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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...

waiting fr da past to continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey m feeling sad for maaneet...nd m confused ki how will maan afterwards believe on geet dat she was innocent????????
s0o...plz giv a update a clear all my doubts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsm update...😊
god wat maan has did to her😭
nw both r suffring😭
do con soon😊
thanx 4 the PM.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 28

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"Ohh isliye itna gussa' abbmujhe kya pata yeh mujhe itna pyar kerte hain"

Seeing the picture and DVD she forgot how he had humiliated her' all she knew that she was angry with her out of love and that's why he wanted to keep eye on her'

She then tried so much to contact him but could not' she tried to go out but in vain and Maan did not come to her room however time she sent message'

She was getting restless for him' to shower her love on him'.

Geet has waited six days for him eagerly' she was not allowed out of the room nor did Maan come to meet her' she felt so restless

Seventh day Geet almost lost her patience' Maan loved and and was angry with her' she needed to please him'. she ran to the door and almost tried to fight with the commandoes

"I am his wife' he has married me, who are you to stop me to meet my husband"

The comados were fast' while one talked to her other sent message to Maan who was jogging in the park of his huge mansion.

Maan who was almost wet with sweat running in the sun came immediately to the room. He signaled comandoes to move and held Geet by he arm and pulled her inside. The moment he locked the door Geet crushed herself on him'

"Maa-aan" and she started kissing him all over his body like mad'. "I missed you.. I missed you so much'.I love you Maan, I love you" She kept on repeating what her heart actually felt'

Maan held her by her shoulder and straightend her'..

"I don't care if you love me or not Samjhi tum' becoz a hard heart like you can never love"

"Nahi Maan' its not true'. Mujhe hosh he nahi tha"

He left her in jerk but when she stubled.. "Sambhal ke" he held her'.

"See you care about me'. Bas naraz hain mujhse'."

"Still you are thinking only of yourself Geet' chi shame on you'. You don't deserv to be a mother"

"Mother??? "

He ignored her question "And don't be illusion that I married yo becoz of you as unlike you I care more about my child than you and me"

Geet was all confused, she did not know what he was talking'.

"And its really unfortunate for me that I have to be married to you' per kya karoon' my child is above all for me' not like you who wanted to kill my child'"

"Child?? Your Child??? And why will I try to "

"Ohhh now don't be innocent' this will not work with me'. You are carrying my 3months old child and now I won't let you harm it'. You took poison to revenge me'. This is how you wanted to revenge me right'. Not once did you think that it's your too'."

Geet was completely shocked

"Maan' what are you telling, I am not getting anything'"

"Geet this drama won't work with me.. you will be watched with your each step' I won't let you harm the baby now' and no Maan for you' you have lost all right' I am just your husband Maan Singh Khurana' Mr. Khurana, father of the child you are carrying. Isse jyada jorne ke koshish mat kerna mujhse'."

"Maan main aisa kyun karoongee'. I don't even know'"

"Ohhh really I don't buy this' anyways doctor will come to check you and my people will be all the time with you to keep watch on you'."

Maan was about to leave when Geet held his hand "Maan' I was throuout lost in you'mujhe to koi hosh hee nahi tha undino kya hua' I knew nothing Maan' mujhe hosh nahi tha'"

He freed his hand from her "No more Maan I said'. Just Mr. Khurana' got it." And he left'

She sat on the ground sobbing "trust me Maan, please trust me"

Present:

Maan came from the office and felt sad seeing this big masion linned up with only servants ready to take orders'.

He everyday now wish to see Geet running behind Mohit when he returns from office' he dreamt she handle him Mohit and take his bag' make coffee for him' all those small things they did in Mumbai'.

"Good evening sir" one of the servants said and took his bag from his hand.

Maan's leg automatically moved to Mohit's room when he was interrupted by dadima'..

