking at a mummy and he asks his mom questions about the mummy. The kid goes closer to the glass and he sees the mummy's eyes open and close. The kid gets freaked and tells his mom, and his mom thinks hes being funny.

The camera goes back to the mummy and we see the mummy's eyes open and close, and the show ends.


Next week
-Ranvir and Aditya are in the muesum and they see something about the mummy
-Some new girl comes into the show, i thnk the mummy was in her body or something
-the mummy is seen running around (weird i know)


sorry if it was bad, this is my first time writing an update, hope it was bearable😆

Khush

Edited by sweetsorrow18 - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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The update is really good.Thanks a lot. 😊 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a great update khush!! thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thanks for the reply...it was gud..please keep posting
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol mummy running around, that sure is weird...

Thanks for the update... it was great!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Khush. That was great! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8! really detailed and nice color! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the great update khushi.. wow! a mummy running around.. hehe.. yes very weird indeed... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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the update was very good indeed..seemed like i was watching the video..n i like the story lien as well quite interesting....

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