"I will be thankfull if you don't disturb them'. You know she will go away if she sees you'"

He had a big smile on his face

"What' Geet is with Mohit'I was dying to hear this"

"She is not hard hearted like you' she is always with him and that is why Mohit is so attached to her'. but in front of you she will never be with him' "

"I won't disturb them Dadima' bas ek bar chup ker undono ek saath dekh loon' my eyes are thirsty to see this' please dadima"

"Jaiye' aapse aur umeed bhi kya kee ja saktee hai'. "

Maan rushed to the room and looked from the window hiding'.

Geet was all lost in Mohit' they were laughing and running around' he felt on the top of this world' he was so lost in the scene that he came a little more in the middle of the window'.

Geet turned to catch Mohit when her eyes fell on Maan watching her' Geet immediately kissed Mohit and was leaving from the room when Maan caught her by her shoulder'

"Please' please be with him' I won't disturb"

"Choriye mujhe Mr. Khurana" Maan half heartedly left her and she walked away fast from there'

He hated when she said Mr. Khurana to him' it always felt like a tight slap on his face but it was all his own deed that he was facing.

Geet locked herself and placed her hand on her shoulder where he has held her' she hated how even today she burnt with his touch'. Why still his touch has so much effect on her and that was one big reason she did not let him touch her' it was her weakness and she did not want to show her any weakness to him'

She hated herself for still yearning for his touch' after so much pain he has given her still her heart within was dying to be in his arm' and it always surfaced even with slightest touch of his and thus she always wanted to be distant from him.

Since almost one year she has started living with him in his room and that was due to Mohit. Mohit will grow up and Maan had requested her that it would not be good effect on Mohit if he grows up knowing his parents were almost separate' for Mohit she could do anything'. Also leave her self respect behind' she had started living in his room.

But since she has come to their room Maan's hope that their relation can be built up again has increased'. Irony of life'

First she had wanted them to saty together like a family' so much request she had done'. But after he had taken Mohit immediately away from her.. she was broken' seeing th hardest part of him'. How hard hearted he had been to separate her from her son' how much she had begged him for almost a month to let her have glimpse of her son but Maan have not given an ear to her request' her own guilt towards her son and then Maan's ruthless behaviour had slowly made her sink into one room of big Mansion'.. leading her to slowly go into depression.

Maan came to their room after an hour; geet was getting ready' He wanted her to stay at home' not even one evening since she has shared room with her she stayed there in house with him' every day she had her plan to go somewhere or the other'.

Hope against hope, like everyday he asked "is it important to go' please ruk jaoo na'we need to talk, if we don't talk nothing will be OK' ek mauka to do mujhe'. Belive me'."

"I need to go' and we don't have anything to talk' we are not together' its only for Mohit' to fir hame aapas me kya baat kernee hai' every thing is finished between us'"

She paused'

"but I don't understand it must not at all be tough for you to live with this broken relation' yeh to aapke liye kitna asan hai' kitnee bar ker chuke hain aap aisa' then what are you trying to do I don't understand "

"I will explain you'. Everything' tum mauka to do'."

"Mr Khurana' I am Mrs Khurana' and I am not a fool like a middle class girl to listen to this rubbish ' "

"Tum bhool rahee ho' tum wohi Geet ho'"

"Don't even dare compare Mrs Khurana with that low grade Geet, Mr. khurana" Maan clenched his fists' she always insulted his Geet'.

"Remember you had said' Geet was no more alive for you' I am just Mrs Khurana' mother of your child' She was your keep I am your wife"

He held her shoulder to shake her "Please stop this' kya ho gaya hai tumhe'. I am bad I was bad per meri wajah se tum kyun khud ko badal rahee hoo'. You know our relation was so pure'"

she jerked his hand away from his shoulder'. And left, leaving him all alone to search for his old Geet who has been lost somewhere' he has lost her in his own pride.

Next to be continued

Part 29

Precap:More revelation of past and some present

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Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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LOved it...
waiting for more
Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan was so stone hearted.. why could he not listen to her once.. but yes one way he is somehwere right... and he deserve this..
but geet is changing so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nagar ye nsk gusse mey har waqt galat kartha hai
waiting fr the next dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
my heart clenched with every update now a days 💔

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